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** Bob is a [[TooKinkyToTorture masochist]]
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** Bob is a [[TooKinkyToTorture masochist]]masochist]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice beats Bob within an inch of his life, and he immedaitely asks her to marry him.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice beats Bob within an inch of his life, and he immedaitely immediately asks her to marry him.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice punches Bob and he likes her a bit more after that.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Alice punches Bob and he likes her a bit more after that.
** Alice punches Bob and he likes her a bit more after that.
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* Bob is an AmazonChaser.
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** Alice and Bob are two martial artists taking part in the same {{tournament|Arc}}, and Alice just beat Bob during the finals. Bob was the only contestant who gave her a challenge, and the relationship starts from there.
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** Alice and Bob are two martial artists taking part in the same {{tournament|Arc}}, and Alice just beat Bob during the finals. Bob was the only contestant who gave her a challenge, and on his side, he has a healthy respect for skilled martial artists which Alice obviously was since she beat him, and the relationship starts from there.
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** Alice and Bob are two martial artists taking part in the same [[TournamentArc tournament]], and Alice just beat Bob during the finals. Bob was the only contestant who gave her a challenge, and the relationship starts from there.
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** Alice and Bob are two martial artists taking part in the same [[TournamentArc tournament]], {{tournament|Arc}}, and Alice just beat Bob during the finals. Bob was the only contestant who gave her a challenge, and the relationship starts from there.
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** Alice and Bob are two martial artists taking part in the same [[TournamentArc tournament]], and Alice just beat Bob during the finals. Bob was the only contestant who gave her a challenge, and the relationship starts from there.
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* '''Invoked''': Alice likes Bob and knows he likes pain…
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* '''Invoked''': '''Invoked''':
** Alice likes Bob and knows he likes pain…
** Alice likes Bob and knows he likes pain…
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* '''Defied''': "Did I hit you so hard you got '''brain damage'''? That's a ''ridiculous'' basis for a relationship!"
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** "There's no way I will ever fall in love with a girl because she beat me up."
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** "There's no way I will ever fall in love with a girl because she beat me up."
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** Alice goes into [[FightClubbbing underground fight-clubs]] in order to get a date.
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** Alice goes into [[FightClubbbing [[FightClubbing underground fight-clubs]] in order to get a date.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I dunno when I fell for Alice - maybe it was after she punched me?"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I dunno when I fell for Alice - -- maybe it was after she punched me?"
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* '''Justified''': Bob admires the way that Alice actually stands up to him.
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** Bob hails from a ProudWarriorRace where violence is a common form of courtship.
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** Bob hails from a ProudWarriorRace where violence is a common form of courtship.
* '''Implied''': Alice sucker-punches Bob and puts him on the ground. When he wakes up, his only response is a dopey grin and a soft "Wow!"
* '''Deconstructed''': Bob may be in love, but Alice punched him the first place because she genuinely doesn't like him. His attempts to pursue her afterward just piss her off more (and make her more violent), [[AmazonChaser which just makes Bob more persistent]], and pretty soon the whole thing starts to look like [[UnfortunateImplications an abusive non-relationship]].
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice's punch attracts Bob because he's a brawl-loving BoisterousBruiser; fortunately so is she, [[SlapSlapKiss and once they]] [[AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther get to know each other better]] they evolve into a really awesome BattleCouple.
* '''Deconstructed''': Bob may be in love, but Alice punched him the first place because she genuinely doesn't like him. His attempts to pursue her afterward just piss her off more (and make her more violent), [[AmazonChaser which just makes Bob more persistent]], and pretty soon the whole thing starts to look like [[UnfortunateImplications an abusive non-relationship]].
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice's punch attracts Bob because he's a brawl-loving BoisterousBruiser; fortunately so is she, [[SlapSlapKiss and once they]] [[AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther get to know each other better]] they evolve into a really awesome BattleCouple.
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* '''Enforced''': "We need a scene that sets the tone of Alice and Bob's BelligerentSexualTension.
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* '''Enforced''': "We need a scene that sets the tone of Alice and Bob's BelligerentSexualTension."
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* '''Inverted''': After Alice beats Bob up, he hates her and wants nothing to do with her.
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* '''Inverted''': After Alice beats Bob up, acts nice to Bob, he hates her and wants nothing to do with her.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character falls in love with someone who beats them up.
* '''Straight''': Alice beats the crap out of Bob, and he later falls in love with her.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice beats Bob within an inch of his life, and he immedaitely asks her to marry him.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice punches Bob and he likes her a bit more after that.
* '''Justified''': Bob admires the way that Alice actually stands up to him.
* '''Inverted''': After Alice beats Bob up, he hates her and wants nothing to do with her.
* '''Subverted''': Alice knocks Bob around. He still dislikes her.
* '''Double Subverted''': But after she hurts him some more, he finds that he likes her.
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* '''Averted''': Bob doesn't change his opinion of Alice after he gets beaten up.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I dunno when I fell for Alice - maybe it was after she punched me?"
* '''Invoked''': Alice likes Bob and knows he likes pain...
* '''Exploited''': Alice beats up Bob and then blackmails him into dating her, knowing that the revelation that a girl beat him up would make him lose his social standing.
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* '''Straight''': Alice beats the crap out of Bob, and he later falls in love with her.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice beats Bob within an inch of his life, and he immedaitely asks her to marry him.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice punches Bob and he likes her a bit more after that.
* '''Justified''': Bob admires the way that Alice actually stands up to him.
* '''Inverted''': After Alice beats Bob up, he hates her and wants nothing to do with her.
* '''Subverted''': Alice knocks Bob around. He still dislikes her.
* '''Double Subverted''': But after she hurts him some more, he finds that he likes her.
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* '''Averted''': Bob doesn't change his opinion of Alice after he gets beaten up.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I dunno when I fell for Alice - maybe it was after she punched me?"
* '''Invoked''': Alice likes Bob and knows he likes pain...
* '''Exploited''': Alice beats up Bob and then blackmails him into dating her, knowing that the revelation that a girl beat him up would make him lose his social standing.
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