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* There are a number of small ones in ''{{FanFic/Vapors}}'' because Naruto is the HeroOfAnotherStory and having his adventures even when he isn't with Aiko. But there's one that must have been awesome when, while Aiko leads the benin against Gaara, Jiraiya teams up with the Third Hokage to permanently kill Orochimaru.



* The season 3 finale for Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000 says that the most awesome battle in the history of paradox space occurred. [[DoubleSubverted And then goes on to list all of the cool stuff we missed]], such as everyone turning into Power Rangers, Phelous jumping into a black hole, Equius punching the universe in half, the Suicide Squad fighting the Secret Six, and a cheesy montage.

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* The season 3 finale for Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000 says that the most awesome battle in the history of paradox space occurred. [[DoubleSubverted And then goes on to list all of the cool stuff we missed]], such as everyone turning into Power Rangers, Phelous jumping into a black hole, Equius punching the universe in half, the Suicide Squad fighting the Secret Six, and a cheesy montage.
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* A quite odd, untitled fanfic written in Polish (sporked [[http://niezatapialna-armada.blogspot.com/2011/02/34.html here]]) does it spectacularly. In one scene, the good guys are sitting in a library, trying to find out how to defeat Voldemort. In the next sentence, the narrator suddenly states "Voldemort defeated!", hastily explains that he's been beaten in some unknown way and will definitely never rise again, then proceeds to the WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue.
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* In ''Fanfic/TheLastSpartan'', when [[Franchise/MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrimage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"

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* In ''Fanfic/TheLastSpartan'', when [[Franchise/MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrimage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"

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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.



* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.

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* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' ''Manga/ReTake'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.
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* In ''Fanfic/TheInstituteSaga'', Thanos manages to assemble the Infinity Gauntlet with all six Infinity Stones despite all the good guys trying to stop him, then as he finishes assimilating the power it grants, he is faced with Spider-Man and Squirrel Girl. Cut to Superman finding Spider-Man muttering about how he was there, but ''still'' doesn't know how Thanos was taken down.
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* FanFic/EquestriaAHistoryRevealed has the LemonyNarrator interrupt right before the big climactic [[LastStand Battle of Canterlot]] is about to begin so she can take a quick bathroom break. Once it cuts back, [[PlayedForLaughs the battle had already ended.]]
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* In ''Fanfic/RealityIsFluid'' Gaarra is [[TakingTheBullet severely injured tackling someone out of the way of an exploding EPS conduit]]. This is relayed to the viewpoint character after the fact because she was on another deck at the time (the story is told in FirstPersonPerspective).
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* FanFic/AGrowingAffection has a few:
** Hinata's performance in the unseen in canon Chunin Exam wherein she was promoted. Though she only gives Naruto a quick run down, she is happy enough with how she did that she boasts a little.
** Kohaku Zoishin fought Minato Namikaze in the semi-finals of the Chunin exam that saw Minato promoted. The battle lasted about ninety minutes and left everyone who saw it serious impressed with the skills of both Genin, even if most of them don't remember [[PerceptionFilter Kohaku's name or appearance]].
** When Kohaku was attacked by two teams of Hunter Ninjas from her village, their Genjutsu blinded her, so the reader does not get to see how Gouki took them down. [[SubvertedTrope Subverted when the same fight is shown from Gouki's point of view.]]

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* In ''Fanfic/BoysDoTankary'', the outcome of three tankery matches, one of which is against the apparent main antagonists, is mentioned over the course of ''six short sentences.'' [[spoiler:Surprisingly, the heroes actually lose the last one]].
* In ''Fanfic/BoysUndSenshado'', when Shiho [[spoiler:disowns Miho]], her husband, who so far [[InvisibleParents had not been shown at all]] and was assumed by Miho and readers to be a HenpeckedHusband, [[WhatTheHellHero calls her out on it]], as Shiho mentions in passing when Maho does the same.
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* The season 3 finale for Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000 says that the most awesome battle in the history of paradox space occurred. [[DoubleSubverted And then goes on to list all of the cool stuff we missed]], such as everyone turning into Power Rangers, Phelous jumping into a black hole, Equius punching the universe in half, the Suicide Squad fighting the Secret Six, and a cheesy montage.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.



* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.

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* The first story in ''Peter Chimaera book of historical faFfiction'' is entitled ''Hitler: Extreme Nazi''. Too bad the only thing extreme about it is its short length; it barely takes up one page, which is short even for Chimaera.
** Also comes in ''Digimon 2:Return of Digimon'', where Digimon fights Evil Digimon. The first time Digimon one shoot kills him with his robot suit, only for it be reveal that "In Chapter 2, the evil Digimon is not really dead -- IT WAS A TRICK!" Then, the second time, after "punching through the ceiling and fighting IN SPACE," the story in its entirety goes, "They fought for a long time until they were tired from the fight, and Digimon killed him with a lethal blow. "Impossible … I can not be stopped!" Then an explosion."

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* The first story in ''Peter Chimaera book Many of historical faFfiction'' is entitled ''Hitler: Extreme Nazi''. Too bad the only thing extreme about it is its short length; it barely takes up one page, which is short even for Chimaera.
** Also comes in ''Digimon 2:Return of Digimon'', where Digimon
fights Evil Digimon. The first time Digimon one shoot kills him with his robot suit, in ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded'' are only for it be reveal that "In Chapter 2, described as far as Vash performing the evil Digimon is not really dead -- IT WAS A TRICK!" Then, killing move on the second time, after "punching through enemies, notably when Vash fight his corrupted self again in "Darkness Never Dies No Matter How Many Times You Kill It."
* An ''FanFic/EyeOfTheFox'' scene which depicts Kira calmly walking out of
the ceiling Autobot's cave and fighting IN SPACE," the story in its entirety goes, "They fought for a long time until they were tired from the fight, and Digimon killed him with a lethal blow. "Impossible … I can not be stopped!" Then proceeded to ''[[spoiler:take out an explosion."entire forest]]'' it is still cool to imagine.



* An FanFic/EyeOfTheFox scene which depicts Kira calmly walking out of the Autobot's cave and proceeded to ''[[spoiler:take out an entire forest]]'' it is still cool to imagine.

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* An FanFic/EyeOfTheFox scene which depicts Kira calmly walking out of In ''Fanfic/TheLastSpartan'', when [[Franchise/MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the Autobot's cave quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrimage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and proceeded other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"

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* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]] goes
to ''[[spoiler:take out an entire forest]]'' it is still cool to imagine.[[spoiler: kidnap Sayu]] he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].



* Many of the fights in Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded are only described as far as Vash performing the killing move on the enemies, notably when Vash fight his corrupted self again in "Darkness Never Dies No Matter How Many Times You Kill It."
* The [[http://www.geocities.ws/charlesrocketboy/PokeRev.htm original]] version of Pokémon Revolution had been building up to a high-octane final battle in Kanto. The story ends at Chapter 38, just when the Johto forces start heading to Kanto.
* The final (extremely short) battle in the warehouse at the end of ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'' is all sound effects and aftermath. That's partially because of how one-sided the fight was—the real battle was John and Ringo's attempt to get into the warehouse—and partially because the author hates writing fight scenes.
** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist.
* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.
* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[Franchise/MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrimage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"
* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]] goes to [[spoiler: kidnap Sayu]] he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].
* ''FanFic/InnerDemons'' has Rarity's fight with [[TheDragon Trixie]]. The narration cuts away just before they go at each other; later scenes imply that Trixie needed [[BigBad Queen!Twilight's]] help to win. This is impressive given that Rarity is just a fashionista, compared to Trixie, who's trained in combat magic. [[spoiler: The Element of Generosity changing into a suit of mystic armor probably helped.]]
* ''FanFic/ChroniclesOfHarmonysEnd'' features Discord and his lawful counterpart Array teaming up to destroy [[TopGod Harmony]], and of course it happens off page.
* We never get to see Rainbow Dash's escape from Ponyland Castle in Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure, although we know that it involved a dragon somehow.
* Much of the fighting in the Evangelion fanfic ''Re-Take'' occurs off-pannel [[spoiler: the biggest case being Shinji and [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka prepared to fight the Mass Production Eva Units.]] The whole scene of Ghost-Asuka forgiving Shinji is a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming, and we also see an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they've lost, but despite all the build up to MP Evas defeat that occurs, it's still disappointing that we don't get to see it.]]

