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* Penny 2.0's [[TheUnblinking "Semi-automatic eyelid closing" is offline.]] [[UncannyValley Oh boy...]]
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* Penny is essentially America's robotic stalker. She follows him everywhere and always watches him with unblinking eyes and [[UncannyValley no expression]]. She went so far as to break the door down and follow him into the bathroom every single time until he had a [[FreakOut panic attack]]. The only reason she gives him any amount of privacy is because she was told it would be beneficial to his health aka stop him from becoming physically ill due to stress. It is in no way PlayedForLaughs.
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* Penny is essentially America's robotic stalker. She follows him everywhere and always watches him with unblinking eyes and [[UncannyValley no expression]].expression. She went so far as to break the door down and follow him into the bathroom every single time until he had a [[FreakOut panic attack]]. The only reason she gives him any amount of privacy is because she was told it would be beneficial to his health aka stop him from becoming physically ill due to stress. It is in no way PlayedForLaughs.
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* A woman and [[AdultFear her young son]] are nearly killed by an Ursa. America saves them just in time.
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* Ruby's recklessness finally gets the best of her and she [[EyeScream loses an eye]]. Even worse, Japan knew she was not ready for the fight against Neo and told her flat out. She doesn't listen, rushes into battle, and is injured [[AdultFear all while he can only watch helplessly]].
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* Ruby's recklessness finally gets the best of her and she [[EyeScream loses an eye]]. Even worse, Japan knew she was not ready for the fight against Neo and told her flat out. She doesn't listen, rushes into battle, and is injured [[AdultFear all while he can only watch helplessly]].helplessly.
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* America and Canada disappear from London during a World Conference. At a different Conference, Japan fails to show up. Instead he runs off to say goodbye to America without telling anyone. [[AdultFear No wonder China is angry with him.]]
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* France is unable to help America as he is harassed and threatened by the guards. All he can do is glare at them and thrash in his bonds. He sees America's bruises and injuries (which include handprints around his throat) and can only [[AdultFear imagine]] what the younger nation has gone through.
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* France is unable to help America as he is harassed and threatened by the guards. All he can do is glare at them and thrash in his bonds. He sees America's bruises and injuries (which include handprints around his throat) and can only [[AdultFear imagine]] imagine what the younger nation has gone through.
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* America is sucked out through the broken windshield and flounders in the dark lake as the airship sinks out of sight. He is unable to tell up from down and swims towards what he thinks is the airship's lights, only to break through the surface. He, Italy, Sterlyn, and Yang are the only ones to surface. Everyone else is ''in the airship'' somewhere in the lake. Yang [[AdultFear screams for Ruby]] and dives back under.
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* America is sucked out through the broken windshield and flounders in the dark lake as the airship sinks out of sight. He is unable to tell up from down and swims towards what he thinks is the airship's lights, only to break through the surface. He, Italy, Sterlyn, and Yang are the only ones to surface. Everyone else is ''in the airship'' somewhere in the lake. Yang [[AdultFear screams for Ruby]] Ruby and dives back under.
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** When another Silver-Eyed girl shows up after Summer, Ozpin sends her ''first'' year team on a mission meant for ''third'' years. They ''all'' die, not to the Grimm, but to the Silver-Eyed girl. All that's left of Gretchen Rainart is a foot, [[AdultFear which is given to her older brother in a small box]].
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** When another Silver-Eyed girl shows up after Summer, Ozpin sends her ''first'' year team on a mission meant for ''third'' years. They ''all'' die, not to the Grimm, but to the Silver-Eyed girl. All that's left of Gretchen Rainart is a foot, [[AdultFear which is given to her older brother in a small box]].box.
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!!Chapter Forty-One: Your Biggest Mistake
* Sealand is nearly mauled by an Ursa. It slashes Copper across the back from shoulder to hip and he bleed out on the floor.
* Canada's [[TheCorruption bloodthirst]]. He [[SlasherSmile grins widely]] and speaks in a guttural tone when Weiss stabs a Beringel.
* Tony does not seem to care if any people of Remnant are caught up in his weapon's explosion.
!!Chapter Forty-Two: All Things Must Die
* Salem uses her [[EmotionBomb abilities]] to snuff out Ruby's Silver Eyes and incapacitate the others. Thank the Gods that England's Semblance works as a counter.
* Salem ''breaks Myrtenaster and stabs Weiss through the shoulder'' with the broken end. For a moment, America thought Weiss was ''dead''.
* Salem grabs the sacrificial dagger and stabs America between his ribs.
* Just when the heroes think they are safe, the Vault begins collapsing around them. Without [[{{Intangibility}} Italy's Semblance]], they would have been buried alive.
* Ruby's destruction of the Relic of Choice, which is [[TreasureChestCavity inside America]]. She has to perform what is essentially emergency surgery on America with [[ImmortalBreaker the Relic of Destruction]]. One wrong thought or move could kill America faster than she could say "Oops."
* Sealand is nearly mauled by an Ursa. It slashes Copper across the back from shoulder to hip and he bleed out on the floor.
* Canada's [[TheCorruption bloodthirst]]. He [[SlasherSmile grins widely]] and speaks in a guttural tone when Weiss stabs a Beringel.
* Tony does not seem to care if any people of Remnant are caught up in his weapon's explosion.
!!Chapter Forty-Two: All Things Must Die
* Salem uses her [[EmotionBomb abilities]] to snuff out Ruby's Silver Eyes and incapacitate the others. Thank the Gods that England's Semblance works as a counter.
