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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Alice feels slighted by her friends and decides not to hang out with them any more, but the next time they all meet up they miss her and call her to ask where she is.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Alice goes through the motions of leaving for the attention.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
** Especially since it's all talk -- no one even mentions changing how they treat her until she asks, whereupon they promise to behave better toward, and break it within hours.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
** Some of them pull up their socks and treat her better, and she remains friends with them, only.
** For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
** Especially since it's all talk -- no one even mentions changing how they treat her until she asks, whereupon they promise to behave better toward, and break it within hours.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
** Some of them pull up their socks and treat her better, and she remains friends with them, only.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''':
** For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
** Especially since it's all talk -- no one even mentions changing how they treat her until she asks, whereupon they promise to behave better toward, and break it within hours.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
** Some of them pull up their socks and treat her better, and she remains friends with them, only.
** For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
** Especially since it's all talk -- no one even mentions changing how they treat her until she asks, whereupon they promise to behave better toward, and break it within hours.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
** Some of them pull up their socks and treat her better, and she remains friends with them, only.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...until the last minute.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...until the last minute.
** ...until the last minute.
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* '''Deconstructed''': For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
** For all of the heartwarmingness of the appreciation, Alice realizes that they only paid attention to her when she threatened to leave, and decides to pack up anyway.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
** Alice eventually decides to accept the kindness of her friends anyway.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': No one shows up to keep Alice around...until the last minute. But they weren't there to see Alice off...
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* '''Zig Zagged''': No one shows up to keep Alice around... until the last minute. But they weren't there for her sake... because they didn't know she was leaving. Once they find out, they try to get her to stay, and Jane, who they originally came to see Alice off...off, is forgotten, and feels so betrayed that she decides never to come back from her trip. The day before the trip ends she changes her mind, but then she gets eaten by a shark.
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* '''Averted''': Alice decides not to leave.
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* '''Averted''': Alice decides not Alice's friends don't throw her a party to leave.convince her to stay.
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** Potential ''triple'' subversion: But only to make sure she's ''really'' leaving this time.
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** Especially since it's all talk -- no one even mentions changing how they treat her until she asks, whereupon they promise to behave better toward, and break it within hours.
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** Some of them pull up their socks and treat her better, and she remains friends with them, only.
