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** After Fluttershy and her friends finally get rid of Rhymey, he returns to his family... And proceeds to murder his father in cold blood, gets [[OedipusComplex uncomfortably close]] to his mother, and goes through his family spell books to find a spell that would [[MindRape convince]] Fluttershy to come back to him from a distance. Said spell has him invading Fluttershy's mind while she's sleeping, and the way it's described makes it seem like he came within a hair's breadth of ''actually'' raping Fluttershy in her dream. Thank goodness for Princess Luna's intervention.
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** After Fluttershy and her friends finally get rid of Rhymey, he returns to his family... And proceeds to murder his father in cold blood, gets [[OedipusComplex [[UsefulNotes/OedipusComplex uncomfortably close]] to his mother, and goes through his family spell books to find a spell that would [[MindRape convince]] Fluttershy to come back to him from a distance. Said spell has him invading Fluttershy's mind while she's sleeping, and the way it's described makes it seem like he came within a hair's breadth of ''actually'' raping Fluttershy in her dream. Thank goodness for Princess Luna's intervention.
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* Rhymey's deal with Fluttershy: [[spoiler:first he made the Sunset-caused Rainbooms' break-up worse by blackmailing Rainbow Dash into breaking their romantic relationship, then, with her vulnerable, he started manipulating and brainwashing her into committing murders to get at her ancestors' legacy of dragon slayers]]. ''And'' he's a classic BastardBoyfriend on top of that.
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* Rhymey's deal with Fluttershy: [[spoiler:first he made the Sunset-caused Rainbooms' break-up worse by blackmailing Rainbow Dash into breaking their romantic relationship, then, with her vulnerable, he started manipulating and brainwashing her into committing murders to get at her ancestors' legacy of dragon slayers]]. ''And'' he's a classic BastardBoyfriend DomesticAbuser on top of that.
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** After Fluttershy and her friends finally get rid of Rhymey, he returns to his family... And proceeds to murder his father in cold blood, gets [[OedipusComplex uncomfortably close]] to his mother, and goes through his family spell books to find a spell that would [[MindRape convince]] Flutterhsy to come back to him from a distance. Said spell has him invading Fluttershy's mind while she's sleeping, and the way it's described makes it seem like he came within a hair's breadth of ''actually'' raping Fluttershy in her dream. Thank goodness for Princess Luna's intervention.
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** After Fluttershy and her friends finally get rid of Rhymey, he returns to his family... And proceeds to murder his father in cold blood, gets [[OedipusComplex uncomfortably close]] to his mother, and goes through his family spell books to find a spell that would [[MindRape convince]] Flutterhsy Fluttershy to come back to him from a distance. Said spell has him invading Fluttershy's mind while she's sleeping, and the way it's described makes it seem like he came within a hair's breadth of ''actually'' raping Fluttershy in her dream. Thank goodness for Princess Luna's intervention.
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** The so-called ‘Justice System’ is just as bad. The Unicornicopians don’t give criminals a trial if they have ‘more than enough’ evidence to convict them. This has lead to many innocent people being sent to prison for crimss that they did not commit, and later chapters show they’re not above resorting to manipulating memories in order to do so.
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** The so-called ‘Justice System’ is just as bad. The Unicornicopians don’t give criminals a trial if they have ‘more than enough’ evidence to convict them. This has lead to many innocent people being sent to prison for crimss crimes that they did not commit, and later chapters show they’re not above resorting to manipulating memories in order to do so.
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* In the original fic by Mykan, the Equestrians embraced having their anatomies changed. Here however, it's revealed that when they changed anatomies, they were all blacked out. And when they came to, they found that they were no longer quadrupedal, were standing upright, and had hands. Needless to say, [[RealityEnsues they were horrified]] by the change in anatomy.
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* In the original fic by Mykan, the Equestrians embraced having their anatomies changed. Here however, it's revealed that when they changed anatomies, they were all blacked out. And when they came to, they found that they were no longer quadrupedal, were standing upright, and had hands. Needless to say, [[RealityEnsues they were horrified]] horrified by the change in anatomy.
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** After Fluttershy and her friends finally get rid of Rhymey, he returns to his family... And proceeds to murder his father in cold blood, gets [[OedipusComplex uncomfortably close]] to his mother, and goes through his family spell books to find a spell that would [[MindRape convince]] Flutterhsy to come back to him from a distance.
* Emil Kudos. Just Emil Kudos. If it isn't the cold way that he talks to his 'victims' or how he [[AboveGoodandEvil views life]] in general, it's that his way of thinking is eerily similar to Nazi scientists.
* Emil Kudos. Just Emil Kudos. If it isn't the cold way that he talks to his 'victims' or how he [[AboveGoodandEvil views life]] in general, it's that his way of thinking is eerily similar to Nazi scientists.
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** After Fluttershy and her friends finally get rid of Rhymey, he returns to his family... And proceeds to murder his father in cold blood, gets [[OedipusComplex uncomfortably close]] to his mother, and goes through his family spell books to find a spell that would [[MindRape convince]] Flutterhsy to come back to him from a distance. \n Said spell has him invading Fluttershy's mind while she's sleeping, and the way it's described makes it seem like he came within a hair's breadth of ''actually'' raping Fluttershy in her dream. Thank goodness for Princess Luna's intervention.
