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* SwissArmySuperpower: Lightbinding can be used to enhance ''any'' physical or mental trait of the user, or anything that's a part of their physical self. A Lifebinder can gain enhanced [[SuperStrength strength]], [[SuperSpeed speed]], [[SuperHearing hearing]], [[TheNoseKnows scent]], [[SuperSenses other senses]], [[SuperReflexes reflexes]], [[SuperToughness fortitude]], AuraVision, [[HealingFactor healing]], [[PhotographicMemory memory]], [[HyperAwareness perceptive]] [[SherlockScan scans]], [[WallCrawl grip]], [[InASingleBound jumps]], [[CharmPerson charisma]], [[spoiler: [[SuperIntelligence intellect]], [[ImprobableFencingPowers swordsmanship]], [[SwordBeam sunforged swords]]]], and [[LongList only the Light knows what else]].

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* SwissArmySuperpower: Lightbinding can be used to enhance ''any'' physical or mental trait of the user, or anything that's a part of their physical self. A Lifebinder Lightbinder can gain enhanced [[SuperStrength strength]], [[SuperSpeed speed]], [[SuperHearing hearing]], [[TheNoseKnows scent]], [[SuperSenses other senses]], [[SuperReflexes reflexes]], [[SuperToughness fortitude]], AuraVision, [[HealingFactor healing]], [[PhotographicMemory memory]], [[HyperAwareness perceptive]] [[SherlockScan scans]], [[WallCrawl grip]], [[InASingleBound jumps]], [[CharmPerson charisma]], [[spoiler: [[SuperIntelligence intellect]], [[ImprobableFencingPowers swordsmanship]], [[SwordBeam sunforged swords]]]], and [[LongList only the Light knows what else]].
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* SwissArmySuperpower: Lifebinding can be used to enhance ''any'' physical or mental trait of the user, or anything that's a part of their physical self. A Lifebinder can gain enhanced [[SuperStrength strength]], [[SuperSpeed speed]], [[SuperHearing hearing]], [[TheNoseKnows scent]], [[SuperSenses other senses]], [[SuperReflexes reflexes]], [[SuperToughness fortitude]], AuraVision, [[HealingFactor healing]], [[PhotographicMemory memory]], [[HyperAwareness perceptive]] [[SherlockScan scans]], [[WallCrawl grip]], [[InASingleBound jumps]], [[CharmPerson charisma]], [[spoiler: [[SuperIntelligence intellect]], [[ImprobableFencingPowers swordsmanship]], [[SwordBeam sunforged swords]]]], and [[LongList only the Light knows what else]].

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* SwissArmySuperpower: Lifebinding Lightbinding can be used to enhance ''any'' physical or mental trait of the user, or anything that's a part of their physical self. A Lifebinder can gain enhanced [[SuperStrength strength]], [[SuperSpeed speed]], [[SuperHearing hearing]], [[TheNoseKnows scent]], [[SuperSenses other senses]], [[SuperReflexes reflexes]], [[SuperToughness fortitude]], AuraVision, [[HealingFactor healing]], [[PhotographicMemory memory]], [[HyperAwareness perceptive]] [[SherlockScan scans]], [[WallCrawl grip]], [[InASingleBound jumps]], [[CharmPerson charisma]], [[spoiler: [[SuperIntelligence intellect]], [[ImprobableFencingPowers swordsmanship]], [[SwordBeam sunforged swords]]]], and [[LongList only the Light knows what else]].
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there's no evidence that criminal slavery is any different than real-life community service


