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'''RJ:''' No! No! BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! (Vincent's jaws close as he crunches RJ)
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'''RJ:''' No! No! BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! [[BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!]] (Vincent's jaws close as he crunches RJ)
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'''RJ:''' No! No! [BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!] (Vincent's jaws close as he crunches RJ)
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'''RJ:''' No! No! [BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!] BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! (Vincent's jaws close as he crunches RJ)
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-->'''RJ:''' (mumbling in sleep) Spuddies... Cooler... Wagon... Redder wagon. (suddenly, Vincent grabs him while he is sleeping) AAAHH!! GAH!
'''Vincent:''' Time's up, RJ.
'''RJ:''' But I have six more days!
'''Vincent:''' (about to put RJ into his mouth and eat him)
'''RJ:''' No! No! [BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!] (Vincent's jaws close as he crunches RJ)
'''RJ:''' (wakes up next morning, alive and well) OK. Four paws, fur. Still alive, still alive.
'''Vincent:''' Time's up, RJ.
'''RJ:''' But I have six more days!
'''Vincent:''' (about to put RJ into his mouth and eat him)
'''RJ:''' No! No! [BigNo NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!] (Vincent's jaws close as he crunches RJ)
'''RJ:''' (wakes up next morning, alive and well) OK. Four paws, fur. Still alive, still alive.
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* Vincent is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either. His soft-spoken line delivery (until his VillainousBreakdown) doesn't help matters as well.
-->'''Vincent''': All right, RJ. I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
'''RJ''': But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head'') Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
'''Vincent''': Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you.
-->'''Vincent''': All right, RJ. I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
'''RJ''': But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head'') Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
'''Vincent''': Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you.
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* Vincent is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely gravelly and raspy voice is no slouch either. His soft-spoken line delivery (until his VillainousBreakdown) doesn't help matters as well.
-->'''Vincent''': -->'''Vincent:''' All right, RJ. I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
'''RJ''': '''RJ:''' But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head'') Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
'''Vincent''': '''Vincent:''' Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you.
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--->'''Gladys''': And did you put this one in? This Depelter Turbo?\\
'''Dwayne''': That's a contraband item, ma'am, as it is illegal in every state... except Texas.\\
'''Gladys''': I don't care if this thing's against the Geneva Conventions, I want it!\\
'''Dwayne''': (''chuckles'') I thought you might. So I took the liberty of installing it for you. (''Dwayne turns on the device and red lasers cover the entire lawn. Then he tosses a teddy bear into the lasers.'') Adios, animal infestation.\\
'''RJ''': AAAAH!\\
'''Gladys''': [''the teddy's in a cage, with outside charred off''] Oh, my. Rather impressive.
'''Dwayne''': That's a contraband item, ma'am, as it is illegal in every state... except Texas.\\
'''Gladys''': I don't care if this thing's against the Geneva Conventions, I want it!\\
'''Dwayne''': (''chuckles'') I thought you might. So I took the liberty of installing it for you. (''Dwayne turns on the device and red lasers cover the entire lawn. Then he tosses a teddy bear into the lasers.'') Adios, animal infestation.\\
'''RJ''': AAAAH!\\
'''Gladys''': [''the teddy's in a cage, with outside charred off''] Oh, my. Rather impressive.
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*** While not as severe as the top two, Dwayne does go a little bit off the rails when he resorts to using an electric cattle prod to take back the animals, despite his professionalism earlier (and wanting to dispose of them quickly and humanely).humanely).
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* Gladys Sharp and Dwayne [=LaFontant=] are pretty intimidating as well, despite their slight incompetence.
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* Gladys Sharp and Dwayne [=LaFontant=] [=LaFontaine=] are pretty intimidating as well, despite their slight incompetence.
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* Vincent is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either. His soft-spoken line delivery [[spoiler:(until his VillainousBreakdown)]] doesn't help matters as well.
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* Vincent is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either. His soft-spoken line delivery [[spoiler:(until (until his VillainousBreakdown)]] VillainousBreakdown) doesn't help matters as well.
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* The climax where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping from one side of the hedge and Gladys (holding a weed hacker) and Dwayne (holding an electric cattle prod) attacking from the opposite.
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* The climax climax, whoo boy.
** The moment where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping from one side of the hedge and Gladys(holding a weed hacker) and Dwayne (holding attacking from the opposite.