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* Many Occurs in Peter Chimaera's ''Digimon 2:Return of the Digimon'', where Digimon fights in Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded are Evil Digimon. The first time Digimon one shoot kills him with his robot suit, only described as far as Vash performing the killing move on the enemies, notably when Vash fight his corrupted self again in "Darkness Never Dies No Matter How Many Times You Kill It."
* The [[http://www.geocities.ws/charlesrocketboy/PokeRev.htm original]] version of Pokémon Revolution had been building up to a high-octane final battle in Kanto. The story ends at
for it be reveal that "In Chapter 38, just when 2, the Johto forces start heading to Kanto.
* The final (extremely short) battle in
evil Digimon is not really dead -- IT WAS A TRICK!" Then, the warehouse at the end of ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'' is all sound effects and aftermath. That's partially because of how one-sided the fight was—the real battle was John and Ringo's attempt to get into the warehouse—and partially because the author hates writing fight scenes.
** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist.
* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably
second time, after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him "punching through the ceiling and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.
* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[Franchise/MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrimage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"
* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]] goes to [[spoiler: kidnap Sayu]] he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].
* ''FanFic/InnerDemons'' has Rarity's fight with [[TheDragon Trixie]]. The narration cuts away just before they go at each other; later scenes imply that Trixie needed [[BigBad Queen!Twilight's]] help to win. This is impressive given that Rarity is just a fashionista, compared to Trixie, who's trained in combat magic. [[spoiler: The Element of Generosity changing into a suit of mystic armor probably helped.]]
* ''FanFic/ChroniclesOfHarmonysEnd'' features Discord and his lawful counterpart Array teaming up to destroy [[TopGod Harmony]], and of course it happens off page.
* We never get to see Rainbow Dash's escape from Ponyland Castle in Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure, although we know that it involved a dragon somehow.
* Much of the
fighting in IN SPACE," the Evangelion fanfic ''Re-Take'' occurs off-pannel [[spoiler: the biggest case being Shinji and [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka prepared to fight the Mass Production Eva Units.]] The whole scene of Ghost-Asuka forgiving Shinji is story in its entirety goes, "They fought for a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming, and we also see an OhCrap reaction long time until they were tired from SELEE saying they've lost, but despite all the build up to MP Evas defeat that occurs, it's still disappointing that we don't get to see it.]]fight, and Digimon killed him with a lethal blow. "Impossible … I can not be stopped!" Then an explosion."

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* ''FanFic/ChroniclesOfHarmonysEnd'' features Discord and his lawful counterpart Array teaming up to destroy [[TopGod Harmony]], and of course it happens off page.
* ''FanFic/TheGodEmpressOfPonykind'': Dawn Sparkle duels [[MadGod Nightmare Moon]] in single combat. The scene cuts to the next morning, where we learn [[spoiler: she lost]].
* ''FanFic/InnerDemons'' has Rarity's fight with [[TheDragon Trixie]]. The narration cuts away just before they go at each other; later scenes imply that Trixie needed [[BigBad Queen!Twilight's]] help to win. This is impressive given that Rarity is just a fashionista, compared to Trixie, who's trained in combat magic. [[spoiler: The Element of Generosity changing into a suit of mystic armor probably helped.]]



