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!!''Stretch'' contains examples of:
* ACupAngst: Keiko is pretty jealous of Rans breast size when she's not admiring them at least.
* AmbiguouslyBi: In the past Keiko has had several boyfriends, with at least one being very serous, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Saki says its unusual for Keiko not to have a boyfriend which Keiko then says that being with Ran makes her just as happy, besides Ran is cute.
** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in any male, something her old school friends comment on, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking. Coming on to Keiko and joining her in molesting Ran.
* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: The manga, a comedic SliceOfLife, is very different from the normal work Higashiyama Shou does which mostly consists of {{Hentai}}, even more so than Manga/{{Prism}} which had it fair share of {{Fanservice}}.
* ACupAngst: Keiko is pretty jealous of Rans breast size when she's not admiring them at least.
* AmbiguouslyBi: In the past Keiko has had several boyfriends, with at least one being very serous, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Saki says its unusual for Keiko not to have a boyfriend which Keiko then says that being with Ran makes her just as happy, besides Ran is cute.
** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in any male, something her old school friends comment on, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking. Coming on to Keiko and joining her in molesting Ran.
* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: The manga, a comedic SliceOfLife, is very different from the normal work Higashiyama Shou does which mostly consists of {{Hentai}}, even more so than Manga/{{Prism}} which had it fair share of {{Fanservice}}.
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* ACupAngst: Keiko is
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** Ran
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's
* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: The manga, a comedic SliceOfLife, is very different from
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* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: The manga, a comedic SliceOfLife, is very different from the normal work Higashiyama Shou does which mostly consists of {{Hentai}}, even more so than Manga/{{Prism}} which had it fair share of {{Fanservice}}.
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* NowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: The manga, a comedic SliceOfLife, is very different from the normal work Higashiyama Shou does which mostly consists of {{Hentai}}, even more so than Manga/{{Prism}} which had it fair share of {{Fanservice}}.
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** Ran to has had hints that she has had a tragedy in her life. [[spoiler: A few small hints point to her father dying.]]
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** Ran to too has had hints that she has had a tragedy in her life. [[spoiler: A few small hints point to her father recently dying.]]
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* NowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: The manga, a comedic SliceOfLife, is very different from the normal work Higashiyama Shou does which mostly consists of {{Hentai}}, even more so than Manga/{{Prism}} which had it fair share of {{Fanservice}}.
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* Spank TheCutie: Implied in Chapter 28
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* Spank TheCutie: SpankTheCutie: Implied in Chapter 28
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* Spank The Cutie: TheCutie: Implied in Chapter 28
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* SpanktheCutie: Spank The Cutie: Implied in Chapter 28
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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Ran, if there are girls and they get drunk around her, it wont be long tell they are all over her.
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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Ran, if there are girls and they get drunk around her, it wont be long tell before they are all over her.
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* EvenTheGirlsWantHer: Ran, if there are girls and they get drunk around her, it wont be long tell they are all over her.
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** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone, male or female, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone, male or female, any male, something her old school friends comment on, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in, anyone male or female, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in, anyone in anyone, male or female, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* ACupAngst: Keiko is pretty jealous of Rans breast size.
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* ACupAngst: Keiko is pretty jealous of Rans breast size.size when she's not admiring them at least.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had several boyfriends, at least one was very serous, in the past, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: In the past Keiko has had several boyfriends, with at least one was being very serous, in the past, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Saki says its unusual for Keiko not to have a boyfriend which Keiko then says that being with Ran makes her just as happy, besides Ran is cute.
** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interestin in, anyone male or female, making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking. Coming on to Keiko and joining her in molesting Ran.
** Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking. Coming on to Keiko and joining her in molesting Ran.
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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: Ran is frequently punished by Keiko through violence.
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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: Ran is frequently punished by Keiko through violence. Keiko sometimes gets it back though.
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* ThreesomeSubtext: In chapter 25, both Saki and Keiko decide to start rubbing up on Ran, its gets heavier and heavier until Ran smashes the two drunks head together.
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* ThreesomeSubtext: In chapter 25, both Saki and Keiko decide to start rubbing up on Ran, its gets heavier and heavier until Ran smashes the two drunks head together.together because they started calling her fat.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had several boyfriends, at least one was very serous, in the past, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had several boyfriends, at least one was very serous, in the past, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.AmbiguouslyGay.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking.
