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* AnAesop: Being responsible can be hard work, but don't give up.
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* AnAesop:
** Don't put pressure on others.
** Winning in contests and tournaments can be cool, but what's more important is to have fun.
** Don't put pressure on others.
** Winning in contests and tournaments can be cool, but what's more important is to have fun.
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* VocalDissonance: Bill still has a deep voice in the flashback, suggesting he hit puberty some time during such.
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* VocalDissonance: Bill still has a deep voice in the flashback, suggesting he hit puberty some time during such.such.
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* AnAesop: Don't put pressure on others.
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* AnAesop: AnAesop:
** Don't put pressure onothers.others.
** Winning in contests and tournaments can be cool, but what's more important is to have fun.
** Don't put pressure on
** Winning in contests and tournaments can be cool, but what's more important is to have fun.
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--> '''Cricket:''' ''(After seeing Bill's leg vibrate by the gymnastic suit)'' I'm just gonna take a moment to erase that from my memory. ''(he closes his eyes for a moment, then opens them again)'' Done.
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--> '''Cricket:''' ''(After seeing Bill's leg vibrate by the gymnastic suit)'' [[BrainBleach I'm just gonna take a moment to erase that from my memory. memory.]] ''(he closes his eyes for a moment, then opens them again)'' Done.
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* SoProudOfYou: Cricket and Alice compliment Bill for his gymnastic performance and didn't mind that he got in 6th place.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: This bit:
--> '''Cricket:''' ''(After seeing Bill's leg vibrate by the gymnastic suit)'' I'm just gonna take a moment to erase that from my memory. ''(he closes his eyes for a moment, then opens them again)'' Done.
--> '''Cricket:''' ''(After seeing Bill's leg vibrate by the gymnastic suit)'' I'm just gonna take a moment to erase that from my memory. ''(he closes his eyes for a moment, then opens them again)'' Done.
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* AfraidOfNeedles: Though not seen, the second Bill sees a needle, he is so gaped he passes out. Before that, he screamed, "Mommy, Mommy, save me. I'm a big baby."
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* AfraidOfNeedles: Though not seen, the second Bill sees a needle, he is so gaped he passes out. Before that, he screamed, "Mommy, Mommy, save me. I'm a big baby."
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* AllForNothing: Tilly prepares to confess the truth to Bill, but he does not hear her due to falling unconscious upon seeing a needle.
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-->'''Tilly:''' I guess it's never too soon to start preparin' for your passin'.\\
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* NeverSayDie: Defied: as part of Tilly's plan to get Cricket medical attention, they enter the hospital dressed as a Civil War nurse and solider, respectively, and Tilly plays her role to the hilt:
-->'''Receptionist''': (lowers glasses; impassive) There's a 45 minute wait.
-->'''Tilly''': (pulls down surgical mask) [[IncomingHam This brave soldier will be]] ''[[IncomingHam dead]]'' [[IncomingHam in 45 minutes!]] [[LargeHam His wounds need attention]] ''[[LargeHam now!]]''
-->'''Receptionist''': (lowers glasses; impassive) There's a 45 minute wait.
-->'''Tilly''': (pulls down surgical mask) [[IncomingHam This brave soldier will be]] ''[[IncomingHam dead]]'' [[IncomingHam in 45 minutes!]] [[LargeHam His wounds need attention]] ''[[LargeHam now!]]''
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* NeverSayDie: NeverSayDie:
** Defied: as part of Tilly's plan to get Cricket medical attention, they enter the hospital dressed as a Civil War nurse and solider, respectively, and Tilly plays her role to the hilt:
-->'''Receptionist''': --->'''Receptionist''': (lowers glasses; impassive) There's a 45 minute wait.
-->'''Tilly''': --->'''Tilly''': (pulls down surgical mask) [[IncomingHam This brave soldier will be]] ''[[IncomingHam dead]]'' [[IncomingHam in 45 minutes!]] [[LargeHam His wounds need attention]] ''[[LargeHam now!]]''now!]]''
** Averted when Tilly mentions the concept of a bucket list to Cricket:
-->'''Tilly:''' I guess it's never too soon to start preparin' for your passin'.\\
'''Cricket:''' What? No, Tilly, that's dark.
** Defied: as part of Tilly's plan to get Cricket medical attention, they enter the hospital dressed as a Civil War nurse and solider, respectively, and Tilly plays her role to the hilt:
** Averted when Tilly mentions the concept of a bucket list to Cricket:
-->'''Tilly:''' I guess it's never too soon to start preparin' for your passin'.\\
'''Cricket:''' What? No, Tilly, that's dark.
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* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: Done subtly when Cricket wears Bill's sweatband when playing up his coaching -- his hair is pushed upwards to resemble devil horns, reflecting him crossing into DrillSergeantNasty territory like Gramma.
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-->'''Alice / Cricket:''' Sure, we'll/you'll have lots of fun...if you think it's fun to ''lose!''
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-->'''Alice / Cricket:''' Sure, we'll/you'll We'll have lots of fun...fun... if you think it's fun to ''lose!''
