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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Both the Red Knight and the Wyrm of Erch lose an arm in their battle against Ash.]]
* BeePeople: The boglins are insectoid in appearance, live in large underground hives, and have a [[HiveCasteSystem caste system that resembles an ant colony.]]
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* BloodKnight: Thomas Lachlan, AKA Bad Tom, loves nothing more than a good fight.
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* BloodKnight: Thomas Lachlan, AKA also known as Bad Tom, loves nothing more than a good fight. Jean de Vrailly is a villainous example
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Jean de Vrailly is horrified when his companions kill a group of enemy knights from afar with crossbows, givng them no chance to defend themselves and thus denying them an honorable death.
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* FrenchJerk: Almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King, an insane rapist, is actually a puppet for his [[EvilChancellor chancellor]], who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of [[KarmicDeath karmic retribution]] off screen when the Wild slaughters most of their knights.]]
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* FrenchJerk: Almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. d'Eu. The King, an insane rapist, is actually a puppet for his [[EvilChancellor chancellor]], who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their ends, their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild Wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which magic (which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their Wild) and their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths psychopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. insults.
** [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books andsucceeds. He eventually succeeds in the third book. The Gallish knights essentially turns turn the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons imprison and executes execute large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they rape against the common people. They also imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of [[KarmicDeath karmic retribution]] off screen when the Wild slaughters most of their knights.]]
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* MonsterKnight: Tapio Haltija, also known as the Faerie Knight, is a powerful and famed Irk warrior who rides a giant white stag into battle.
* MonsterKnight: Tapio Haltija, also known as the Faerie Knight, is a powerful and famed Irk warrior who rides a giant white stag into battle.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Abbess has had many lovers, including the magus Richard Plangere [[spoiler: before he fell and became known as Thorn]] and the King. The King himself, before his current wife, had even asked for her hand in marriage.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Abbess of Lissen Carrak has had many lovers, including the magus Richard Plangere [[spoiler: before he fell and became known as Thorn]] and the King. The King himself, before his current wife, had even asked for her hand in marriage.
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: At the end of the second book, Harmodius fights [[EvilChancellor Aeskepiles]] in the latter's mind palace, destroying his consciousness and taking over his body.]]
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* BodySurf: Thorn is capable of taking over his minions' bodies, if necessary. [[spoiler: Also, Harmodius transfers his consciousness into the Red Knight after his death in the material world. The two share a body until the end of the second book.]]
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* CourtMage: Harmodius fills this role, as did his mentor and predecessor Richard Plangere [[spoiler: before he became Thorn.]]
* HairTriggerTemper: Thorn is an incredibly powerful magician, but he's also easily provoked and prone to sudden emotional outbursts, resulting in a number of serious tactical blunders during his siege of Lissen Carrak. He seems to learn from his mistakes, though, as he's notably more composed in his later appearances.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Abbess has had many lovers, including the magus Thorn Richard Plangere [[spoiler: before he fell and became known as Thorn]] and the King. The King himself, before his current wife, had even asked for her hand in marriage.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: One of the main reasons why the Wild and the human kingdoms have warred against each other for so long is that neither side understands the mentality of the other. While many creatures of the Wild are shown to be quite intelligent, they see nothing wrong with casually killing each other or eating their fallen enemies, and have no concept of laws, possession or civilization in general. This leads to the humans seeing the Wild as dangerous animals that need to be extermined while the Wild regards humans as greedy bastards with no respect for nature. In the end, BothSidesHaveAPoint.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: One of the main reasons why the Wild and the human kingdoms have warred against each other for so long is that neither side understands the mentality of the other. While many creatures of the Wild are shown to be quite intelligent, they see nothing wrong with casually killing each other or eating their fallen enemies, and have no concept of laws, possession or civilization in general. This leads to the humans seeing the Wild as dangerous animals that need to be extermined exterminated while the Wild regards humans as greedy bastards with no respect for nature. In the end, BothSidesHaveAPoint.
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** More straight versions are with the Emperor's daughter, who while a somewhat naive teenager is very bright, and the Queen of Alba.
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** More straight versions are with the Emperor's daughter, who while a somewhat naive teenager is very bright, and the Queen of Alba.Alba.
