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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Go ahead, just ''try'' mistreating a girl in Fumiya's presence. Also his BerserkButton and, in the present time incident involving Asami, a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Go ahead, just ''try'' mistreating a girl in Fumiya's presence. Also his BerserkButton and, in the present time incident involving Asami, a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.Asami...
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: [[spoiler:Yoh and Haruna.]]
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: [[spoiler:Yoh and Haruna. Gender-inverted with Asami and Fumi.]]
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* GraduateFromTheStory
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* GraduateFromTheStoryGraduateFromTheStory: Yoh, Fumi and Asaoka graduate at the very end.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted. [[spoiler:Yoh tells Haruna during the overnight trip that he's never been with another girl.]]
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice Prince]]: Yoh mellows consdierably after spending more time with Haruna.
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice Prince]]: Yoh mellows consdierably considerably after spending more time with Haruna.
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* GenkiGirl: Haruna, full stop. When it is almost Haruna's 17 birthday, her parents revile that Haruna has been very energetic since birth.
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* GenkiGirl: Haruna, full stop. When it is almost Haruna's 17 birthday, her parents revile reveal that Haruna has been very energetic since birth.
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* CuteBruiser: A non-combat example. Haruna's build is, outside of a couple panels early, not appreciably different from any of the other girls in the series. That said, she's still a powerhouse - there was the result of the three-on-one fight against her seniors in school [[spoiler: in which at least two of them hurt themselves when they landed blows that Haruna shrugged off]], plus the time she had Yoh doubling over in pain inadvertently when she gave him a couple of lighthearted pats on the back. The few times she does start seeming angry, people are genuinely scared.
* FacePalm: Yoh's understandable reaction when he finally pieces together that the reason that his ex-girlfriend (who is ordinarily a huge ShrinkingViolet) has been so insistent on pursuing him has been because [[spoiler: his current girlfriend, Haruna, has been encouraging her... and Haruna didn't know who the ex-girlfriend had been pursuing]].
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* GenkiGirl: Haruna full stop. When it is almost haruna's 17 birthday her parents revile that Haruna has been very energetic since birth.
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* GenkiGirl: Haruna Haruna, full stop. When it is almost haruna's Haruna's 17 birthday birthday, her parents revile that Haruna has been very energetic since birth.
* GenerationXerox: When Yoh and Asami's mother is finally introduced, it very strongly seems like this applies to Yoh and his mother, who look rather similar. [[spoiler: When it comes to personality, though, it quickly becomes clear that this is definitely the case with Asami and her mother.]]
* ObliviousToLove: Part and parcel of being TheDitz, Haruna doesn't catch on to when people are crushing on her at all. This comes up in particular when she helps with freshman orientation.
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* SchoolFestivalSchoolFestival: The school athletic festival becomes a major focus in Haruna's junior year, in large part because Yoh becomes captain for his team.
* SchoolOfNoStudying: The closest anyone in the main cast ever comes to anything academic is when Yoh ponders what to study in college. The only official school events that even get brought up are a ceremony to welcome incoming freshmen, a school athletic festival, and a graduation speech. Otherwise, school just seems to be where they all hang out and have lunch, and homework is never an issue.
* SchoolOfNoStudying: The closest anyone in the main cast ever comes to anything academic is when Yoh ponders what to study in college. The only official school events that even get brought up are a ceremony to welcome incoming freshmen, a school athletic festival, and a graduation speech. Otherwise, school just seems to be where they all hang out and have lunch, and homework is never an issue.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Yoh's ex-girlfriend, whose retiring personality inspires Haruna's protective and nuturing instincts.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted. [[spoiler:Yoh tells Haruna during the overnight trip that he's never been with another girl.]]
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted. [[spoiler:Yoh tells Haruna during ArtisticLicenseBiology: InUniverse example: A first year boy kisses Haruna, sending her into [[HeroicBSOD catatonic depression]]. He comes to school the overnight trip next day with his head shaved, asking Yoh to hit him, and promising that he's never been with another girl.]]he'll take responsibility if she's pregnant.
* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted. [[spoiler:Yoh tells Haruna during the overnight trip that he's never been with another girl.]]
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* [[ArtisticLicenseBiology You Fail Biology Forever]]: InUniverse example: A first year boy kisses Haruna, sending her into [[HeroicBSOD catatonic depression]]. He comes to school the next day with his head shaved, asking Yoh to hit him, and promising that he'll take responsibility if she's pregnant.
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* GenkiGirl: Haruna full stop. When it is almost haruna's 17 birthday her parents revile that Haruna has been very energetic since birth.
** Leona is also very energetic and tries to beat Haruna at any competition, even when they are on the same team.
** Leona is also very energetic and tries to beat Haruna at any competition, even when they are on the same team.
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* HeroicBSOD: Asami pretty much freezes into a JawDrop when [[spoiler: Haruna asks Yoh on an overnight trip]]. Asami returns the favor when [[spoiler: she tells Haruna that such trips are usually planned for sex.]]
