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* WhamEpisode: Luz becomes a CopKiller as she destroys an entire supermarket along with a squad of cops for their in front of horrified witnesses, including her own mother. Any chance this girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero, is gone. She's now a fugitive from the law now. Meanwhile, Tyler sends his most dangerous assassin after Camila.
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After reaching her breaking point, Luz goes on a rampage with fatal results. She gains a new Quirk and suffers a great betrayal from someone she trusted Tyler afters decides that dives her over the edge.gloves must come off to deal with Luz once and for all.
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* ExactWords: When Riley protests that Tyler said he wouldn't go after Camila only to invoke this.
--> '''Riley''': [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo You said no harm would come to Camila]]!
--> '''Tyler''': No, no. I said no harm would come to Camila… '''should you succeed''', Riley. But you '''failed.''' [[YouHaveFailedMe Therefore, the deal is off]]. [[LampshadeHanging Learn to pay attention to what I say before you agree to something, child.]]
--> '''Riley''': [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo You said no harm would come to Camila]]!
--> '''Tyler''': No, no. I said no harm would come to Camila… '''should you succeed''', Riley. But you '''failed.''' [[YouHaveFailedMe Therefore, the deal is off]]. [[LampshadeHanging Learn to pay attention to what I say before you agree to something, child.]]
* FauxAffablyEvil: Tyler insincerely apologises to Riley for putting out a hit on her aunt with the same energy as one who just ordered the wrong pizza.
* GivenNameReveal: The assassin with the Multiplier Quirk was named Derreck.
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* Internal: Tyler hears from Millie that Luz stole Derreck's Quirk before killing him.
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* Internal: InternalReveal: Tyler hears from Millie that Luz stole Derreck's Quirk before killing him.
* MayDecemberRomance: Jonah was 19-years old when married his wife who was 37.
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* NameReveal: The assassin with the Multiper Quirk was named Derreck.
* NeverMyFault: All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz. After all, he can't have his new vessel developing a GuiltComplex, now can he?
* NeverMyFault: All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz. After all, he can't have his new vessel developing a GuiltComplex, now can he?
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* NameReveal: The assassin with the Multiper Quirk was named Derreck.
* NeverMyFault:NeverMyFault:
** All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz. After all, he can't have his new vessel developing a GuiltComplex, now can he?
* NeverMyFault:
** All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz. After all, he can't have his new vessel developing a GuiltComplex, now can he?
** Tyler Wittebane plays this straight when he puts a hit on Camila telling Riley she should blame All For One, aka Luz, for she did not die as God decreed.
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* OhCrap: When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this reaction for a moment, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this reaction for a moment, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
** Millie freezes in fear when she realises that Jonah has a gun at the back of her head.
** When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this reaction for a moment, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
** Millie freezes in fear when she realises that Jonah has a gun at the back of her head.
* PragmaticVillainy: Tyler orders Jonah not to kill Millie not because he cares about her wellbeing but because she's still useful to him in goal to kill Luz. He also doesn't want any infighting in his ranks either.
* PurpleIsPowerful: Jonah has purple eyes, purple smoke powers and is a dangerous foe.
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* scarsAreForever: Charlie has a scar on his lip.
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* scarsAreForever: ScarsAreForever: Charlie has a scar on his lip.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Some time ago, Gravesfield had been a “Sundown Town.” It was a stain on the town’s history.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Some time ago, Gravesfield had been a “Sundown Town.” It The racial segregation was a shameful stain on the town’s history.
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* WhamLine: Tyler plans to ask for a specific person in the Emperor's Coven to take down Luz.
--> '''Millie''': ''(Frowns)'' Are you implying that you are going to try and get back into contact with Emperor Belos?”
--> '''Tyler''': I do intend to. If he is a man of his word, he will send me more reinforcements. Clearly, this is much bigger than I thought it was going to be. Perhaps this… [[TheDragon Golden Guard]] I’ve heard so much about might be able to help
--> '''Millie''': ''(Frowns)'' Are you implying that you are going to try and get back into contact with Emperor Belos?”
--> '''Tyler''': I do intend to. If he is a man of his word, he will send me more reinforcements. Clearly, this is much bigger than I thought it was going to be. Perhaps this… [[TheDragon Golden Guard]] I’ve heard so much about might be able to help
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* CassandraTruth: Luz doesn't bother trying to explain to the crowd and her mother about what happened at The Independent believing that whatever answer she gave, no one was going to listen a word of what she would say, due to seeing her become a CopKiller.