** The respective SanitySlippage and VillainousBreakdown that our three villains suffer.
*** Vincent goes from a soft-spoken Sadist to a feral and beastly monster. He also growls a lot more than usual, indicating a blind rage.
*** Gladys probably has it worse. Due to her perfectionism as a Homeowner's Association president, she goes far beyond the deep end. How far? Try using a weed hacker against forest animals while screaming constantly.
*** While not as severe as the top two, Dwayne does go a little bit off the rails when he resorts to using an electric cattleprod) attacking from prod to take back the opposite.animals, despite his professionalism earlier (and wanting to dispose of them quickly and humanely).
** The moment where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping from one side of the hedge and Gladys
** The respective SanitySlippage and VillainousBreakdown that our three villains suffer.
*** Vincent goes from a soft-spoken Sadist to a feral and beastly monster. He also growls a lot more than usual, indicating a blind rage.
*** Gladys probably has it worse. Due to her perfectionism as a Homeowner's Association president, she goes far beyond the deep end. How far? Try using a weed hacker against forest animals while screaming constantly.
*** While not as severe as the top two, Dwayne does go a little bit off the rails when he resorts to using an electric cattle
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* Vincent is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either. His soft-spoken line delivery [[spoiler:(until his VillainousBreakdown)]] doesn't help matters as well.
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'''Vincent''': Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you!
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'''Vincent''': Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you!you.
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--->'''Vincent''': Moon's full, RJ. See ya in the morning! morning. (''grabs the moon, which turns into a chip and eats it with one crunch'')
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-->'''Gladys''': And did you put this one in? This Depelter Turbo?\\
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'''Gladys''': I don't care if this violates the Geneva Conventions, I want it!\\
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'''Gladys''': I don't care if this violates thing's against the Geneva Conventions, I want it!\\
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-->'''Vincent''': All right, RJ, I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
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-->'''Vincent''': All right, RJ, RJ. I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
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-->'''Vincent''': Alright, RJ, I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
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-->'''Vincent''': Alright, All right, RJ, I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
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-->'''Gladys''': What about this one, this Depelter Turbo?\\
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-->'''Gladys''': What about And did you put this one, this one in? This Depelter Turbo?\\
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* Vincent the Bear is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either.
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* Vincent the Bear is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either.
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** RJ's nightmare, where Vincent grabs him out of the tree he's sleeping in and eats him. Worse, RJ's scream as the camera moves into Vincent's mouth.
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** RJ's nightmare, where Vincent grabs him out of the tree he's sleeping in in, reminds him that his time is up, and eats him. Worse, Even worse, RJ's scream as the camera moves into Vincent's mouth.mouth, just before it cuts to RJ waking up from his nightmare the next morning.
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** RJ's nightmare, where Vincent grabs him out of the tree he's sleeping in, in and eats him. Worse, RJ's scream as the camera moves into Vincent's mouth.
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'''Dwayne''': That's a contraband item, maam, as it is illegal in every state... except Texas.\\
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'''Dwayne''': That's a contraband item, maam, ma'am, as it is illegal in every state... except Texas.\\
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* The climax where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping on one side of the hedge and Gladys (holding a weed hacker) and Dwayne (holding an electronic zapper prod) a weed hacker and a on the other.
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* The climax where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping on from one side of the hedge and Gladys (holding a weed hacker) and Dwayne (holding an electronic zapper electric cattle prod) a weed hacker and a on attacking from the other.opposite.
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* The climax where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping on one side of the hedge and and Gladys (holding a weed hacker) and Dwayne (holding an electronic zapper prod) a weed hacker and a on the other.
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* The climax where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent viciously swiping on one side of the hedge and and Gladys and Dwayne on the other.
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** Later RJ looks up at the night sky and imagines a constellation of stars that form Vincent, glaring down at him.
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** Later Later, RJ looks up at the night sky and imagines a constellation of stars that form Vincent, glaring down at him.
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'''Dwayne''': (''chuckles'') I thought you might. So I took the liberty of installing it for you. (''Dwayne turns on the device and red lasers cover the entire lawn. Then he tosses a teddy bear into the trap.'') Adios animal infestation.\\
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'''Dwayne''': (''chuckles'') I thought you might. So I took the liberty of installing it for you. (''Dwayne turns on the device and red lasers cover the entire lawn. Then he tosses a teddy bear into the trap.lasers.'') Adios Adios, animal infestation.\\
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'''Gladys''': [''the teddy's in a cage, with outside charred off''] Oh, my. Rather impressive.
