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** Alice is [[MultipleGunshotDeath machine-gunned deader than dead by fifteen gunmen]] in [[ConspiciouslyPublicAssassination the middle of a crowded mall]]. The coroner report and all attached witness statements classify it as [[ShameIfSomethingHappened "self-inflicted gunshot"]].
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** Alice is [[MultipleGunshotDeath machine-gunned deader than dead by fifteen gunmen]] in [[ConspiciouslyPublicAssassination [[ConspicuouslyPublicAssassination the middle of a crowded mall]]. The coroner report and all attached witness statements classify it as [[ShameIfSomethingHappened "self-inflicted gunshot"]].
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** When someone disputes this, a "respected astronomer" (who just so happens to be the coroner's best friend) states that the evidence points strongly toward an "extremely localized meteor shower". The coroner agrees with this, citing the fact that he knows all about these sorts of things, even going so far as to call himself a "[[InUniverseFactoidFailure meteor-ologist]]"
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** When someone disputes this, a "respected astronomer" (who just so happens to be the coroner's best friend) states that the evidence points strongly toward an "extremely localized meteor shower". The coroner agrees with this, citing the fact that he knows all about these sorts of things, even going so far as to call himself a "[[InUniverseFactoidFailure meteor-ologist]]" meteor-ologist]]".
** Alice is [[MultipleGunshotDeath machine-gunned deader than dead by fifteen gunmen]] in [[ConspiciouslyPublicAssassination the middle of a crowded mall]]. The coroner report and all attached witness statements classify it as [[ShameIfSomethingHappened "self-inflicted gunshot"]].
** Alice is [[MultipleGunshotDeath machine-gunned deader than dead by fifteen gunmen]] in [[ConspiciouslyPublicAssassination the middle of a crowded mall]]. The coroner report and all attached witness statements classify it as [[ShameIfSomethingHappened "self-inflicted gunshot"]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...except that Bob actually did it, counting on [[KansasCityShuffle the coroner knowing that Alice wanted to frame Bob]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...except that Bob actually did it, counting on [[KansasCityShuffle the coroner knowing that Alice wanted to frameBob]].Bob]].
** The gunshot wounds are the only part of an assassination by RasputinianDeath the cops put on the report, and that is [[RevealingCoverUp because it would be more suspicious to not put anything]].
** ...except that Bob actually did it, counting on [[KansasCityShuffle the coroner knowing that Alice wanted to frame
** The gunshot wounds are the only part of an assassination by RasputinianDeath the cops put on the report, and that is [[RevealingCoverUp because it would be more suspicious to not put anything]].
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* '''Straight''': Alice is found lying face down on a mattress with a knife in her back. The coroner's report states that her death was an accident.
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* '''Straight''': Alice is found lying face down on a mattress belly up with a knife in five oriental katanas pierced through her back.torso and the mattress. The coroner's report states that her death was an accident.