* CrapsackWorld: Where to begin? The world is periodically wracked with apocalpytic, extinction-level [[TheNightThatNeverEnds Nights]] that see [[SuperPersistentPredator the Shade]] and mass famines [[DepopulationBomb wipe out most of the world's population]]; every man, woman, and child needs to vigorously train with weapons in preparation for when humanity is inevitably on its last legs again; Hamahra is under the toe of a brutal industrial elite with slums everywhere, the poor barely making enough money to sustain themselves as they're endlessly worked in the factories and can be [[MadeASlave sold into slavery]] for nearly any crime; the preceding governmental systems were an [[AristocratsAreEvil evil aristocracy]] and a [[CommieLand communist]] [[TheEmpire empire]]; warfare has grown so deadly and widespread that [[WarIsHell tens of millions were slaughtered]] over the course of the Dawn Empire; SkyPirates and HumanTraffickers make themselves rich off the suffering of people they rob, [[RapePillageAndBurn pillage]], [[MadeASlave enslave]], or [[IHaveYourWife blackmail]]; the only concerted effort to improve the world and end the Shade forever resulted in the creation of the aforementioned empire and countless deaths; the Archknights are locked in a ForeverWar with the Shade and can barely find time to help the people who desperately need them, and when they actually do, there's so much rape and murder in the major cities that they can never hope to help all of the people who are being attacked and brutalized ''at that very minute.'' Tellos is an immutable Crapsack World that offers no escape from endless brutality and conflict, and the closest thing to TheChosenOne is a [[RetiredMonster reformed]] EvilOverlord who spends his time [[PayEvilUntoEvil viciously slaughtering the lesser monsters of the world]].

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* CrapsackWorld: Where to begin? The world is periodically wracked with apocalpytic, extinction-level [[TheNightThatNeverEnds Nights]] that see [[SuperPersistentPredator the Shade]] and mass famines [[DepopulationBomb wipe out most of the world's population]]; every man, woman, and child needs to vigorously train with weapons in preparation for when humanity is inevitably on its last legs again; Hamahra is under the toe of a brutal industrial elite with slums everywhere, the poor barely making enough money to sustain themselves as they're endlessly worked in the factories and can be [[MadeASlave sold into slavery]] for nearly any crime; factories; the preceding governmental systems were an [[AristocratsAreEvil evil aristocracy]] and a [[CommieLand communist]] [[TheEmpire empire]]; warfare has grown so deadly and widespread that [[WarIsHell tens of millions were slaughtered]] over the course of the Dawn Empire; SkyPirates and HumanTraffickers make themselves rich off the suffering of people they rob, [[RapePillageAndBurn pillage]], [[MadeASlave enslave]], or [[IHaveYourWife blackmail]]; the only concerted effort to improve the world and end the Shade forever resulted in the creation of the aforementioned empire and countless deaths; the Archknights are locked in a ForeverWar with the Shade and can barely find time to help the people who desperately need them, and when they actually do, there's so much rape and murder in the major cities that they can never hope to help all of the people who are being attacked and brutalized ''at that very minute.'' Tellos is an immutable Crapsack World that offers no escape from endless brutality and conflict, and the closest thing to TheChosenOne is a [[RetiredMonster reformed]] EvilOverlord who spends his time [[PayEvilUntoEvil viciously slaughtering the lesser monsters of the world]].
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* MeanBoss: When Cueseg tries to walk off in the middle of [[TheyHaveTheScent a mission]] to order to clean off his boots, Lyrah[[note]]Who's older and higher in rank as an Archknight, and thus his immediate superior when they work together.[[/note]] threatens to make him eat the crap he just stepped in if he doesn't get back in line, and later tells him [[PervertRevengeMode she'll kill him]] if he pulls any more [[DoYouWantToCopulate Tuerasian nonsense]] on her. As a result, he considers her his well-meaning, effective, but nasty boss.
-->'''Ahrek:''' "And now we're companions, so we'd best find a way to get along."\\
'''Cueseg:''' "It can be hard to get along with this one. But she is good.\\
'''Lyrah:''' "Oh, great way to show loyalty, Cueseg!"
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* BadBoss: Daylen got into the habit of disposing of any underling who [[YouHaveFailedMe failed]] or [[OffingTheAnnoyance annoyed]] him when he was Emperor, and he still has traits of this. After killing Blackheart and pressing Sain into service, Daylen punishes any infraction with [[OffhandBackhand backhands]], [[MyFistForgivesYou punches]], and broken bones ([[GoodThingYouCanHeal taking advantage of Ahrek being nearby for the latter]]), while threatening to kill him if he leads them into an ambush. He seems to be moving away from this, though, as he repays Sain [[DisproportionateReward with interest]] after the mission by giving him Blackheart's ship and considerable fortune.