* ''FanFic/TheGodEmpressOfPonykind'': Dawn Sparkle duels [[MadGod Nightmare Moon]] in single combat. The scene cuts to the next morning, where we learn [[spoiler: she lost]].

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* ''FanFic/TheGodEmpressOfPonykind'': Dawn Sparkle duels [[MadGod Nightmare Moon]] We never get to see Rainbow Dash's escape from Ponyland Castle in single combat. Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure, although we know that it involved a dragon somehow.

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* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.

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The scene cuts [[http://www.geocities.ws/charlesrocketboy/PokeRev.htm original]] version of Pokémon Revolution had been building up to a high-octane final battle in Kanto. The story ends at Chapter 38, just when the next morning, where we learn [[spoiler: she lost]].Johto forces start heading to Kanto.

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* The final (extremely short) battle in the warehouse at the end of ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'' is all sound effects and aftermath. That's partially because of how one-sided the fight was—the real battle was John and Ringo's attempt to get into the warehouse—and partially because the author hates writing fight scenes.
** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist.

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* The first story in ''Peter Chimaera book of historical faFfiction'' is entitled ''Hitler: Extreme Nazi''. Too bad the only thing extreme about it is its short length; it barely takes up one page, which is short even for Chimaera.
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* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrmage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"

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* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[MassEffect [[Franchise/MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrmage pilgrimage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"
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* In the ''FanFic/PonyPOVSeries'', [[BadFuture Dark World]] has Minty Pie running after the heroes to help fight Discord, only to fall down into a series of caverns inhabited by some winter spirits that say she's their [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] in their battle against sun spirits. When we come back to this later, she's had a series of adventures and is facing down the evil Queen who was controlling both sides and manipulating her. Whether or not this works is up to personal taste

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* In the ''FanFic/PonyPOVSeries'', [[BadFuture Dark World]] has Minty Pie running after the heroes to help fight Discord, only to fall down into a series of caverns inhabited by some winter spirits that say she's their [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] in their battle against sun spirits. When we come back to this later, she's had a series of adventures and is facing down the evil Queen who was controlling both sides and manipulating her. Whether or not this works is up to personal tastetaste
*''FanFic/TheGodEmpressOfPonykind'': Dawn Sparkle duels [[MadGod Nightmare Moon]] in single combat. The scene cuts to the next morning, where we learn [[spoiler: she lost]].
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* In the ''FanFic/PonyPOVSeries'', [[BadFuture Dark World]] has Minty Pie running after the heroes to help fight Discord, only to fall down into a series of caverns inhabited by some winter spirits that say she's their [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] in their battle against sun spirits. When we come back to this later, she's had a series of adventures and is facing down the evil Queen who was controlling both sides and manipulating her. In a case of TropesAreBad, this is very disconcerting for the readers, many of whom were confused by what was going on.

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* In the ''FanFic/PonyPOVSeries'', [[BadFuture Dark World]] has Minty Pie running after the heroes to help fight Discord, only to fall down into a series of caverns inhabited by some winter spirits that say she's their [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] in their battle against sun spirits. When we come back to this later, she's had a series of adventures and is facing down the evil Queen who was controlling both sides and manipulating her. In a case of TropesAreBad, Whether or not this works is very disconcerting for the readers, many of whom were confused by what was going on.up to personal taste
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** The duel between Tarakudo and Hiruzen. One flashback ends with them about to fight, and another opens with Tarakudo just having killed him. And it seems he only won because Ikazuki defied his orders and helped him.