* ZergRush: What the Wild lacks in tactical expertise, they make up for with superior numbers.
* ZergRush: What the Wild lacks in tactical expertise, they make up for with superior numbers.
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** Mogon, one of the leaders of the Qwethnethogs, is a non-human example.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: a well researched series of ones:
** Galle is medieval France. It's the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the Wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights.
** Galle is medieval France. It's the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the Wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: a well researched series FantasyCounterpartCulture / IstanbulNotConstantinople: Most of ones:
** Galle isthe series' nations are direct counterparts to medieval France. It's the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the Wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights. states, often with alternate historical names:
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** Occitania is the historical region of the same name, though it borders on Alba rather than Galle.
** Iberia is, of course, Spain.
** Arelat is the Kingdom of Arles, which was known under the same name.
** Ifriquya clearly resembles Northern Africa. Even its name is based on an Arabic spelling of Africa.
** Iberia is, of course, Spain.
** Arelat is the Kingdom of Arles, which was known under the same name.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Jean de Vrailly's cousin Gaston, Comte d'Eu, is the only Gallish nobleman in the series who isn't a complete dick.
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* BearsAreBadNews: Golden bears are a type of intelligent animal from the Wild. A mother golden bear and hers cub were used as sideshow freaks, but when a religious zealot kills one of her cubs, the mother bear goes berserk and slaughters everyone at the show.
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* BearsAreBadNews: Golden bears are a type of intelligent animal from the Wild. A mother golden bear In the first book, a female and hers cub were her cubs are used as sideshow freaks, but when a religious zealot kills one of her cubs, the mother bear goes berserk and slaughters everyone at the show.
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** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler: Mordred. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from [[BrotherSisterIncest incest]] and [[ChildByRape rage.]] His mother intended him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild who would destroy the kingdom Alba.]]
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** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler: Mordred. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from [[BrotherSisterIncest incest]] and [[ChildByRape rage.]] His mother intended him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild who would destroy the kingdom of Alba.]]
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* MagicKnight: The Red Knight is initially a middling level practitioner of magic of the Wild, as well as being an expert warrior. He however has been deliberately neglecting his magic in the hopes that his powers would atrophy from disuse and initially the rare times he uses magic it's been done in secret.
* TheManBehindTheMan: [[spoiler: Ash, who's behind most the series' main villains.]]
* TheManBehindTheMan: [[spoiler: Ash, who's behind most the series' main villains.]]
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* MagicKnight: The Red Knight is initially a middling level practitioner of magic of the Wild, as well as being an expert warrior. He however However, he has been deliberately neglecting his magic in the hopes that his powers would atrophy from disuse disuse, and initially initially, the rare times he uses magic it's been done in secret.
* MonsterKnight: Tapio Haltija, also known as the Faerie Knight, is a powerful and famed Irk warrior who rides a giant white stag into battle.
* TheManBehindTheMan: [[spoiler: Ash, who's behind most of the series' main villains.]]
* MonsterKnight: Tapio Haltija, also known as the Faerie Knight, is a powerful and famed Irk warrior who rides a giant white stag into battle.
* TheManBehindTheMan: [[spoiler: Ash, who's behind most of the series' main villains.]]
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* MissionFromGod: Jean de Vrailly claims to speak with an angel who has told him that it's his destiny to prove himself the world's greatest knight and become King of Alba. [[spoiler: Said angel is later revealed to be Ash, this world's equivalent to {{Satan}}.]]
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* MissionFromGod: Jean de Vrailly claims to speak with an angel who has told him that it's his destiny to prove himself as the world's greatest knight and become King of Alba. [[spoiler: Said angel is later revealed to be Ash, this world's equivalent to {{Satan}}.]]
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Abbess has had many lovers including the magus Thorn before he fell and the King. The King himself, before his current wife, had even asked for her hand in marriage.
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* UnholyMatrimony: The Earl and Duchess of the North, its directly stated that none of their five children are his and both cheat on each other constantly and insult each other at any opportunity. However, they're also deeply in love with each other and make a formidable pair of rulers due to his military skill and her magical power/political savvy.
