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** Claire does it again in episode 9, this time to Kanata in order to get her to cool down before the tournament.
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** Claire does it again in episode 9, nine, this time to Kanata in order to get her to cool down before the tournament.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: During the match between Harukana and Eclair, Akari not only doesn't mind being called [[EmbarrassingNickname "Shii-chan"]], she actually dances the Happy Shequasar song in order to cheer for her classmates.
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* BigLittleSister: Despite being the younger of the two, Kanna Aragaki is slightly taller than her older sister Youna.
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* BigLittleSister: Despite being the younger of the two, Kanna Aragaki is slightly taller than her older sister sister, Youna.
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* EvolvingCredits: Akari is included in the ending credits from Episode 7 onwards where she tries to wake up Haruka when the latter is sleeping in the classroom.
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* EvolvingCredits: Akari is included in the ending credits from Episode 7 onwards episode seven onwards, where she tries to wake up Haruka when the latter is sleeping in the classroom.
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* SempaiKohai: Of the pair, Ai is more senior than Mai, having introduced Mai to volleyball and encouraging Mai that height is of no object in the sport.
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* SempaiKohai: SempaiKohai:
** Of the pair, Ai is more senior than Mai, having introduced Mai to volleyball and encouraging Mai that height is of no object in the sport.
** Of the pair, Ai is more senior than Mai, having introduced Mai to volleyball and encouraging Mai that height is of no object in the sport.
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* SiblingTeam: Besides the Thomas sisters, there's sister team Youna and Kanna Aragaki.
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* SiblingTeam: Besides the Thomas sisters, there's sister team Youna and Kanna Aragaki.Aragaki are sisters and also a beach volleyball pair that make an appearance in episode nine.
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* UnknownRival: When Kanna Aragaki declares her intent on defeating Claire, the latter doesn't even remember her until Emily reminds her.
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* UnknownRival: When Kanna Aragaki declares confronts Claire and states her intent on aim of defeating Claire, the latter doesn't even remember her, Claire does not recall playing her until Emily reminds her.jogs her memory
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* BigLittleSister: Despite being the younger of the two Kanna Aragaki is slightly taller than her older sister Youna.
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* BigLittleSister: Despite being the younger of the two two, Kanna Aragaki is slightly taller than her older sister Youna.
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** Akari is the junior of her team, being a year younger than Haruka, Kanata and Emily and Clair.
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* EvolvingCredits: Akari is included in the ending credits from Episode 7 onwards where she tries to wake up Haruka when the latter is sleeping in the classroom.
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* CooldownHug: Ayasa hugs a [[HeroicBSOD devastated]] Narumi from the behind as second episode draws to a close.
* CranialEruption: Emily does not hesitate to set Claire straight with force, hitting her on the head whenever she becomes too unfocused.
* CranialEruption: Emily does not hesitate to set Claire straight with force, hitting her on the head whenever she becomes too unfocused.
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* CooldownHug: Ayasa hugs a [[HeroicBSOD devastated]] Narumi from the behind as second episode draws to a close.
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* CranialEruption: Emily does not hesitate to set Claire straight with force, hitting her on the head whenever shebecomes too unfocused.steps out of line.
* CranialEruption: Emily does not hesitate to set Claire straight with force, hitting her on the head whenever she
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Marissa drives her Hummer like a beast. Her daughters are already used to it so they prepare. Haruka, Kanata and Akari were not.
* {{Eagleland}}: Marissa is a mild example of a type-2 Eaglelander, driving a massive Hummer around Okinawa and dressing her daughters in Stars-and-Stripes bikinis for their childhood beach volleyball tournaments.
* {{Eagleland}}: Marissa is a mild example of a type-2 Eaglelander, driving a massive Hummer around Okinawa and dressing her daughters in Stars-and-Stripes bikinis for their childhood beach volleyball tournaments.
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Marissa drives her Hummer like a beast. Her daughters Marissa's driving is terrifying, and she performs manoeuvres that are already used to it so they prepare. quite over-the-top. Having grown up with her, Claire and Emily brace themselves for a rough ride that leaves Haruka, Kanata and Akari were not.
visibly worse for wear.
* {{Eagleland}}: Marissais a mild example of a type-2 Eaglelander, displays very American traits, driving a massive Hummer around Okinawa and dressing outfitting her daughters in with Stars-and-Stripes bikinis for their childhood beach volleyball tournaments.