* Salem ''breaks Myrtenaster and stabs Weiss through the shoulder'' with the broken end. For a moment, America thought Weiss was ''dead''.
* Salem grabs the sacrificial dagger and stabs America between his ribs.
* Just when the heroes think they are safe, the Vault begins collapsing around them. Without [[{{Intangibility}} Italy's Semblance]], they would have been buried alive.
* Ruby's destruction of the Relic of Choice, which is [[TreasureChestCavity inside America]]. She has to perform what is essentially emergency surgery on America with [[ImmortalBreaker the Relic of Destruction]]. One wrong thought or move could kill America faster than she could say "Oops."
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!!Chapter Thirty-Nine: Ashes in the Wind
* During their fight, Canada uses his [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Semblance]] on America to viciously MindRape him and leaves Alfred terrified, confused, and unable to remember what is currently happening to him. All he knows is that he is in pain and someone is attacking him.
* A Grimm gets its jaws around America's throat before Canada shoves it away.
* The damage the Relic does to America throughout the chapter. By the end, he's vomiting blood-flecked bile.
* The Relic of Creation and Knowledge's location is revealed. They're ''[[BodyHorror inside Salem's torso]]''.
* During their fight, Canada uses his [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Semblance]] on America to viciously MindRape him and leaves Alfred terrified, confused, and unable to remember what is currently happening to him. All he knows is that he is in pain and someone is attacking him.
* A Grimm gets its jaws around America's throat before Canada shoves it away.
* The damage the Relic does to America throughout the chapter. By the end, he's vomiting blood-flecked bile.
* The Relic of Creation and Knowledge's location is revealed. They're ''[[BodyHorror inside Salem's torso]]''.
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!!Chapter Thirty-Eight: Empty
* England uses his Semblance to turn the Grimm on Mercury. He screams as the Grimm [[FedToTheBeast tear him apart]].
* Canada's POV. The Grimm parasite has infected his mind and he's running on bloodlust. It's ''horrifying'' to see the sweet and gentle Canada so violent and bloodthirsty. He can only stop himself from going back and killing England, France, Ruby, and Weiss by focusing on another person's emotional pain. Even worse, that person he's focusing on is ''America''.
* The Relic of Choice is [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity tearing apart America's mind]]. The narration describes his mind ''splitting apart'' as it tries to comprehend all of the information and power the Relic of Choice gives him. The only reason he's still mostly sane is because he's a personification. If a human was in contact with the Relic of Choice like he is, they would [[GoMadFromTheRevelation go mad]].
* When Canada arrives, Salem takes control of him. Canada reaches up and begins strangling America, who had been tearfully hugging him seconds before. Canada does not struggle or try to fight the control at all. That's how strong Salem's control over him is.
* England uses his Semblance to turn the Grimm on Mercury. He screams as the Grimm [[FedToTheBeast tear him apart]].
* Canada's POV. The Grimm parasite has infected his mind and he's running on bloodlust. It's ''horrifying'' to see the sweet and gentle Canada so violent and bloodthirsty. He can only stop himself from going back and killing England, France, Ruby, and Weiss by focusing on another person's emotional pain. Even worse, that person he's focusing on is ''America''.
* The Relic of Choice is [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity tearing apart America's mind]]. The narration describes his mind ''splitting apart'' as it tries to comprehend all of the information and power the Relic of Choice gives him. The only reason he's still mostly sane is because he's a personification. If a human was in contact with the Relic of Choice like he is, they would [[GoMadFromTheRevelation go mad]].
* When Canada arrives, Salem takes control of him. Canada reaches up and begins strangling America, who had been tearfully hugging him seconds before. Canada does not struggle or try to fight the control at all. That's how strong Salem's control over him is.
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!!Chapter Thirty-Seven: Red Bullseye
* Roman's torture of America. He stabs and burns him horribly while mocking him all the while. America cannot allow himself to think about or wish for death because if he does, the Relic of Choice will kill him.
* Roman's torture of America. He stabs and burns him horribly while mocking him all the while. America cannot allow himself to think about or wish for death because if he does, the Relic of Choice will kill him.
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!!Chapter Thirty-Five: Choose Wisely
* America declares he will protect the Relic of Choice with his life while holding it. The [[JerkassGenie Relic]] interprets that as a "choice" and ''sinks into his torso'' while burning him from the inside. It's so painful America forgets everything but the pain, even his own name.
* Salem cannot touch America so she [[TranquilFury calmly orders]] her Grimm to [[{{Synchronization}} destroy DC and Vale to kill him.]]
!!Chapter Thirty-Six: The Last Defensive
* [[TheMole Aster's]] Semblance makes his targets trust him implicitly. Germany falls to it and lowers his weapon, only to nearly get a bullet in the forehead. Prussia saves him at the last second.
* Not one, but '''three''' Spawner Grimm are headed for Washington DC.
* [[{{Synchronization}} America's suffering]] as Vale is attacked. He's in agony as wounds appear all over his body and he starts choking on his own blood.
* Salem cannot touch America. Roman ''can'' so Salem orders him to [[ColdBloodedTorture "break into the new Vault"]].
* Canada shows what he can do with his [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Semblance]] when he does not hold back. He erases part of Emerald's memory so she is unaware that she is hunting him and she lowers her guard. Canada immediately cuts off her head. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Holy shit]].
