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'''Basic Trope''': TheStoic [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is horrified]]/[[BrokenTears cries]]/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge rages]]/[[WhenSheSmiles smiles]] after some shocking/tragic/wonderous event.
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'''Basic Trope''': TheStoic [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is horrified]]/[[BrokenTears cries]]/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge rages]]/[[WhenSheSmiles smiles]] visibly expresses emotion after some shocking/tragic/wonderous significant event.
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** Bob seems totally Stoic, but when we get into his head we learn it is entirely a façade.
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** Bob seems totally Stoic, stoic, but when we get into his head we learn it is entirely a façade.
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** Bob is a RealityWarper, whose powers are tied to his emotions. he maintains his stoicism, lest he harms those around him, but when the big bad kills Alice, he goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, powers and all.
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** Bob is a RealityWarper, whose powers are tied to his emotions. he He maintains his stoicism, lest he harms those around him, but when the big bad BigBad kills Alice, he goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, powers and all.
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** [[DidYouThinkICantFeel Bob’s not a robot, and is just as capable of emotion as other people.]]
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** [[DidYouThinkICantFeel Bob’s not a robot, and is just as capable of emotion as other people.]]]] He doesn't usually ''express'' said emotion, but watching his own daughter die was just too much.
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* '''Parodied''': Bob gets slapped in the face, a bucket of paint dumped on him, is involved in a car crash, and yet never shows emotion, until Alice knocks his coffee out of his hand. At which point he lets out a BigNo
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* '''Parodied''': Bob gets slapped in the face, [[CoveredInGunge a bucket of paint dumped on him, him]], is involved in a car crash, and yet never shows emotion, until Alice knocks his coffee out of his hand. At which point he lets out a BigNoBigNo.
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'''Basic Trope''': TheStoic [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is horrified]]/[[SandInMyEyes cries]]/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge rages]]/[[WhenSheSmiles smiles]] after some shocking/tragic/wonderous event.
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'''Basic Trope''': TheStoic [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone is horrified]]/[[SandInMyEyes horrified]]/[[BrokenTears cries]]/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge rages]]/[[WhenSheSmiles smiles]] after some shocking/tragic/wonderous event.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': It's a series where the characters keep trying to crack each other up, but Bob can keep a straight face through every joke he hears. One person tells a really funny joke, and then Bob is visibly trying really hard not to laugh.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** It's a series where the characters keep trying to crack each other up, but Bob can keep a straight face through every joke he hears. One person tells a really funny joke, and then Bob is visibly trying really hard not tolaugh.laugh.
** On the other hand, Bob tries not to laugh when [[TheDitz Alice]] says something ''really stupid.''
** It's a series where the characters keep trying to crack each other up, but Bob can keep a straight face through every joke he hears. One person tells a really funny joke, and then Bob is visibly trying really hard not to
** On the other hand, Bob tries not to laugh when [[TheDitz Alice]] says something ''really stupid.''
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** The only way to activate the MacGuffin is through a powerful show of emotion. Bob's friends [[FakeKillScare stage a really convincing murder scene, involving Alice]] so he can activate the MacGuffin.* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
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** The only way to activate the MacGuffin is through a powerful show of emotion. Bob's friends [[FakeKillScare stage a really convincing murder scene, involving Alice]] so he can activate the MacGuffin.MacGuffin.
* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
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** The only way to activate the MacGuffin is through a powerful show of emotion. Bob's friends [[FakeKillScare stage a really convincing murder scene, involving Alice]] so he can activate the MacGuffin.
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** Bob’s not a robot, and is just as capable of emotion as other people.
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** [[DidYouThinkICantFeel Bob’s not a robot, and is just as capable of emotion as other people.]]
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* '''Exploited''': During Bob's moment of emotion, the enemy attacks and defeats him.
* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
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* '''Exploited''': During '''Exploited''':
**During Bob's moment of emotion, the enemy attacks and defeats him.
** The only way to activate the MacGuffin is through a powerful show of emotion. Bob's friends [[FakeKillScare stage a really convincing murder scene, involving Alice]] so he can activate the MacGuffin.* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
**During Bob's moment of emotion, the enemy attacks and defeats him.
** The only way to activate the MacGuffin is through a powerful show of emotion. Bob's friends [[FakeKillScare stage a really convincing murder scene, involving Alice]] so he can activate the MacGuffin.* '''Defied''': Bob, knowing that Alice is about to die and there's nothing he can do about it, actively suppresses his emotions, so he can [[NervesOfSteel keep his focus on getting the job done]].
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* '''Straight''': [[AliceAndBob Bob]] has seen many things good and bad, and has never shown a hint of emotion. When he sees his daughter, Alice, dies, he cries.
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* '''Straight''': [[AliceAndBob Bob]] has seen many things good and bad, and has never shown a hint of emotion. When he sees his daughter, Alice, dies, daughter Alice die, he cries.
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* '''Conversed''': Wow, Bob is a crazy badass when calm. Imagine what he would be like if he lost his cool!
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* '''Conversed''': Wow, "Wow, Bob is a crazy badass when calm. Imagine what he would be like if he lost his cool!cool!"
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**Bob’s not a robot, and is just as capable of emotion as other people.
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* '''Straight''': [[AliceAndBob Bob]] has seen many things good and bad, and has never show a hint of emotion. When he sees his daughter, Alice, die, he cries.
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* '''Straight''': [[AliceAndBob Bob]] has seen many things good and bad, and has never show shown a hint of emotion. When he sees his daughter, Alice, die, dies, he cries.
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** Bob is a RealityWarper, whose powers are tied to his emotions. he maintains his stoicism, lest he harm those around him, but when the big bad kills Alice, he goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, powers and all.
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** Bob is a RealityWarper, whose powers are tied to his emotions. he maintains his stoicism, lest he harm harms those around him, but when the big bad kills Alice, he goes on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge, powers and all.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob seems to be about to show emotion after Alice dies, but he holds it in. When he's alone tries to let the tears flow but still they don't come, but the next time he's with his [[TrueCompanions companions]], the water works open up.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob seems to be about to show emotion after Alice dies, but he holds it in. When he's alone tries trying to let the tears flow but still still, they don't come, but the next time he's with his [[TrueCompanions companions]], the water works waterworks open up.
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* '''Conversed''': Wow, Bob is crazy badass when calm. Imagine what he would be like if he lost his cool!
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* '''Conversed''': Wow, Bob is a crazy badass when calm. Imagine what he would be like if he lost his cool!
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** Bob's one break from stoicism, a raging anger towards Alice, makes her decide he doesn't love her, ultimately driving the person he cares about most away from him.
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** Bob's one break from stoicism, a fit of raging anger towards Alice, makes her decide he doesn't love her, ultimately driving the person he cares about most away from him.
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** Afterwards, Bob pursues the case independently, and solves it, before anyone else could, because his burst of emotion gave him a single minded resolve to see his daughter's killers brought to justice.
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** Afterwards, Bob pursues the case independently, and solves it, before anyone else could, because his burst of emotion gave him a single minded single-minded resolve to see his daughter's killers brought to justice.
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** When Bob's stoicism melts into a face of UnstoppableRage, everyone knows that the BigBad is a dead man, and it's not going to be pretty.
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** When Bob's stoicism melts into a the face of UnstoppableRage, everyone knows that the BigBad is a dead man, and it's not going to be pretty.
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** Every trauma that Bob suffers pushes him closer to the edge; watching his daughter die is the final straw for his self-control.
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* '''Straight''': [[AliceAndBob Bob]] has seen many things good and bad, and has never show a hint of emotion. When sees his daughter, Alice, die, he cries.
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* '''Straight''': [[AliceAndBob Bob]] has seen many things good and bad, and has never show a hint of emotion. When he sees his daughter, Alice, die, he cries.