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* DeathGlare: Tyler gives one to Millie and Riley for failing to kill Luz.
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* DeathGlare: Tyler gives one to Millie and Riley for failing to kill Luz. Millie compares it to Belos's, completely unaware that to are relatives.
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** Shigaraki notes that even Luz's own mother looks afraid of her now.
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** If Luz wasn't this before, then her actions at the supermarket fight made her this now. Shigaraki notes that even Luz's own mother looks afraid of her now.
* FascinatingEyebrow: Tyler has this when Millie explains to him how Luz survived Riley's AssassinationAttempt.
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* {{Irony}}: Riley believed that most of the other officers didn’t give a shit about All For One or those with superpowers. She's completely unaware that the recently deceased police chief had personal vendetta against the aforementioned superhuman.
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* {{Irony}}: Internal: Tyler hears from Millie that Luz stole Derreck's Quirk before killing him.
* {{Irony}}:
** Riley believed that most of the other officers didn’t give a shit about All For One or those with superpowers. She's completely unaware that the recently deceased police chief had personal vendetta against the aforementionedsuperhuman.superhuman.
** Luz pulls a ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies on Camila for her own safety. Unfortunately, the ArcVillain has just ordered his most brutal assassin to go after her mother out of spite against Luz for not dying.
* ItGetsEasier: Luz now barely flinches at the sight of blood on her hands.
* {{Irony}}:
** Riley believed that most of the other officers didn’t give a shit about All For One or those with superpowers. She's completely unaware that the recently deceased police chief had personal vendetta against the aforementioned
** Luz pulls a ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies on Camila for her own safety. Unfortunately, the ArcVillain has just ordered his most brutal assassin to go after her mother out of spite against Luz for not dying.
* ItGetsEasier: Luz now barely flinches at the sight of blood on her hands.
* LoopHoleAbuse: Churches were allowed to do ignore anti-hate speech laws whatever they wanted, and that was most likely how Tyler was able to get away with his bigoted preaching.
* MurderIsTheBestSolution: Luz tells Camila she's going to kill the Wittebanes in order to end this madness.
* NameReveal: The assassin with the Multiper Quirk was named Derreck.
* PsychologicalProjection: All For One appears to have a low opinion on churches viewing them as "[[CorruptChurch those who share in the business in deluding the weak-willed]]", even though he himself has taken advantage of vulnerable people throughout his entire supervillain career just like that.
* scarsAreForever: Charlie has a scar on his lip.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Tyler Wittebane leads a conservative mega-church that's popular enough to indoctrinate people in his FantasticRacism "crusade" against superpowers and minorities, and has many supporters. This makes it more difficult for Luz to bring him down by legal means.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Tyler Wittebane leads a conservative mega-church that's popular enough to indoctrinate people in his FantasticRacism "crusade" against superpowers and minorities, and has many supporters. This makes it more difficult for Luz to bring Millie sees him down as this world’s version of TheEmperor, as he was so revered by legal means.the people that followed him.
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* AbilityMixing: Luz used her SuperStrength power to enhance the power of her attacks from her GiantHandsOfDoom and AbsurdlySharpClaws.
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** EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Riley tries to plead to Tyler to spare her Aunt Camila's life.
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* GenreSavvy: Luz soon puts it together that the Wittebanes hired Riley and others to murder her.
* MayorPain: Averted with the current Mayor of Gravesfield — Mayor Abscott. He revoked the old sundown laws and made it illegal to discriminate against anyone for any reason, with a major fine being attached to those who offended. There was just one exception to the rule, and those were the churches.
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* NeverMyFault: All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz.
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* NeverMyFault: All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz. After all, he can't have his new vessel developing a GuiltComplex, now can he?
--> '''Shigaraki''': '''''It’s about time you realize that you were never in the wrong. I know that there are days when you believe yourself to be, but you are not at fault for defending yourself.'''''
--> '''Shigaraki''': '''''It’s about time you realize that you were never in the wrong. I know that there are days when you believe yourself to be, but you are not at fault for defending yourself.'''''
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* OhCrap: When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this reaction, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
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* ObligatoryEarpieceTouch: Millie does this when she calls Charlie for help.
