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* For the Incurseans, Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a CurbStompBattle that’s more like a massacre.
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* For the Incurseans, Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a CurbStompBattle that’s more like a massacre.massacre.
* During a battle on Revonnah, Astrodactyl tries to save Kundo... but his reckless behavior ends with Kundo losing his arm, which he replaces with his damaged Sickle Bo Staff to form a plant-based prosthetic.
* During a battle on Revonnah, Astrodactyl tries to save Kundo... but his reckless behavior ends with Kundo losing his arm, which he replaces with his damaged Sickle Bo Staff to form a plant-based prosthetic.
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* Ben, as Way Big, getting so angry at Captain Nemesis that he nearly crushed him to death for [[spoiler: nearly killing his dad.]]
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* Ben, as Way Big, getting so angry at Captain Nemesis that he nearly crushed him to death for [[spoiler: nearly killing his dad.]]
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* For the Incurseans, [[spoiler: Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a CurbStompBattle that’s more like a massacre.]]
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* For the Incurseans, [[spoiler: Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a CurbStompBattle that’s more like a massacre.]]
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* For the Incurseans, [[spoiler: Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a NoHeldBarsBeatDown that’s more like a massacre.]]
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* For the Incurseans, [[spoiler: Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a NoHeldBarsBeatDown CurbStompBattle that’s more like a massacre.]]
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* the Incursean arc introduces the second most dangerous Bountyhunter; Apex, a white furred Appoplexian. Who is as much of a BloodKnight as the rest of his race but more malicious.
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* the Incursean arc introduces the second most dangerous Bountyhunter; Apex, a white furred Appoplexian. Who is as much of a BloodKnight as the rest of his race but more malicious.malicious.
* For the Incurseans, [[spoiler: Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a NoHeldBarsBeatDown that’s more like a massacre.]]
* For the Incurseans, [[spoiler: Vilgax And his henchmen arrive for a NoHeldBarsBeatDown that’s more like a massacre.]]
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* The Feedback Flashback is given a more serious twist despite the MoodWhiplash after the flashback ended.
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* The Feedback Flashback is given a more serious twist despite the MoodWhiplash after the flashback ended.ended.
* the Incursean arc introduces the second most dangerous Bountyhunter; Apex, a white furred Appoplexian. Who is as much of a BloodKnight as the rest of his race but more malicious.
* the Incursean arc introduces the second most dangerous Bountyhunter; Apex, a white furred Appoplexian. Who is as much of a BloodKnight as the rest of his race but more malicious.
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* Ben, as Way Big, getting so angry at Captain Nemesis that he nearly crushed him to death for [[spoiler: nearly killing his dad.]]
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* Ben, as Way Big, getting so angry at Captain Nemesis that he nearly crushed him to death for [[spoiler: nearly killing his dad.]]]]
* The Feedback Flashback is given a more serious twist despite the MoodWhiplash after the flashback ended.
* The Feedback Flashback is given a more serious twist despite the MoodWhiplash after the flashback ended.
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** And finally Psychobos MindRaped Dr. Animo for information.
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** And finally Psychobos MindRaped Dr. Animo for information.information.
* Ben, as Way Big, getting so angry at Captain Nemesis that he nearly crushed him to death for [[spoiler: nearly killing his dad.]]
* Ben, as Way Big, getting so angry at Captain Nemesis that he nearly crushed him to death for [[spoiler: nearly killing his dad.]]
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* Orianus, an original villain created for the story, is a PyroManiac who is a planetary arsonist. By which means he burns ENTIRE PLANETS.
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* Orianus, an original villain created for the story, is a PyroManiac who is a planetary arsonist. By which means he burns ENTIRE PLANETS.PLANETS.
* Seebik has a darker intentions still as he tried to burn down all of Bellwood with lava.
* All the while they are unable to move, The Faction decimates Animo's forces with the following:
** Blowing up Heatbat with Orianus' flames.
** Absorbing Mad Cow via Malware's technology absorbtion
** And finally Psychobos MindRaped Dr. Animo for information.
* Seebik has a darker intentions still as he tried to burn down all of Bellwood with lava.
* All the while they are unable to move, The Faction decimates Animo's forces with the following:
** Blowing up Heatbat with Orianus' flames.
** Absorbing Mad Cow via Malware's technology absorbtion
** And finally Psychobos MindRaped Dr. Animo for information.
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* The Faction as a whole are a lot more like a trio of KnightOfCerebus than before. Highlights include:
** Malware being a lot more malicious in combat, slamming Ben around more monsterously.
** Psychobos being a lot more matliculute and enjoys causing harm to others.
** Khyber is a SerialKiller who has no qualms with including Julie into his room and is a lot more malicious in his actions with his hunt.
* Orianus, an original villain created for the story, is a PyroManiac who is a planetary arsonist. By which means he burns ENTIRE PLANETS.
** Malware being a lot more malicious in combat, slamming Ben around more monsterously.
** Psychobos being a lot more matliculute and enjoys causing harm to others.
** Khyber is a SerialKiller who has no qualms with including Julie into his room and is a lot more malicious in his actions with his hunt.
* Orianus, an original villain created for the story, is a PyroManiac who is a planetary arsonist. By which means he burns ENTIRE PLANETS.