* America declares he will protect the Relic of Choice with his life while holding it. The [[JerkassGenie Relic]] interprets that as a "choice" and ''sinks into his torso'' while burning him from the inside. It's so painful America forgets everything but the pain, even his own name.
* Salem cannot touch America so she [[TranquilFury calmly orders]] her Grimm to [[{{Synchronization}} destroy DC and Vale to kill him.]]
!!Chapter Thirty-Six: The Last Defensive
* [[TheMole Aster's]] Semblance makes his targets trust him implicitly. Germany falls to it and lowers his weapon, only to nearly get a bullet in the forehead. Prussia saves him at the last second.
* Not one, but '''three''' Spawner Grimm are headed for Washington DC.
* [[{{Synchronization}} America's suffering]] as Vale is attacked. He's in agony as wounds appear all over his body and he starts choking on his own blood.
* Salem cannot touch America. Roman ''can'' so Salem orders him to [[ColdBloodedTorture "break into the new Vault"]].
* Canada shows what he can do with his [[LaserGuidedAmnesia Semblance]] when he does not hold back. He erases part of Emerald's memory so she is unaware that she is hunting him and she lowers her guard. Canada immediately cuts off her head. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Holy shit]].
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!!Chapter Thirty-Four: Twisted Tales
* Salem does not have Emerald hold a knife to Canada's throat to encourage America to open the Vault door. She has Emerald [[SlashedThroat slash Canada's throat open]] and relies on America's ensuing PowerIncontinence to open the door. It's yet another display of how ruthless both Salem and Emerald are.
* Salem leaves Canada to bleed out outside of the Vault door. America is carried over Hazel's shoulder and sees Canada struggling weakly in a growing pool of his own blood until he stops moving.
* The Grimm essence in Canada's body reacts to his injury by [[BodyHorror sealing the wound with its ooze]].
* Salem does not have Emerald hold a knife to Canada's throat to encourage America to open the Vault door. She has Emerald [[SlashedThroat slash Canada's throat open]] and relies on America's ensuing PowerIncontinence to open the door. It's yet another display of how ruthless both Salem and Emerald are.
* Salem leaves Canada to bleed out outside of the Vault door. America is carried over Hazel's shoulder and sees Canada struggling weakly in a growing pool of his own blood until he stops moving.
* The Grimm essence in Canada's body reacts to his injury by [[BodyHorror sealing the wound with its ooze]].
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!!Chapter Thirty-Three: Goldilocks and the Bear
* The Ursa Spawner. It towers over the forest around it and bats the heroes around like nothing. Worst of all, it can [[HealingFactor regenerate]]. England has to completely vaporize it in order to stop it.
* Yang is nearly swallowed alive by the Ursa Spawner. Raven yanks her out of its jaws milliseconds before they snap shut.
* Roman slices up America's skin while he is unconscious [[ForcedToWatch in order to torture Canada]]. Canada keeps hallucinating and sometimes see Roman carving up his brother's corpse.
* The Ursa Spawner. It towers over the forest around it and bats the heroes around like nothing. Worst of all, it can [[HealingFactor regenerate]]. England has to completely vaporize it in order to stop it.
* Yang is nearly swallowed alive by the Ursa Spawner. Raven yanks her out of its jaws milliseconds before they snap shut.
* Roman slices up America's skin while he is unconscious [[ForcedToWatch in order to torture Canada]]. Canada keeps hallucinating and sometimes see Roman carving up his brother's corpse.
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!!Chapter Thirty-Two: Now You'll Pay
* America's illness and fever has gotten so bad he's nearly delirious. He would have activated the sleeping spell on accident if Vale did not hastily interrupt him.
* America accidentally speaks to Vale out loud. Roman takes this as an opportunity to thoroughly search America for quote-unquote "tech he's using to contact the others". In reality Roman jumps on the opportunity to violently rip America's clothes off his body in a scene reminiscent of the one with the stepsisters in Cinderella. Made worse because Roman uses a knife to cut away America's clothes, leaving him shivering in his underwear.
* Roman uses his Semblance on Hazel to [[BystanderSyndrome stop him from helping America]]. His desire to make America suffer is greater than his fear of Hazel, and there is nothing he won't do to make America's life hell.
* America's illness and fever has gotten so bad he's nearly delirious. He would have activated the sleeping spell on accident if Vale did not hastily interrupt him.
* America accidentally speaks to Vale out loud. Roman takes this as an opportunity to thoroughly search America for quote-unquote "tech he's using to contact the others". In reality Roman jumps on the opportunity to violently rip America's clothes off his body in a scene reminiscent of the one with the stepsisters in Cinderella. Made worse because Roman uses a knife to cut away America's clothes, leaving him shivering in his underwear.
* Roman uses his Semblance on Hazel to [[BystanderSyndrome stop him from helping America]]. His desire to make America suffer is greater than his fear of Hazel, and there is nothing he won't do to make America's life hell.
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* Roman says he's been dreaming about carving America up with his knife as America [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything bleeds, writhes, and screams beneath him]], begging for death.
* Roman tells America he would happily shove [[TheCorruption Grimm essence]] down his throat if he had any on hand.
