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* '''Straight:''' While facing the sinister General Butch Reuben manages to pin him down, but struggles to keep him down. He askes Alice to shoot him [[TakingYouWithMe knowing the general would die with him.]] [[ShootTheDog Relucantly, she complies.]]
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* '''Straight:''' While facing the sinister General Butch Butch, Reuben manages to pin him down, but struggles to keep him down. He askes Alice to shoot him [[TakingYouWithMe knowing the general would die with him.]] him]]. [[ShootTheDog Relucantly, Reluctantly, she complies.]]complies]].
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* '''Downplayed:''' By shooting him Reuben would be severely injured, but he wouldn't be dead. They could still kill the General without losing him.
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* '''Downplayed:''' By shooting him him, Reuben would be severely injured, but he wouldn't be dead. They could still kill the General without losing him.
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** Reuben knows if they don't eliminate him he'll destory the world, so he decides to make a HeroicSacrifice.
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** Reuben knows if they don't eliminate him him, he'll destory destroy the world, so he decides to make a HeroicSacrifice.
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* '''Double-Subverted'''
** When they get him treated however he ends up dying from internal problems.
** When they get him treated however he ends up dying from internal problems.
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* '''Double-Subverted'''
'''Double-Subverted:'''
** When they get himtreated however treated, however, he ends up dying from internal problems.
** When they get him
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** After Reuben tells her she's only doing what is right Alice pulls through and shoots him in the back.
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** After Reuben tells her she's only doing what is right right, Alice pulls through and shoots him in the back.
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--> Reuben: "AllLovingHero Alice, I know you said you would kill a villian if it was nessecary, but would it be the same for a friend?"
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--> Reuben: "AllLovingHero AllLovingHero Alice, I know you said you would kill a villian villain if it was nessecary, necessary, but would it be the same for a friend?"friend?
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** Alice was [[TheMole working for Emperor Evulz the whole time]]. She is eliminating both Rueben and Butch, [[TheStarscream who was never loyal to Evulz]].
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** Alice was [[TheMole working for Emperor Evulz the whole time]]. She is eliminating both Rueben Reuben and Butch, [[TheStarscream who was never loyal to Evulz]].
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--> Alice: <crying> "Reuben, you don't have to do this. Even if it's for the right reason I'd rather you be alive!"
--> Reuben: "It's okay... I've accepted it."
--> Reuben: "It's okay... I've accepted it."
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--> Reuben: "It's
'''Reuben:''' It's okay... I've accepted it.
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-->Charlie: "Oh god, Reuben's asking Alice to shoot him... She won't do that, will she?"
-->Diana: "Given how tough Genral Butch is this might be their best chance. You saw how he [[CurbStompBattle gaving a whooping]] to Alice's older brother, the expert swordsman."
-->Diana: "Given how tough Genral Butch is this might be their best chance. You saw how he [[CurbStompBattle gaving a whooping]] to Alice's older brother, the expert swordsman."
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-->Diana: "Given
'''Diana:''' Given how tough
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* '''Exploited:''' General Butch attempts to get Alice to not pull the trigger by knowing she would kill a close friend.
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* '''Exploited:''' '''Exploited:'''
** General Butch attempts to get Alice to not pull the trigger by knowing she would kill a closefriend.friend.
** Alice was [[TheMole working for Emperor Evulz the whole time]]. She is eliminating both Rueben and Butch, [[TheStarscream who was never loyal to Evulz]].
** General Butch attempts to get Alice to not pull the trigger by knowing she would kill a close
** Alice was [[TheMole working for Emperor Evulz the whole time]]. She is eliminating both Rueben and Butch, [[TheStarscream who was never loyal to Evulz]].
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** The only one General Butch can die is being killed alongside another person.
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** The only one way General Butch can die is being killed alongside another person.
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** Alice shoots him again while he's still left open.
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** Charlie: "Oh god, Reuben's asking Alice to shoot him... She won't do that, will she?"
** Diana: "Given how tough Genral Butch is this might be their best chance. You saw how he [[CurbStompBattle gaving a whooping]] to Alice's older brother, the expert swordsman."
** Diana: "Given how tough Genral Butch is this might be their best chance. You saw how he [[CurbStompBattle gaving a whooping]] to Alice's older brother, the expert swordsman."
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* '''Straight:''' While facing the sinister General Butch Reuben manages to pin him down, but struggles to keep him down. He asked Alice to shoot him [[TakingYouWithMe knowing the general would die with him.]] [[ShootTheDog Relucantly, she complies.]]
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* '''Straight:''' While facing the sinister General Butch Reuben manages to pin him down, but struggles to keep him down. He asked askes Alice to shoot him [[TakingYouWithMe knowing the general would die with him.]] [[ShootTheDog Relucantly, she complies.]]
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* '''Invoked:''' Reuben was a DeathSeeker anyway, so this was a good opportunity to pull that off while getting some heroic credit.
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* '''Invoked:''' Reuben was a DeathSeeker anyway, so this was a good opportunity to pull that off while getting some heroic credit.credit.
* '''Exploited:''' General Butch attempts to get Alice to not pull the trigger by knowing she would kill a close friend.
* '''Defied:''' Reuben asks Alice to throw him the gun so he can shoot him.
* '''Discussed:'''
--> Alice: <crying> "Reuben, you don't have to do this. Even if it's for the right reason I'd rather you be alive!"
--> Reuben: "It's okay... I've accepted it."