* {{Eagleland}}: Marissa
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* HugeSchoolgirl: Most of the beach volleyball players are taller than average, since height confers an advantage in this sport. Haruka stands as being one of the tallest in the cast, at 172 cm (5'7½").
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* HugeSchoolgirl: Most of the beach volleyball players are taller than average, since height confers an advantage in this sport. Haruka stands as being one of the tallest in the cast, at 172 cm (5'7½").
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Males are entirely absent in the series. Haruka's class is entirely female, and no males are seen in the airport or the shopping mall. Kanata's grandfather is mentioned, but has yet to make an appearance (apart from one short scene with no lines, seen in the dark from behind, struggling to land a fish).
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Males are entirely absent in the series. Haruka's class is entirely female, and no males are seen in the airport or the shopping mall. Kanata's grandfather is mentioned, but has yet to make an appearance (apart only seen from one short scene with behind once and has no lines, seen in the dark from behind, struggling to land a fish).dialogue.
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* SeriousBusiness: Akari takes protection against the sun very seriously, always using sunscreen and covering herself when not in swimsuit.
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearing revealing swimsuits or walking about in skimpy outfits, to Emily's chagrin.
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearing revealing swimsuits or walking about in skimpy outfits, to Emily's chagrin.
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* SeriousBusiness: Akari takes protection against from the sun very seriously, always using sunscreen seriously. She typically wears long-sleeves as a part of her outfit and covering herself when not in swimsuit.
a swimsuit, judiciously applies sunscreen.
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearingrevealing skimpy swimsuits or walking about in skimpy revealing outfits, to Emily's chagrin.
* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearing
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* StatuesqueStunner: Marissa Thomas is actually taller than Haruka, and is a total stunner as noticed by Akari.
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* StatuesqueStunner: Marissa Thomas is actually taller than Haruka, Haruka and as a consequence of constantly training, is a total stunner as noticed by Akari.in excellent shape.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Males are entirely absent in the series. Haruka's class is entirely female, and no males are seen in the airport or the shopping mall. Kanata's grandfather is mentioned, but has yet to make an appearance.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: Males are entirely absent in the series. Haruka's class is entirely female, and no males are seen in the airport or the shopping mall. Kanata's grandfather is mentioned, but has yet to make an appearance.appearance (apart from one short scene with no lines, seen in the dark from behind, struggling to land a fish).
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* {{Eagleland}}: Marissa is a mild example of a type-2 Eaglelander, driving a massive Hummer around Okinawa and dressing her daughters in Stars-and-Stripes bikinis for their childhood beach volleyball tournaments.
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Marissa drives her Hummer like a beast. Her daughters are already used to it so they prepare. Haruka, Kanata and Akari were not.
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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearing skimpy swimsuits or walking about in skimpy outfits, to Emily's chagrin.
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* SeriousBusiness: Akari takes protection against the sun very seriously, always using sunscreen and covering herself when not in swimsuit.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Kanata's training and experience allow her to read a beginner like Akari just as easily as an open book.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Kanata's training With her experience, Kanata is able to accurately predict and experience allow her to read a beginner like assess each of Akari's moves during their one-on-one competition, besting Akari just as easily as an open book.at every turn.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Kanata grows embarrassed whenever Haruka refers to her as "Demon Coach".
** Akari doesn't like being called "Shi-chan" because it reminds her of a commercial she did when she was a child.
** Akari doesn't like being called "Shi-chan" because it reminds her of a commercial she did when she was a child.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: EmbarrassingNickname:
** Kanata grows embarrassed whenever Haruka refers to her as "Demon Coach".
** Akari doesn't like beingcalled "Shi-chan" because it addressed as "Shii-chan", as the name reminds her of her role in a commercial she did when she was she'd done as a child.
** Kanata grows embarrassed whenever Haruka refers to her as "Demon Coach".
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Kanata realizes Akari feels lonely and wanted to become a volleyball idol so people would talk to her again.
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Kanata realizes Akari feels lonely and wanted Akari's desire to become a volleyball idol so stems from her wanting people would talk to her again.speak with her.
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* MumLooksLikeASister: Marissa certainly doesn't look like the mother of two teenagers.
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* MumLooksLikeASister: Marissa certainly doesn't look like Claire and Emily's mother, Marissa, appears youthful enough to be the mother of two teenagers.twins' sister despite being their mother.
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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearing revealing swimsuits, which greatly annoys her more modest sister Emily.
* SpitTake: Akari does it when Haruka bluntly asks her if she feels lonely.
* SpitTake: Akari does it when Haruka bluntly asks her if she feels lonely.