* OhCrap: When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has thisreaction, reaction for a moment, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Luz notes that Tyler is currently touring the southern States to spread his message of God. Meaning that he wasn’t actually in Gravesfield at the moment and getting his hitmen to do his dirty work.
* OhCrap: When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Luz notes that Tyler is currently touring the southern States to spread his message of God. Meaning that he wasn’t actually in Gravesfield at the moment and getting his hitmen to do his dirty work.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: At the beginning of the chapter, Luz's eyes glowed crimson-red with pure malice and hatred.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: At the beginning of the chapter, Luz's eyes glowed crimson-red with pure malice and hatred.hatred to her enemies.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: The entire first half of the chapter is Luz on this.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: The entire first half of the chapter is Luz on this. The “fight” was mostly her lashing out in a rage after being betrayed by someone she considered family. She mentions she was barely even coherent during the brawl.
* SlowlySlippingIntoEvil: Luz starts to think this is happening to her.
* TooDumbToLive: Shooting at the [[ShootingSuperman clearly enraged Luz]] was a fatally mistake for the police force, especially since she wasn't even focusing on them at the time.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Some time ago, Gravesfield had been a “Sundown Town.” It was a stain on the town’s history.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Not without being put in prison for life or killed on sight, Luz.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Not without being put in prison for life or killed on sight, sight for killing cops, Luz.
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* BlasphemousPraise: Downplayed. The Emperor's Coven member momentarily compares her power to be on par with Belos, the most powerful sorcerer on the Boiling Isles, only to reprimand herself for such thoughts.
* {{Irony}}: Riley believed that most of the other officers didn’t give a shit about All For One or those with superpowers. She's completely unaware that the recently deceased police chief had personal vendetta against the aforementioned superhuman.
* LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe: Luz's "Forcefield Projection" protecting her from bullets and fire.
--> ''One second, they were alive, the next second, they were dead.''
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* NoSympathy: Luz feels almost no pity for cops she just killed, sans a brief TheseHandsHaveKilled moment, due to their attempted shooting towards her when she wasn;'t attacking.
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* NoSympathy: Luz feels almost no pity for cops she just killed, sans a brief TheseHandsHaveKilled moment, due to their attempted shooting towards her when she wasn;'t attacking.wasn't attacking.
* NonFatalExplosions: Averted hard. The cops had no chance of survival.
* NonFatalExplosions: Averted hard. The cops had no chance of survival.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Luz levels the supermarket she was fighting in before, making it look like it was hit by an airstrike. The Emperor's Coven member momentarily compares her power to be on par with Belos, the most powerful sorcerer on the Boiling Isles.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Luz levels the supermarket she was fighting in before, making it look like it was hit by an airstrike. The Emperor's Coven member momentarily compares her power to be on par with Belos, the most powerful sorcerer on the Boiling Isles.
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* ThePowerOfHate: Luz seems to running on just this during her fight.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: At the beginning of the chapter, Luz's eyes glowed crimson-red with pure malice and hatred.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: The entire first half of the chapter is Luz on this.
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--> '''Riley''': We need to get out of here!”
--> '''Millie''': Working on it!
--> '''Millie''': Working on it!
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* VillainousBreakdown:
** Millie and Riley have a brief panic attack as Luz survives everything they throw at her and proves too strong and aggressive for them to take down. They to decide to KnowWhenToFoldEm.
** Tyler looked like he was about to do this when he hears of the hitwomen's failure to kill Luz.
* WhatASenselessWasteOfHumanLife: Riley views the deaths of the cops at Luz's hands to be this.
** Millie and Riley have a brief panic attack as Luz survives everything they throw at her and proves too strong and aggressive for them to take down. They to decide to KnowWhenToFoldEm.
** Tyler looked like he was about to do this when he hears of the hitwomen's failure to kill Luz.
* WhatASenselessWasteOfHumanLife: Riley views the deaths of the cops at Luz's hands to be this.
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* CopKiller: Luz becomes this, wiping out over a dozen of them when Blinded by Rage.
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* CopKiller: Luz becomes this, wiping out over a dozen of them when Blinded in a blind fury.
* CosmicPlaything: Luz seems to come to the conclusion is frustrated byRage.the unfairness of her situation.