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'''Gladys''': [''the teddy's in a cage, with outside charred off''] Oh, my. Rather impressive.impressive.
*The climax where the gang is attacked by the villains, with Vincent on one side of the hedge and and Gladys and Dwayne on the other.
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-->'''Vincent''': Moon's full, RJ. See ya in the morning! (''grabs the moon, which turns into a chip and eats it with one crunch'')
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-->'''Vincent''': Moon's full, RJ. See ya in the morning! (''grabs the moon, which turns into a chip and eats it with one crunch'')crunch'')
**Vincent attacking RJ and the others in the Verminator van.
-->'''Vincent''': You're dead, RJ! And your friends are next!
*Gladys Sharp and Dwayne [=LaFontant=] are pretty intimidating as well, despite their slight incompetence.
**As RJ watches Dwayne set up traps around Gladys' house.
-->'''Gladys''': What about this one, this Depelter Turbo?\\
'''Dwayne''': That's a contraband item, maam, as it is illegal in every state... except Texas.\\
'''Gladys''': I don't care if this violates the Geneva Conventions, I want it!\\
'''Dwayne''': (''chuckles'') I thought you might. So I took the liberty of installing it for you. (''Dwayne turns on the device and red lasers cover the entire lawn. Then he tosses a teddy bear into the trap.'') Adios animal infestation.\\
'''RJ''': AAAAH!\\
'''Gladys''': [''the teddy's in a cage, with outside charred off''] Oh, my. Rather impressive.
**Vincent attacking RJ and the others in the Verminator van.
-->'''Vincent''': You're dead, RJ! And your friends are next!
*Gladys Sharp and Dwayne [=LaFontant=] are pretty intimidating as well, despite their slight incompetence.
**As RJ watches Dwayne set up traps around Gladys' house.
-->'''Gladys''': What about this one, this Depelter Turbo?\\
'''Dwayne''': That's a contraband item, maam, as it is illegal in every state... except Texas.\\
'''Gladys''': I don't care if this violates the Geneva Conventions, I want it!\\
'''Dwayne''': (''chuckles'') I thought you might. So I took the liberty of installing it for you. (''Dwayne turns on the device and red lasers cover the entire lawn. Then he tosses a teddy bear into the trap.'') Adios animal infestation.\\
'''RJ''': AAAAH!\\
'''Gladys''': [''the teddy's in a cage, with outside charred off''] Oh, my. Rather impressive.
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'''RJ''': But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head) Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
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'''RJ''': But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head) head'') Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
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* Vincent the Bear is quite an intimidating fiend. He threatens RJ's life if he doesn't get back all the food RJ accidentally destroyed. BearsAreBadNews indeed, but Vincent is one of the worst examples. Creator/NickNolte's gravely and raspy voice is no slouch either.
-->'''Vincent''': Alright, RJ, I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
'''RJ''': But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head) Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
'''Vincent''': Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you!
**RJ's nightmare, where Vincent grabs him out of the tree he's sleeping in, and eats him. Worse, RJ's scream as the camera moves into Vincent's mouth.
**Later RJ looks up at the night sky and imagines a constellation of stars that form Vincent, glaring down at him.
-->'''Vincent''': Moon's full, RJ. See ya in the morning! (''grabs the moon, which turns into a chip and eats it with one crunch'')
-->'''Vincent''': Alright, RJ, I'm goin' back to sleep. When that moon's full, I'm wakin' up. And all my stuff had better be right back where it was.\\
'''RJ''': But that's just one week! That's impossible for one-- (''Vincent squeezes tighter to RJ's head) Ow! A week's perfect! I'll get some helpers.\\
'''Vincent''': Full moon, ''all'' my stuff. And don't even think about running away 'cause if you do, I will hunt you down and ''kill'' you!
**RJ's nightmare, where Vincent grabs him out of the tree he's sleeping in, and eats him. Worse, RJ's scream as the camera moves into Vincent's mouth.
**Later RJ looks up at the night sky and imagines a constellation of stars that form Vincent, glaring down at him.
-->'''Vincent''': Moon's full, RJ. See ya in the morning! (''grabs the moon, which turns into a chip and eats it with one crunch'')
