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* ''VisualNovel/TheHayseedKnight'': Ader was a chubby guy when he first arrived in the city of Erylum, but after a year of barely escaping starvation in the [[WretchedHive Slander District]], he's fairly scrawny. Sep, whose life he helped save shortly after arrival, takes a while to recognize that he's the same person from back then.
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* ''VisualNovel/TheHayseedKnight'': Ader was a chubby guy when he first arrived in the city of Erylum, Eyrlum, but after a year of barely escaping starvation in the [[WretchedHive Slander District]], he's fairly scrawny. Sep, whose life he helped save shortly after arrival, takes a while to recognize that he's the same person from back then.
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* ''VisualNovel/RootLetter'': In [[spoiler:Jun Omori]]'s high-school days, he was called Fatty, and was indeed obese. Then he got inspired to change for the sake of his dream job as a cake shop owner (because he believed no one would wanna buy from a fat cake shop owner as it implies lack of self-control), so he entered an exercise program and became a fit, handsome adult. Max, who is looking for him, initially misses him completely because he spends time looking for a fat man, not realizing the possibility that he is this until he sees a picture of him in a brochure for the exercise program.
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* ''VisualNovel/TheHayseedKnight'': Ader was a chubby guy when he first arrived in the city of Erylum, but after a year of barely escaping starvation in the [[WretchedHive Slander District]], he's fairly scrawny. Sep, whose life he helped save shortly after arrival, takes a while to recognize that he's the same person from back then.
* ''VisualNovel/RootLetter'': In [[spoiler:Jun Omori]]'s high-school days, he was called Fatty, and was indeed obese. Then he got inspired to change for the sake of his dream job as a cake shop owner (because he believed no one would wanna buy from a fat cake shop owner as it implies lack of self-control), so he entered an exercise program and became a fit, handsome adult. Max, who is looking for him, initially misses him completely because he spends time looking for a fat man, not realizing the possibility that he is this until he sees a picture of him in a brochure for the exercise program.
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* ''VisualNovel/TheHayseedKnight'': Ader was a chubby guy when he first arrived in the city of Erylum, but after a year of barely escaping starvation in the [[WretchedHive Slander District]], he's fairly scrawny. Sep, whose life he helped save shortly after arrival, takes a while to recognize that he's the same person from back then.
* ''VisualNovel/RootLetter'': In [[spoiler:Jun Omori]]'s high-school days, he was called Fatty, and was indeed obese. Then he got inspired to change for the sake of his dream job as a cake shop owner (because he believed no one would wanna buy from a fat cake shop owner as it implies lack of self-control), so he entered an exercise program and became a fit, handsome adult. Max, who is looking for him, initially misses him completely because he spends time looking for a fat man, not realizing the possibility that he is this until he sees a picture of him in a brochure for the exercise program.
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* Martha Abbott in Zilpha Keatley Snyder's ''Literature/TheChangeling'' begins as "a little fat for a seven-year-old" and is labeled "the quiet fat one" by her classmates. By the time she enters high school, she's slimmed down and turned into EveryoneLovesBlondes (intelligent edition) and is referred to as "the cool blonde who's in all the school plays."
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* Martha Abbott in Zilpha Keatley Snyder's ''Literature/TheChangeling'' ''Literature/TheChangeling1970'' begins as "a little fat for a seven-year-old" and is labeled "the quiet fat one" by her classmates. By the time she enters high school, she's slimmed down and turned into EveryoneLovesBlondes (intelligent edition) and is referred to as "the cool blonde who's in all the school plays."