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* UnholyMatrimony: The Earl and Duchess of the North, its North. It's directly stated that none of their five children are his and both cheat on each other constantly and insult each other at any opportunity. However, they're also deeply in love with each other and make a formidable pair of rulers due to his military skill and her magical power/political savvy.
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* BloodKnight: Thomas Lachlan, AKA Bad Tom, loves nothing more than a good fight.
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** The Queen is a partial example, usually referred to by her title instead of her unusual name Desiredeta.
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** The Queen is a partial example, usually referred to by her title instead of her unusual name Desiredeta. Desiderata.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: The Qwethnethog, who serve as the guardians of the Wild, are called demons by most humans, but seem to resemble large [[RaptorAttack dromaeosaurids]] more than anything else.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: There are two types of dragons encountered in the series: the more common wyverns are bipedal and incapable of breathing fire while the larger, rarely seen wyrms more closely resemble typical Western dragons and have magical powers that border on [[PhysicalGod godlike levels.]]
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: The Qwethnethog, who serve as the guardians of the Wild, are called demons by most humans, but seem to resemble large [[RaptorAttack dromaeosaurids]] more than anything else.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: There are two types of dragons encountered in the series: the more common wyverns are bipedal and incapable of breathing fire while the larger, rarely seen wyrms more closely resemble typical Western dragons and have magical powers that border on [[PhysicalGod godlike levels.]]
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* ChildByRape: [[spoiler: The Red Knight is a product of rape and incest between the King of Alba and his sister Ghause Murien.]]
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* {{Tykebomb}}: [[spoiler: The Red Knight's mother, Ghause Murien, intended him to avenge her rape by overthrowing the King of Alba and destroying his legacy. He chose to go his own way instead.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: A male version of this, the Emperor of... is the most beautiful man in the world on account of being a product of generations of intermarriage between beautiful princesses and princes from different countries around the world. Sadly, he appears to be as dumb as he is beautiful.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: A male version of this, the Emperor of... of Morea is the most beautiful man in the world on account of being a product of generations of intermarriage between beautiful princesses and princes from different countries around the world. Sadly, he appears to be as dumb as he is beautiful.
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler: In the third book, Jean de Vrailly begins to doubt the promises of his "angel", suspecting that he's being manipulated, and is generally shown in a much more sympathetic light than in his previous appearances. He's killed in the same book during a duel with the Red Knight.]]
* LightIsNotGood: Jean de Vrailly's angel, [[spoiler: A.K.A. Ash.]]
* TheManBehindTheMan: [[spoiler: Ash, who's behind most the series' main villains.]]
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* MissionFromGod: Jean de Vrailly claims to speak with an angel who has told him that it's his destiny to prove himself the world's greatest knight and become King of Alba. [[spoiler: Said angel is later revealed to be Ash, this world's equivalent to {{Satan}}.]]
* NoNameGiven: The Captain for most of the first book merely goes by his title or the RedKnight [[spoiler:his Knight. [[spoiler: His real name is Gabriel Murien, which he goes by openly by the third]]
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* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: [[spoiler: The Wyrm of Erch]] interacts with the characters in human form, under the name of "Master Smythe."
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* BigBadEnsemble: Thorn, a [[FallenHero former archmage]] who has allied himself with the Wild, and Jean de Vrailly, the leader of the Gallish knights who try to take over Alba, are set up as major antagonists with unrelated agendas in the first book, until it turns out that [[spoiler: both of them are manipulated by Ash, the true villain of the story. Thorn is quickly DemotedToDragon once Ash takes a more active role in the subsequent books.]]
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* BigBadEnsemble: Thorn, a [[FallenHero former archmage]] who has allied himself with the Wild, and Jean de Vrailly, the leader of the Gallish knights who try to take over Alba, are set up as major antagonists with unrelated agendas in the first book, until it turns out that [[spoiler: both of them are manipulated by Ash, the true villain BigBad of the story. Thorn is quickly DemotedToDragon once Ash takes a more active role in the subsequent books.]]
* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: At the end of the first book, when the main characters form an alliance with [[spoiler: the Wyrm of Erch]], and in all of his subsequent appearances.
* MagicKnight: The Red Knight is initially a middling level practitioner of magic of the Wild, as well as being an expert warrior. He however has been deliberately neglecting his magic in the hopes that his powers would atrophy from disuse and initially the rare times he uses magic it's been done in secret.
