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** Bob does not just quits. He does it [[TakeThisJobAndShoveIt by delivering his retirement notice in the most bombastic and insulting way possible]]. Even Jesse [[ATruceWhileWeGawk has to pause his stormin' to behold what is happening.]]
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** Bob does not just quits.quit. He does it [[TakeThisJobAndShoveIt by delivering his retirement notice in the most bombastic and insulting way possible]]. Even Jesse [[ATruceWhileWeGawk has to pause his stormin' to behold what is happening.]]
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* '''Played for Horror''': Bob's decision to run away is a sign of his SanitySlippage reaching critical levels and to make things worse for everybody else (who trusts and maybe even loves him) he has become perfectly willing to kill whoever becomes an obstacle to his escape.
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* '''Played for Horror''': Horror''':
** Bob's decision to run away is a sign of his SanitySlippage reaching critical levels and to make things worse for everybody else (who trusts and maybe even loves him) he has become perfectly willing to kill whoever becomes an obstacle to hisescape.escape.
** Jesse is [[VillainKiller a horrible man to encounter, whether alone or together]]. Bob, like many other slasher victims, committed the ultimately fatal decision to take his chances alone.
** Bob's decision to run away is a sign of his SanitySlippage reaching critical levels and to make things worse for everybody else (who trusts and maybe even loves him) he has become perfectly willing to kill whoever becomes an obstacle to his
** Jesse is [[VillainKiller a horrible man to encounter, whether alone or together]]. Bob, like many other slasher victims, committed the ultimately fatal decision to take his chances alone.
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** Bob does not just quits. He does it [[TakeThisJobAndShoveIt by delivering his retirement notice in the most bombastic and insulting way possible]]. Even Bob [[ATruceWhileWeGawk has to pause his stormin' to behold what is happening.]]
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** Bob does not just quits. He does it [[TakeThisJobAndShoveIt by delivering his retirement notice in the most bombastic and insulting way possible]]. Even Bob Jesse [[ATruceWhileWeGawk has to pause his stormin' to behold what is happening.]]
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** Damien tries to run away. [[InescapableHorror Bob just hunts him down]].
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** Damien Bob tries to run away. [[InescapableHorror Bob Jesse just hunts him down]].down]]. Jesse may even say something along the lines of "you really thought I was gonna forget about you?" before [[GottaKillEmAll slaying the true very last member of Damien's forces]] ([[ResignationsNotAccepted resignation notwithstanding]]).
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** Bob does not just quits. He does it [[TakeThisJobAndShoveIt by delivering his retirement notice in the most bombastic and insulting way possible]]. Even Bob [[ATruceWhileWeGawk has to pause his stormin' to behold what is happening.]]
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** Bob realized he [[KnowWhenToFoldThem incapable of fighting the hero and stayed away]] from the conflict but remained around to support Damien and give him gear
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** Bob realized he [[KnowWhenToFoldThem is incapable of fighting the hero and stayed away]] from the conflict but remained around to support Damien and give him gear
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** Bob and Damien used to be [[VillainousFriendship good friends]]. Bob's decision to quit comes at the end of a great deal of internal conflict for him.
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** Bob and Damien used to be [[HeterosexualLifePartners good friends]] (regardless of the fact they [[VillainousFriendship good friends]].were villains]]). Bob's decision to quit comes at the end of a great deal of internal conflict for him. For further drama, Damien [[EtTuBrute is utterly heartbroken by Bob's refusal to stick through thick and thin]].
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** Bob's desire to leave becomes so great that he straight-up vanishes into thin air.
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** Bob is a PsychoForHire NietzscheWannabe who thinks rules are meaningless arbitrary concepts we enforce to make ourselves feel more significant than we actually are. While Damien is LawfulEvil and has no problem bossing him around. Bob just figured working for him just isn't fun anymore.
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** Bob is a PsychoForHire NietzscheWannabe who thinks rules are meaningless arbitrary concepts we enforce to make ourselves feel more significant than we actually are. While are, while Damien is LawfulEvil and has no problem bossing him around. Bob just figured working for him just isn't fun anymore.
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** Bob is a ChaoticEvil PsychoForHire NietzscheWannabe who thinks rules are meaningless arbitrary concepts we enforce to make ourselves feel more significant than we actually are. While Damien is LawfulEvil and has no problem bossing him around. Bob just figured working for him just isn't fun anymore.
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** Bob is a ChaoticEvil PsychoForHire NietzscheWannabe who thinks rules are meaningless arbitrary concepts we enforce to make ourselves feel more significant than we actually are. While Damien is LawfulEvil and has no problem bossing him around. Bob just figured working for him just isn't fun anymore.
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** Bob puts up with all manner of humiliations while working for Damien; however, the [[RantInducingSlight last straw]] comes when Damien cancels Casual Friday (or makes him work overtime ''without'' extra pay).
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** Bob puts up with all manner of humiliations while working for Damien; however, the [[RantInducingSlight last straw]] straw comes when Damien cancels Casual Friday (or makes him work overtime ''without'' extra pay).
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* '''Exaggerated''': Jesse's approach to the castle causes mass desertion amongst Damien's troops.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Jesse's approach to the castle causes Confirmed sightings of Jesse are always followed by mass desertion desertions amongst Damien's troops.
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** Bob realized he [[KnowWhenToUnfoldThem incapable of fighting the hero and stayed away]] from the conflict but remained around to support Damien and give him gear
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** Bob realized he [[KnowWhenToUnfoldThem [[KnowWhenToFoldThem incapable of fighting the hero and stayed away]] from the conflict but remained around to support Damien and give him gear
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob splits offscreen and is only mentioned in passing.
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** Bob splits offscreen and is only mentioned inpassing.passing.
** Bob realized he [[KnowWhenToUnfoldThem incapable of fighting the hero and stayed away]] from the conflict but remained around to support Damien and give him gear
** Bob splits offscreen and is only mentioned in
** Bob realized he [[KnowWhenToUnfoldThem incapable of fighting the hero and stayed away]] from the conflict but remained around to support Damien and give him gear
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** Bob realizes this is AllForNothing and decides to retreat. Not all fights are worth winning y'know.
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** Damien tries to run away. [[InescapableHorror Bob just hunts him down]].
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*** Alternatively, Bob was tired of his coworkers picking on him.
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** Jesse is a [[HorrifyingHero particularly nasty]] AntiHero who [[AxCrazy brutally murders]] the bad guys he beats. [[ProperlyParanoid Bob had every right to go escape while he could]].
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** Bob joined Damien's side because of some [[EvilVirtues quality]] he admired in Damien; however, he has come to realise that Damien [[BrokenPedestal no longer possesses those qualities.]]
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** Bob joined Damien's side because of some [[EvilVirtues quality]] he admired in Damien; however, he has come to realise realize that Damien [[BrokenPedestal no longer possesses those qualities.]]
** Bob was OnlyInItForTheMoney and he just found out Damien had no intent on paying him.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Once Damien is distracted fighting Jesse, Bob manages to escape successfully.
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** Once Damien is distracted fighting Jesse, Bob manages to escapesuccessfully.successfully.
** Bob runs off for real after Jesse gives him a DeathGlare.
** Once Damien is distracted fighting Jesse, Bob manages to escape
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** "I ain't no damn wimp! I'm staying!"
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* '''Played for Horror''': Bob's decision to run away is a sign of his SanitySlippage reaching critical levels and to make things worse for everybody else (who trusts and maybe even loves him) he has become perfectly willing to kill whoever becomes an obstacle to his escape.