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* FlippingTheBird: After Daylen warns Sain that [[AuraVision he'll know]] if Sain sets a foot out of line, Sain flips him off when his back is turned. Daylen, of course, immediately [[MyFistForgivesYou forgives him]].

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* OutlawTown: The cities of the Floating Isles (Deadend, Freelife, and Raidaway) are the crime capitals of Tellos, serving as bases for numerous SkyPirates and many other criminal types. Dayless made the effort to raze them entirely, but they always ended up rebuilt, so he eventually gave up trying.



* WretchedHive: The cities of the Floating Isles are the crime capitals of Tellos, serving as bases for numerous SkyPirates and many other criminal types. Dayless made the effort to raze them entirely, but they always end up rebuilt, so he eventually gave up trying.
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** '''Lightbringing''' magic is good-aligned, and obtained by being a sufficiently-good person. It grants abilities that basically make you a D&D cleric. Note however that if you commit ''any'' immoral act, even so much as ''lying'', you lose your powers.

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** '''Lightbringing''' magic is good-aligned, and obtained by being a sufficiently-good person. It grants abilities that basically make you a D&D cleric. Note however that if you commit ''any'' immoral act, even so much as ''lying'', ''[[CannotTellALie lying]]'', you lose your powers.



** '''Lightblaring''' magic is [[BlackMagic evil-aligned]], and seems to be restricted to [[TheSoulless Shades]]. The abilities it grants have yet to be explored in-depth, but [[CastingAShadow darkness]] and flight are among them.

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** '''Lightblaring''' magic is [[BlackMagic evil-aligned]], and seems to be restricted to [[TheSoulless Shades]]. The the Shade]]. It grants the abilities it grants have yet that they use in their endless attempts to be explored in-depth, but wipe out humanity, such as [[CastingAShadow darkness]] darkness fields]], flight, {{Telekinesis}}, [[AnimateDead controlling dead flesh]], and flight are among them.[[WalkingWasteland killing plants in the area]].
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* FalseRapeAccusation: Queen Quallandra of Frey attempted to secure an alliance with the Dawn Empire, trying to get Dayless to enter an ArrangedMarriage with her, and had a consensual affair with him as part of that persuasion. After he betrayed her and conquered Frey, she put out the story that he'd raped her, which [[FramingTheGuiltyParty everyone was more than prepared to believe]].

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* FalseRapeAccusation: Queen Quallandra of Frey attempted to secure an alliance with the Dawn Empire, trying to get Dayless to enter an ArrangedMarriage a [[AltarDiplomacy marriage alliance]] with her, and had a consensual affair with him as part of that persuasion. After he betrayed her and conquered Frey, she put out the story that he'd raped her, which [[FramingTheGuiltyParty everyone was more than prepared to believe]].
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* TheEngineer: Daylen eagerly took to his father's work at an early age, becoming an engineer as well. In Tellos, that would have meant finding new uses for sunstone and darkstone in peacetime ... but when Daylen later founded [[IndustrializedEvil the Dawn Empire]], he turned his skills to designing engines of war instead, eventually becoming an EmperorScientist.

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* BrokenAce: Daylen, due to having both the experience of age and the vigor of youth, excels at a number of things: [[MasterSwordsman swordsmanship]], [[GadgeteerGenius engineering]], [[WrongContextMagic sunforging, Lightbinding]], [[AcePilot flying,]] and [[TheStrategist military tactics]]. He's also a former EvilOverlord whose empire collapsed when the entire world declared war against it, and who is currently ravaged by the [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone soul-crushing guilt]] at the epicenter of the story's DysfunctionJunction.

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* BrokenAce: Daylen, due to having both the experience of age and the vigor of youth, excels at a number of things: [[MasterSwordsman swordsmanship]], [[GoodWithNumbers mathematics]], [[TheEngineer engineering]], [[GadgeteerGenius engineering]], sunforging]], [[WrongContextMagic sunforging, Lightbinding]], [[AcePilot flying,]] and [[TheStrategist military tactics]]. He's also a former EvilOverlord whose empire collapsed when the entire world declared war against it, and who is currently ravaged by the [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone soul-crushing guilt]] at the epicenter of the story's DysfunctionJunction.



