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** Latrommi starts aging at a normal pace.
** Latrommi has AgeWithoutYouth and already looks his age. He dies of old age when his immortality is taken away.
** Latrommi has AgeWithoutYouth and already looks his age. He dies of old age when his immortality is taken away.
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** Latrommi starts aging at a normal pace.
pace after losing his immortality.
** Latrommihas AgeWithoutYouth and is an ElderlyImmortal [[AgeWithoutYouth who already looks his age. age]]. He just simply dies of any natural health complications from old age when his immortality is taken away.
** Latrommi
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* '''Exaggerated''': When the vial holding the Potion of Immortality is broken, everyone that uses it to gain immortality immediately turns into dust even though they [[FridgeLogic still have some potion in their systems]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': When the vial holding the Potion of Immortality is broken, everyone Latrommi's magic that uses it is keeping him young is dispelled, he instantly crumbles to gain immortality immediately turns into dust even though they [[FridgeLogic still have some potion in their systems]].despite starting it when he was a young adult and only using it for a few years.
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** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified. (And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.)
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** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified. (And And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.)
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* '''Enforced''': It's necessary for the plot that Latrommi is killed off quickly.
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* '''Enforced''': It's necessary for the plot that Latrommi is killed off quickly. The first draft had [[GoodIsNotSoft Alice stabbing Latrommi to death]] after the crystal was broken, but the censors found the scene too violent and objected to TheHero being a murderer, so they forced the writer to come up with some other way to get rid of Latrommi.
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** Bob kills Latrommi immediately after breaking the crystal.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Latrommi belongs to a weird fantasy race that look more and more ridiculous the older they get.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Latrommi belongs to is of a weird fantasy race. Creatures of that race that look more and more ridiculous the older they get.
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* '''Exaggerated''': When the vial holding the Potion of Immortality is broken, everyone that uses it to gain immortality immediately turns into dust even though they [[FridgeLogic still have some potion in their system]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': When the vial holding the Potion of Immortality is broken, everyone that uses it to gain immortality immediately turns into dust even though they [[FridgeLogic still have some potion in their system]].systems]].
** Latrommi has been using the crystal for a massive... ten days. When it's broken, he complains about suddenly looking ten days older, even though it's impossible to see any difference.
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** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified.
*** And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.
*** And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.
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** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified.
*** Andmummified. (And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.)
*** And
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** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified.
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** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified. mummified.
*** And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.
*** And maybe still alive, being mildly annoyed by his transformation.
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* '''Justified''': Latrommi's youth is just an illusion created by the PowerCrystal. When the crystal is shattered, so are the illusions.
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* '''Justified''': Latrommi's youth is just an illusion created by the PowerCrystal. When the crystal is shattered, so are is the illusions.illusion.
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* '''Subverted''': Before destroying the crystal, Alice tells Bob what's about to happen to Latrommi. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi points out that he's not aging.
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* '''Subverted''': Before destroying the crystal, Alice tells Bob what's that this is about to happen to Latrommi. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi points out that he's not aging.
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* '''Invoked''': Latrommi's immortality was originally not dependent on the crystal. Alice and Bob made Latrommi dependent on the crystal before destroying it.
* '''Exploited''': Alice and Bob use this to kill Latrommi fairly quickly and have him suffer the fate he has committed so many immoral actions to avoid.
* '''Defied''': Latrommi hides and protects the PowerCrystal to prevent this from happening.
* '''Discussed''': "I hope I don't age rapidly if I ever lose my immortality."
* '''Exploited''': Alice and Bob use this to kill Latrommi fairly quickly and have him suffer the fate he has committed so many immoral actions to avoid.
* '''Defied''': Latrommi hides and protects the PowerCrystal to prevent this from happening.
* '''Discussed''': "I hope I don't age rapidly if I ever lose my immortality."
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* '''Invoked''': Latrommi's immortality was originally not dependent on the crystal. Alice and Bob made Latrommi used their magic to weaken Latrommi, making him dependent on the crystal before destroying it.
* '''Exploited''': Alice and Bob use this to kill Latrommi fairly quickly and have him suffer the fate he has [[ImmortalityImmorality committed so many immoral actions toavoid.
avoid]].
*'''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Latrommi hides and protects the PowerCrystal to prevent this from happening.
** Latrommi finds a way to extract the crystal's power, thus making his immortality independent of it.
* '''Discussed''':"I "[[TemptingFate I hope I don't won't age rapidly if I ever lose my immortality.immortality]]."
* '''Exploited''': Alice and Bob use this to kill Latrommi fairly quickly and have him suffer the fate he has [[ImmortalityImmorality committed so many immoral actions to
*
** Latrommi hides and protects the PowerCrystal to prevent this from happening.
** Latrommi finds a way to extract the crystal's power, thus making his immortality independent of it.
* '''Discussed''':
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'''Basic Trope''': When ReallySevenHundredYearsOld immortals lose their immortality, they [[RapidAging age rapidly]] until they reach their true age.
