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* During the riot in King's Landing, a group of men try to rape Not-Sansa. She casually kills one with a NeckSnap, then ''tears the others apart with her bear hands.'' Varys, watching this from a hiding spot, is left horrified.
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* If she hadn't run into Doom, Dany's story would have abruptly ended with a village that uses a large scale WoundedGazelleGambit, appearing to have just been ransacked and in need of help, when actually the whole place is booby-trapped to kill and rob any Good Samaritans that take the bait.
* If she hadn't run into Doom, Dany's story would have abruptly ended with a village that uses a large scale WoundedGazelleGambit, appearing to have just been ransacked and in need of help, when actually the whole place is booby-trapped to kill and rob any Good Samaritans that take the bait.
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* [[spoiler: After revealing Jon's true parentage to the boy, Ned grimly confirms he kept quiet about it because he thought Robert would kill Jon for being the living proof Lyanna loved another man. Even now, the Lord Stark is desesperate to hide this little fact because the Seven Kingdoms are full of people who would like to see the last male Targaryen dead.]]
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* [[spoiler: After revealing Jon's true parentage to the boy, Ned grimly confirms he kept quiet about it because he thought Robert would kill Jon for being the living proof Lyanna loved another man. Even now, the Lord Stark is desesperate desperate to hide this little fact because the Seven Kingdoms are full of people who would like to see the last male Targaryen dead.]]
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* Vanko makes his big entrance in a recreation of the racetrack scene from ''Film/IronMan2'', made just as much more gruesome as you'd expect from Westeros. The chapter ends with him advancing on a trapped Tony and cracking his whips.
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* The raw power [[spoiler: Thor]] showcases. While he appears rather goofy and lighthearted when he is pissed off he unleashes a fraction of his power, [[spoiler: creating the blackest of storms every seen and using the lightning to carve the words "I AM THOR GOD OF THUNDER" in the hillside near the parlay.]] If it weren't for Davos calling for him to stop it is likley Renly and his entire party would have died.
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* The raw power [[spoiler: Thor]] showcases. While he appears rather goofy and lighthearted when he is pissed off he unleashes a fraction of his power, [[spoiler: creating the blackest of storms every seen and using the lightning to carve the words "I AM THOR GOD OF THUNDER" in the hillside near the parlay.]] If it weren't for Davos calling for him to stop it is likley likely Renly and his entire party would have died. died.
* Tyrion's nightmare of a demonic-looking Not-Sansa throttling him while covering herself in blood, while the real Sansa looks on while chained up.
* Tyrion's nightmare of a demonic-looking Not-Sansa throttling him while covering herself in blood, while the real Sansa looks on while chained up.
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** Myranda herself is incredibly disturbing. While she and Ramsay are hunting their current victim, this is what she has to say:
-->"I want to sew her pussy up. She wanted to have your baby, I can tell. I want to stick some foul rodent in her and sew her up and watch her scream as it burrows out."
-->"I want to sew her pussy up. She wanted to have your baby, I can tell. I want to stick some foul rodent in her and sew her up and watch her scream as it burrows out."
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** [[spoiler: It should be noted that his fear is, for the most part, misplaced, since Thor is actually good friends with the Drowned God, who's real name is Ægir, a sea jotunn who in Norse Mythology was friends with the gods and often hosted parties for them, and the Drowned God is revealed to be a nicknamed Ægir got from Sif after she dropped him in a pond for trying to bed her at one of his parties. Thor's actually quite confused over why Theon would be afraid of him before he'd even done anything]].
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** [[spoiler: It should be noted that his fear is, for the most part, misplaced, since Thor is actually good friends with the Drowned God, who's real name is Ægir, [=Ægir=], a sea jotunn who in Norse Mythology was friends with the gods and often hosted parties for them, and the Drowned God is revealed to be a nicknamed Ægir nickname [=Ægir=] got from Sif after she dropped him in a pond for trying to bed her at one of his parties. Thor's actually quite confused over why Theon would be afraid of him before he'd even done anything]].