* GoodParents: Even in his old age, Daylen fondly remembers his loving parents, crediting his upbringing with how he became such a talented engineer. Killing them after they [[TheCorruption became Shade]] was very, very hard for him.

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* GoodParents: Even in his old age, Daylen fondly remembers his loving parents, crediting his upbringing with how he became such a talented engineer. Killing One of his most traumatic memories from the Fourth Night was them after they [[TheCorruption becoming Shade]], after which he was forced to kill them. Daylen himself became Shade]] was very, very hard this for him. his first two children with similarly tragic results, as the aristocracy targeted and murdered them.


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* GoodWithNumbers: Daylen was educated in math from an early age, and always had a knack for it. His mathematical reasoning is part of the reason why he's a master engineer and sunsmith, and he also excels at gambling (specifically races) because of his ability to read statistics.


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* LostSuperweapon: Hidden among the Floating Isles is a colossal sunforge which can do things impossible with conventional sunforging, such as creating sunucles of seemingly unlimited size or sunforging darkstone. Only Daylen found the mastered the forge, and he speculates that the Floating Isles were created when someone created a FantasticNuke that shattered them.


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* MySensorsIndicateYouWantToTapThat: A Lifebinder's [[TheNoseKnows enhanced scent]] can reveal emotions, which Daylen uses to get a feel for people's intentions. When he uses it on Jena, finds out that she's massively aroused just looking at him because of his [[ClarkKenting resemblance to Dayless]].


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* WretchedHive: The cities of the Floating Isles are the crime capitals of Tellos, serving as bases for numerous SkyPirates and many other criminal types. Dayless made the effort to raze them entirely, but they always end up rebuilt, so he eventually gave up trying.


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* YourHeadAsplode: After finding out [[EvilPlan what the Dawnists are planning]], Daylen hits Jena straight in the head with every ounce of his considerable SuperStrength. The results are ... messy, to say the least.
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* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: After Sharra reminds Daylen of [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil his worst memories]] with her antics, he wakes up in a murderously bad mood, and snaps Sain's arm like a chicken bone for ''literally'' setting a foot out of line.[[note]]Yes, literally. He stepped out of the five meter radius that Daylen ordered him to stay in.[[/note]] Daylen's explanation:

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* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: After Sharra reminds Daylen of [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil his worst memories]] with her antics, he wakes up in goes into a murderously bad mood, and snaps Sain's arm like a chicken bone for ''literally'' setting a foot out of line.[[note]]Yes, literally. He stepped out of the five meter radius that Daylen ordered him to stay in.[[/note]] Daylen's explanation:

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* EleventhHourSuperpower: ''Three'' cases. First, during his battle with [[spoiler: Lyrah]], Daylen is desperately trying to think of some way to get an edge, and decides to do so by channeling Light to his [[spoiler:[[SuperIntelligence intelligence]]]], berating himself for not thinking to try that at any point earlier in the story. Later, he realizes he can channel Light into [[spoiler:his skill with the sword]], and then later into [[spoiler: the sword itself, it being an item he sunforged using his own blood]].

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* EleventhHourSuperpower: ''Three'' cases. First, during his battle with [[spoiler: Lyrah]], Daylen is desperately trying to think of some way to get an edge, and decides to do so by channeling Light to his [[spoiler:[[SuperIntelligence intelligence]]]], berating himself for not thinking to try that at any point earlier in the story. Later, he realizes he can channel Light into [[spoiler:his skill with the sword]], and then later into [[spoiler: [[SwordBeam the sword itself, itself]], it being an item he sunforged using his own blood]].



* SwissArmySuperpower: Lifebinding can be used to enhance ''any'' physical or mental trait of the user, or anything that's a part of their physical self. A Lifebinder can gain enhanced [[SuperStrength strength]], [[SuperSpeed speed]], [[SuperHearing hearing]], [[TheNoseKnows scent]], [[SuperSenses other senses]], [[SuperReflexes reflexes]], [[SuperToughness fortitude]], AuraVision, [[HealingFactor healing]], [[PhotographicMemory memory]], [[HyperAwareness perceptive]] [[SherlockScan scans]], [[WallCrawl grip]], [[InASingleBound jumps]], [[CharmPerson charisma]], [[spoiler: [[SuperIntelligence intellect]], [[ImprobableFencingPowers swordsmanship]]]] and [[LongList only the Light knows what else]].