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* ArrogantKungFuGuy: Jean de Vrailly, who believes that his superior fighting skills give him the right to kill everyone who disagrees with him.
* BigBadEnsemble: Thorn, a [[FallenHero former archmage]] who has allied himself with the Wild, and Jean de Vrailly, the leader of the Gallish knights who try to take over Alba, are set up as major antagonists with unrelated agendas in the first book, until it turns out that [[spoiler: both of them are manipulated by Ash, the true villain of the story. Thorn is quickly DemotedToDragon once Ash takes a more active role in the subsequent books.]]
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Apart from being highly misogynistic and notorious rapists, most of the Gallish knights have nothing but disdain for the common people. At one point, Jean de Vrailly proudly admits to having slaughtered countless peasants who dared to defy him.
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* CrystalDragonJesus: Averted, the people of the world really do worship Jesus Christ, God and etc.
* {{Expy}}: There is a strong Arthurian tales influence in The Red Knight:
** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler: Morded. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest and rage. His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Alba.]]
* {{Expy}}: There is a strong Arthurian tales influence in The Red Knight:
** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler: Morded. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest and rage. His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Alba.]]
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* {{Expy}}: There is a strong Arthuriantales influence in The Red Knight:
** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler:Morded. Mordred. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest [[BrotherSisterIncest incest]] and rage. [[ChildByRape rage.]] His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Alba.]]
* {{Expy}}: There is a strong Arthurian
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* FantasyGunControl: Guns have been unknown in Alba has never had a gun, until the designs of one show up with a mysterious stranger. This stranger then hires on the black smith and tells him that after the gun had been made and found satisfactory in testing, but if he wanted that commission he needed to destroy any designs after the gun was completed. This implies stranger, though it is implied that while Albany Alba just had their its first experience with firearms, these weapons may have existed elsewhere and possibly in greater numbers.
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* HeroicBastard: Sometimes referred to as a Bourc, the Red Knight was a much abused son of a noble family before striking out on his own. While he deeply despises the idea of God and highly blasphemous, he has deeply held morals and works to restrain the worst inclinations of his mercenary band.
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* HeroicBastard: Sometimes referred to as a Bourc, the The Red Knight was a much abused son is the illegitimate child of a noble family before striking out on his own. [[spoiler: Ghause Murien and her brother, the current King of Alba.]] While he deeply he despises the idea of God and is highly blasphemous, he has deeply held morals and works to restrain the worst inclinations of his mercenary band.
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* NoNameGiven: The Captain for most of the first book merely goes by his title or the Red Knight [[spoiler:his real name is Gabriel Muriens, Murien, which he goes by openly by the third]]
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* ActionGirl: several members of the company are female. The highest ranked are Sauce, a female knight and former prostitute, and Mag, an ex-seamstress who is a powerful mage and in charge of the noncombatants.
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* ActionGirl: several Several members of the company are female. The highest ranked are Sauce, a female knight and former prostitute, and Mag, Meg, an ex-seamstress who is a powerful mage and in charge of the noncombatants.
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* {{Expy}}: There is a strong Arthurian tales influence in The Red Knight. Sir Luc is a darker version of Sir Lancelot. He's a giant of a man who's being manipulated by "an angel" to declare and later proves himself to be the greatest knight in the world, he comes from an expy of France and has designs on the Queen. [[spoiler: The Red Knight, himself is an expy of Morded. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest and rage. His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Albany.]]
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* {{Expy}}: There is a strong Arthurian tales influence in The Red Knight. Sir Luc Knight:
** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler: Morded. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest and rage. His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Alba.]]
** Jean de Vrailly is a darker version of Sir Lancelot. He's a giant of a man who's being manipulated by "an angel" to declare and later proves himself to be the greatest knight in the world, he comes from an expy of France and has designs on the Queen. [[spoiler: The Red Knight, himself is an expy of Morded. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest and rage. His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Albany.]]
** The Red Knight is an expy of [[spoiler: Morded. His mother is the king's sister and in a throw-away line, the Red Knight notes that he was born from incest and rage. His mother intended for him to be raised as a Champion of the Wild, that was inimical to humanity and destroy Alba.]]