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** [[spoiler: It should be noted that his fear is, for the most part, misplaced, since Thor is actually good friends with the Drowned God, who's real name is Ægir, a sea jotunn who in Norse Mythology was friends with the gods and often hosted parties for them, and the Drowned God is revealed to be a nicknamed Ægir got from Sif after she dropped him in a pond for trying to bed her at one of his parties. Thor's actually quite confused over why Theon would be afraid of him before he'd even done anything]].
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* [[spoiler: Thor]] is a walking nightmare for Theon, since he's the Storm God who constantly opposes the patron god of Ironborns in their creation mythos and seeks to destroy their world. He's basically the Beast of Revelation for the poor guy, and his little little-show doesn't help Theon to trust him more.
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* [[spoiler: Thor]] is a walking nightmare for Theon, since he's the Storm God who constantly opposes the patron god of Ironborns in their creation mythos and seeks to destroy their world. He's basically the Beast of Revelation for the poor guy, and his little little-show lightning-show doesn't help Theon to trust him more.
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** [[spoiler: Speaking of Sandor, he notes that while everyone else is complaining about the cold snap accompanying the approach of winter, he's constantly boiling. Given who he's sworn his service to, it suggests that he's being corrupted into an Other.]]
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* [[spoiler:The Night's Queen has started to spread her poison through King's Landing, converting all sorts of people to her cause. And she turns one bird into a wight in front of Sandor.]]
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Same as the other removals, it could just as easily be the equivalent of the Red Skull, especially since it's pretty much confirmed that Steve fought the Others during the Long Night, and the Red Skull fits the idea of a commander better (All of this is assuming the Commander isn't an original character like the Night's Queen)
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* [[spoiler:Rickon begins to show an ability to tell that they are not in the original timeline, Robb and him begin to hear a ghostly song in the crypts of Winterfell... and suddenly Rickon is swallowed by a portal in front of Robb, Roslin and Luwin.]]
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* Let's put it this way. Tyrion Lannister, the man who faced several credible death threats with just a small sweat, [[spoiler:is reduced to having to sleep with the candles lit after his chat with the Night's Queen masquerading as Sansa.]]
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*** Worse. [[spoiler:She may be an Asgardian as well.]]
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* Ned and Cat desesperately want for their daughter Arya to be safe, but there's a CivilWar raging and she's still away, so they have to accept the very real possibility she could have been killed or captured in spite of being under Syrio's wing.
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* [[spoiler: Thor]] confesses his brother went to Westeros for a learning travel and was supposed to come back five years ago. He didn't, and that's not the first time it happens to [[spoiler: an Asgardian]]. When something is bad enough to affect a ''god'', it's time to bring the brown pants out.
** And [[spoiler: Thor]] suspects Melisandre to be responsible for it. As if the lady wasn't creepy enough.
** And [[spoiler: Thor]] suspects Melisandre to be responsible for it. As if the lady wasn't creepy enough.
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*** Making it even worse according the Mr. Chaos this is the '''TAME''' version, as how he originally wrote it was so graphically violent he chose to tone it down. He only mentions that in the original version Myranda's eyes were stitched shut with fish hooks.
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*** Making it even worse according the Mr. Chaos this is the '''TAME''' version, as how he originally wrote it was so graphically violent he chose to tone it down. He only mentions that in the original version Myranda's eyes were stitched shut with fish hooks.hooks.
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** His death - whipped to death by Vanko's customized whip - is very much deserved but kinda unsettling. And as psycho as Vanko is, how much do you bet he uses this whip on poor, unsuspecting commoners?
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** His death - whipped to death by Vanko's customized whip - is very much deserved but kinda unsettling. And as psycho as Vanko is, how much do you bet he uses this whip on poor, unsuspecting commoners?commoners?
** Myranda's death manages to be even worse than Ramsay's. She is stripped naked, her tongue is ripped out, her eyes are sealed shut with hot wax, and she has shallow cuts made along her torso before salt water was poured on her. She is left wandering around sobbing and scared, looking for Ramsay... and then Vanko wraps his burning whips around her throat. Mr. Chaos goes into graphic detail of her skin burning down to the muscle before she finally dies. There is a reason this is the first chapter to receive a warning for graphic violence.