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* SwissArmySuperpower: Lifebinding can be used to enhance ''any'' physical or mental trait of the user, or anything that's a part of their physical self. A Lifebinder can gain enhanced [[SuperStrength strength]], [[SuperSpeed speed]], [[SuperHearing hearing]], [[TheNoseKnows scent]], [[SuperSenses other senses]], [[SuperReflexes reflexes]], [[SuperToughness fortitude]], AuraVision, [[HealingFactor healing]], [[PhotographicMemory memory]], [[HyperAwareness perceptive]] [[SherlockScan scans]], [[WallCrawl grip]], [[InASingleBound jumps]], [[CharmPerson charisma]], [[spoiler: [[SuperIntelligence intellect]], [[ImprobableFencingPowers swordsmanship]]]] swordsmanship]], [[SwordBeam sunforged swords]]]], and [[LongList only the Light knows what else]]. else]].
* SwordBeam: [[spoiler: Daylen's third EleventhHourSuperpower is channeling Light into Imperious, enabling him to cut things at a distance. By using a huge sunstone to increase his power, he's able to [[PersonOfMassDestruction slice Hamenday Island in half]] with this technique.]]
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** As emperor, he eventually used tactics and policies that contradicted every ideal he claimed to be fighting for, such as giving special privileges to his soldiers to keep them loyal to him--effectively creating a new aristocracy. He declared that no one would own property in the Dawn Empire, not even him, but as the absolute monarch of a totalitarian government, that effectively meant that the entire empire was his own personal property. He also outlawed sex slaves, then proceeded to kidnap and rape hundreds of girls who were still in their teens.

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** As emperor, he eventually used tactics and policies that contradicted every ideal he claimed to be fighting for, such as giving special privileges to his soldiers to keep them loyal to him--effectively creating a new aristocracy. He declared that no one would own property in the Dawn Empire, not even him, but as the absolute monarch of a totalitarian government, that effectively meant that the entire empire was his own personal property. He also outlawed sex slaves, slaves and instituted the death penalty for rapists ... and then proceeded to kidnap and rape hundreds of girls who were still in their teens.

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* BlackHumor: Daylen might not be an EvilOverlord anymore, but he still has the tongue for it.
-->'''Sain:''' "I thought you could read minds?"\\
'''Daylen:''' "That's only when I split open their skulls and write words with their brain matter."\\
'''Sain:''' "[[DudeNotFunny You're sick]]."



* NoSenseOfHumor: Daylen thinks that Lyrah has no sense of humor and Ahrek CannotTellAJoke; Ahrek and Lyrah think that Daylen has a [[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor Bad Sense of Humor]].
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** The [[HumanTraffickers sex slavers]] of the ''Maraven,'' who took the opportunity to "break in" all fifty of the girls before the planned sale.

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** The [[HumanTraffickers sex slavers]] of the ''Maraven,'' [[spoiler: ''Maraven,'']] who took the opportunity to "break in" all fifty of the girls before the planned sale.

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* LuminescentBlush: PlayedForDrama. Lyrah notices Daylen staring at her face when he realizes that she's a BrokenBird and questions him about it. Desperately fishing for a lie, Daylen tries to cover what he was really thinking about by saying that he was staring because ''she's beautiful,'' remembering belatedly that this is one of her [[TraumaButton trauma]] and [[BerserkButton berserk]] buttons. Cue Lyrah blushing with mingled embarrassment and rage, and Daylen mentally cursing himself with gusto.
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* LuminescentBlush: PlayedForDrama. LuminescentBlush:
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Lyrah notices Daylen staring at her face when he realizes that she's a BrokenBird and questions him about it. Desperately fishing for a lie, Daylen tries to cover what he was really thinking about by saying that he was staring because ''she's beautiful,'' remembering belatedly that this is one of her [[TraumaButton trauma]] and [[BerserkButton berserk]] buttons. Cue Lyrah blushing [[PlayedForDrama with mingled embarrassment and rage, and Daylen mentally cursing himself with gusto.
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** Sain has a much more humorous outbreak of blushing when Daylen guesses that Sharra seduced him, with jealousy turning him even more red when he finds out that she tried it on Daylen first.