** As of chapter 25 we can add Saki to the list of AmbiguouslyBi characters, though it seems only when she's drinking.
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* ShipTease: Ran and Keiko have quite a lot, to the point Keiko's best friend, Saki, is suspicious of the two. Though the author likes to subvert this at times, some ship tease moments will end up ruined.
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* ShipTease: Ran and Keiko have quite a lot, to the point Keiko's best friend, Saki, is suspicious of the two. Though the author likes to subvert this at times, some ship tease moments will end up ruined. Chapter 25 takes special mention as it contains the most ship tease to date, though the author ruins it at the end.
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* ThreesomeSubtext: In chapter 25, both Saki and Keiko decide to start rubbing up on Ran, its gets heavier and heavier until Ran smashes the two drunks head together.
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* MoodWhiplash: Happens frequently, Jokes become trauma, ship tease becomes jokes and lets not even get started on the rather dark two-parter that focuses on Keiko's past.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When they were in high school Keiko accidentally knocked Ran out with a baseball instead of seeing if she was okay Keiko ran away. It wouldn't be till later that they would officially meet.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When they were in high school Keiko accidentally knocked Ran out with a baseball instead baseball. Instead of seeing if she was okay okay, Keiko ran away. It wouldn't be till later that they would officially meet.
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* [[ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime Roommates Walk In At The Worst Time]]: The manga opens with Keiko walking into her and Ran's shared apartment to see Ran standing on her head against a wall in only her underwear.
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* [[ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime Roommates Walk In At The Worst Time]]: The manga opens with Keiko walking into her and Ran's shared apartment to see Ran standing on her head against a wall in only her underwear. Reversed in chapter 13.
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* ShipTease: Ran and Keiko have quite a lot, to the point Keiko's best friend is suspicious of the two. Though the author likes to subvert this at times, some ship tease moments will end up ruined.
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* ShipTease: Ran and Keiko have quite a lot, to the point Keiko's best friend friend, Saki, is suspicious of the two. Though the author likes to subvert this at times, some ship tease moments will end up ruined.
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** Ran to has had hints that she has had a tragedy in her life.
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** Ran to has had hints that she has had a tragedy in her life. [[spoiler: A few small hints point to her father dying.]]
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** Ran to has had hints that she has had a tragedy in her life.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had a boyfriend in the past, but she is also prone to blushing when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had a boyfriend several boyfriends, at least one was very serous, in the past, but she is also prone to blushing and starring when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had a boyfriend in the past, but she is also prone to blushing when stretching with Ran. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had a boyfriend in the past, but she is also prone to blushing when stretching with Ran. The first time she met Ran she became fixated with her, or more her hair. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Keiko has had a boyfriend in the past, but she is also prone to blushing when stretching with Ran. Ran her-self is rather possessive of Keiko, and has not shown interest in anyone making her more AmbiguouslyGay.
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* ACupAngst: Keiko is pretty jealous of Rans breast size.
* BrutalHonesty: Ran, even more so when drunk. She even brings a party to a screeching halt when she decides to talk about working with cadavers.
* BrutalHonesty: Ran, even more so when drunk. She even brings a party to a screeching halt when she decides to talk about working with cadavers.
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* {{Edutainment}}: [=A SoL=] manga that will legitimately teach you proper stretching as well as other health exercises and even proper lifting movment.
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* {{Delinquent}}: Keiko had a bad rep in high school, at first Ran didn't want to be associated with her because of it.
* {{Edutainment}}: [=A SoL=] manga that will legitimately teach you proper stretching as well as other health exercises and even proper lifting movment.
* {{Edutainment}}: [=A SoL=] manga that will legitimately teach you proper stretching as well as other health exercises and even proper lifting movment.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Keiko is the {{Tomboy}} to Ran's GirlyGirl.
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* ShipTease: Ran and Keiko have quite a lot, to the point Keiko's best friend is suspicious of the two.
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* ShipTease: Ran and Keiko have quite a lot, to the point Keiko's best friend is suspicious of the two. Though the author likes to subvert this at times, some ship tease moments will end up ruined.
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* {{Edutainment}}: [=A SoL=] manga that will legitimately teach you proper stretching.
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* {{Edutainment}}: [=A SoL=] manga that will legitimately teach you proper stretching.stretching as well as other health exercises and even proper lifting movment.
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* [[ParentsWalkInAtTheWorstTime Roommates Walk In At The Worst Time]]: The manga opens with Keiko walking into her and Ran's shared apartment to see Ran standing on her head against a wall in only her underwear.