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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: Claire doesn't mind wearing revealing swimsuits, which greatly annoys her more modest sister Emily.
skimpy swimsuits or walking about in skimpy outfits, to Emily's chagrin.
* SpitTake: Akaridoes it when spews out her drink after Haruka bluntly openly asks her if she feels lonely.
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** Akari doesn't like being called "Shi-chan" because it reminds her of a commercial she did when she was a child.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Kanata realizes Akari feels lonely and wanted to become a volleyball idol so people would talk to her again.
* MumLooksLikeASister: Marissa certainly doesn't look like the mother of two teenagers.
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* SpitTake: Akari does it when Haruka bluntly asks her if she feels lonely.
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* ColorFailure: Haruka was shocked when Claire tells her her swimsuit bottom is a bit loose and Claire "keeps seeing flashes of what's undernerth."
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* ColorFailure: Haruka was is shocked when Claire tells informs her her that swimsuit bottom is a bit loose and Claire "keeps seeing flashes ill-fitting, with "flashes of what's undernerth."underneath" being quite visible.
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* CoolOldLady: Kanata and Haruka's grandmother Sora is a kind and caring lady who looks after both of them.
* CranialEruption: Multiple times in the fourth episode, especially when Claire is being silly.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Kanata finds a bit embarrassing whenever Haruka calls her "Demon Coach".
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Kanata finds a bit embarrassing grows embarrassed whenever Haruka calls refers to her as "Demon Coach".
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* IntellectualAnimal: Kamekichi aces Kanata's volleyball hand signal quiz by walking across the table in the correct direction.
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* IntellectualAnimal: Kamekichi aces is able to flawlessly answers Kanata's volleyball hand signal quiz by walking across the table in the correct direction.appropriate direction corresponding to the signal.
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** The shopping mall the girls go to buy swimming suits is Aeon Mall Okinawa Rycom, Okinawa's largest mall.
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** The shopping mall the girls go to buy swimming suits is Haruka and Kanata purchase swimsuits from Aeon Mall Okinawa Rycom, Okinawa's which is the largest mall.shopping centre in Okinawa.
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* SempaiKohai: Ai and Mai are a senior/junior team, in contrast with Kanata and Haruka, who are the same age.
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* SempaiKohai: Of the pair, Ai is more senior than Mai, having introduced Mai to volleyball and encouraging Mai are a senior/junior team, that height is of no object in contrast with Kanata and Haruka, who are the same age.sport.
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* TenderTears: Ai and Mai shed some after losing against Harukana, promising each other to do better next game.
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* TenderTears: After losing to Haruka and Kanata, Ai and Mai shed some after losing against Harukana, promising each other cry; Mai feels as though she'd been holding Ai back, while Ai feels she's misled Mai about volleyball being a sport where shorter people can still perform. The two reaffirm their intention to do better next game.continue playing together as a pair.
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* WardrobeMalfunction: After Claire alerts Haruka that she's exposing her bottom half when jumping, Haruka is prompted to make some adjustments.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Although probably intended to be black and dark-brown, Mai has dark purple hair and Ai has brownish-green hair.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Although probably intended to be black and dark-brown, Mai has dark purple hair and Ai has brownish-green hair.
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* WardrobeMalfunction: After Claire alerts Haruka that she's exposing her bottom half when jumping, Haruka is prompted to make some adjustments.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Although probably intended to be black and dark-brown, Mai has dark purple hair and Ai has brownish-green hair.adjustments.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Although probably intended to be black and dark-brown, Mai has dark purple hair and Ai has brownish-green hair.
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* IntellectualAnimal: Kamekichi is able to correctly answer Kanata's volleyball hand signal quiz by walking across the table in the correct direction.
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* IntellectualAnimal: Kamekichi is able to correctly answer Kanata's volleyball signal quiz by walking across the table.
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* ColorFailure: Haruka was shocked when Claire tells her her swimsuit bottom is a bit loose and Claire "keeps seeing flashes of what's undernerth."
* CranialEruption: Multiple times in the fourth episode, especially when Claire is being silly.
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* RealPlaceBackground: Haruka and Kanata play beach volleyball on the shores of Kinbu Bay. In the distance, the Henza, Miyagi and Ikei islands are visible, along with the distinct red tower of the Kaichu Doro Bridge.
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* RealPlaceBackground: RealPlaceBackground:
** Haruka and Kanata play beach volleyball on the shores of Kinbu Bay. In the distance, the Henza, Miyagi and Ikei islands are visible, along with the distinct red tower of the Kaichu DoroBridge.Bridge.