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** After Ahrek helps Daylen escape arrest, Lyrah's sheer ''outrage'' is a thing to behold, her entire body twitching and her eyes ''shaking'' with fury.
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* WeakenedByTheLight: The Shade require darkness to use most of their powers, leaving them vulnerable to both sunlight and {{Magitek}} lighting devices. The glowing sunstones also [[KryptoniteFactor inflict terrible pain on contact]].
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* AnimateDead: Greater Shade can use lightblaring to control dead flesh, granting them this ability.


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* GoodParents: Even in his old age, Daylen fondly remembers his loving parents, crediting his upbringing with how he became such a talented engineer. Killing them after they [[TheCorruption became Shade]] was very, very hard for him.

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-->--Daylen Namaran.

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-->--Daylen Namaran.
Namaran



** As emperor, he eventually used tactics and policies that contradicted every ideal he claimed to be fighting for, such as giving special privileges to his soldiers to keep them loyal to him--effectively creating a new aristocracy. He also outlawed sex slaves, then proceeded to kidnap and rape hundreds of girls who were still in their teens.

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** As emperor, he eventually used tactics and policies that contradicted every ideal he claimed to be fighting for, such as giving special privileges to his soldiers to keep them loyal to him--effectively creating a new aristocracy. He declared that no one would own property in the Dawn Empire, not even him, but as the absolute monarch of a totalitarian government, that effectively meant that the entire empire was his own personal property. He also outlawed sex slaves, then proceeded to kidnap and rape hundreds of girls who were still in their teens.



** After pissing Lyrah off by mashing one of her [[TraumaButton trauma buttons]], Daylen is "stunned" at what a MoodSwinger she is. He then immediately proceeds to [[BerserkButton froth at the mouth in rage]] over her calling him "a pubescent troublemaker" and "kid." He makes another HypocrisyNod over this, acknowledging how stupid and nonsensical it is for him to be angry with her of all people for such a small thing as being bossy, but Daylen's [[PsychopathicManchild unstable emotional register]] doesn't always keep up with his reasoning.

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** After pissing Lyrah off by mashing one of her [[TraumaButton trauma buttons]], Daylen is "stunned" at what a MoodSwinger she is. He then immediately proceeds to [[BerserkButton froth at the mouth in rage]] over her calling him "a pubescent troublemaker" and "kid." He makes another HypocrisyNod over this, acknowledging marveling at how stupid and nonsensical absurd it is for him to be angry with her of all people for such a small thing as being bossy, but Daylen's [[PsychopathicManchild unstable emotional register]] doesn't always keep up with his reasoning.reasoning.
** After administering some corporal punishment on Sain for [[DisproportionateRetribution not standing in the correct position]], Daylen refuses to accept that Sain just forgot about Daylen's orders. Later in the book, after [[RantInducingSlight ranting]] at Lyrah and feeling guilty over it, Daylen tells himself that he only did it because he "forgot" who she was. ''Really,'' Daylen?

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-->--Daylen Namaran, also known as Dayless the Conqueror. Year fifty-one of the Fifth Day.

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-->--Daylen Namaran, also known as Dayless the Conqueror. Year fifty-one of the Fifth Day.
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* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: After Sharra reminds Daylen of [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil his worst memories]] with her antics, he wakes up in a murderously bad mood, and snaps Sain's arm like a chicken bone for ''literally'' setting a foot out of line.[[note]]Yes, literally. He stepped out of the five meter radius that Daylen ordered him to stay in.[[/note]] Daylen's explanation:
-->'''Daylen:''' "I told him what would happen. So actually, he broke his own arm."
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** The entire crew of the ''Maraven'', who are rapists and HumanTraffickers to a man, and end up on the receiving end of Daylen's wrath shortly after Blackheart.

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** The entire crew of [[spoiler: the ''Maraven'', who are rapists and HumanTraffickers to a man, and man,]] end up on the receiving end of Daylen's wrath shortly after Blackheart.
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Shad discusses this in several older videos made before he finished the book.


