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Reconstructions aren't "a deconstruction, but good."
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* '''Reconstructed''': Which is a smart thing, as LightIsNotGood: Most angels are evil mortals who [[AGodAmI got that way through sheer power.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Which is a smart thing, as LightIsNotGood: Most angels are evil mortals who [[AGodAmI got that way through sheer power.]]
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* '''Invoked''': Evulz is deliberately attempting to play with [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience expectations]] of what evil people really look like.
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* '''Invoked''': Evulz is deliberately attempting to play with [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience [[GoodColorsEvilColors expectations]] of what evil people really look like.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Evulz’s final form takes the form of a human-the horribly mangled corpse of a dead loved one, to be exact.
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** Before the story started, Evulz gained massive power at the cost of his humanity; chipping away at this power makes him weaker and more humanoid.
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** Emperor Evluz gets more and more monstrous as he gains more eldritch power, but eventually he becomes so powerful that he can effortlessly change forms well maintaining his full power. He chooses to take a more attractive version of his original human form as he's more comfortable in a human form.
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** After going through a monster form that [[ClippedWingAngel goes down in two hits]], Evulz becomes a Bishonen but otherwise human version of himself, which [[CurbStompBattle beats AliceAndBob without him even trying]].
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** After going through a monster form that [[ClippedWingAngel goes down in two hits]], Evulz becomes a Bishonen but otherwise human version of himself, which [[CurbStompBattle beats AliceAndBob the two without him even trying]].
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** Emperor Evulz' final form is [[FanDisservice him wearing a pink bikini]] and it's ability is to make heroes (mostly male) burn their eyes just by seeing him because of what he looks like in his final form.
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** Emperor Evulz' final form is [[FanDisservice him wearing a pink bikini]] and it's ability is to make heroes (mostly male) burn their eyes just by seeing him because of what RidiculouslyAverageGuy that Evulz was before he looks like in got his final form.powers, that goes down in one hit.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz, after initially fighting Alice and Bob in a demon-like form, transforms into one that looks like an angelic version of his normal body. Naturally, this proves to be even tougher than his demon form.
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* '''Straight''': Emperor Evulz, after initially fighting Alice and Bob AliceAndBob in a demon-like form, transforms into one that looks like an angelic version of his normal body. Naturally, this proves to be even tougher than his demon form.
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** After going through a monster form that [[ClippedWingAngel goes down in two hits]], Evulz becomes a Bishonen but otherwise human version of himself, which [[CurbStompBattle beats Alice and Bob without him even trying]].
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** After going through a monster form that [[ClippedWingAngel goes down in two hits]], Evulz becomes a Bishonen but otherwise human version of himself, which [[CurbStompBattle beats Alice and Bob AliceAndBob without him even trying]].
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Being cut per TRS
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** Emperor Evulz [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman knows that the heroes have less problem fighting monsters]], [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy so decides to take a humanoid form to get them to hesitate.]]
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** Emperor Evulz [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman knows that the heroes have less problem fighting monsters]], [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy so decides to take a humanoid form to get them to hesitate.]]
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** Throughout the story, Emperor Evulz went through many [[EvolutionPowerup forms]], each are stronger and more monstrous than previous. His final form however, is an incredible handsome lad yet far more powerful than everything before.
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** Throughout the story, Emperor Evulz went through many [[EvolutionPowerup forms]], each are stronger and more monstrous than previous. His final form however, is an incredible incredibly handsome lad yet far more powerful than everything before.
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** Evulz looks like a RubberForeheadAlien until he ascends to his most powerful form in which he simply loses the ridges on his forehead.
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** Evulz looks like a RubberForeheadAlien until he ascends to his most powerful form form, in which he simply loses the ridges on his forehead.
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** Throughout the story, Emperor Evulz went through many [[EvolutionPowerup forms]], each are stronger and more monstrous than previous. His finally form however, is an incredible handsome lad yet far more powerful than everything before.
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** Throughout the story, Emperor Evulz went through many [[EvolutionPowerup forms]], each are stronger and more monstrous than previous. His finally final form however, is an incredible handsome lad yet far more powerful than everything before.
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**Evulz powers up by having a makeover.
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** Emperor Evulz becomes more intelligent the more humanoid he becomes, and his newfound intelligence allows him to put his power to better use.
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** Evulz' final human-looking form is not stronger but it does have abilities that outnumber its weaknesses.
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** Evulz' final form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[{{Squick}} He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]
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** Evulz' final When Evulz says that the form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[{{Squick}} He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]attractive", Bob knows it's gonna get really bad.
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** Emperor Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form.
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** Emperor Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form.form...
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** ...which rather looks like human, but still.
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** Emeperor Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form.
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** Emeperor Emperor Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form.
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** Emeperor Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form.
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** Emeperor Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form.
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** Despite not being the strongest form, it still has some tricks in it's sleeves.
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* '''Downplayed''': Evulz looks like a RubberForeheadAlien until he ascends to his most powerful form in which he simply loses the ridges on his forehead.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Evulz looks like a RubberForeheadAlien until he ascends to his most powerful form in which he simply loses the ridges on his forehead.
** Evulz looks like a RubberForeheadAlien until he ascends to his most powerful form in which he simply loses the ridges on his forehead.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Emperor Evulz transforms into a giant demon...then an angelic humanoid...then an even bigger demon...then an even stronger humanoid, [[OverlyLongGag then an even BIGGER demon]], etc. Until it finally gets mixed up.
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** Emperor Evulz transforms into a giant demon...then an angelic humanoid...then an even bigger demon...then an even stronger humanoid, [[OverlyLongGag then an even BIGGER demon]], etc. Until it finally gets mixed up.
** Emperor Evulz transforms into a giant demon...then an angelic humanoid...then an even bigger demon...then an even stronger humanoid, [[OverlyLongGag then an even BIGGER demon]], etc. Until it finally gets mixed up.
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Uncanny valley counts as downplayed and more details
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** Emeperor Evulz's final form is right out of the UncannyValley. He's ''technically'' more human-loooking, but he was ''way'' less creepy as a full-on monster.
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** Emeperor Evulz's Evulz starts out as an EldritchAbomination and progressively gets more human each form and finally turning into a NightmareFuel in the final form is right out of the UncannyValley. He's ''technically'' more human-loooking, but he was ''way'' less creepy as a full-on monster.form.
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** Evulz's changes forms between a huge monster and a beautiful humanoid depending on the situation he's in.
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** Evulz' final form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Squick He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]
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** Evulz' final form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Squick [[{{Squick}} He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]
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** Evulz' final form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[Squick He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]
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** Evulz' final form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[Squick [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Squick He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]
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Funny to add it.
** Evulz' final form is an extremely scary monster compared to his previous form who is a beautiful humanoid. [[Squick He calls his monstrous form "beautiful and attractive."]]
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** Every form are as strong as their looks.
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** Every form Evulz' forms are as strong powerful as their looks.
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** Evulz' humanlike and attractive forms are as powerful as they should be.
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** Evulz' humanlike and attractive forms Every form are as powerful strong as they should be.their looks.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Emperor Evulz transforms into a giant demon...then an angelic humanoid...then an even bigger demon...then an even stronger humanoid, [[OverlyLongGag then an even BIGGER demon]], etc.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Emperor Evulz transforms into a giant demon...then an angelic humanoid...then an even bigger demon...then an even stronger humanoid, [[OverlyLongGag then an even BIGGER demon]], etc. Until it finally gets mixed up.
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** Evulz' humanlike and attractive forms are as powerful as they should be.
