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->Of course, from that position, it was also harder—in fact, impossible—for Betty Cooper to see the car which pulled up to a stop on a bluff high above the beach. It was a dark car, with tinted windows. The driver got out, though it looked like it would have taken a couple of crowbars and some grease to fit his huge body behind the wheel. He wore a hat and trenchcoat, and he took a pair of binoculars out of the pocket of the coat. With those, he looked in the direction of the beach.
-->-- ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''
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->Of course, from that position, it was also harder—in fact, impossible—for Betty Cooper to see the car which pulled up to a stop on a bluff high above the beach. It was a dark car, with tinted windows. The driver got out, though it looked like it would have taken a couple of crowbars and some grease to fit his huge body behind the wheel. He wore a hat and trenchcoat, and he took a pair of binoculars out of the pocket of the coat. With those, he looked in the direction of the beach.
-->-- ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''
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->Of course, from that position, it was also harder—in fact, impossible—for Betty Cooper to see the car which pulled up to a stop on a bluff high above the beach. It was a dark car, with tinted windows. The driver got out, though it looked like it would have taken a couple of crowbars and some grease to fit his huge body behind the wheel. He wore a hat and trenchcoat, and he took a pair of binoculars out of the pocket of the coat. With those, he looked in the direction of the beach.
-->-- ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''
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->Outside the window is the black removers’ van.\\
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->Outside the window is the black removers’ removers' van.\\
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->"What is it with bad guys and vans?"
-->-- '''Casey''', ''Series/{{Chuck}}''
->Of course, from that position, it was also harder—in fact, impossible—for Betty Cooper to see the car which pulled up to a stop on a bluff high above the beach. It was a dark car, with tinted windows. The driver got out, though it looked like it would have taken a couple of crowbars and some grease to fit his huge body behind the wheel. He wore a hat and trenchcoat, and he took a pair of binoculars out of the pocket of the coat. With those, he looked in the direction of the beach.
-->-- ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''
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->"What is it with bad guys and vans?"
-->-- '''Casey''', ''Series/{{Chuck}}''
->Of course, from that position, it was also harder—in fact, impossible—for Betty Cooper to see the car which pulled up to a stop on a bluff high above the beach. It was a dark car, with tinted windows. The driver got out, though it looked like it would have taken a couple of crowbars and some grease to fit his huge body behind the wheel. He wore a hat and trenchcoat, and he took a pair of binoculars out of the pocket of the coat. With those, he looked in the direction of the beach.
-->-- ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''
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->Outside the window is the black removers’ van.\\
And now with sudden swift emergence\\
Come the woman in dark glasses and humpbacked surgeons\\
And the scissors man.
-->-- ''The Two'', by W. H. Auden
And now with sudden swift emergence\\
Come the woman in dark glasses and humpbacked surgeons\\
And the scissors man.
-->-- ''The Two'', by W. H. Auden