*** Making it even worse according the Mr. Chaos this is the '''TAME''' version, as how he originally wrote it was so graphically violent he chose to tone it down. He only mentions that in the original version Myranda's eyes were stitched shut with fish hooks.
** Myranda's death manages to be even worse than Ramsay's. She is stripped naked, her tongue is ripped out, her eyes are sealed shut with hot wax, and she has shallow cuts made along her torso before salt water was poured on her. She is left wandering around sobbing and scared, looking for Ramsay... and then Vanko wraps his burning whips around her throat. Mr. Chaos goes into graphic detail of her skin burning down to the muscle before she finally dies. There is a reason this is the first chapter to receive a warning for graphic violence.
*** Making it even worse according the Mr. Chaos this is the '''TAME''' version, as how he originally wrote it was so graphically violent he chose to tone it down. He only mentions that in the original version Myranda's eyes were stitched shut with fish hooks.
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* [[spoiler: The changes in Sansa Stark. Tyrion refuses to believe she ''is'' the genuine article because of her wildly different appearance. Bronn's gut immediately pegs the lady as trouble, whatever she is. Yes, ''whatever'', not ''whoever''.]]
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* [[spoiler: The changes in Sansa Stark. Tyrion refuses to believe she ''is'' the genuine article because of her wildly different appearance. Bronn's gut immediately pegs the lady as trouble, whatever she is. Yes, ''whatever'', not ''whoever''.]]]]
* '''RAMSAY SNOW''' has a point-of-view chapter. Mr Chaos found himself quoting the Joker and Pennywise to better live in his brain. Yeah...
** His death - whipped to death by Vanko's customized whip - is very much deserved but kinda unsettling. And as psycho as Vanko is, how much do you bet he uses this whip on poor, unsuspecting commoners?
* '''RAMSAY SNOW''' has a point-of-view chapter. Mr Chaos found himself quoting the Joker and Pennywise to better live in his brain. Yeah...
** His death - whipped to death by Vanko's customized whip - is very much deserved but kinda unsettling. And as psycho as Vanko is, how much do you bet he uses this whip on poor, unsuspecting commoners?
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* The beginning of the burning of the statues of the Seven reminds Jane of the people that have already been burned alive by Melisandre. It is made obvious that Shireen has been forced to see all the burnings that have taken place, and Jane is left hoping that Shireen will not become a fanatic like her mother.
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* The mood in King's Landing when Tyrion and co. enter the city: fights in the streets, the Goldcloaks too scared to act because there is a very ''real'' danger of dying via a mob, ''blood on the walls''.
* [[spoiler: The changes in Sansa Stark. Tyrion refuses to believe she ''is'' the genuine article because of her wildly different appearance. Bronn's gut immediately pegs the lady as trouble, whatever she is. Yes, ''whatever'', not ''whoever''.]]
* The mood in King's Landing when Tyrion and co. enter the city: fights in the streets, the Goldcloaks too scared to act because there is a very ''real'' danger of dying via a mob, ''blood on the walls''.
* [[spoiler: The changes in Sansa Stark. Tyrion refuses to believe she ''is'' the genuine article because of her wildly different appearance. Bronn's gut immediately pegs the lady as trouble, whatever she is. Yes, ''whatever'', not ''whoever''.]]
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** The Vale's Skycells.
** Winterfell's version of a Chinese Water Torture Rack, where alternating boiling and frigid cold water is dropped on a prisoner's back.
** Casterly Rock placing one in a windowless cell and then purposely alternating guard schedules and feeding times so a prisoner thinks they've been locked away for months instead of weeks.
** The Reach's version of bamboo sprout torture, with a rose vine plant buried under a person's back and allowed to grow through their body; rumor has it that the plants end up taking over the corpse, keeping them semi alive in the cells.
** The Dreadfort has a new prisoner select an older prisoner. The new guy gets that cell... and the next day gets a blanket made of ''the old prisoner's skin'', with the old prisoner's face in the middle, stretched so it is always screaming.
** Save for the Skycells every other example listed above are not from the books but created by the author. Mr. Chaos has a very sick mind.
