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** It's already cruel enough to have Alice held hostage. Bob [[EvenEvilHasStandards draws the line at starving her]].
** Bob knows that if [[KidHero Alice]] tells the jury and the news that he let her starve, they will go from "lock him up" to "would somebody please execute this SOB?". [[PragmaticVillainy He is cruel, not stupid.]]
** Bob knows that if [[KidHero Alice]] tells the jury and the news that he let her starve, they will go from "lock him up" to "would somebody please execute this SOB?". [[PragmaticVillainy He is cruel, not stupid.]]
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* '''Defied''': Bob refuses to buy Alice fast food.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Bob refuses to buy Alice fastfood. food.
** Alice refuses to eat fast food while hostage.
** Bob refuses to buy Alice fast
** Alice refuses to eat fast food while hostage.
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Go back to KidnappersKFC and get me a Big Mac while you're there, will you? I've been in this trunk for hours and I'm starving.
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Go back to KidnappersKFC and get me a Big Mac chicken wrap and large fries while you're there, will you? I've been in this trunk for hours and I'm starving.
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* '''Straight''': Bob, a member of the Troper's Liberation Army, pulls over and buys hostage Alice a bacon double cheeseburger, a 4 piece chicken combo, a large fries, two chocolate hot fudge sundaes, AndADietCoke from a Happy Burger to tide her over.
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* '''Straight''': Bob, a member of the Troper's Liberation Army, pulls over and buys hostage Alice a bacon double cheeseburger, western bacon cheeseburger combo, a 4 piece chicken combo, a large fries, two chocolate hot fudge sundaes, AndADietCoke from a Happy Burger to tide her over.
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** Alice manipulates Bob into buying her food, both to slow him down and to create a trail the police can follow to rescue
her.
her.
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** Alice manipulates Bob into buying her food, both to slow him down and to create a trail the police can follow to rescue
rescue her.
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* '''Straight''': Bob, a member of the Troper's Liberation Army, pulls over and buys hostage Alice a bacon double cheeseburger, a 3 piece chicken combo, a large fries, two chocolate hot fudge sundaes, AndADietCoke from a Happy Burger to tide her over.
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* '''Straight''': Bob, a member of the Troper's Liberation Army, pulls over and buys hostage Alice a bacon double cheeseburger, a 3 4 piece chicken combo, a large fries, two chocolate hot fudge sundaes, AndADietCoke from a Happy Burger to tide her over.
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** Alice manipulates Bob into buying her food, both to slow him down and to create a trail the police can follow to rescue her.
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** Alice manipulates Bob into buying her food, both to slow him down and to create a trail the police can follow to rescue her.rescue
her.
** Bob asks Alice if she's hungry, trying to get her to eat some Happy Burger as a sign of good will.
her.
** Bob asks Alice if she's hungry, trying to get her to eat some Happy Burger as a sign of good will.
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* '''Discussed''': A member of the TLA asks his partner if they should pick up some fast food so their victims won't starve.
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* '''Discussed''': A member of the TLA asks his partner if they should pick up "Should we get that kid some fast food so their victims won't starve.food? I don't want her to starve, but I wanna show to them that we're serious about this whole kidnapping scheme."
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** Kidnappers in [[WretchedHive Crime City]] visit the Happy Burger so often that the place starts offer a "Kidnapper's Half-Off Discount" in case they bring a hostage with them. This makes some parents tell the cashiers that they're holding their kids hostage just for the discount.
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** Kidnappers in [[WretchedHive Crime City]] visit the Happy Burger so often that the place starts offer offering a "Kidnapper's Half-Off Discount" in case they bring a hostage with them. This makes some parents tell the cashiers that they're holding their kids hostage just for the discount.
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** Alice starts loudly whining that she wants her favorite meal from Happy Burger and Bob starts negotiating with her like a frustrated parent, refusing to buy her a large soda because she won't finish it.
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** When Bob's car passes by a Happy Burger, Alice starts loudly whining that she wants her favorite meal from Happy Burger meal and Bob starts negotiating with her like a frustrated parent, sternly refusing to buy her a large soda because she won't finish it.
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** While Bob is distracted and has his hands full of food and soda, Alice manages to kick the car door open and make a run for it.
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** While Bob is distracted and has his hands full of food and soda, Alice manages to kick the car door (or car window) open and make a run for it.
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** Bob gets Alice [[YourFavorite her favorite meal from Happy Burger]] so she'll think he's not that bad.
** While Bob is distracted and has his hands full of food and soda, Alice manages to shove the car door open and make a run for it.
** While Bob is distracted and has his hands full of food and soda, Alice manages to shove the car door open and make a run for it.
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** Bob gets Alice [[YourFavorite her favorite meal from Happy Burger]] so she'll think he's not that bad.
bad and be more willing to cooperate with him.
** While Bob is distracted and has his hands full of food and soda, Alice manages toshove kick the car door open and make a run for it.
** While Bob is distracted and has his hands full of food and soda, Alice manages to