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** The duel between Tarakudo and Hiruzen. One flashback ends with them about to fight, and another opens with Tarakudo just having killed him. And it seems he only won because Ikazuki defied his orders and helped him.him.
* In the ''FanFic/PonyPOVSeries'', [[BadFuture Dark World]] has Minty Pie running after the heroes to help fight Discord, only to fall down into a series of caverns inhabited by some winter spirits that say she's their [[TheChosenOne Chosen One]] in their battle against sun spirits. When we come back to this later, she's had a series of adventures and is facing down the evil Queen who was controlling both sides and manipulating her. In a case of TropesAreBad, this is very disconcerting for the readers, many of whom were confused by what was going on.
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* Much of the fighting in the Evangelion fanfic ''Re-Take'' occurs off-pannel [[spoiler: the biggest case being Shinji and [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka prepared to fight the Mass Production Eva Units.]] The whole scene of Ghost-Asuka forgiving Shinji is a CrowningAMomentOfHeartwarming, and we also see an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they've lost, but despite all the build up to MP Evas defeat that occurs, it's still disappointing that we don't get to see it.]]

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* Much of the fighting in the Evangelion fanfic ''Re-Take'' occurs off-pannel [[spoiler: the biggest case being Shinji and [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka prepared to fight the Mass Production Eva Units.]] The whole scene of Ghost-Asuka forgiving Shinji is a CrowningAMomentOfHeartwarming, CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming, and we also see an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they've lost, but despite all the build up to MP Evas defeat that occurs, it's still disappointing that we don't get to see it.]]]]
* ''FanFic/QueenOfAllOni'' has a few:
** When all the people competing for the position of Jade's [[NumberTwo foreman]] are ordered to fight for the spot, [[EnigmaticMinion Blankman]] knocks out all the others in under two minutes. ''Without breaking a sweat''. Unfortunately, we don't get to see it — we see Jade telling them to fight, and then the narrative cuts ahead to afterwards.
** The fight over Kuro's mask at the beginning of chapter 12. We only see the beginning of the fight, the rest is cut for the sake of the chapter's length.
** The duel between Tarakudo and Hiruzen. One flashback ends with them about to fight, and another opens with Tarakudo just having killed him. And it seems he only won because Ikazuki defied his orders and helped him.
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* We never get to see Rainbow Dash's escape from Ponyland Castle in Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure, although we know that it involved a dragon somehow.

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* We never get to see Rainbow Dash's escape from Ponyland Castle in Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure, although we know that it involved a dragon somehow.somehow.
* Much of the fighting in the Evangelion fanfic ''Re-Take'' occurs off-pannel [[spoiler: the biggest case being Shinji and [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka prepared to fight the Mass Production Eva Units.]] The whole scene of Ghost-Asuka forgiving Shinji is a CrowningAMomentOfHeartwarming, and we also see an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they've lost, but despite all the build up to MP Evas defeat that occurs, it's still disappointing that we don't get to see it.]]
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* ''FanFic/ChroniclesOfHarmonysEnd'' features Discord and his lawful counterpart Array teaming up to destroy [[TopGod Harmony]], and of course it happens off page.

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* ''FanFic/ChroniclesOfHarmonysEnd'' features Discord and his lawful counterpart Array teaming up to destroy [[TopGod Harmony]], and of course it happens off page.page.
* We never get to see Rainbow Dash's escape from Ponyland Castle in Fanfic/TwilightSparklesAwesomeAdventure, although we know that it involved a dragon somehow.
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* ''FanFic/InnerDemons'' has Rarity's fight with [[TheDragon Trixie]]. The narration cuts away just before they go at each other; later scenes imply that Trixie needed [[BigBad Queen!Twilight's]] help to win. This is impressive given that Rarity is just a fashionista, compared to Trixie, who's trained in combat magic. [[spoiler: The Element of Generosity changing into a suit of mystic armor probably helped.]]

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* ''FanFic/InnerDemons'' has Rarity's fight with [[TheDragon Trixie]]. The narration cuts away just before they go at each other; later scenes imply that Trixie needed [[BigBad Queen!Twilight's]] help to win. This is impressive given that Rarity is just a fashionista, compared to Trixie, who's trained in combat magic. [[spoiler: The Element of Generosity changing into a suit of mystic armor probably helped.]]]]
* ''FanFic/ChroniclesOfHarmonysEnd'' features Discord and his lawful counterpart Array teaming up to destroy [[TopGod Harmony]], and of course it happens off page.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} ([[YourMilageMayVary depends on who you ask]]) of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.
* While YourMilageMayVary comes into an FanFic/EyeOfTheFox scene which depicts Kira calmly walking out of the Autobot's cave and proceeded to ''[[spoiler:take out an entire forest]]'' it is still cool to imagine.