** Winterfell's version of a Chinese Water Torture Rack, where alternating boiling and frigid cold water is dropped on a prisoner's back.
** Casterly Rock placing one in a windowless cell and then purposely alternating guard schedules and feeding times so a prisoner thinks they've been locked away for months instead of weeks.
** The Reach's version of bamboo sprout torture, with a rose vine plant buried under a person's back and allowed to grow through their body; rumor has it that the plants end up taking over the corpse, keeping them semi alive in the cells.
** The Dreadfort has a new prisoner select an older prisoner. The new guy gets that cell... and the next day gets a blanket made of ''the old prisoner's skin'', with the old prisoner's face in the middle, stretched so it is always screaming.
** Save for the Skycells every other example listed above are not from the books but created by the author. Mr. Chaos has a very sick mind.
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* [[spoiler: The Others are now present in King's Landing. Sansa Stark awoke as the Night's Queen.]]
** [[spoiler: Sandor's knee-jerk reaction when he sees the corpse he's watching over is talking and trying to seduce him with a suddenly mature body, is a massive FreakOut. Can you blame him for it?]]
** [[spoiler: Sandor's knee-jerk reaction when he sees the corpse he's watching over is talking and trying to seduce him with a suddenly mature body, is a massive FreakOut. Can you blame him for it?]]
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* [[spoiler: The Others are now present in King's Landing. Landing: Sansa Stark awoke as the Night's Queen.'''Night's Queen'''.]]
** [[spoiler: Sandor's knee-jerk reaction when he sees the corpse he's watching over is talking and trying to seduce him with a suddenly mature body, is a massive FreakOut. Can you blame him forit?]]it?]]
* The beginning of the burning of the statues of the Seven reminds Jane of the people that have already been burned alive by Melisandre. It is made obvious that Shireen has been forced to see all the burnings that have taken place, and Jane is left hoping that Shireen will not become a fanatic like her mother.
** [[spoiler: Sandor's knee-jerk reaction when he sees the corpse he's watching over is talking and trying to seduce him with a suddenly mature body, is a massive FreakOut. Can you blame him for
* The beginning of the burning of the statues of the Seven reminds Jane of the people that have already been burned alive by Melisandre. It is made obvious that Shireen has been forced to see all the burnings that have taken place, and Jane is left hoping that Shireen will not become a fanatic like her mother.
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** Winterfell's version of a Chinese Water Torture Rack, where alternating boiling how and frigid cold water is dropped on a prisoner's back.
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*[[AxeCrazy Gregor Clegane]], full-stop. He's a Point-of-View character, and his chapters are quite disturbing to read.
* Ned disapproves the Iron Man because he doesn't follow the proper rules, but also because his attacking the corrupted and powerful will inspire others to become vigilantes, maybe sparking a CivilWar with peasants deciding they are ''fed up'' with the elite's douchebaggery.
* Arya daydreaming about mean fates for her sister is quite creepy: first she wishes for Sansa to be fat as King Robert and fall from a tower on Joffrey and Cersei, then she imagines Sansa growing old at an accelerated rate and shrieking in despair when she see herself. Yeah...
* When he's locked into the Dark Cells, Ned muses about the many kinds of prisons you can find in Westeros. A reviewer says they couldn't understand why anyone would take the Black until they read this.
** To go into more detail some of the ways prisoners are dealt with in Westeros include:
** The Vale's Skycells.
** Winterfell's version of a Chinese Water Torture Rack, where alternating boiling how and frigid cold water is dropped on a prisoner's back.
** Casterly Rock placing one in a windowless cell and then purposely alternating guard schedules and feeding times so a prisoner thinks they've been locked away for months instead of weeks.
** The Reach's version of bamboo sprout torture, with a rose vine plant buried under a person's back and allowed to grow through their body; rumor has it that the plants end up taking over the corpse, keeping them semi alive in the cells.
** The Dreadfort has a new prisoner select an older prisoner. The new guy gets that cell... and the next day gets a blanket made of ''the old prisoner's skin'', with the old prisoner's face in the middle, stretched so it is always screaming.
