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* One of the first clues the reader has this setting is darker than canon Eva is Shinji sitting inside the cockpit for first time... and a goey, ''black'' liquid filling it. What is it? You do not want to know.
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* One of the first clues the reader has this setting is [[DarkerAndEdgier darker than canon Eva Canon!Eva]] is Shinji sitting inside the cockpit for first time... and a goey, ''black'' liquid filling it. What is it? You do not want to know.know.
** It starts earlier than that - a group of explorers DugTooDeep into a complex network of caves and woke up... ''something''. We don't know the fate of said explorers, but their screams indicate that their fates were awful. [[spoiler:Later it turns out to be the Angel Matarael, whom Shinji and Rei fight in the first chapter]].
* One of the first things Shinji sees in chapter one after Matarael attacks Tokyo-3 is a man setting himself on fire after he gets covered in spiders. Eeugh...
** It starts earlier than that - a group of explorers DugTooDeep into a complex network of caves and woke up... ''something''. We don't know the fate of said explorers, but their screams indicate that their fates were awful. [[spoiler:Later it turns out to be the Angel Matarael, whom Shinji and Rei fight in the first chapter]].
* One of the first things Shinji sees in chapter one after Matarael attacks Tokyo-3 is a man setting himself on fire after he gets covered in spiders. Eeugh...
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* One of the first clues the reader has this setting is darker than canon Eva is Shinji sitting inside the cockpit for first time... and a goey, ''black'' liquid filling it. What is it? You do not want to know.
* One of the abominations absorbed by Rei forces her to [[spoiler:rape Asuka.]]
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* One of the first clues the reader has this setting is darker than canon Eva is Shinji sitting inside the cockpit for first time... and a goey, ''black'' liquid filling it. What is it? You do not want to know.
* One of the abominations absorbed by Rei forces her to [[spoiler:rape Asuka.]]
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