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* CallForward: The prologue has Riker briefing Picard on repairs and the state of the crew in the aftermath of ''First Contact''. Among other things, Riker states that Worf will be returning to [=DS9=] ASAP. Command has concerns about the current state of Dominion activity and they want the ''Defiant'' back at its posting just in case. These tensions will shortly thereafter come to a head in "In Purgatory's Shadow" (which also was the first episode of the [=DS9=] that explicitly acknowledges the Borg attack).
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* NotSoDifferent: Koval compares TheFederation to the Borg in terms of conquest.
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* PsychicStatic: Zweller knows mental techniques that let him block Troi from reading his emotions.
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* ApocalypseHow: The subspace singularity apparently has the potential to cause a Class X-4 (universal destruction) should the worst-case scenario occur.
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* ApocalypseHow: The subspace singularity apparently has the potential to cause a [[ApocalypseHow/ClassX4 Class X-4 (universal destruction) destruction)]] should the worst-case scenario occur.
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* VillainHasAPoint: As usual, Section 31 is portrayed as the bad guys, but Picard and his officers admit that they may be right about the ruling government of Chiaros being as brutal and corrupt as LaResistance claims.
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Part of the Franchise/StarTrekNovelVerse, Literature/StarTrekNovelVerse, one of four books released under the "Section 31" banner. For those who don't remember them from ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' or ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'', [[NoSuchAgency Section 31]] is an illegal covert operations division within the [[TheFederation United Federation of Planets]], dedicated to protecting that entity regardless of the legal or moral restrictions it would place on them.
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* SpiderSense: During the PeaceConference, Troi gets a sudden "OhCrap" face and [[DivingSave pushes Picard out of the way of a phaser beam]], and everything goes straight to hell.
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** Hawk is a bit surprised at one point when Picard calls him "Sean" instead of "Lieutenant Hawk". Of course, Hawk had just saved Picard's life, as Picard points out.
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** Hawk is a bit surprised at one point when Picard calls him "Sean" instead of "Lieutenant Hawk". Of course, Hawk had just saved Picard's life, as Picard himself points out.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Re the elections on Chiaros IV -- as the events unfold, Picard accepts that the Federation has lost its bid on the planet and focuses instead on dealing with the subspace singularity.
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* FirstNameBasis: Tabor encourages this with Hawk while making the recruiting pitch.
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** Tabor encourages this with Hawk while making the recruitingpitch.pitch.
** Hawk is a bit surprised at one point when Picard calls him "Sean" instead of "Lieutenant Hawk". Of course, Hawk had just saved Picard's life, as Picard points out.
* FramingDevice: The aftermath of ''Film/StarTrekFirstContact''. Picard starts reflecting on the Chiaros mission while reading the casualty list from their battle with the Borg, and the book ends with him and Keru visiting Hawk's parents on Mars.
** Tabor encourages this with Hawk while making the recruiting
** Hawk is a bit surprised at one point when Picard calls him "Sean" instead of "Lieutenant Hawk". Of course, Hawk had just saved Picard's life, as Picard points out.
* FramingDevice: The aftermath of ''Film/StarTrekFirstContact''. Picard starts reflecting on the Chiaros mission while reading the casualty list from their battle with the Borg, and the book ends with him and Keru visiting Hawk's parents on Mars.
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* {{Gesundheit}}: This joke is used at one point.when Gomp the Tellarite sneezes very loudly.
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* BlatantLies: {{Lampshaded}} when Geordi, obviously exhausted, claims that he's just fine when Data asks if he's all right.
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* ManBitesMan: Doctor Gomp, a [[PigMan Tellarite]] medical officer, takes on a Chiarosian warrior by biting into his arm.
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* PyrrhicVictory: Yeah, the Romulans gain control of Chiaros IV and the entire Geminus Gulf, but they lose the subspace singularity they wanted, meaning that there's absolutely nothing else in the area that's of use to anyone. It's also hinted that their control of the Chiarosians may not last as long as they want.
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* ChewOutFakeOut: When Hawk tells Picard about Section 31, he seems to expect that he'll be in serious trouble. Picard does lecture him about the importance of being honest from the beginning, but also commends him for doing the right thing in the end.
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* ItSeemedLikeAGoodIdeaAtTheTime: Section 31's deal with the Tal Shiar to let the Romulans have the Geminus Gulf in exchange for a list of Romulan spies in TheFederation. Zweller muses that if they'd known about the subspace singularity, they wouldn't have made the bargain.
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* TalkToTheFist: Batanides clocks Zweller when she realizes that he and Tabor were working together for Section 31.