* [[spoiler: Syrio drops hints about "special people" waiting in the shadows for a revolution, until "he" reveals "himself" as ''Mystique'', scouting talent for ''Magneto''. And she intends to [[CorruptTheCutie take Arya to the Brotherhood]].]]
* [[AdultFear More mundane but no less terrifying for Tony and Pepper]]: Tywin called the banners and he asked Tony to bring Jon with him. Tony perfectly knows Tywin intends [[IHaveYourWife to use his ward as hostage against the main Stark family]] but has no way to politely refuse because Tywin is his lord liege.
* [[spoiler: When Ned helplessly see his daughter Sansa die right before him, [[KillThemAll his reaction]] made reviewers worry about him taking the Lady Stoneheart road - or the Punisher one.]]
* [[spoiler: After revealing Jon's true parentage to the boy, Ned grimly confirms he kept quiet about it because he thought Robert would kill Jon for being the living proof Lyanna loved another man. Even now, the Lord Stark is desesperate to hide this little fact because the Seven Kingdoms are full of people who would like to see the last male Targaryen dead.]]
* [[spoiler: The Others are now present in King's Landing. Sansa Stark awoke as the Night's Queen.]]
** [[spoiler: Sandor's knee-jerk reaction when he sees the corpse he's watching over is talking and trying to seduce him with a suddenly mature body, is a massive FreakOut. Can you blame him for it?]]
* Ned disapproves the Iron Man because he doesn't follow the proper rules, but also because his attacking the corrupted and powerful will inspire others to become vigilantes, maybe sparking a CivilWar with peasants deciding they are ''fed up'' with the elite's douchebaggery.
* Arya daydreaming about mean fates for her sister is quite creepy: first she wishes for Sansa to be fat as King Robert and fall from a tower on Joffrey and Cersei, then she imagines Sansa growing old at an accelerated rate and shrieking in despair when she see herself. Yeah...
* When he's locked into the Dark Cells, Ned muses about the many kinds of prisons you can find in Westeros. A reviewer says they couldn't understand why anyone would take the Black until they read this.
** To go into more detail some of the ways prisoners are dealt with in Westeros include:
** The Vale's Skycells.
** Winterfell's version of a Chinese Water Torture Rack, where alternating boiling how and frigid cold water is dropped on a prisoner's back.
** Casterly Rock placing one in a windowless cell and then purposely alternating guard schedules and feeding times so a prisoner thinks they've been locked away for months instead of weeks.
** The Reach's version of bamboo sprout torture, with a rose vine plant buried under a person's back and allowed to grow through their body; rumor has it that the plants end up taking over the corpse, keeping them semi alive in the cells.
** The Dreadfort has a new prisoner select an older prisoner. The new guy gets that cell... and the next day gets a blanket made of ''the old prisoner's skin'', with the old prisoner's face in the middle, stretched so it is always screaming.
* [[spoiler: Syrio drops hints about "special people" waiting in the shadows for a revolution, until "he" reveals "himself" as ''Mystique'', scouting talent for ''Magneto''. And she intends to [[CorruptTheCutie take Arya to the Brotherhood]].]]
* [[AdultFear More mundane but no less terrifying for Tony and Pepper]]: Tywin called the banners and he asked Tony to bring Jon with him. Tony perfectly knows Tywin intends [[IHaveYourWife to use his ward as hostage against the main Stark family]] but has no way to politely refuse because Tywin is his lord liege.
* [[spoiler: When Ned helplessly see his daughter Sansa die right before him, [[KillThemAll his reaction]] made reviewers worry about him taking the Lady Stoneheart road - or the Punisher one.]]
* [[spoiler: After revealing Jon's true parentage to the boy, Ned grimly confirms he kept quiet about it because he thought Robert would kill Jon for being the living proof Lyanna loved another man. Even now, the Lord Stark is desesperate to hide this little fact because the Seven Kingdoms are full of people who would like to see the last male Targaryen dead.]]
* [[spoiler: The Others are now present in King's Landing. Sansa Stark awoke as the Night's Queen.]]
** [[spoiler: Sandor's knee-jerk reaction when he sees the corpse he's watching over is talking and trying to seduce him with a suddenly mature body, is a massive FreakOut. Can you blame him for it?]]