* The scene where Roman force feeds America is [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything disturbingly comparable to a rape scene]]. America is bound and blindfolded when Roman has Mercury shove him down and hold him in place. America can only listen as Roman unzips something and presses something against his lips. America refuses to open his mouth so Roman squeezes his throat, causing him to gasp for air. Roman He the thing into America's mouth and lets him gag and choke for a bit before yanking it out. Roman mocks America and threatens to hurt him if he fights back or bites him. He holds America by his hair to keep his head still as he feeds him bits of the bread. America can do nothing but comply and hope the food isn't poisoned.
* Roman tells America he would happily shove [[TheCorruption Grimm essence]] down his throat if he had any on hand.
* The scene where Roman force feeds America is [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything disturbingly comparable to a rape scene]]. America is bound and blindfolded when Roman has Mercury shove him down and hold him in place. America can only listen as Roman unzips something and presses something against his lips. America refuses to open his mouth so Roman squeezes his throat, causing him to gasp for air. Roman He the thing into America's mouth and lets him gag and choke for a bit before yanking it out. Roman mocks America and threatens to hurt him if he fights back or bites him. He holds America by his hair to keep his head still as he feeds him bits of the bread. America can do nothing but comply and hope the food isn't poisoned.
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!!Chapter Thirty-One: Prisoners
* Roman was forced to discover his Semblance by Salem. "Forced" as in tortured until he unlocked it.
* Roman is more violent, aggressive, and unhinged; a far cry from the AffablyEvil criminal he used to be. He threatens America with a knife and wants to cut out his good eye. He claims it is so America can't see to run away, but clearly wants to do it to make America suffer.
* Roman was forced to discover his Semblance by Salem. "Forced" as in tortured until he unlocked it.
* Roman is more violent, aggressive, and unhinged; a far cry from the AffablyEvil criminal he used to be. He threatens America with a knife and wants to cut out his good eye. He claims it is so America can't see to run away, but clearly wants to do it to make America suffer.
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!!Chapter Thirty: Recklessness of the Grieving Fool
* Canada's [[TheCorruption Grimm veins]] have spread over his body and his skin has become white. His appearance is changing and now he looks like '''[[HumanoidAbomination Salem]]'''.
* Canada's mental state is changing too. His aggression has become hatred, so much so that he tells [[TheCorruption Emerald he wishes he'd strung Cinder's headless body from Beacon Tower]].
* Roman and Salem begin influencing America's emotions before any of the heroes know they are there. They rapidly alternate between [[MindRape making America uncaring and enhancing his grief]] to the point where he is in physical pain and nearly blacks out. He is completely unable to defend himself when Salem's forces attack.
* Roman makes it so the outer group does not care enough to come to the inner group's defense. He invokes BystanderSyndrome to such an extent that ''[[AllLovingHero Ruby]]'' does not come running when she hears America and Penny screaming in pain.
* Salem stomps on Penny's head and slowly starts pressing down to crush her skull. Penny screams in pain as her vocalizer becomes distorted and she emits a [[HellIsThatNoise high-pitched shrieking noise]].
* Ozpin tries to take over Oscar as he fights Hazel, distracting Oscar and losing him the fight. The only reason Oscar is still alive is because Hazel does not think Ozpin is worth killing at this point.
* Salem knocks out the remaining fighters in the area with a single pulse of aura. She's ''that'' powerful.
* America has been captured by Salem's forces. Salem is about to win.
* Canada's [[TheCorruption Grimm veins]] have spread over his body and his skin has become white. His appearance is changing and now he looks like '''[[HumanoidAbomination Salem]]'''.
* Canada's mental state is changing too. His aggression has become hatred, so much so that he tells [[TheCorruption Emerald he wishes he'd strung Cinder's headless body from Beacon Tower]].
* Roman and Salem begin influencing America's emotions before any of the heroes know they are there. They rapidly alternate between [[MindRape making America uncaring and enhancing his grief]] to the point where he is in physical pain and nearly blacks out. He is completely unable to defend himself when Salem's forces attack.
* Roman makes it so the outer group does not care enough to come to the inner group's defense. He invokes BystanderSyndrome to such an extent that ''[[AllLovingHero Ruby]]'' does not come running when she hears America and Penny screaming in pain.
* Salem stomps on Penny's head and slowly starts pressing down to crush her skull. Penny screams in pain as her vocalizer becomes distorted and she emits a [[HellIsThatNoise high-pitched shrieking noise]].
* Ozpin tries to take over Oscar as he fights Hazel, distracting Oscar and losing him the fight. The only reason Oscar is still alive is because Hazel does not think Ozpin is worth killing at this point.
* Salem knocks out the remaining fighters in the area with a single pulse of aura. She's ''that'' powerful.
* America has been captured by Salem's forces. Salem is about to win.
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!!Chapter Twenty-Nine: Explosion
* America considers suicide, in part so [[HeroicSuicide Salem cannot get him and win]], but also because of what Ruby [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead said to him]]. Imagine saying something cruel to your friend who in no way deserved it (and who has mental issues including ''depression''), and what you said [[DrivenToSuicide nearly pushes them to commit suicide]]. What the ''hell'', Ruby?
* Seeing [[NiceGirl Pyrrha]] lose her temper. She [[SuddenlyShouting explodes]] at Ruby and [[WhatTheHellHero rakes her over the coals for blaming Alfred]] for Blake and Qrow's deaths before storming off to cool down. Ruby had it coming but seeing Pyrrha chew her out is a shock.
* America considers suicide, in part so [[HeroicSuicide Salem cannot get him and win]], but also because of what Ruby [[YouShouldHaveDiedInstead said to him]]. Imagine saying something cruel to your friend who in no way deserved it (and who has mental issues including ''depression''), and what you said [[DrivenToSuicide nearly pushes them to commit suicide]]. What the ''hell'', Ruby?