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* JawDrop: The entire Nagishima family when Haruna asks [[spoiler:if she can go on an 'overnight trip' with Yoh, despite her not knowing what it truly means]].
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* JawDrop: The entire Nagishima family when Haruna asks [[spoiler:if she can go on an 'overnight trip' with Yoh, despite her not knowing what it truly means]]. Later in the same chapter, their entire circle of friends repeats the jaw drop when [[spoiler: Haruna asks Yoh on said overnight trip]]. Asami holds the pose for several panels.
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* RomanticWingman: Mami, who helps Haruna to the best of her ability (which, by her own admission, is pretty limited) with how to pursue relationships and, later, [[spoiler: how to handle being in a relationship with Yoh]]. Haruna draws pretty clear parallels to how Mami used to do that on the softball field - Mami was the catcher who would give Haruna, the pitcher, the instructions to make the most of her talents.
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* JawDrop: The entire Nagishima family when Haruna asks [[spoiler:if she can go on an 'overnight trip' with Yoh, despite her not knowing what it truly means]].
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Yoh and Haruna.
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Yoh [[spoiler:Yoh and Haruna.]]
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Yoh and Haruna.
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* BullyingADragon: The junior and senior girls who decide to make Haruna suffer [[spoiler: after she and Yoh start dating]] did not think their plan to get violent all the way through. [[spoiler: In flashback, it's shown that Haruna didn't even have to go on the attack for all of them - one hurt her head trying to headbutt Haruna, and another injured her wrist trying to punch her in the stomach.]]
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* HoYay / LesYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler:She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler:Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler:the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss. "so soft..." ]]
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* [[ArtisticLicenseBiology You Fail Biology Forever]]: InUniverse example: A first year boy kisses Haruna, sending her into [[HeroicBSOD catatonic depression]]. He comes to school the next day with his head shaved, asking Yoh to hit him, and promising that he'll take responsibility if she's pregnant.
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* CryingWolf: Asaoka is rarely serious about anything he says and makes promises only to manipulate a loophole in his words. So when he [[spoiler:confesses to Haruna]], even after promising Yoh he wouldn't, she just smiles at him and says, "I'm not falling for that!" Possibly subverted, since there's no way of knowing if he was being honest.
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* CryingWolf: Asaoka is rarely serious about anything he says and makes promises only to manipulate a loophole in his words. So when he [[spoiler:confesses to Haruna]], Haruna, even after promising Yoh he wouldn't, wouldn't]], she just smiles at him and says, "I'm not falling for that!" Possibly subverted, since there's no way of knowing if he was being honest.
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* CryingWolf: Asaoka is rarely serious about anything he says and makes promises only to manipulate a loophole in his words. So when he [[spoiler:confesses to Haruna]], even after promising Yoh he wouldn't, she just smiles at him and says, "I'm not falling for that!" Possibly subverted, since there's no way of knowing if he was being honest.
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*TheGadfly: Asami. And how! The girl goes out of her way to provoke 'interesting' reactions from Haruna, mostly out of jealousy for stealing away Yoh's attention.
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* [[DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength Does Not Know Her Own Strength]]: Haruna is a milder case, and usually for side gags. She seems blissfully uncaring about the fact that she tops all of the female strength tests during her physical, hurts Asami when she demonstrates the difference in their grip strength, and nearly knocks the wind out of Yoh at one point when she playfully slaps him on the back.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Asami behaves this way toward Yoh once she realizes he's serious about Haruna, despite the fact that she's Yoh's sister and has a boyfriend of her own.
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* HoYay / LesYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler: She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler: Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler: the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss. "so soft..." ]]
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* HoYay / LesYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler: Haruna [[spoiler:Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss. "so soft..." ]]
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** [[spoiler:Subverted. Asaoka decides not to confess to Haruna, only to do so, but she doesn't take him seriously because he's always such a joker.]]
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** [[spoiler:Subverted. Asaoka Subverted. [[spoiler:Asaoka decides not to confess to Haruna, only to do so, but she doesn't take him seriously because he's always such a joker.]]
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* InformedAbility: Several of the so-called "cute" characters (most notably, Leona) don't appear all that attractive. This may be ValuesDissonance, though--maybe the "so much eyeliner, she looks like a raccoon" look is popular in Japan right now.
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* InformedAbility: InformedAttractiveness: Several of the so-called "cute" characters (most notably, Leona) don't appear all that attractive. This may be ValuesDissonance, though--maybe the "so much eyeliner, she looks like a raccoon" look is popular in Japan right now.
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* NoManWantsAnAmazon: Haruna worries about this and tries to hide her physical competence at one point.
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* NoManWantsAnAmazon: NoGuyWantsAnAmazon: Haruna worries about this and tries to hide her physical competence at one point.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Asami behaves this way toward Yoh once she realizes he's serious about Haruna, despite the fact that she's Yoh's sister and has a boyfriend of her own.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Haruna worries about this after reading some of her younger brother's magazines [[spoiler:when she's just innocently invited Yoh on an overnight trip. Fortunately for Haruna's nerves, Yoh manages not to live up (or down) to the stereotype.]]