* AlternativeCalendar: Because [[EndlessDaytime days]] and [[TheNightThatNeverEnds nights]] last for several decades at the least, everyone measures time by "falls," the time it takes for a distant object called the Plummet to reach the bottom of [[WorldInTheSky the endless sky]] and be [[WrapAround sent back to the top]]. These falls are subdivided into times based on the Plummet's position, such as "high," and "low."

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* AlternativeCalendar: Because [[EndlessDaytime days]] and [[TheNightThatNeverEnds nights]] last for several decades at the least, everyone measures time by "falls," the time it takes for a distant object called the Plummet to reach the bottom of [[WorldInTheSky the endless sky]] and be [[WrapAround sent back to the top]]. These falls are subdivided into times based on the Plummet's position, such as "high," and "low."" WordOfGod is that the amount of time a fall lasts is, coincidentally, 24 real-world hours.
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* RapeAsDrama: There's enough rape to give ''[[Franchise/GameOfThrones Game Of Thrones]]'' a run for it's money, at least relative to length. Let's see, there's:

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* RapeAsDrama: There's enough rape to give ''[[Franchise/GameOfThrones Game Of Thrones]]'' a run for it's its money, at least relative to length. Let's see, there's:
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** Over [[SerialRapist four hundred incidents]] [[ReallyGetsAround by Dayless himself]] when he was in power,

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** Over [[SerialRapist four hundred Four-hundred and twenty-seven incidents]] [[ReallyGetsAround by Dayless himself]] when he himself. That's victims, not counts: the general pattern was once every "fall" (day) for about a month, bring in power,a new girl or two, and repeat.
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* KickingAssInAllHerFinery: A lot of higher class women wear dresses specially made to hold swords and not impede their agility in a duel, and others carry their swords in sheaths that double as parasols.
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* TemptingFate: At the end of his journal, Daylen notes that he'd do everything differently if he had another chance, and "If the Light truly wanted to punish me, [[CruelMercy it would curse me to live]]." He quickly decides that [[MilesToGoBeforeISleep his long quest]] is his own fault for wanting to make amends and be a hero again.

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* TemptingFate: At the end of In his journal, Daylen notes that he'd do everything differently if he had another chance, and "If the Light truly wanted to punish me, [[CruelMercy it would curse me to live]]." He quickly later decides that [[MilesToGoBeforeISleep his long quest]] is his own fault for wanting to make amends and be a hero again.again, because the Light seemed to [[TheChosenOne accept his offer]].
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* TemptingFate: At the end of his journal, Daylen notes that he'd do everything differently if he had another chance, and "If the Light truly wanted to punish me, [[CruelMercy it would curse me to live]]." He quickly decides that [[MilesToGoBeforeISleep his long quest]] is his own fault for wanting to make amends and be a hero again.

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* TheChosenOne: After surviving his BungledSuicide and getting his powers, Daylen decides that the Light must want him for this purpose, and ([[MoodSwinger briefly]]) feels a new sense of optimism as he begins his RedemptionQuest. [[spoiler: By the end of the book, Ahrek and Lyrah both agree that this is the case--though obviously with a great dual of incredulity on Lyrah's part.]]



* MoodSwinger: Daylen swings between hopeful optimism, smug superiority, explosive rage, juvenile playfulness, and paralyzing self-hatred practically every few chapters. He also considers Lyrah to be this, due to how [[HamToHamCombat intense]] their conversations get.

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* MoodSwinger: Daylen swings between hopeful optimism, [[InsufferableGenius smug superiority, superiority]], [[UnstoppableRage explosive rage, rage]], [[PsychopathicManchild juvenile playfulness, playfulness]], and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone paralyzing self-hatred self-hatred]] practically every few chapters. He also considers Lyrah to be this, due to how [[HamToHamCombat intense]] their conversations get.



* UnwantedRevival: Daylen [[DeathSeeker wants to die]], so the idea of a Lightbringer bringing him BackFromTheDead is a horrifying idea to him. At the end of the book, [[spoiler: Ahrek plans to do this to Daylen, but Daylen's HealingFactor saves him first. Daylen then demands that Ahrek does ''not'' do this after his execution, but him being sentenced to slavery rather than death screws up his plans to die, once again.]]