* Seeing [[NiceGirl Pyrrha]] lose her temper. She [[SuddenlyShouting explodes]] at Ruby and [[WhatTheHellHero rakes her over the coals for blaming Alfred]] for Blake and Qrow's deaths before storming off to cool down. Ruby had it coming but seeing Pyrrha chew her out is a shock.
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* Blake tells America to run but he snaps he can't. The Grimm will teleport after him and even Ruby is not fast enough to avoid it. It will not stop until it has him.
* A single hit from the Grimm depletes Blake's Aura.
* America and Canada are grabbed by the Grimm and shoved into its torso. Its ribs close around them to form an impenetrable cage. They can see through its membrane but cannot break through it.
* Blake tells America to run but he snaps he can't. The Grimm will teleport after him and even Ruby is not fast enough to avoid it. It will not stop until it has him.
* A single hit from the Grimm depletes Blake's Aura.
* America and Canada are grabbed by the Grimm and shoved into its torso. Its ribs close around them to form an impenetrable cage. They can see through its membrane but cannot break through it.
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* The cage-like Warden Grimm. It is a gigantic, hovering, Dementor-like EldritchAbomination with seven arms, an exposed cage-like ribcage, and dagger-tipped tendrils that form a tattered "cloak". It is almost completely invulnerable. Even its own daggers cannot harm it. Its tendrils can be cut, but it instantly regenerates. It can also teleport at the short range or is fast enough that it seems to vanish when it moves. ''And'' its daggers pierce Jaune and Pyrrha's shields with ease. Salem was not playing around when she created this thing.
* Blake tells America to run but he snaps he can't. The Warden Grimm will teleport after him and even Ruby is not fast enough to avoid it. It will not stop until it has him.
* A single hit from the Warden Grimm depletes Blake's Aura.
* America and Canada are grabbed by the Warden Grimm and shoved into its torso. Its ribs close around them to form an impenetrable cage. They can see through its membrane but cannot break through it.
* Blake tells America to run but he snaps he can't. The Warden Grimm will teleport after him and even Ruby is not fast enough to avoid it. It will not stop until it has him.
* A single hit from the Warden Grimm depletes Blake's Aura.
* America and Canada are grabbed by the Warden Grimm and shoved into its torso. Its ribs close around them to form an impenetrable cage. They can see through its membrane but cannot break through it.
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* The heroes cannot defeat the Grimm before it teleports away with Canada inside it. ''Salem has Canada.''
* Blake's death. She is struck directly in the chest by the Grimm's daggers and crumples in a spray of blood. Yang checks on her but she is already dead with [[DiesWideOpen her eyes still open]]. There is no final goodbyes or speech for her. She dies in an instant, so fast that her friends do not realize what has happened at first.
* Blake's death. She is struck directly in the chest by the Grimm's daggers and crumples in a spray of blood. Yang checks on her but she is already dead with [[DiesWideOpen her eyes still open]]. There is no final goodbyes or speech for her. She dies in an instant, so fast that her friends do not realize what has happened at first.
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* The heroes cannot defeat the Warden Grimm before it teleports away with Canada inside it. ''Salem has Canada.''
* Blake's death. She is struck directly in the chest by the Warden Grimm's daggers and crumples in a spray of blood. Yang checks on her but she is already dead with [[DiesWideOpen her eyes still open]]. There is no final goodbyes or speech for her. She dies in an instant, so fast that her friends do not realize what has happened atfirst.first.
!!Chapter Twenty-Eight: Goodbye
* The Warden Grimm's attack cleaved Blake's heart in two. She was dead before she hit the ground.
* Salem [[BodyHorror used a few of her ribs]] to create the Warden Grimm. Her torso is now misshapen.
* Salem manipulates the Grimm essence inside Canada to cause him excruciating pain. It [[BodyHorror roils and writhes beneath his skin and through his organs]].
* A single touch from the Relic of Destruction has Canada screaming in agony.
* Blake's death. She is struck directly in the chest by the Warden Grimm's daggers and crumples in a spray of blood. Yang checks on her but she is already dead with [[DiesWideOpen her eyes still open]]. There is no final goodbyes or speech for her. She dies in an instant, so fast that her friends do not realize what has happened at
!!Chapter Twenty-Eight: Goodbye
* The Warden Grimm's attack cleaved Blake's heart in two. She was dead before she hit the ground.
* Salem [[BodyHorror used a few of her ribs]] to create the Warden Grimm. Her torso is now misshapen.
* Salem manipulates the Grimm essence inside Canada to cause him excruciating pain. It [[BodyHorror roils and writhes beneath his skin and through his organs]].
* A single touch from the Relic of Destruction has Canada screaming in agony.
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* A few of Russia's bosses slit his throat to punish him enough times that he has multiple overlapping scars on his neck.
* The cage-like Grimm. It is a gigantic hovering, Dementor-like EldritchAbomination with seven arms, an exposed cage-like ribcage, and dagger-tipped tendrils that form a tattered "cloak". It is almost completely invulnerable. Even its own daggers cannot harm it. Its tendrils can be cut, but it instantly regenerates. It can also teleport at the short range or is fast enough that it seems to vanish when it moves. ''And'' its daggers pierce Jaune and Pyrrha's shields with ease. Salem was not playing around when she created this thing.