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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} ([[YourMilageMayVary depends on who you ask]]) of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.
* While YourMilageMayVary comes into an An FanFic/EyeOfTheFox scene which depicts Kira calmly walking out of the Autobot's cave and proceeded to ''[[spoiler:take out an entire forest]]'' it is still cool to imagine.



** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist. YourMileageMayVary as to whether it is superior to the “unseen” version.

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* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]] goes to [[spoiler: kidnap Sayu]] he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].

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* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]] goes to [[spoiler: kidnap Sayu]] he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].back]].
* ''FanFic/InnerDemons'' has Rarity's fight with [[TheDragon Trixie]]. The narration cuts away just before they go at each other; later scenes imply that Trixie needed [[BigBad Queen!Twilight's]] help to win. This is impressive given that Rarity is just a fashionista, compared to Trixie, who's trained in combat magic. [[spoiler: The Element of Generosity changing into a suit of mystic armor probably helped.]]
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* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when Mello goes to kidnap Sayu he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].

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* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when Mello [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]] goes to [[spoiler: kidnap Sayu Sayu]] he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].
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* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrmage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"

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* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrmage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"]]"
* From ''FanFic/GodsOfThisNewWorld'' when Mello goes to kidnap Sayu he fails miserably because she was waiting for him [[ClickHello with a gun]] and she had [[BashBrothers L at her back]].
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* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.

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* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.fight.
* In Fanfic/TheLastSpartan, when [[MassEffect Tali]] is explaining the quarian Pilgrimage to [[{{Halo}} Master Chief]], she mentions a time when Kal'Reegar, himself on a pilgrmage at the time, returned to the fleet to give the ''Rayya's'' Captain a Brute [[DropTheHammer Gravity Hammer]] as a return gift. Tali described Reegar as being victim of multiple suit breaches and other injuries, but when Chief asks her exactly ''how'' he got it, Tali only says "[[BadassNormal It wasn't easy.]]"
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** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist. YourMileageMayVary as to whether it is superior to the “unseen” version.

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** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist. YourMileageMayVary as to whether it is superior to the “unseen” version.version.
* Fight scenes ''Re-Take'' mostly occur off-screen. This includes Shinji, having knowledge of the future, disables Unit-03 without killing the pilot, and is stated to have broken all of its limbs. In the story's climax, Shinji's fight with the Mass Production Evas, most notably after [[ItMakesSenseInContext Ghost Asuka finally decides to help him and they take the Lance of Longious]]. We get an OhCrap reaction from SELEE saying they're finished and the Unit-01 is going to kill their Evas and we get seen afterwards indicating that Shinji and Asuka took them down easily, but we don't get to see the fight.

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* The [[http://www.geocities.ws/charlesrocketboy/PokeRev.htm original]] version of Pokémon Revolution had been building up to a high-octane final battle in Kanto. The story ends at Chapter 38, just when the Johto forces start heading to Kanto.

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* The [[http://www.geocities.ws/charlesrocketboy/PokeRev.htm original]] version of Pokémon Revolution had been building up to a high-octane final battle in Kanto. The story ends at Chapter 38, just when the Johto forces start heading to Kanto.Kanto.
* The final (extremely short) battle in the warehouse at the end of ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'' is all sound effects and aftermath. That's partially because of how one-sided the fight was—the real battle was John and Ringo's attempt to get into the warehouse—and partially because the author hates writing fight scenes.
** A written-out version of this fight, about a page long, does exist. YourMileageMayVary as to whether it is superior to the “unseen” version.

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