** Jean de Vrailly is a darker version of Sir Lancelot. He's a giant of a man who's being manipulated by "an angel" to declare and later proves himself to be the greatest knight in the world, he comes from an expy of France and has designs on the Queen.
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* FantasyGunControl: Albany has never had a gun, until the designs of one show up with a mysterious stranger. This stranger then hires on the black smith and tells him that after the gun had been made and found satisfactory in testing, but if he wanted that commission he needed to destroy any designs after the gun was completed. This implies that while Albany just had their first experience with firearms, these weapons may have existed elsewhere and possibly in greater numbers.
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* FantasyGunControl: Albany Alba has never had a gun, until the designs of one show up with a mysterious stranger. This stranger then hires on the black smith and tells him that after the gun had been made and found satisfactory in testing, but if he wanted that commission he needed to destroy any designs after the gun was completed. This implies that while Albany just had their first experience with firearms, these weapons may have existed elsewhere and possibly in greater numbers.
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** Galle: is medieval France, its the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights.
** Alba: is 1300s England, specifically after the black plague. It is under the rule of law and has substantial rights for the peasantry, although there is a strong guerilla movement called the jacks that is allied with the wild. A generation ago it won a great battle against the northern wild, but lost huge amounts of manpower doing so. Great amounts of the country have reverted to the wild and only a fifth as many men can be raised as a generation before.
** Morea: is the late Byzantine Empire. Its under the rule of the Paleologue dynasty, has lost much of its territory and is both bankrupt and dependent on mercenaries. Interestingly, it is not in the Balkans and Middle east but borders Alba, both being on the continent of Nova Terra.
** Nova Terra: the continent where the action is set. Despite the two major human civilizations being expies of England and the Byzantine Empire, its actually an expy of Colonial north America. Many tribes of wild allied human are analogous to Native American tribes, the Fur and wild honey trade is vastly important and the fortress of Ticonda is a direct take away from the real Fort Ticonderoga, even down to its weaknesses.
** Alba: is 1300s England, specifically after the black plague. It is under the rule of law and has substantial rights for the peasantry, although there is a strong guerilla movement called the jacks that is allied with the wild. A generation ago it won a great battle against the northern wild, but lost huge amounts of manpower doing so. Great amounts of the country have reverted to the wild and only a fifth as many men can be raised as a generation before.
** Morea: is the late Byzantine Empire. Its under the rule of the Paleologue dynasty, has lost much of its territory and is both bankrupt and dependent on mercenaries. Interestingly, it is not in the Balkans and Middle east but borders Alba, both being on the continent of Nova Terra.
** Nova Terra: the continent where the action is set. Despite the two major human civilizations being expies of England and the Byzantine Empire, its actually an expy of Colonial north America. Many tribes of wild allied human are analogous to Native American tribes, the Fur and wild honey trade is vastly important and the fortress of Ticonda is a direct take away from the real Fort Ticonderoga, even down to its weaknesses.
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** Galle: Galle is medieval France, its the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights.
**Alba: Nova Terra, the continent where the action is set, is an expy of colonial North America, despite the two major human civilizations being expies of England and the Byzantine Empire. The Wild-allied humans are analogous to Native American tribes, the fur and wild honey trade is vastly important and the fortress of Ticondaga is a direct take away from the real Fort Ticonderoga, even down to its weaknesses.
** Alba is 1300s England, specifically after theblack plague.Black Plague. It is under the rule of law and has substantial rights for the peasantry, although there is a strong guerilla movement called the jacks that is allied with the wild. A generation ago it won a great battle against the northern wild, but lost huge amounts of manpower doing so. Great amounts of the country have reverted to the wild and only a fifth as many men can be raised as a generation before.
**Morea: Morea is the late Byzantine Empire. Its It's under the rule of the Paleologue dynasty, has lost much of its territory and is both bankrupt and dependent on mercenaries. Interestingly, it is not in the Balkans and Middle east but borders Alba, both being on the continent of Nova Terra. \n** Nova Terra: the continent where the action is set. Despite the two major human civilizations being expies of England and the Byzantine Empire, its actually an expy of Colonial north America. Many tribes of wild allied human are analogous to Native American tribes, the Fur and wild honey trade is vastly important and the fortress of Ticonda is a direct take away from the real Fort Ticonderoga, even down to its weaknesses.