* The cage-like Grimm. It is a gigantic hovering, Dementor-like EldritchAbomination with seven arms, an exposed cage-like ribcage, and dagger-tipped tendrils that form a tattered "cloak". It is almost completely invulnerable. Even its own daggers cannot harm it. Its tendrils can be cut, but it instantly regenerates. It can also teleport at the short range or is fast enough that it seems to vanish when it moves. ''And'' its daggers pierce Jaune and Pyrrha's shields with ease. Salem was not playing around when she created this thing.
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* A few of Russia's bosses slit his throat to punish him him. This happened enough times that he has multiple overlapping scars on his neck.
* The cage-like Grimm. It is agigantic gigantic, hovering, Dementor-like EldritchAbomination with seven arms, an exposed cage-like ribcage, and dagger-tipped tendrils that form a tattered "cloak". It is almost completely invulnerable. Even its own daggers cannot harm it. Its tendrils can be cut, but it instantly regenerates. It can also teleport at the short range or is fast enough that it seems to vanish when it moves. ''And'' its daggers pierce Jaune and Pyrrha's shields with ease. Salem was not playing around when she created this thing.
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!!Chapter Twenty-Seven: A Bitter Fate
* A few of Russia's bosses slit his throat to punish him enough times that he has multiple overlapping scars on his neck.
* The cage-like Grimm. It is a gigantic hovering, Dementor-like EldritchAbomination with seven arms, an exposed cage-like ribcage, and dagger-tipped tendrils that form a tattered "cloak". It is almost completely invulnerable. Even its own daggers cannot harm it. Its tendrils can be cut, but it instantly regenerates. It can also teleport at the short range or is fast enough that it seems to vanish when it moves. ''And'' its daggers pierce Jaune and Pyrrha's shields with ease. Salem was not playing around when she created this thing.
* Blake tells America to run but he snaps he can't. The Grimm will teleport after him and even Ruby is not fast enough to avoid it. It will not stop until it has him.
* A single hit from the Grimm depletes Blake's Aura.
* America and Canada are grabbed by the Grimm and shoved into its torso. Its ribs close around them to form an impenetrable cage. They can see through its membrane but cannot break through it.
* England can see America and Canada struggling to break free but cannot help them.
* The heroes cannot defeat the Grimm before it teleports away with Canada inside it. ''Salem has Canada.''
* Blake's death. She is struck directly in the chest by the Grimm's daggers and crumples in a spray of blood. Yang checks on her but she is already dead with [[DiesWideOpen her eyes still open]]. There is no final goodbyes or speech for her. She dies in an instant, so fast that her friends do not realize what has happened at first.
* A few of Russia's bosses slit his throat to punish him enough times that he has multiple overlapping scars on his neck.
* The cage-like Grimm. It is a gigantic hovering, Dementor-like EldritchAbomination with seven arms, an exposed cage-like ribcage, and dagger-tipped tendrils that form a tattered "cloak". It is almost completely invulnerable. Even its own daggers cannot harm it. Its tendrils can be cut, but it instantly regenerates. It can also teleport at the short range or is fast enough that it seems to vanish when it moves. ''And'' its daggers pierce Jaune and Pyrrha's shields with ease. Salem was not playing around when she created this thing.
* Blake tells America to run but he snaps he can't. The Grimm will teleport after him and even Ruby is not fast enough to avoid it. It will not stop until it has him.
* A single hit from the Grimm depletes Blake's Aura.
* America and Canada are grabbed by the Grimm and shoved into its torso. Its ribs close around them to form an impenetrable cage. They can see through its membrane but cannot break through it.
* England can see America and Canada struggling to break free but cannot help them.
* The heroes cannot defeat the Grimm before it teleports away with Canada inside it. ''Salem has Canada.''
* Blake's death. She is struck directly in the chest by the Grimm's daggers and crumples in a spray of blood. Yang checks on her but she is already dead with [[DiesWideOpen her eyes still open]]. There is no final goodbyes or speech for her. She dies in an instant, so fast that her friends do not realize what has happened at first.
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!!Chapter Twenty-Six: The Hunter and the Hunted
* One day, the Warrior King claimed he was tired and went to bed. [[GrandTheftMe Only Ozpin woke up.]]
* Just how ruthless Ozpin was in the past:
** When Vale refuses to help Ozpin seal the Relic of Choice, he orders his men to torture her. They hold her down, and she cannot risk using her Semblance or she gives Ozpin what he wants. One of the men uses his Semblance on her, [[MindRape which exerts painful psychic pressure on her head]] that grows more intense by the second. Vale accidentally lets her Semblance flare and activates the sealing orb. Ozpin is ''pleased'' she "cooperated".
** Ozpin has a [[FauxAffablyEvil facade of pleasantry to him]], just like Salem. He shows his true colors when Vale says he is not her King. He immediately loses his cool and calls Vale an "insolent wench".
** When another Silver-Eyed girl shows up after Summer, Ozpin sends her ''first'' year team on a mission meant for ''third'' years. They ''all'' die, not to the Grimm, but to the Silver-Eyed girl. All that's left of Gretchen Rainart is a foot, [[AdultFear which is given to her older brother in a small box]].
* Ruby barely has time to point herself at her enemies (and away from her friends) before she loses control to [[SuperPoweredEvilSide Silver Eyes]]. The scenes where she hunts down the White Fang members is reminiscent of a horror movie monster hunting people. The White Fang don't stand a chance.