** The shopping mall the girls go to buy swimming suits is Aeon Mall Okinawa Rycom, Okinawa's largest mall.
** Haruka and Kanata play beach volleyball on the shores of Kinbu Bay. In the distance, the Henza, Miyagi and Ikei islands are visible, along with the distinct red tower of the Kaichu Doro
** The shopping mall the girls go to buy swimming suits is Aeon Mall Okinawa Rycom, Okinawa's largest mall.
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* CoolOldLady: Kanata and Haruka's grandmother Sora is a kind and caring lady who looks after both of them.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Kanata finds a bit embarrassing whenever Haruka calls her "Demon Coach".
* SempaiKohai: Ai and Mai are a senior/junior team, in contrast with Kanata and Haruka, who are the same age.
* TenderTears: Ai and Mai shed some after losing against Harukana, promising each other to do better next game.
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* WardrobeMalfunction: After Claire alerts Haruka that she's exposing her bottom half when jumping, Haruka is prompted to make some adjustments.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Although probably intended to be black and dark-brown, Mai has dark purple hair and Ai has brownish-green hair.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each episode title comes from a line of dialogue in the same episode.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each episode title comes from a line of dialogue in the same episode.
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** Haruka as Red and Kanata as Blue
** Claire as Red and Emily as Blue
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is Blue, with her quieter personality.
** Claireas is hot-headed and bold, being the Red and oni to Emily's Blue; Emily as Blue is more rational and reserved of the two.
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* {{Gainaxing}}: Haruka does this when practicing blocking shots.
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* {{Gainaxing}}: Haruka does this is the most prone to bouncing, seen when she is practicing blocking shots.shots and when trying to bounce the frills on a swimsuit that she's trying on.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: There are no male characters. Even in the scenes at the airport and the shopping mall, there were no males. And Kanata and Haruka's grandfather is mentioned but not seen.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: There Males are no male characters. Even entirely absent in the scenes at the airport and the shopping mall, there were no males. And Kanata and series. Haruka's class is entirely female, and no males are seen in the airport or the shopping mall. Kanata's grandfather is mentioned mentioned, but not seen.has yet to make an appearance.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Haruka and Kanata have this dynamic, with Haruka as the Red and Kanata as the blue. Emily and Claire also have this dynamic, with Emily as the Blue and Claire as the Red.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Haruka and Kanata have this dynamic, with RedOniBlueOni:
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* {{Gainaxing}}: Haruka does this when practicing blocking shots.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: There are no male characters. Even in the scene at the airport, there were no males. And Kanata and Haruka's grandfather is mentioned but not seen.
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* ImprobablyFemaleCast: There are no male characters. Even in the scene scenes at the airport, airport and the shopping mall, there were no males. And Kanata and Haruka's grandfather is mentioned but not seen.
* RedOniBlueOni: Haruka and Kanata have this dynamic, with Haruka as the Red and Kanata as the blue. Emily and Claire also have this dynamic, with Emily as the Blue and Claire as the Red.
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* WalkingSwimsuitScene: As a series about beach volleyball, the cast is frequently seen in their swimsuits.
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* WalkingSwimsuitScene: As a series about beach volleyball, the cast is frequently seen in their swimsuits.swimsuits.
* WardrobeMalfunction: Claire warns Haruka about the dangers of exposing her lower half while jumping.
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** PlayedForDrama in Kanata's case. She is unhappy with her diminutive height and wishes she were taller because it affects her ability to play beach volleyball. [[spoiler:What makes it particularly worse is she ''was'' tall when she was an elementary school student (151cm/ 5'), but not having grown much since puberty means she's shorter than average.]]
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** PlayedForDrama in Kanata's case. She Kanata is unhappy with her diminutive height (151cm / 5') and wishes she were taller because it affects her ability to play beach volleyball. [[spoiler:What makes it particularly worse is she ''was'' In particular, [[spoiler: Kanata was considered tall when she was an elementary school student (151cm/ 5'), in grade school, but not having grown much since puberty means she's grew little during puberty, leaving her shorter than average.]]average]].
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Among the Thomas twins, Claire is the airhead GenkiGirl while Emily is more serious.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsiblySibling: Among the Thomas twins, Claire is the airhead GenkiGirl while Emily is more serious.
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* ButNotTooForeign: Emily and Claire both sport blonde hair, leading Haruka to assume they're English speakers. When she converses with them, however, she's surprised that they can speak Japanese.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsiblySibling: Among the Thomas twins, Claire is the airhead GenkiGirl while Emily is more serious.