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** Alba is 1300s England, specifically after the
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* FrenchJerk: almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King is an insane, rapist near dwarf who is a puppet for his Chancellor, who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of karmic retribution off screen when the wild slaughters most of their knights.]]
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* FrenchJerk: almost Almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King King, an insane rapist, is an insane, rapist near dwarf who is actually a puppet for his Chancellor, [[EvilChancellor chancellor]], who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of [[KarmicDeath karmic retribution retribution]] off screen when the wild Wild slaughters most of their knights.]]
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* OurGriffonsAreDifferent: they grow rapidly and not only generate but feed off of love. They will bond with the first person to demonstrate immense love in front of them.
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* OurGriffonsAreDifferent: they They grow rapidly and not only generate but feed off of love. They will bond with the first person to demonstrate immense love in front of them.
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* {{UST}}: between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
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* {{UST}}: between UnresolvedSexualTension: Between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Numerous well-established PoV characters can be killed in a single sentence and most aren't even mentioned anymore.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Numerous well-established PoV PointOfView characters can be killed in a single sentence and most aren't even mentioned anymore.
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And so begins the story of The Traitor Son Cycle which has 3 books so far:
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And so begins the story of The Traitor Son Cycle Cycle,an epic fantasy series by Miles Cameron which has 3 books so far:
* ImprobableWeaponUser: Many knights and men at arms use pole axes, common weapons in the real middle ages but rare in fiction.
** Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
** Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
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* UnusualWeaponsUser: many knights and men at arms use pole axes, common weapons in the real middle ages but rare in fiction.
** Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
* UST: between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
** Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
* UST: between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
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* UnusualWeaponsUser: many knights and men at arms use pole axes, common weapons in the real middle ages but rare in fiction.
** Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
* UST:{{UST}}: between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
** Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
* UST:
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** More straight versions are with the Emperor's daughter, who while a somewhat naive teenager is very bright, and the Queen of Alba.
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** More straight versions are with the Emperor's daughter, who while a somewhat naive teenager is very bright, and the Queen of Alba.
Alba.
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* ActionGirl: several members of the company are female. The highest ranked are Sauce, a female knight and former prostitute, and Maud, an ex-seamstress who is a powerful mage and in charge of the noncombatants.
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* ActionGirl: several members of the company are female. The highest ranked are Sauce, a female knight and former prostitute, and Maud, Mag, an ex-seamstress who is a powerful mage and in charge of the noncombatants.noncombatants.
* AnyoneCanDie: Numerous well-established PoV characters can be killed in a single sentence and most aren't even mentioned anymore.
* AnyoneCanDie: Numerous well-established PoV characters can be killed in a single sentence and most aren't even mentioned anymore.
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** Hoek is the Netherlands, specifically the Dutch Republic with them known primairly for being [[ProudMerchantRace merchants.]]
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** ActionGirl: several members of the company are female. The highest ranked are Sauce, a female knight and former prostitute, and Maud, an ex-seamstress who is a powerful mage and in charge of the noncombatants.
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* FrenchJerk: almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King is an insane, rapist near dwarf who is a puppet for his Chancellor, who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of karmic retribution off screen when the wild slaughters most of their knights.
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* FrenchJerk: almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King is an insane, rapist near dwarf who is a puppet for his Chancellor, who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of karmic retribution off screen when the wild slaughters most of their knights.]]
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** ActionGirl: several members of the company are female. The highest ranked are Sauce, a female knight and former prostitute, and Maud, an ex-seamstress who is a powerful mage and in charge of the noncombatants.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture
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* FantasyCounterpartCultureFantasyCounterpartCulture: a well researched series of ones:
**Galle: is medieval France, its the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights.
**Alba: is 1300s England, specifically after the black plague. It is under the rule of law and has substantial rights for the peasantry, although there is a strong guerilla movement called the jacks that is allied with the wild. A generation ago it won a great battle against the northern wild, but lost huge amounts of manpower doing so. Great amounts of the country have reverted to the wild and only a fifth as many men can be raised as a generation before.