* '''Conversed:'''
**Charlie: "Oh god, Reuben's asking Alice to shoot him... She won't do that, will she?"
**Diana: "Given how tough Genral Butch is this might be their best chance. You saw how he [[CurbStompBattle gaving a whooping]] to Alice's older brother, the expert swordsman."
* '''Exploited:''' General Butch attempts to get Alice to not pull the trigger by knowing she would kill a close friend.
* '''Defied:''' Reuben asks Alice to throw him the gun so he can shoot him.
* '''Discussed:'''
--> Alice: <crying> "Reuben, you don't have to do this. Even if it's for the right reason I'd rather you be alive!"
--> Reuben: "It's okay... I've accepted it."
* '''Conversed:'''
**Charlie: "Oh god, Reuben's asking Alice to shoot him... She won't do that, will she?"
**Diana: "Given how tough Genral Butch is this might be their best chance. You saw how he [[CurbStompBattle gaving a whooping]] to Alice's older brother, the expert swordsman."
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'''Basic Trope:''' A character asks another to kill them while they are holding an enenmy down.
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'''Basic Trope:''' A character asks another to kill them while they are holding an enenmy enemy down.
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** The heroes eliminate General Butch without having to kill Reuben too.
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** The heroes eliminate General Butch without having to kill Reuben too.too.
** Reuben swings General Butch into aim rather than pinning him down.
* '''Enforced:''' "We know Reuben will die in this battle, so let's have him use himself as a vessel for Alice to show how heroic he was."
* '''Lampshaded:'''
--> Reuben: "AllLovingHero Alice, I know you said you would kill a villian if it was nessecary, but would it be the same for a friend?"
* '''Invoked:''' Reuben was a DeathSeeker anyway, so this was a good opportunity to pull that off while getting some heroic credit.
** Reuben swings General Butch into aim rather than pinning him down.
* '''Enforced:''' "We know Reuben will die in this battle, so let's have him use himself as a vessel for Alice to show how heroic he was."
* '''Lampshaded:'''
--> Reuben: "AllLovingHero Alice, I know you said you would kill a villian if it was nessecary, but would it be the same for a friend?"
* '''Invoked:''' Reuben was a DeathSeeker anyway, so this was a good opportunity to pull that off while getting some heroic credit.
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** Reuben knows if they don't eliminate him he'll destory the world, so he decides to make a HeroicSacrifice.
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** Reuben knows if they don't eliminate him he'll destory the world, so he decides to make a HeroicSacrifice.HeroicSacrifice.
** The only one General Butch can die is being killed alongside another person.
* '''Inverted:''' Reuben grabs General Butch and tells Alice to heal both of them.
* '''Subverted:'''
** The shot kills General Butch, but Reuben manages to live and suffer OnlyAFleshWound from it.
** Reuben dies, but General Butch survives and tosses his dead body over.
** Alice can't bring herself to kill Reuben despite the circumstances.
* '''Double-Subverted'''
** When they get him treated however he ends up dying from internal problems.
** This forces GentleGiant Lochy to step in as a sacrifice.
** After Reuben tells her she's only doing what is right Alice pulls through and shoots him in the back.
* '''Parodied:''' Reuben tries to hold a dog down so Alice can wash it, knowing it would ruin his horrible odor too.
* '''Averted:'''
** The heroes eliminate General Butch without having to kill Reuben too.
** The only one General Butch can die is being killed alongside another person.
* '''Inverted:''' Reuben grabs General Butch and tells Alice to heal both of them.
* '''Subverted:'''
** The shot kills General Butch, but Reuben manages to live and suffer OnlyAFleshWound from it.
** Reuben dies, but General Butch survives and tosses his dead body over.
** Alice can't bring herself to kill Reuben despite the circumstances.
* '''Double-Subverted'''
** When they get him treated however he ends up dying from internal problems.
** This forces GentleGiant Lochy to step in as a sacrifice.
** After Reuben tells her she's only doing what is right Alice pulls through and shoots him in the back.
* '''Parodied:''' Reuben tries to hold a dog down so Alice can wash it, knowing it would ruin his horrible odor too.
* '''Averted:'''
** The heroes eliminate General Butch without having to kill Reuben too.
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'''Basic Trope:''' A character asks another to kill them while they are holding an enenmy down.
*'''Straight:''' While facing the sinister General Butch Reuben manages to pin him down, but struggles to keep him down. He asked Alice to shoot him [[TakingYouWithMe knowing the general would die with him.]] [[ShootTheDog Relucantly, she complies.]]
*'''Exaggerated:''' Reuben was the TagalongKid while General Butch was the DragonAscendant. The world would be different depending on what Alice did here.
*'''Downplayed:''' By shooting him Reuben would be severely injured, but he wouldn't be dead. They could still kill the General without losing him.
*'''Justified:'''
**Reuben knows if they don't eliminate him he'll destory the world, so he decides to make a HeroicSacrifice.
*'''Straight:''' While facing the sinister General Butch Reuben manages to pin him down, but struggles to keep him down. He asked Alice to shoot him [[TakingYouWithMe knowing the general would die with him.]] [[ShootTheDog Relucantly, she complies.]]
*'''Exaggerated:''' Reuben was the TagalongKid while General Butch was the DragonAscendant. The world would be different depending on what Alice did here.
*'''Downplayed:''' By shooting him Reuben would be severely injured, but he wouldn't be dead. They could still kill the General without losing him.
*'''Justified:'''
**Reuben knows if they don't eliminate him he'll destory the world, so he decides to make a HeroicSacrifice.