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* UnwantedRevival: Daylen [[DeathSeeker wants to die]], so the idea of a Lightbringer bringing him BackFromTheDead is a horrifying idea to him. At the end of the book, [[spoiler: Ahrek plans to do this to Daylen, but Daylen's HealingFactor saves him first. Daylen then demands that orders Ahrek does ''not'' to do this after his execution, trial, but him being sentenced to slavery rather than death screws up his plans to die, once again.]]

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* AltarDiplomacy: Queen Quallandra tried this on Dayless, but didn't exactly get the result she wanted: he seduced her, [[ILied changed his mind]] about going through with the marriage, and revealed the affair to damage her standing among her people before conquering her country.



* AncestralWeapon: Sunucles, including weapons, are magically linked to the person who's blood was used to forge them--but there's a small chance that the link can pass to their eldest child when they die. Daylen uses this as an excuse for why he's linked to Imperious. [[spoiler: The existence of his bastard children, all of whom are older than he physically appears to be, is one of the elements that tips Ahrek off that Daylen isn't who he appears to be.]]

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* AncestralWeapon: Sunucles, including weapons, are magically linked to the person who's blood was used to forge them--but there's a small chance that the link can pass to their eldest child when they die. Daylen uses this as an excuse for why he's linked to Imperious. [[spoiler: The existence of his bastard children, all of whom are older than he physically appears to be, is one of the elements clues that tips tip Ahrek off that Daylen isn't who he appears to be.]]



* BloodMagic: Sunforging an item requires a sample of blood, with the resulting [[PowerCrystal sunucle]] being linked to the person who provided the blood.

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* BloodMagic: Sunforging an item requires a sample of blood, with the resulting [[PowerCrystal [[MagicalAccessory sunucle]] being linked to the person who provided the blood.


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* HandOrObjectUnderwear: After his NakedFirstImpression gets [[PleasePutSomeClothesOn a chilly reception]] from Lyrah, Cueseg covers himself with his hands.


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* PowerCrystal: Many sunucles have a crystalline appearance, particularly [[CoolSword sunblades]], even if they were made of ''wood'' before the sunforging process.


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* UnwantedRevival: Daylen [[DeathSeeker wants to die]], so the idea of a Lightbringer bringing him BackFromTheDead is a horrifying idea to him. At the end of the book, [[spoiler: Ahrek plans to do this to Daylen, but Daylen's HealingFactor saves him first. Daylen then demands that Ahrek does ''not'' do this after his execution, but him being sentenced to slavery rather than death screws up his plans to die, once again.]]
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* AbsurdCuttingPower: Turning a sword into a sunucle magically increases its cutting power, resulting in swords that can cleave through any physical substance that isn't also a sunucle, made of darkstone, or part of a Shade's body.


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* ActionGirl: Because of the need for everyone to be prepared to fight the Shade, female duelists are almost as common as male ones in Tellos.
* ActuallyADoombot: Dayless faked his death by leaving a body double on his flagship, fooling everyone into believing that he was on it as it exploded, while he made a VillainExitStageLeft.
* AerithAndBob: Hamahran names include Tara, Lyrah, Daylen, and Ahrek.[[note]]Though Ahrek is Tuerasian by blood, he was raised in Hamahra, and Daylen recognizes his name as Hamahran.[[/note]]


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* AncestralWeapon: Sunucles, including weapons, are magically linked to the person who's blood was used to forge them--but there's a small chance that the link can pass to their eldest child when they die. Daylen uses this as an excuse for why he's linked to Imperious. [[spoiler: The existence of his bastard children, all of whom are older than he physically appears to be, is one of the elements that tips Ahrek off that Daylen isn't who he appears to be.]]


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* AttackAttackAttack: The biggest weakness of the Shade is that they're so crazed with bloodlust that they freely make suicidal attacks that humans would never consider and have virtually no strategy in battle, unless a [[MonsterLord Lord Shade]] is giving them orders. Exploiting this is the key to defeating their armies on the battlefield.


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* SympathyForTheDevil: When Blackheart dies, [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing most people respond]] with some variation of "Take ''that'', you bastard!" except for [[spoiler: Daylen, who regrets killing him once he finds out that Blackheart was one of his bastard sons, wishing that he could have helped Blackheart begin his own RedemptionQuest.]]

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