--> ''Why? [[AllTheOtherReindeer Luz wanted to know why everyone hated her]]. Was it because of what she did at the camp? [[KillingInSelfDefense That was self-defence, or what could loosely be called self-defence]]. The whole point of that camp was to kill one another. [[AssholeVictim The rest of the camp thought it funny to kill her friends]], so she [[PayEvilUntoEvil returned the favour ten times over]]. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo Why couldn’t people see that she wasn’t given a choice?]]''
* CosmicPlaything: Luz seems to come to the conclusion is frustrated by
--> ''Why? [[AllTheOtherReindeer Luz wanted to know why everyone hated her]]. Was it because of what she did at the camp? [[KillingInSelfDefense That was self-defence, or what could loosely be called self-defence]]. The whole point of that camp was to kill one another. [[AssholeVictim The rest of the camp thought it funny to kill her friends]], so she [[PayEvilUntoEvil returned the favour ten times over]]. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo Why couldn’t people see that she wasn’t given a choice?]]''
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* TheDreaded: Riley considers Jonah to be this due to his brutal murders.
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* TheDreaded: TheDreaded:
** Shigaraki notes that even Luz's own mother looks afraid of her now.
** Riley considers Jonah to be this due to his brutal murders.
** Shigaraki notes that even Luz's own mother looks afraid of her now.
** Riley considers Jonah to be this due to his brutal murders.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Riley tries to plead to Tyler to spare her Aunt Camila's life.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Riley sees Jonah as a monster and is disgusted by his sadism.
* EvenMooksHaveLovedOnes: Luz notes that those police officers she just killed had families in town, now many have lost a parent, sibling and/or spouse from this incident.
* EvilIsPetty: Tyler sends his worst PsychoForHire to brutally kill Camila and Pastor Domenico in order spite Luz for not dying in the AssassinationAttempt he orchestrated.
* FallenHero: Luz's VigilanteMan persona, All For One, becomes this to her town Gravesfield when her identity is revealed and she becomes CopKiller in front of horrified witnesses when squad led by a corrupt sheriff tries to perform PoliceBrutality on her and turns them in to LudicrousGibs when BlindedByRage.
--> ''[[CassandraTruth She knew that, despite whatever excuse she could come up with, no one in the crowd was going to believe a word of what she would want to say.]] They saw her kill police officers. [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Whatever attempt to be a hero there was for her was now gone.]] No one liked or routed for a CopKiller, even if that cop was a DirtyCop.''
* FallenHero: Luz's VigilanteMan persona, All For One, becomes this to her town Gravesfield when her identity is revealed and she becomes CopKiller in front of horrified witnesses when squad led by a corrupt sheriff tries to perform PoliceBrutality on her and turns them in to LudicrousGibs when BlindedByRage.
--> ''[[CassandraTruth She knew that, despite whatever excuse she could come up with, no one in the crowd was going to believe a word of what she would want to say.]] They saw her kill police officers. [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten Whatever attempt to be a hero there was for her was now gone.]] No one liked or routed for a CopKiller, even if that cop was a DirtyCop.''
* KickTheDog: Tyler sends his most brutal hitman to kill Luz's mother and a kindly pastor just out of spite.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Riley breaks down into tears when the full weight of her actions (not only betraying her own cousin but putting her Aunt Camila on Tyler Wittebane's hitlist, sending his most brutal assassin after them) hits her.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: MyGodWhatHaveIDone?:
** After she calms herself down after the intense fight, Luz has this moment when she finally registers the death and destruction she has caused in the space of a few minutes since the first gunman showed up in a fit of rage.
** Riley breaks down into tears when the full weight of her actions (not only betraying her own cousin but putting her Aunt Camila on Tyler Wittebane's hitlist, sending his most brutal assassin after them) hits her.
** After she calms herself down after the intense fight, Luz has this moment when she finally registers the death and destruction she has caused in the space of a few minutes since the first gunman showed up in a fit of rage.
** Riley breaks down into tears when the full weight of her actions (not only betraying her own cousin but putting her Aunt Camila on Tyler Wittebane's hitlist, sending his most brutal assassin after them) hits her.
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* TearsOfRemorse: Drowning in her own guilt, Riley breaks down into tears for the first time since her AccidentalMurder of her abusive father.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Tyler Wittebane leads a conservative mega-church that's popular enough to indoctrinate people in his FantasticRacism "crusade" against superpowers and minorities, and has many supporters. This makes it more difficult for Luz to bring him down by legal means.