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* PaperThinDisguise: How Koval regards Batanidies disguising herself as a mere lieutenant, as he already knows who she is.
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* TheMole: Cortin Zweller is Section 31's mole aboard the ''Slayton'' (until her destruction). Ambassador Tabor tries to recruit Hawk as a mole aboard the ''Enterprise''.
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** Cortin Zweller is Section 31's mole aboard the ''Slayton'' (until herdestruction). destruction).
** Ambassador Tabor tries to recruit Hawk as a mole aboard the ''Enterprise''.
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* TantrumThrowing: Batanidies reacts to Tabor's death by smashing a vase.
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* ApocalypseHow: The subspace singularity apparently has the potential to cause a Class X-4 (universal destruction) should the worst-case scenario occur.
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* NoManShouldHaveThisPower: Because of the aforementioned threat posed by the singularity, Picard decides that the best course of action is to permanently shove it into subspace.
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* BlastOut: What happens during the PeaceConference on Chiaros IV. It's never even revealed who fired the first shot, but the casualties include Ambassador Tabor and LaResistance leader Falhain.
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* BlatantLies: {{Lampshaded}} when Geordi, obviously exhausted, claims that he's just fine when Data asks if he's all right.
--> '''Data:''' I have noticed that, among humans, even the closest of friends, will, on occasion, deliberately prevaricate to one another. I believe that your response constitutes what Commander Riker would almost certainly describe as a "whopper".\\
'''Geordi:''' Guilty as charged, Data.
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--> The silence in the room was palpable. Data couldn't have shocked his superiors more if he had suddenly broken out into a soft-shoe song-and-dance routine.
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* BilingualDialogue: A rare instance of each participant using the other man's native language.
--> '''Zweller:''' ''Mnek'nra brhon, Orrha.'' (Good morning, Mr. Chairman.)\\
'''Koval:''' Morning? An odd choice of words, Commander Zweller, considering where we are. But I must compliment you. Your accent is virtually undetectable. Section 31 trains its operatives very well indeed.
--> '''Zweller:''' ''Mnek'nra brhon, Orrha.'' (Good morning, Mr. Chairman.)\\
'''Koval:''' Morning? An odd choice of words, Commander Zweller, considering where we are. But I must compliment you. Your accent is virtually undetectable. Section 31 trains its operatives very well indeed.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Koval may be a ManipulativeBastard who wants to harness an extremely dangerous phenomenon, but he doesn't approve of killing if it's not necessary. He even executes the commander of the warbird that destroyed the already-crippled ''Slayton''.
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* PsychicStatic: Zweller knows mental techniques that let him block Troi from reading his emotions.
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* GreenEyedMonster: {{Subverted}} with Tabor, who encourages Batanidies -- his lover -- to catch up on old times with Picard. This gives him a chance to do his work for Section 31.
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* InsaneAdmiral: Picard is unpleasantly surprised that Admiral Batanidies is with Starfleet Intelligence, possibly fearing that she'll turn out to be corrupt like Pressman was. Ultimately {{subverted}} -- she proves to be a ReasonableAuthorityFigure who's furious to learn about Section 31 and vows to do what she can to stop them.
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* RescueRomance: Hawk and Keru met when Hawk injured himself spelunking and Keru came to help him. They've been an item since.
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* CallBack: To the BarBrawl with the Nausicaans that led to Picard needing an artificial heart (which becomes a plot point in the latter half of the novel).
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* PeaceConference: One which ends horribly, with Ambassador Tabor and several Chiarosians dead.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Zweller's involvement with Section 31 and the events on Chiaros IV pretty much ends his friendship with Picard and Batanidies.
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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: The rescue plan is well-discussed; it goes wrong when the rescue shuttle is destroyed, forcing our heroes to hijack a Romulan scout ship.
* WrittenByTheWinners: Grelun comments on this.
* WrittenByTheWinners: Grelun comments on this.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: The Tellarite Gomp is a doctor, not a tricorder.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Zweller sees the deal between Section 31 and the Tal Shiar as this.
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* NotSoDifferent: Koval compares TheFederation to the Borg in terms of conquest.
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Part of the Franchise/StarTrekNovelVerse, one of four books released under the "Section 31" banner. For those who don't remember them from ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' or ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'', Section 31 is an illegal covert operations division within the [[TheFederation United Federation of Planets]], dedicated to protecting that nation regardless of the legal or moral restrictions it would place on them.