**Morea: is the late Byzantine Empire. Its under the rule of the Paleologue dynasty, has lost much of its territory and is both bankrupt and dependent on mercenaries. Interestingly, it is not in the Balkans and Middle east but borders Alba, both being on the continent of Nova Terra.
**Nova Terra: the continent where the action is set. Despite the two major human civilizations being expies of England and the Byzantine Empire, its actually an expy of Colonial north America. Many tribes of wild allied human are analogous to Native American tribes, the Fur and wild honey trade is vastly important and the fortress of Ticonda is a direct take away from the real Fort Ticonderoga, even down to its weaknesses.
*FrenchJerk: almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King is an insane, rapist near dwarf who is a puppet for his Chancellor, who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of karmic retribution off screen when the wild slaughters most of their knights.
**Galle: is medieval France, its the most powerful and prosperous human state and is rarely attacked by the wild. However, its peasantry is oppressed and its nobles operate under the Laws of War, requiring them to go armed and armored at all times and to constantly duel to the death over small slights.
**Alba: is 1300s England, specifically after the black plague. It is under the rule of law and has substantial rights for the peasantry, although there is a strong guerilla movement called the jacks that is allied with the wild. A generation ago it won a great battle against the northern wild, but lost huge amounts of manpower doing so. Great amounts of the country have reverted to the wild and only a fifth as many men can be raised as a generation before.
**Morea: is the late Byzantine Empire. Its under the rule of the Paleologue dynasty, has lost much of its territory and is both bankrupt and dependent on mercenaries. Interestingly, it is not in the Balkans and Middle east but borders Alba, both being on the continent of Nova Terra.
**Nova Terra: the continent where the action is set. Despite the two major human civilizations being expies of England and the Byzantine Empire, its actually an expy of Colonial north America. Many tribes of wild allied human are analogous to Native American tribes, the Fur and wild honey trade is vastly important and the fortress of Ticonda is a direct take away from the real Fort Ticonderoga, even down to its weaknesses.
*FrenchJerk: almost every nobleman from Galle is a complete ass, save for the OnlySaneMan the Comte de'Eu. The King is an insane, rapist near dwarf who is a puppet for his Chancellor, who runs the country behind his back for his own ends. Their clergy utterly denies even the existence of the wild and attempts to destroy all users of magic, which is one of the few things keeping humanity alive against the wild. Their nobles are insane, honor obsessed pscyhopaths who casually commit murder over the slightest insults. [[spoiler:The Gallish Chancellor attempts to take over Alba over the course of the books and succeeds. He essentially turns the King into a puppet, the force of knights sent over to ensure this imprisons and executes large numbers of innocent people, their knights and squires launch a campaign of murder and rape, they imprison, abuse, nearly rape and come with in an hair's breadth of burning the Queen alive for adultery (a charge that she is innocent of) and the murder of the aforementioned OnlySaneMan Comte d'Eu (who the Gallish knights themselves killed). They get some manner of karmic retribution off screen when the wild slaughters most of their knights.
*KnightTemplar: The Order of St. Thomas are a highly positive version, magic knights who fight against the wild. They're highly trained and able to move so silently that even the wild can't detect them in the forest.
* NoNameGiven: The Captain for most of the first book merely goes by his title or the Red Knight [[spoiler:his real name is Gabriel Muriens, which he goes by openly by the third]]
**The King is a straight example, his name is never given at any point.
**The Queen is a partial example, usually referred to by her title instead of her unusual name Desiredeta.
*OurGriffonsAreDifferent: they grow rapidly and not only generate but feed off of love. They will bond with the first person to demonstrate immense love in front of them.
**The King is a straight example, his name is never given at any point.
**The Queen is a partial example, usually referred to by her title instead of her unusual name Desiredeta.
*OurGriffonsAreDifferent: they grow rapidly and not only generate but feed off of love. They will bond with the first person to demonstrate immense love in front of them.
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* TheSiege: The main action of The Red Knight, there is actually a pair of sieges happening. One takes place in
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* TheSiege: The main action of The Red Knight, there is actually a pair of sieges happening. One takes place inin the barely defended city of Albinkirk, the other in a heavily fortified nunnery.
* UnholyMatrimony: The Earl and Duchess of the North, its directly stated that none of their five children are his and both cheat on each other constantly and insult each other at any opportunity. However, they're also deeply in love with each other and make a formidable pair of rulers due to his military skill and her magical power/political savvy.