* '''Straight''': [[AristocratsAreEvil Baron]] [[SdrawkcabName Latrommi]] uses the PowerCrystal to remain young. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi starts aging rapidly. A few minutes later, when he reaches his true age, he's reduced to a pile of dust.
* '''Exaggerated''': When the vial holding the Potion of Immortality is broken, everyone that uses it to gain immortality immediately turns into dust even though they [[FridgeLogic still have some potion in their system]].
* '''Downplayed''': It takes Latrommi a couple of weeks to reach his true age.
* '''Justified''': Latrommi's youth is just an illusion created by the PowerCrystal. When the crystal is shattered, so are the illusions.
* '''Inverted''': Latrommi has a curse that makes him [[MerlinSickness age backwards]] and the PowerCrystal stalls said curse. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi rapidly grows younger, eventually being reduced to a teenager, then a child, a baby, a fetus, and finally a single cell.
* '''Subverted''': Before destroying the crystal, Alice tells Bob what's about to happen to Latrommi. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi points out that he's not aging.
* '''Double Subverted''': Then Alice asks if Latrommi's hair has always been grey. Cue OhCrap.
* '''Parodied''':
** When the crystal is broken, Latrommi disappears and his tombstone suddenly pops up on a graveyard.
** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified.
* '''Zig Zagged''': This happens to some immortals, but not all.
* '''Averted''':
** Latrommi starts aging at a normal pace.
** Latrommi has AgeWithoutYouth and already looks his age. He dies of old age when his immortality is taken away.
** Latrommi's immortality is permanent, even when its source is gone.
* '''Enforced''': It's necessary for the plot that Latrommi is killed off quickly.
* '''Lampshaded''': "Ew, that seven-hundred-year old look is gross!" "At least the aging is rapid, so it doesn't last long."
* '''Invoked''': Latrommi's immortality was originally not dependent on the crystal. Alice and Bob made Latrommi dependent on the crystal before destroying it.
* '''Exploited''': Alice and Bob use this to kill Latrommi fairly quickly and have him suffer the fate he has committed so many immoral actions to avoid.
* '''Defied''': Latrommi hides and protects the PowerCrystal to prevent this from happening.
* '''Discussed''': "I hope I don't age rapidly if I ever lose my immortality."
* '''Conversed''': "Why does Latrommi age that quickly only because he lost his immortality?"
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* '''Straight''': [[AristocratsAreEvil Baron]] [[SdrawkcabName Latrommi]] uses the PowerCrystal to remain young. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi starts aging rapidly. A few minutes later, when he reaches his true age, he's reduced to a pile of dust.
* '''Exaggerated''': When the vial holding the Potion of Immortality is broken, everyone that uses it to gain immortality immediately turns into dust even though they [[FridgeLogic still have some potion in their system]].
* '''Downplayed''': It takes Latrommi a couple of weeks to reach his true age.
* '''Justified''': Latrommi's youth is just an illusion created by the PowerCrystal. When the crystal is shattered, so are the illusions.
* '''Inverted''': Latrommi has a curse that makes him [[MerlinSickness age backwards]] and the PowerCrystal stalls said curse. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi rapidly grows younger, eventually being reduced to a teenager, then a child, a baby, a fetus, and finally a single cell.
* '''Subverted''': Before destroying the crystal, Alice tells Bob what's about to happen to Latrommi. When the crystal is broken, Latrommi points out that he's not aging.
* '''Double Subverted''': Then Alice asks if Latrommi's hair has always been grey. Cue OhCrap.
* '''Parodied''':
** When the crystal is broken, Latrommi disappears and his tombstone suddenly pops up on a graveyard.
** When the crystal is broken, Pharaoh Latrommi is instantly mummified.
* '''Zig Zagged''': This happens to some immortals, but not all.
* '''Averted''':
** Latrommi starts aging at a normal pace.
** Latrommi has AgeWithoutYouth and already looks his age. He dies of old age when his immortality is taken away.
** Latrommi's immortality is permanent, even when its source is gone.
* '''Enforced''': It's necessary for the plot that Latrommi is killed off quickly.
* '''Lampshaded''': "Ew, that seven-hundred-year old look is gross!" "At least the aging is rapid, so it doesn't last long."
* '''Invoked''': Latrommi's immortality was originally not dependent on the crystal. Alice and Bob made Latrommi dependent on the crystal before destroying it.
* '''Exploited''': Alice and Bob use this to kill Latrommi fairly quickly and have him suffer the fate he has committed so many immoral actions to avoid.
* '''Defied''': Latrommi hides and protects the PowerCrystal to prevent this from happening.
* '''Discussed''': "I hope I don't age rapidly if I ever lose my immortality."
* '''Conversed''': "Why does Latrommi age that quickly only because he lost his immortality?"
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