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* AllMenArePerverts: Haruna worries about this after reading some of her younger brother's magazines [[spoiler:when she's just innocently invited Yoh on an overnight trip. ]] Fortunately for Haruna's nerves, Yoh [[spoiler:Yoh manages not to live up (or down) to the stereotype.]]
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** But typically played straight in the selection of class captains for the Sports Festival. It's a "beauty contest" for the female captains, while the male captains are usually rugged sporting types. [[spoiler:The other male captains are shocked when Yoh is selected to represent his year.]]
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* MenAreStrongWomenArePretty: Reversed. [[spoiler:Haruna is noted for her physical strength, while Yoh is noted primarily for his looks.]]
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* MenAreStrongWomenArePretty: Reversed. [[spoiler:Haruna Haruna is noted for her physical strength, while Yoh is noted primarily for his looks.]]
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* AllMenArePerverts: Haruna worries about this after reading some of her younger brother's magazines [[spoiler:when she's just innocently invited Yoh on an overnight trip. Fortunately for Haruna's nerves, Yoh manages not to live up (or down) to the stereotype.]]
* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted. [[spoiler:Yoh tells Haruna during the overnight trip that he's never been with another girl.]]
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* GraduateFromTheStory
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* HoYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler: She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler: Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler: the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss. "so soft..." ]]
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* HoYay: HoYay / LesYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler: She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler: Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler: the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss. "so soft..." ]]
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* LockedInAFreezer: A mild example. [[spoiler:Leona locks up Haruna and Yoh, hoping they'll quarrel over the meager resources and break up as a result.]] It doesn't work.
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* MenAreStrongWomenArePretty: Reversed. [[spoiler:Haruna is noted for her physical strength, while Yoh is noted primarily for his looks.]]
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** Haruna also becomes close friends to Yoh's sister Asami, who is rather feminine.
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* TemporaryBulkChange: When Haruna is led to believe that [[spoiler:Yoh wants to break up with her,]] she starts eating huge amounts of food and appears quite rotund for about half a chapter. In the next chapter, she is seen jogging in a "sauna suit" to work off the weight and already appears normal.
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* TheVoiceless: Akito. [[spoiler:He finally takes in Chapter 39.]]
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* TheVoiceless: Akito. [[spoiler:He finally takes talks in Chapter 39.]]
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* TrappedInTheCloset: Leona does this to Yoh and Haruna to get them fighting. It not only fails, it backfires (though it did lead them to decide to cancel a snowboarding trip).
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* HoYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler: She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler: Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler: the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss.]]
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* HoYay: At one point, Yoh's sister Asami starts to doubt her attractiveness, so she tries making eyes with Haruna to see if she still can seduce someone. [[spoiler: She can, and Yoh stops Asami right before she tempts Haruna into kissing her.]] Later, [[spoiler: Haruna gets so despondent over another guy kissing her that she considers running off to become a nun. In order to shock Haruna and show her it's no big deal, Yoh ''also'' kisses the guy. It also shocks all of their friends.]] To cap it off, [[spoiler: the guy in question afterwards marvels about the kiss. "so soft..." ]]
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Not just a dye job, actually. Compare [[http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/characters/14/42200.jpg the Fumiya from the manga]] to [[http://s3.amazonaws.com/data.tumblr.com/tumblr_lsm443vubz1qckvn1o11_r2_1280.jpg?AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAJ6IHWSU3BX3X7X3Q&Expires=1319809208&Signature=6gDZG2s7VeWk%2BAOsuG2mc0XDuhU%3D the Fumiya from the]] LiveActionAdaptation.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Not just a dye job, actually. Compare [[http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/characters/14/42200.jpg the Fumiya from the manga]] to [[http://s3.amazonaws.com/data.tumblr.com/tumblr_lsm443vubz1qckvn1o11_r2_1280.jpg?AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAJ6IHWSU3BX3X7X3Q&Expires=1319809208&Signature=6gDZG2s7VeWk%2BAOsuG2mc0XDuhU%3D [[http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_TOmy2IqK-yA/TN-705l8wNI/AAAAAAAACDY/qijn_UqtxSM/s1600/20101112_koukou1.jpeg.jpg the Fumiya from the]] LiveActionAdaptation.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Go ahead, just ''try'' mistreating a girl in Fumiya's presence. Also his BerserkButton and, in the present time incident involving Assa, a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Go ahead, just ''try'' mistreating a girl in Fumiya's presence. Also his BerserkButton and, in the present time incident involving Assa, Asami, a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Compare the Fumiya from the manga to the Fumiya from the LiveActionAdaptation.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Not just a dye job, actually. Compare [[http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/characters/14/42200.jpg the Fumiya from the manga manga]] to [[http://s3.amazonaws.com/data.tumblr.com/tumblr_lsm443vubz1qckvn1o11_r2_1280.jpg?AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAJ6IHWSU3BX3X7X3Q&Expires=1319809208&Signature=6gDZG2s7VeWk%2BAOsuG2mc0XDuhU%3D the Fumiya from the the]] LiveActionAdaptation.