* Ruby nearly vaporizes Italy. ''Again.''
* Salem snatches Ruby [[SuperSpeed mid-Semblance]] and holds her by her throat, slowly tightening her grip and crushing Ruby's trachea.
* One day, the Warrior King claimed he was tired and went to bed. [[GrandTheftMe Only Ozpin woke up.]]
* Just how ruthless Ozpin was in the past:
** When Vale refuses to help Ozpin seal the Relic of Choice, he orders his men to torture her. They hold her down, and she cannot risk using her Semblance or she gives Ozpin what he wants. One of the men uses his Semblance on her, [[MindRape which exerts painful psychic pressure on her head]] that grows more intense by the second. Vale accidentally lets her Semblance flare and activates the sealing orb. Ozpin is ''pleased'' she "cooperated".
** Ozpin has a [[FauxAffablyEvil facade of pleasantry to him]], just like Salem. He shows his true colors when Vale says he is not her King. He immediately loses his cool and calls Vale an "insolent wench".
** When another Silver-Eyed girl shows up after Summer, Ozpin sends her ''first'' year team on a mission meant for ''third'' years. They ''all'' die, not to the Grimm, but to the Silver-Eyed girl. All that's left of Gretchen Rainart is a foot, [[AdultFear which is given to her older brother in a small box]].
* Ruby barely has time to point herself at her enemies (and away from her friends) before she loses control to [[SuperPoweredEvilSide Silver Eyes]]. The scenes where she hunts down the White Fang members is reminiscent of a horror movie monster hunting people. The White Fang don't stand a chance.
* Ruby nearly vaporizes Italy. ''Again.''
* Salem snatches Ruby [[SuperSpeed mid-Semblance]] and holds her by her throat, slowly tightening her grip and crushing Ruby's trachea.
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!!Chapter Twenty-Five: Alfred Jones and the Seven Sacrifices
* Countless people were sacrificed in the temple to give Ozpin more power.
* After being separated from everyone except Pyrrha and Penny, America slowly puts the pieces together for why Ozpin brought him to the ruins. He realizes the chamber was used for human sacrifices and Ozpin intends to kill him. He's more stunned than terrified as he comprehends what is going on, and cannot act before Ozpin traps him and the girls.
* Ozpin pins Pyrrha and Penny to the wall and America to the altar with magic. He also neutralizes their Semblances. Pyrrha can only struggle and scream; first at Ozpin, then for help when he keeps going with his plan to sacrifice America.
* Oscar's soul [[GrandTheftMe is slowly being overwritten by Ozpin’s]].
* The way Ozpin acts in the sacrifice scene. He's reluctant, but he doesn't stop because he feels he ''has'' to do this. No amount of pleading, logic, or guilt slinging can make him hesitate. He is willing to ''murder'' America and two witnesses to get more power. None of his actions are done out of revenge or sadism: he's doing it because he honestly thinks there is no other choice.
* Ozpin keeps America pinned with tight magical pressure around his body and [[PsychicStrangle throat]]. America can't move and can barely breathe.
* We finally find out what Ozpin did to Vale. When she refused to take part in his "new solution", he ''tortured'' her until she used her Semblance on the device meant to lock away the Relic of Choice. She calls him an impostor wearing her King's skin and he commands her to never speak ill of her master again while holding the Relic. The pain Vale suffers as the [[TongueTied geas]] takes hold is horrifying; she feels her tongue and throat burning as the Relic binds her and her words are stripped away.
* Ozpin is about to cut out America's heart when Oscar takes control back. He drops the dagger and grips at his head while screaming that he won't let Ozpin hurt his friends. He desperately begs America to hand him Cobalt Striker, and upon receiving it, knocks himself out.
* Countless people were sacrificed in the temple to give Ozpin more power.
* After being separated from everyone except Pyrrha and Penny, America slowly puts the pieces together for why Ozpin brought him to the ruins. He realizes the chamber was used for human sacrifices and Ozpin intends to kill him. He's more stunned than terrified as he comprehends what is going on, and cannot act before Ozpin traps him and the girls.
* Ozpin pins Pyrrha and Penny to the wall and America to the altar with magic. He also neutralizes their Semblances. Pyrrha can only struggle and scream; first at Ozpin, then for help when he keeps going with his plan to sacrifice America.
* Oscar's soul [[GrandTheftMe is slowly being overwritten by Ozpin’s]].
* The way Ozpin acts in the sacrifice scene. He's reluctant, but he doesn't stop because he feels he ''has'' to do this. No amount of pleading, logic, or guilt slinging can make him hesitate. He is willing to ''murder'' America and two witnesses to get more power. None of his actions are done out of revenge or sadism: he's doing it because he honestly thinks there is no other choice.
* Ozpin keeps America pinned with tight magical pressure around his body and [[PsychicStrangle throat]]. America can't move and can barely breathe.
* We finally find out what Ozpin did to Vale. When she refused to take part in his "new solution", he ''tortured'' her until she used her Semblance on the device meant to lock away the Relic of Choice. She calls him an impostor wearing her King's skin and he commands her to never speak ill of her master again while holding the Relic. The pain Vale suffers as the [[TongueTied geas]] takes hold is horrifying; she feels her tongue and throat burning as the Relic binds her and her words are stripped away.