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* BlindedByRage: Luz a this for the first portion of the chapter. Luz doesn't demand to know why Riley betrayed her and tell her to surrender peacefully, like she normally would. Luz just wants Riley '''dead''', familial ties be damned.
* CopKiller: Luz becomes this, wiping out over a dozen of them when Blinded by Rage.
* DeathGlare: Tyler gives one to Millie and Riley for failing to kill Luz.
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* Domestic Abuse: He was about to receive a sentenced to 25 years to life sentence for murdering his wife, until Tyler bailed him out.
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* Domestic Abuse: DomesticAbuse: He was about to receive a sentenced to 25 years to life sentence for murdering his wife, until Tyler bailed him out.
* GiantMook: Jonah is 10 ft. tall due to gigantism and works for Tyler Wittebane.
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* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
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* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip it when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* ImplacableMan: Luz tanks a panicking Riley's explosions with her regeneration and painkiller Quirks, while trying to crush the 17-year-old with her GiantHandsOfDoom and stab at her with AbsurdlySharpClaws, while powering through the witch's abomination slime despite ripping the skin from her body.
* NeverMyFault: All For One seems to be trying to instill this attitude onto Luz.
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* NotEnoughToBury:
NotEnoughToBury: There's much left of the cop squad after Luz's attack.
* OhCrap: When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this reaction, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
* OhCrap: When Luz spots a small, terrified crowd of mostly teens and their parents, that includes her own horrified mother, with some that had witnessed and filmed her carnage on their phones. The All For One user rightfully has this reaction, now that people know Luz Noceda is a CopKiller. The incident has well and truly fucked over any chance the teen girl had of ever having a normal life, let alone becoming a superhero.
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* TheScream: Furious that her traitorous cousin has escaped, Luz lets out an angry one as she slams her giant fist on the ground leaving another giant crater.
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* SuperSmoke: Jonah's Quirk is called "Smog" which allows him to turn into purple smoke.
* SmugSuper: Luz seems to be showing some shades of this mentality.
* TargetedToHurtTheHero: Tyler now intends to abandon his pretense of EvenEvilHasStandards and orders his most brutal assassin to kill Pastor Domenico and Camila to get to Luz.
* TeensAreMonsters: Downplayed. Jonah's only nineteen, he raped and murdered his own wife and is an assassin that's killed many on Wittebane's orders
* SmugSuper: Luz seems to be showing some shades of this mentality.
* TargetedToHurtTheHero: Tyler now intends to abandon his pretense of EvenEvilHasStandards and orders his most brutal assassin to kill Pastor Domenico and Camila to get to Luz.
* TeensAreMonsters: Downplayed. Jonah's only nineteen, he raped and murdered his own wife and is an assassin that's killed many on Wittebane's orders
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Not without being put in prison for life or killed on sight, Luz.
* YouHaveFailedMe: It looks like Tyler is about to do this on Riley and Millie but changes his mind.
* YouHaveFailedMe: It looks like Tyler is about to do this on Riley and Millie but changes his mind.
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* AxCrazy: Jonah seems a little too joyous at hearing his next assassination job involves multiple kills.
* BrutalHonesty: When a worried Camila asks Luz where she's going now, Luz simply tells her she intends to track down and kill the Wittebanes before they kill her first and informs her that her niece Riley, that stayed the night with them, tried to murder her.
* TheBrute: Jonah is big, violent thug that works for Tyler because he's just that good at it. Riley notes his assassinations tend to be gruesome.
* TheBrute: Jonah is big, violent thug that works for Tyler because he's just that good at it. Riley notes his assassinations tend to be gruesome.
* DeepSouth: Jonah has a thick Southern accent, implying he's from one of the southern states.
* Domestic Abuse: He was about to receive a sentenced to 25 years to life sentence for murdering his wife, until Tyler bailed him out.
* TheDreaded: Riley considers Jonah to be this due to his brutal murders.
* EmptyEyes: She's described as having empty black eyes.
* Domestic Abuse: He was about to receive a sentenced to 25 years to life sentence for murdering his wife, until Tyler bailed him out.
* TheDreaded: Riley considers Jonah to be this due to his brutal murders.
* EmptyEyes: She's described as having empty black eyes.
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* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The All For One user effectively turns the fight between her and the assassins into a case of this.
* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The All For One user effectively turns the fight between her and the assassins into a case of this.