* Emil Kudos. Just Emil Kudos. If it isn't the cold way that he talks to his 'victims' or how he [[AboveGoodandEvil views life]] in general, it's that his way of thinking is eerily similar to Nazi scientists. Not to mention the ''things'' he does: he nearly made a friend of his fall off a cliff by damaging his wings and tried to ''drown a foal under a faucet in front of its parents'' just to prove his twisted view of superiority. And that's before he became a depraved MadScientist, where he graduates to [[SarcasmMode lovely experiments]] like inflicting pain on captive subjects just to sneer about how an Earth Pony could take it, and ripping out a unicorn's heart just to see how long he can live with his blood being pumped by hand (thankfully off-page).
* Emil Kudos. Just Emil Kudos. If it isn't the cold way that he talks to his 'victims' or how he [[AboveGoodandEvil views life]] in general, it's that his way of thinking is eerily similar to Nazi scientists. Not to mention the ''things'' he does: he nearly made a friend of his fall off a cliff by damaging his wings and tried to ''drown a foal under a faucet in front of its parents'' just to prove his twisted view of superiority. And that's before he became a depraved MadScientist, where he graduates to [[SarcasmMode lovely experiments]] like inflicting pain on captive subjects just to sneer about how an Earth Pony could take it, and ripping out a unicorn's heart just to see how long he can live with his blood being pumped by hand (thankfully off-page).
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* The Dark King’s backstory. [[spoiler:Apparently, he was Shining Armor from a BadFuture where United Equestria was [[AlienInvasion invaded by aliens]], Cadance had a miscarriage, and the Elements of Harmony [[DwindlingParty died off one by one]]. When the last of them died, Shining Armor discovered that he was descended from Mimic, a unicorn whose power dwarfed that of the Princesses. Tapping into this power, he attacked and killed the Grand Ruler and Celestia in cold blood, and proceeded to commit genocide on the Unicornicopians. But that wasn’t enough for him. He then went through the Canterlot Archives to find a spell that would allow him to [[TimeTravel travel back in time]] so that he could kill the Grand Ruler, over and over and over again. He was only stopped when Shining Armor fought him, and upon discovering the truth, vowed that he would never become him, [[RetGone erasing]] the Dark King from existence.]]
** [[spoiler:And to make things even worse; it is heavily implied that the Dark King’s hatred for the Grand Ruler was what brought Dark Conquest to United Equestria in the first place.]]
** [[spoiler:And to make things even worse; it is heavily implied that the Dark King’s hatred for the Grand Ruler was what brought Dark Conquest to United Equestria in the first place.]]
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* The Dark King’s backstory. [[spoiler:Apparently, Apparently, he was Shining Armor from a BadFuture where United Equestria was [[AlienInvasion invaded by aliens]], Cadance had a miscarriage, and the Elements of Harmony [[DwindlingParty died off one by one]]. When the last of them died, Shining Armor discovered that he was descended from Mimic, a unicorn whose power dwarfed that of the Princesses. Tapping into this power, he attacked and killed the Grand Ruler and Celestia in cold blood, and proceeded to commit genocide on the Unicornicopians. But that wasn’t enough for him. He then went through the Canterlot Archives to find a spell that would allow him to [[TimeTravel travel back in time]] so that he could kill the Grand Ruler, over and over and over again. He was only stopped when Shining Armor fought him, and upon discovering the truth, vowed that he would never become him, [[RetGone erasing]] the Dark King from existence.]]
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**[[spoiler:And And to make things even worse; it is heavily implied that the Dark King’s hatred for the Grand Ruler was what brought Dark Conquest to United Equestria in the first place.]]
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** The Barding of Healing. A suit of armor meant to be worn while using the Sword of Instant. It can heal any wound regardless of the severity. It can also hold back aging. This has made Dusk Shine, who is currently wearing the armor, become immortal. But if he ever takes it off, he will rapidly age, and die. Thankfully, when he does, the process isn't ''nearly'' as graphic as it could've been.
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** The Barding of Healing. A suit of armor meant to be worn while using the Sword of Instant. It can heal any wound regardless of the severity. It can also hold back aging. This has made Dusk Shine, who is currently wearing the armor, become immortal. But if he ever takes it off, all the years warded off by the barding will come back, and he will rapidly age, age and die. Thankfully, when he does, the process isn't ''nearly'' as graphic as it could've been.
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* Shining Spark keeping [[DeathsHourglass a countdown to her own death]] is more than a little disturbing, especially when coupled with her cold lack of emotion.
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* Alternate!Kimberly Hart's backstory is both this and a TearJerker, [[EvenEvilHasStandards with even Unos being horrified]]: [[spoiler:her world's Lord Zedd had her tortured and raped to death, then she was revived as a cyborg and cut loose on her former friend, and after killing them she's traveling through the multiverse to scour it of every trace of them]].
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* Alternate!Kimberly Hart's backstory is both this and a TearJerker, [[EvenEvilHasStandards with even Unos being horrified]]: [[spoiler:her world's Lord Zedd had her tortured and raped to death, then she was revived as a cyborg and cut loose on her former friend, friends, and after killing them she's traveling through the multiverse to scour it of every trace of them]].