* UnusualWeaponsUser: many knights and men at arms use pole axes, common weapons in the real middle ages but rare in fiction.
**Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
* UST: between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
* UnholyMatrimony: The Earl and Duchess of the North, its directly stated that none of their five children are his and both cheat on each other constantly and insult each other at any opportunity. However, they're also deeply in love with each other and make a formidable pair of rulers due to his military skill and her magical power/political savvy.
* UnusualWeaponsUser: many knights and men at arms use pole axes, common weapons in the real middle ages but rare in fiction.
**Also, the armor used by many characters is rarely depicted in fiction, the coat of plates, the intermediate armor between mail and full plate.
* UST: between the Captain and Amica. Both have an obvious attraction to each other which they acknowledge but the Nun remains true to her vows.
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** The Queen of Alba is an expy of Guenevere, but while she has that characters beauty, she's also intelligent, loyal and a powerful magician in her own right.
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* MedievalEuropeanFantasyMedievalEuropeanFantasy: an odd mix of the late 1300s Europe, The Arthurian Mythos, folk mythology and the French and Indian Wars.
* OurOrcsAreDifferent: Irks are immortal shape changers, able to switch between an elf like party face and a hideous war form.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: A male version of this, the Emperor of... is the most beautiful man in the world on account of being a product of generations of intermarriage between beautiful princesses and princes from different countries around the world. Sadly he appears to be as dumb as he is beautiful.
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* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: A male version of this, the Emperor of... is the most beautiful man in the world on account of being a product of generations of intermarriage between beautiful princesses and princes from different countries around the world. Sadly he appears to be as dumb as he is beautiful.beautiful.
** More straight versions are with the Emperor's daughter, who while a somewhat naive teenager is very bright, and the Queen of Alba.
** More straight versions are with the Emperor's daughter, who while a somewhat naive teenager is very bright, and the Queen of Alba.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Sir Jerent resents the Red Knight's captaincy for two reasons - the Red Knight being a nobleman and Sir Jerent has over a decade of experience as a mercenary while the Red Knight has only five years under his belt. But while Jerent was explaining this to Bad Tom, Bad Tom shuts him down. He notes that Jerent lacks the charisma, the strategic mind and noble birth that are needed to lead a mercenary band, the company would never accept someone so lacking in these three categories while the Red Knight has plenty of each.
* GreenEyedMonster: Sir Jerent resents the Red Knight's captaincy for two reasons - the Red Knight being a nobleman and Sir Jerent has over a decade of experience as a mercenary while the Red Knight has only five years under his belt. But while Jerent was explaining this to Bad Tom, Bad Tom shuts him down. He notes that Jerent lacks the charisma, the strategic mind and noble birth that are needed to lead a mercenary band, the company would never accept someone so lacking in these three categories while the Red Knight has plenty of each.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Sir Jerent resents the Red Knight's captaincy for two reasons - the Red Knight being a nobleman and Sir Jerent has over a decade of experience as a mercenary while the Red Knight has only five years under his belt. But while Jerent was explaining this to Bad Tom, Bad Tom shuts him down. He notes that Jerent lacks the charisma, the strategic mind and noble birth that are needed to lead a successful mercenaryband, the band. The company would never accept someone so lacking in these three categories while the Red Knight has plenty of each.
* GreenEyedMonster: Sir Jerent resents the Red Knight's captaincy for two reasons - the Red Knight being a nobleman and Sir Jerent has over a decade of experience as a mercenary while the Red Knight has only five years under his belt. But while Jerent was explaining this to Bad Tom, Bad Tom shuts him down. He notes that Jerent lacks the charisma, the strategic mind and noble birth that are needed to lead a successful mercenary
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Abbess has had many lovers including the Magus Thorn before he fell and the King. The King himself, before his current wife, had even asked for her hand in marriage.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Abbess has had many lovers including the Magus magus Thorn before he fell and the King. The King himself, before his current wife, had even asked for her hand in marriage.
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* AncientGrome: a medieval version of it.
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* CrystalDragonJesus: Averted, the people of the world really do worship Jesus Christ, God and etc.
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