* HeroicBSOD: Camila became shell-shocked when she witnesses Luz become a CopKiller and heard from her daily she was going to go kill the Wittebanes in cold-blood with BrutalHonesty.
* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The All For One user effectively turns the fight between her and the assassins into a case of this.
* LeanAndMean: Charlie is described as lanky and works for Tyler Wittebane.
* LudicrousGibs: The sheriff and his squad are reduced to this after getting caught in the epicentre of an explosion caused by Luz's DeadlyForceField when BlindedByRage. Unlike Luz, there's no coming back from dead for the Boys in Blue here.
* MalevolentMaskedMan: Jonah Smith wears a mask that covers his lower face that's connected by pipes and some kind of canister on his back.
* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The All For One user effectively turns the fight between her and the assassins into a case of this.
* LeanAndMean: Charlie is described as lanky and works for Tyler Wittebane.
* LudicrousGibs: The sheriff and his squad are reduced to this after getting caught in the epicentre of an explosion caused by Luz's DeadlyForceField when BlindedByRage. Unlike Luz, there's no coming back from dead for the Boys in Blue here.
* MalevolentMaskedMan: Jonah Smith wears a mask that covers his lower face that's connected by pipes and some kind of canister on his back.
* NoSympathy: Luz feels almost no pity for cops she just killed, sans a brief TheseHandsHaveKilled moment, due to their attempted shooting towards her when she wasn;'t attacking.
* NotEnoughToBury:
* OhCrap:
* NotEnoughToBury:
* OhCrap:
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* RegretfulTraitor: Riley regrets betraying Luz and extension Camila by trying to kill the former on the Wittebane's orders.
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* PoliceBrutality: The Gravesfield cop squad he led tried to gun down Luz when she was about to surrender peacefully. This proved to be a fatal mistake.
* PsychoForHire: Jonah seems to not only working for Tyler for money and loyalty but also the chance to kill even more people.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Jonah was arrested for raping his own wife before killing her.
* RegretfulTraitor: Riley regrets betrayingLuz Luz, and extension by extension, her Aunt Camila by trying to kill the former on the Wittebane's orders.
* PsychoForHire: Jonah seems to not only working for Tyler for money and loyalty but also the chance to kill even more people.
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Jonah was arrested for raping his own wife before killing her.
* RegretfulTraitor: Riley regrets betraying
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* TotalPartyKill: Luz wipes out the police squad about to arrest her with her DeadlyForceField.
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--> '''Riley''': ''She’s not human… she can’t be. This kind of power is unreasonable!''
* TokenEvilTeammate: While the Wittebane's militia unit are all assassins and {{Punch Clock Villain}}s, Jonah is the only one confirmed to be a {{Sadist}} and rapist.
* TotalPartyKill: Luz wipes out the police squad about to arrest her with herDeadlyForceField.DeadlyForceField.
* UndyingLoyalty: Jonah appears to have this for Tyler Wittebane for giving him a special suit to maintain his Quirk and bailing him out of prison.
* VillainTeleportation: Charlie has a "Warping" Quirk that lets him produce a black liquid that teleports people and items to different locations, even across states. He does this for Riley and Millie when they call for his help.
* WouldHitAGirl: Jonah threatens Millie at gun point for speaking out of term (he's quite annoyed when Tyler doesn't let go through with shooting her), has no problems about being ordered to attack and kill Camila and the less said about his late wife, the better.
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* TokenEvilTeammate: While the Wittebane's militia unit are all assassins and {{Punch Clock Villain}}s, Jonah is the only one confirmed to be a {{Sadist}} and rapist.
* TotalPartyKill: Luz wipes out the police squad about to arrest her with her
* UndyingLoyalty: Jonah appears to have this for Tyler Wittebane for giving him a special suit to maintain his Quirk and bailing him out of prison.
* VillainTeleportation: Charlie has a "Warping" Quirk that lets him produce a black liquid that teleports people and items to different locations, even across states. He does this for Riley and Millie when they call for his help.
* WouldHitAGirl: Jonah threatens Millie at gun point for speaking out of term (he's quite annoyed when Tyler doesn't let go through with shooting her), has no problems about being ordered to attack and kill Camila and the less said about his late wife, the better.
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!S2 - Ep 5: Summer Break Shenanigans - Part 5
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After reaching her breaking point, Luz goes on a rampage. She gains a new Quirk and suffers a great betrayal from someone she trusted that dives her over the edge.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Considering he was a DirtyCop and SmugSnake, no one's gonna miss Sheriff Johnson.
