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* It's only because of Olive's confession that Mr. Griffith didn't get an STD from his wife... assuming she told him in time...
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* It's only because of Olive's confession that Mr. Griffith didn't get an STD from his wife... assuming she told him in time...time...
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!Spoilers are not to be marked on this page. You have been warned.
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* The fact that Brandon felt so threatened by homophobes at his school that he had to pretend to be straight and eventually [[spoiler: leave town to pursue a gay relationship]]. Doubles as [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]]: those actions imply he's been getting more than one bloody nose from those bullies.
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* The fact that Brandon felt so threatened by homophobes at his school that he had to pretend to be straight and eventually [[spoiler: leave town to pursue a gay relationship]].relationship. Doubles as [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]]: those actions imply he's been getting more than one bloody nose from those bullies.
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* Then the [[spoiler: ACTUAL rape scenario that almost actually plays out with Anson and Olive. And the only reason it didn't was because Olive was strong enough to force him off her.]]
* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and goofy person whom Olive completely trusted, until [[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get an STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and goofy person whom Olive completely trusted, until [[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get an STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
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* Then the [[spoiler: the ACTUAL rape scenario that almost actually plays out with Anson and Olive. And the only reason it didn't was because Olive was strong enough to force him off her.]]
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* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and goofy person whom Olive completely trusted, until[[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] Olive. WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
* It's only because of Olive's confession that[[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get an STD from his wife]]...wife... assuming she told him in time...
* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and goofy person whom Olive completely trusted, until
* It's only because of Olive's confession that
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** Some of it is. However, she also sees nothing wrong with accepting gift cards from men who are at least forty or fifty years old so that she can say she slept with them. And said forty-year-old man presumably sees no problem bragging about this. Imagine knowing that your daughter is not only a prostitute, but she is also underage and servicing men old enough to be her father. That fact would make any responsible parent crap themselves, but Olive's parents are alarmingly blase about it.
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* Nothing Olive does is particularly reprehensible, but she gets [[PunctuatedForEmphasis SO. MUCH. SHIT.]] for it.
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* Nothing Olive does is particularly reprehensible, but she gets [[PunctuatedForEmphasis SO. MUCH. SHIT.]] for it.
** Some of it is. However, she also sees nothing wrong with accepting gift cards from men who are at least forty or fifty years old so that she can say she slept with them. And said forty-year-old man presumably sees no problem bragging about this. Imagine knowing that your daughter is not only a prostitute, but she is also underage and servicing men old enough to be her father. That fact would make any responsible parent crap themselves, but Olive's parents are alarmingly blase about it.
** Some of it is. However, she also sees nothing wrong with accepting gift cards from men who are at least forty or fifty years old so that she can say she slept with them. And said forty-year-old man presumably sees no problem bragging about this. Imagine knowing that your daughter is not only a prostitute, but she is also underage and servicing men old enough to be her father. That fact would make any responsible parent crap themselves, but Olive's parents are alarmingly blase about it.
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Chlamydia is relatively harmless and easily detected and cured. The adjective "nasty" just perpetuates misinformation and encourages shaming.
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* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get a nasty STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
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* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get a nasty an STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
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* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get an incurable STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
** Chlamydia is typically pretty curable unless you have a particularly nasty strain of it.
** Chlamydia is typically pretty curable unless you have a particularly nasty strain of it.
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* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[spoiler: Mr. Griffith didn't get an incurable a nasty STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
** Chlamydia is typically pretty curable unless you have a particularly nasty strain of it.time...
** Chlamydia is typically pretty curable unless you have a particularly nasty strain of it.
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** The [[TruthInTelevision accuracy]] makes it all the more disturbing.
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-->Chlamydia is typically pretty curable unless you have a particularly nasty strain of it.
-->Chlamydia is typically pretty curable unless you have a particularly nasty strain of it.
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* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and [[Adorkable goofy]] person whom Olive completely trusted, until [[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
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* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and [[Adorkable goofy]] goofy person whom Olive completely trusted, until [[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
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* The principal at Ojai North is more concerned with rude words and short hemlines than stopping gay students from being bullied. Who the hell made him principal?
* Nothing Olive does is particularly reprehensible, but she gets [[PunctuatedForEmphasis SO. MUCH. SHIT.]] for it.
* The fact that Brandon felt so threatened by homophobes at his school that he had to pretend to be straight and eventually [[spoiler: leave town to pursue a gay relationship]]. Doubles as [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]]: those actions imply he's been getting more than one bloody nose from those bullies.
* Evan asking Olive to pretend to have had sex with him sounds horribly similar to a rape scenario.
__> I don't need to ask your permission.
* Then the [[spoiler: ACTUAL rape scenario that almost actually plays out with Anson and Olive. And the only reason it didn't was because Olive was strong enough to force him off her.]]
* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and [[Adorkable goofy]] person whom Olive completely trusted, until [[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[Mr. Griffith didn't get an incurable STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
* Nothing Olive does is particularly reprehensible, but she gets [[PunctuatedForEmphasis SO. MUCH. SHIT.]] for it.
* The fact that Brandon felt so threatened by homophobes at his school that he had to pretend to be straight and eventually [[spoiler: leave town to pursue a gay relationship]]. Doubles as [[FridgeHorror Fridge Horror]]: those actions imply he's been getting more than one bloody nose from those bullies.
* Evan asking Olive to pretend to have had sex with him sounds horribly similar to a rape scenario.
__> I don't need to ask your permission.
* Then the [[spoiler: ACTUAL rape scenario that almost actually plays out with Anson and Olive. And the only reason it didn't was because Olive was strong enough to force him off her.]]
* The guidance counselor originally seemed like a really kind and [[Adorkable goofy]] person whom Olive completely trusted, until [[spoiler: she turned out to be more concerned with threatening children in order to keep her job than providing any actual guidance to Olive.]] WHO THE HELL WAS IN CHARGE OF HIRING AT THIS SCHOOL?!
* It's only because of Olive's confession that [[Mr. Griffith didn't get an incurable STD from his wife]]... assuming she told him in time...