* Ozpin is about to cut out America's heart when Oscar takes control back. He drops the dagger and grips at his head while screaming that he won't let Ozpin hurt his friends. He desperately begs America to hand him Cobalt Striker, and upon receiving it, knocks himself out.
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!!Chapter Twenty-Four: The Ones Who Suffer Most
* Canada still had Aura when Emerald attacked him with [[TheCorruption the Grimm essence]]. ''Aura can't protect you from being infected.''
* Salem attacks America's mansion and sets it on fire by turning into a Phoenix Grimm. She also breaks Uni's horn and nearly kills her by snapping her neck.
* China is forced to chop off Denmark's arm to stop the Grimm essence from infecting him.
* Canada still had Aura when Emerald attacked him with [[TheCorruption the Grimm essence]]. ''Aura can't protect you from being infected.''
* Salem attacks America's mansion and sets it on fire by turning into a Phoenix Grimm. She also breaks Uni's horn and nearly kills her by snapping her neck.
* China is forced to chop off Denmark's arm to stop the Grimm essence from infecting him.
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!!Chapter Twenty-Three: Trouble Magnet
* Canada has a nightmare where America is dead and he has become the personification for both Canadians and Americans. One of the walls to the meeting room falls away and he sees America's blood-covered body. America's heart has been cut out, leaving him with a gaping hole in his chest.
* Both Roman and Tyrian consider America a "package/gift" for Salem. To them, America is not a person, just [[{{Dehumanization}} an object]] to be delivered to their boss.
* France [[FreakOut loses it]] when Tyrian calls him Vacuo and [[NoHoldsBarredbeatdown mercilessly beats him]]. America notes France is not fighting gracefully like he normally does, but like a rabid animal or predator. France breaks Tyrian's new tail and slits his throat unflinchingly.
* The entire scene where France approaches America. France is out of his mind and unable to see reality clearly. The blood-covered France turns to America and stalks towards him with a blank expression. Vale screams for America to run but he's too shocked by Tyrian's [[SlashedThroat brutal death]] to move. France hugs America and calls him [[DeliriousMisidentification "Matthieu"]] with his pupils blown wide. America hesitantly tells him he's Alfred while knowing one wrong word may cause France to attack him. He [[ThousandYardStare stares at America for a couple minutes without seeing him]]. France's hands briefly linger at America's throat like he is about to strangle him but go up to cup his cheeks. He agrees America is Alfred and says he will protect him too. America does not dare to move as France hugs him closely. He closes his eyes and when they open his pupils are back to normal.
* Everyone has to kill Grimm as soon as they appear or risk letting Salem [[CloneByConversion show up]]. This is while they are fighting Salem's henchmen ('''all''' of them) and White Fang.
* Adam uses his Semblance (which allows him to control Faunus) to keep Blake frozen in place and unable to fight. The others are forced to protect her.
* Emerald catches Canada in the chest with her Grimm essence tendrils. The wound is barely bigger than a fingernail, but it's enough to [[TheCorruption infect him.]]
* Canada has a nightmare where America is dead and he has become the personification for both Canadians and Americans. One of the walls to the meeting room falls away and he sees America's blood-covered body. America's heart has been cut out, leaving him with a gaping hole in his chest.
* Both Roman and Tyrian consider America a "package/gift" for Salem. To them, America is not a person, just [[{{Dehumanization}} an object]] to be delivered to their boss.
* France [[FreakOut loses it]] when Tyrian calls him Vacuo and [[NoHoldsBarredbeatdown mercilessly beats him]]. America notes France is not fighting gracefully like he normally does, but like a rabid animal or predator. France breaks Tyrian's new tail and slits his throat unflinchingly.
* The entire scene where France approaches America. France is out of his mind and unable to see reality clearly. The blood-covered France turns to America and stalks towards him with a blank expression. Vale screams for America to run but he's too shocked by Tyrian's [[SlashedThroat brutal death]] to move. France hugs America and calls him [[DeliriousMisidentification "Matthieu"]] with his pupils blown wide. America hesitantly tells him he's Alfred while knowing one wrong word may cause France to attack him. He [[ThousandYardStare stares at America for a couple minutes without seeing him]]. France's hands briefly linger at America's throat like he is about to strangle him but go up to cup his cheeks. He agrees America is Alfred and says he will protect him too. America does not dare to move as France hugs him closely. He closes his eyes and when they open his pupils are back to normal.
* Everyone has to kill Grimm as soon as they appear or risk letting Salem [[CloneByConversion show up]]. This is while they are fighting Salem's henchmen ('''all''' of them) and White Fang.
* Adam uses his Semblance (which allows him to control Faunus) to keep Blake frozen in place and unable to fight. The others are forced to protect her.
* Emerald catches Canada in the chest with her Grimm essence tendrils. The wound is barely bigger than a fingernail, but it's enough to [[TheCorruption infect him.]]
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!!Chapter Twenty-Two: Scars Upon Scars
* Ruby [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming blames America]] for Qrow's death. Because of that, she sits by and does nothing when he is dragged away by [[PsychopathicManchild Russia]], even though she knows America does not want to go with him and Russia has physically assaulted him in the past. She bitterly acknowledges what she's doing is wrong but still does not act.
* Ruby [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming blames America]] for Qrow's death. Because of that, she sits by and does nothing when he is dragged away by [[PsychopathicManchild Russia]], even though she knows America does not want to go with him and Russia has physically assaulted him in the past. She bitterly acknowledges what she's doing is wrong but still does not act.