* BarrierWarrior: Not only Luz, but Millie is this, too. She can summon magic DeflectorShields just barely strong enough to withstand Luz's GiantHandsOfDoom long enough for her and Riley to get away.
* ClashingCousins: Riley and Luz have become this after the former tried to kill the latter on the Wittebane's orders.
* DeathFromAbove: Luz attempts to do this on Riley but Millie saves her.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Riley tries to plead to Tyler to spare her Aunt Camila's life.
* EvilIsBurningHot: Millie can unleashed a column of magic fire from glyph circles so hot that it could melt through skin and bone. Not that did any good against Luz's barriers.
* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The All For One user effectively turns the fight between her and the assassins into a case of this.
* FantasticRacism: Despite willing to work with them under her emperor's orders, Millie considers non-powered humans to be pathetic in comparison to witches.
* FlashStep: Luz appears to do this to Riley.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Riley breaks down into tears when the full weight of her actions (not only betraying her own cousin but putting her Aunt Camila on Tyler Wittebane's hitlist, sending his most brutal assassin after them) hits her.
* PersonOfMassDestruction: Luz levels the supermarket she was fighting in before, making it look like it was hit by an airstrike. The Emperor's Coven member momentarily compares her power to be on par with Belos, the most powerful sorcerer on the Boiling Isles.
* PhysicalGod: The two panicking hitwomen compare Luz to this.
* RegretfulTraitor: Riley regrets betraying Luz and extension Camila by trying to kill the former on the Wittebane's orders.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Millie and Riley decide to do this before they lose their lives to the angry teen.
* ThisCannotBe: Riley and Millie have this reaction when Luz unleashes her full power in her UnstoppableRage mode, resulting in the destruction of the entire supermarket, as well as a whole police squad, with her DeadlyForceField.
* TotalPartyKill: Luz wipes out the police squad about to arrest her with her DeadlyForceField.
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After reaching her breaking point, Luz goes on a rampage. She gains a new Quirk and suffers a great betrayal from someone she trusted that dives her over the edge.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* AssholeVictim: Considering he was a DirtyCop and SmugSnake, no one's gonna miss Sheriff Johnson.
* BarrierWarrior: Not only Luz, but Millie is this, too. She can summon magic DeflectorShields just barely strong enough to withstand Luz's GiantHandsOfDoom long enough for her and Riley to get away.
* ClashingCousins: Riley and Luz have become this after the former tried to kill the latter on the Wittebane's orders.
* DeathFromAbove: Luz attempts to do this on Riley but Millie saves her.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Riley tries to plead to Tyler to spare her Aunt Camila's life.
* EvilIsBurningHot: Millie can unleashed a column of magic fire from glyph circles so hot that it could melt through skin and bone. Not that did any good against Luz's barriers.
* HopelessBossFight: Millie and Riley decide that Luz has proven to be too strong for them to defeat on their own and decide to dip when they're about to be killed in her RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* TheHunterBecomesTheHunted: The All For One user effectively turns the fight between her and the assassins into a case of this.
* FantasticRacism: Despite willing to work with them under her emperor's orders, Millie considers non-powered humans to be pathetic in comparison to witches.
* FlashStep: Luz appears to do this to Riley.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Riley breaks down into tears when the full weight of her actions (not only betraying her own cousin but putting her Aunt Camila on Tyler Wittebane's hitlist, sending his most brutal assassin after them) hits her.
* PersonOfMassDestruction: Luz levels the supermarket she was fighting in before, making it look like it was hit by an airstrike. The Emperor's Coven member momentarily compares her power to be on par with Belos, the most powerful sorcerer on the Boiling Isles.
* PhysicalGod: The two panicking hitwomen compare Luz to this.
* RegretfulTraitor: Riley regrets betraying Luz and extension Camila by trying to kill the former on the Wittebane's orders.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Millie and Riley decide to do this before they lose their lives to the angry teen.
* ThisCannotBe: Riley and Millie have this reaction when Luz unleashes her full power in her UnstoppableRage mode, resulting in the destruction of the entire supermarket, as well as a whole police squad, with her DeadlyForceField.
* TotalPartyKill: Luz wipes out the police squad about to arrest her with her DeadlyForceField.