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* HeightAngst: Haruka finds that her height makes it difficult to shop for clothing, and also makes her stand out in a crowd. By comparison, Kanata is unhappy with her diminutive height and wishes she were taller because it affects her ability to play beach volleyball.
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* HeightAngst: GenkiGirl: Haruka and Claire are friendly and outgoing girls, which contrast well with their teammates: Kanata is gloomy, while Emily is more serious.
* HeightAngst:
** Haruka finds that her height makes it difficult to shop for clothing, and also makes her stand out in acrowd. By comparison, Kanata crowd.
** PlayedForDrama in Kanata's case. She is unhappy with her diminutive height and wishes she were taller because it affects her ability to play beachvolleyball.volleyball. [[spoiler:What makes it particularly worse is she ''was'' tall when she was an elementary school student (151cm/ 5'), but not having grown much since puberty means she's shorter than average.]]
* HeightAngst:
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** PlayedForDrama in Kanata's case. She is unhappy with her diminutive height and wishes she were taller because it affects her ability to play beach
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* {{Portmanteau}}: Beach volleyball teams are often named as a portmanteau of its members' names. For example, the titular Harukana consists of Haruka and Kana, while '''E'''mily and '''Clair'''e's team is called Eclair.
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* {{Portmanteau}}: Beach volleyball teams are often named as a portmanteau of its members' names. For example, the titular Harukana consists of Haruka and Kana, Kanata, while '''E'''mily and '''Clair'''e's team is called Eclair.
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Its anime adaptation was released as a part of the Summer 2018 anime lineup; it is directed by Toshiyuki Kubooka and is produced by [=C2C=]. Creator/{{Funimation}}'s Simuldub of the anime series premiered on July 24th, 2018. Watch it [[https://funimation.com/shows/harukana-receive/ here]].
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Its anime adaptation was released as a part of the Summer 2018 anime lineup; it is directed by Toshiyuki Kubooka and is produced by [=C2C=]. Creator/{{Funimation}}'s Simuldub of the anime series premiered on July 24th, 2018. Watch it The series can be watched [[https://funimation.com/shows/harukana-receive/ here]].
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Haruka and Claire quickly become friends because of how similar they are.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Haruka and Claire quickly become friends because of how similar they are.share similarly outgoing personalities and rapidly befriend one another.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: In the second episode, Ayasa tells Haruka she is this towards the prospect that Narumi will play with Kanata again.
* CooldownHug: Ayasa hugs a [[HeroicBSOD devastated]] Narumi from the behind at the end of the second episode.
* CuteLittleFangs: Claire shows them on occasion, which fit her energetic personality.
* CooldownHug: Ayasa hugs a [[HeroicBSOD devastated]] Narumi from the behind at the end of the second episode.
* CuteLittleFangs: Claire shows them on occasion, which fit her energetic personality.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: In the second episode, Ayasa tells Haruka she is this towards the prospect that she has no intention of allowing Narumi will to play with alongside Kanata again.
again should Kanata resume playing beach volleyball.
* CooldownHug: Ayasa hugs a [[HeroicBSOD devastated]] Narumi from the behindat the end of the as second episode.
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* CuteLittleFangs: Claireshows them on occasion, which fit is occasionally depicted with fangs, befitting of her energetic personality.and mischievous character.
* CooldownHug: Ayasa hugs a [[HeroicBSOD devastated]] Narumi from the behind
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* FlirtatiousSmackOnTheAss: Prior to their rematch in episode two, Ayasa slaps Haruka's ass and compliments her on having a nice posterior, to Haruka's embarrassment.
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** Claire likes spanking her sister to tease her, much to Emily's bemusement.
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** Prior to their rematch in episode two, Ayasa slaps Haruka's ass and compliments her on having a nice posterior, to Haruka's embarrassment.
** Clairelikes spanking spanks her sister to tease her, much to Emily's bemusement.embarrassment.
** Prior to their rematch in episode two, Ayasa slaps Haruka's ass and compliments her on having a nice posterior, to Haruka's embarrassment.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: While only seen in a flashback so far, the Thomas twins look very similar to their mother Marissa.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: While only seen in a flashback so far, the The Thomas twins look very similar to their mother mother, Marissa.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Haruka and Claire quickly become friends because of how similar they are.
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* CuteLittleFangs: Claire shows them on occasion, which fit her energetic personality.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: While only seen in a flashback so far, the Thomas twins look very similar to their mother Marissa.
