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->''"My name is Mr. Handy. [[LookUponYeMightyAndDespair Look upon]] this room I said I'd clean, and despair!"''
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In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wondered when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never seen. He got his wish when the U.S ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The world awaited Armageddon... but instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction: domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers...\\
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In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wondered when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never seen. He got his wish when the U.S S. ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The world awaited Armageddon... but instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction: domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers...\\
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->''"Haven't you been paying attention? You don't find ''find'' the Institute...the Institute finds'' you''. You open the closet, it's just a closet. You can never find the monster that hides inside... Not until it jumps out at you."''
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-> ''"But I had a point here. A lesson, if you will. There are other organisations out there. And, in time, I'm sure they're going to spoon-feed you their own patented form of bullshit. Ignore the verbage and look at what they're doing. What they're asking you to do. What sort of world they'd have you build and how they're going to pay for it.''"
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-> ''"But I had a point here. A lesson, if you will. There are other organisations out there. And, in time, I'm sure they're going to spoon-feed you their own patented form of bullshit. Ignore the verbage and look at what they're doing. What they're asking you to do. What sort of world they'd have you build and how they're going to pay for it.''"
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-> ''"The thing about happiness is that you only know you had it when it's gone. I mean, you may ''think'' to yourself that you're happy, but... you don't really believe it. You focus on the petty ''[[PrecisionFStrike bullshit]]'', or the next job, or whatever. It's only looking back, by comparison to what comes after, that you really understand: ''that's'' what happiness felt like."''
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-> ''"The thing about happiness is that you only know you had it when it's gone. I mean, you may ''think'' to yourself that you're happy, but... you don't really believe it. You focus on the petty ''[[PrecisionFStrike bullshit]]'', or the next job, or whatever. It's only looking back, by comparison to what comes after, that you really understand: ''that's'' what happiness felt like."''
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-> ''"Now, before you set off on your grand Nuka-Adventure, let me tell you about [[AC:ERROR SYSTEM MALFUNCTION]] [[AC:error system malfunction]] Are you finished wasting my time, you filthy low-life scavver?! 'Cause I'm getting bored, and when I get bored, I get violent!"''
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This wasn't the world I wanted, but it was the one I found myself in; the Commonwealth, my home, ripped apart and put back together. I thought I...I hoped I could find my family, cheat time, make us whole again. The way we were...But now I know. I know I can't go back. I know the world has changed. The road ahead will be hard. This time, I'm ready, because I know war...\\
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This wasn't the world I wanted, but it was the one I found myself in; the Commonwealth, my home, ripped apart and put back together. I thought I... I hoped I could find my family, cheat time, make us whole again. The way we were...But but now I know. I know I can't go back. I know the world has changed. The road ahead will be hard. This time, I'm ready, because I know war...\\
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->''[[spoiler:I can feel it wash over me...the heat...the force...the radiation...the fear...it's the end of the world, all over again. I close my eyes. I see my life before all this, before the bombs. Everything can change in an instant, and the future you plan for yourselves shifts, whether or not you're ready. At some point, it happens to all of us.\\
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This wasn't the world I wanted, but it was the one I found myself in; the Commonwealth, my home, ripped apart and put back together. I thought I...I hoped I could find my family, cheat time, make us whole again. The way we were...But now I know. I know I can't go back. I know the world has changed. The road ahead will be hard. This time, I'm ready, because I know war...\\
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[[ArcWords War never changes]]...]]
-->--'''[[spoiler:The Sole Survivor]]'''
->''[[spoiler:I can feel it wash over me...the heat...the force...the radiation...the fear...it's the end of the world, all over again. I close my eyes. I see my life before all this, before the bombs. Everything can change in an instant, and the future you plan for yourselves shifts, whether or not you're ready. At some point, it happens to all of us.\\
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This wasn't the world I wanted, but it was the one I found myself in; the Commonwealth, my home, ripped apart and put back together. I thought I...I hoped I could find my family, cheat time, make us whole again. The way we were...But now I know. I know I can't go back. I know the world has changed. The road ahead will be hard. This time, I'm ready, because I know war...\\
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[[ArcWords War never changes]]...]]
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In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wondered when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never seen. He got his wish when the U.S ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The world awaited Armageddon... Instead, but instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction: domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers...\\
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-> ''"In a hundred years, when I finally die, I only hope I go to Hell so I can kill you all over again, you son of a bitch."''
-->--'''The Sole Survivor'''
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In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wondered when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never see.seen. He got his wish when the U.S ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The world awaited Armageddon... Instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction: domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers...\\
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->''"I've got a weapon for every situation. Hunting, protection, cold blooded murder, '''Hot. Blooded. Murder...''' murder... '''hot''' blooded murder... "''
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->''"I've got a weapon for every situation. Hunting, protection, cold blooded murder, '''Hot. Blooded. Murder...''' "''
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In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wonder wondered when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never see. He got his wish when the U.S ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The world awaited Armageddon... Instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction: domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers...\\
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->''"I have a question. The only question that matters. Would you risk your life for your fellow man? Even if that man is a synth?"''
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-->--'''Desdemona'''
->"''I have a question. The only question that matters. Would you risk your life for your fellow man? Even if that man is a synth?"''
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->"''[[ArcWords "War... War never changes.]]\\
In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wonder when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never see. He got his wish when the U.S ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki.\\
The world awaited Armageddon. Instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction. Domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers.\\
But then, in the 21st century, people awoke from the American Dream. Years of consumption led to shortages of nearly every major resource. The entire world unraveled. Peace became a distant memory.\\
It is now the year 2077. We stand on the brink of total war, and I am afraid for myself, for my wife, for my infant son. Because if my time in the Army taught me one thing, it's that war...\\
War never changes."''
-->--'''The Sole Survivor'''
In the year 1945, my great-great grandfather, serving in the army, wonder when he'd get to go home to his wife and the son he'd never see. He got his wish when the U.S ended World War II by dropping atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki.\\
The world awaited Armageddon. Instead, something miraculous happened. We began to use atomic energy not as a weapon, but as a nearly limitless source of power. People enjoyed luxuries once thought the realm of science fiction. Domestic robots, fusion-powered cars, portable computers.\\
But then, in the 21st century, people awoke from the American Dream. Years of consumption led to shortages of nearly every major resource. The entire world unraveled. Peace became a distant memory.\\
It is now the year 2077. We stand on the brink of total war, and I am afraid for myself, for my wife, for my infant son. Because if my time in the Army taught me one thing, it's that war...\\
War never changes."''
-->--'''The Sole Survivor'''