In this novel, [[Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration Captain Jean-Luc Picard]] learns of Section 31 while dealing with a diplomatic dispute between the Federation and the Romulan Star Empire, who both seek to court an inhabited planet (Chiaros) that will grant access to the local region of space to whichever it ends up joining.
The novel is perhaps, in retrospect, most notable for introducing the character of Ranul Keru, who would go on to greater things in the wider Star Trek Novel Verse.
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* AlienBlood: Chiarosian blood is gray.
* CarnivoreConfusion: Played with; Captain Blaylock enjoys sushi, but hasn't been comfortable eating it since Glebuk joined her crew, Glebuk being an [[FishPeople Antedean]].
* EideticMemory: Lieutenant Hawk.
* EndlessDaytime: As well as endless night - Chiaros IV is a tidally locked planet.
* {{Fictionary}}: The Romulan [[Creator/DianeDuane Rihannsu]] language makes another appearance.
* {{Gesundheit}}: This joke is used at one point.
* JumpedAtTheCall: Lieutenant Hawk. He allows that Starfleet was a natural choice for him; having grown up with a novelist mother who specialized in adventure stories, he found the idea of a "normal" desk job unbearably dull.
* ManBitesMan: Doctor Gomp, a [[PigMan Tellarite]] medical officer, takes on a Chiarosian warrior by biting into his arm.
* NegativeSpaceWedgie: The whole plot essentially revolves around one, though it's not apparent at first. A subspace singularity of great power lies in the disputed region; this is why the Romulans are so eager to claim an otherwise barren stretch of space. The singularity releases a subspace distortion wave that hits the USS ''Slayton'', because the Negative Space Wedgie needs to have ''some'' sort of negative effect on a starship...
* ProudWarriorRace: The Chiarosians, explicitly referred to as such.
** There are two Balduk among the ''Enterprise'' crew in this novel; Balduk are themselves a Proud Warrior Race.
* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Common in Romulan politics, and this novel is no exception. Koval pulls it on Pardek, whose daughter is "such a lovely child".
* StealthInSpace: The Romulans manage to hide a region of space containing their NegativeSpaceWedgie by surrounding it with buoys that carry cloaking devices, whose cloaking fields overlap.
* StraightGay: Ranul Keru and his partner Sean Hawk.
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Part of the Franchise/StarTrekNovelVerse, one of four books released under the "Section 31" banner. For those who don't remember them from ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' or ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'', Section 31 is an illegal covert operations division within the [[TheFederation United Federation of Planets]], dedicated to protecting that nation regardless of the legal or moral restrictions it would place on them.
In this novel, [[Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration Captain Jean-Luc Picard]] learns of Section 31 while dealing with a diplomatic dispute between the Federation and the Romulan Star Empire, who both seek to court an inhabited planet (Chiaros) that will grant access to the local region of space to whichever it ends up joining.
The novel is perhaps, in retrospect, most notable for introducing the character of Ranul Keru, who would go on to greater things in the wider Star Trek Novel Verse.
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!!Tropes:
* AlienBlood: Chiarosian blood is gray.
* CarnivoreConfusion: Played with; Captain Blaylock enjoys sushi, but hasn't been comfortable eating it since Glebuk joined her crew, Glebuk being an [[FishPeople Antedean]].
* EideticMemory: Lieutenant Hawk.
* EndlessDaytime: As well as endless night - Chiaros IV is a tidally locked planet.
* {{Fictionary}}: The Romulan [[Creator/DianeDuane Rihannsu]] language makes another appearance.
* {{Gesundheit}}: This joke is used at one point.
* JumpedAtTheCall: Lieutenant Hawk. He allows that Starfleet was a natural choice for him; having grown up with a novelist mother who specialized in adventure stories, he found the idea of a "normal" desk job unbearably dull.
* ManBitesMan: Doctor Gomp, a [[PigMan Tellarite]] medical officer, takes on a Chiarosian warrior by biting into his arm.
* NegativeSpaceWedgie: The whole plot essentially revolves around one, though it's not apparent at first. A subspace singularity of great power lies in the disputed region; this is why the Romulans are so eager to claim an otherwise barren stretch of space. The singularity releases a subspace distortion wave that hits the USS ''Slayton'', because the Negative Space Wedgie needs to have ''some'' sort of negative effect on a starship...
* ProudWarriorRace: The Chiarosians, explicitly referred to as such.
** There are two Balduk among the ''Enterprise'' crew in this novel; Balduk are themselves a Proud Warrior Race.
* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Common in Romulan politics, and this novel is no exception. Koval pulls it on Pardek, whose daughter is "such a lovely child".
* StealthInSpace: The Romulans manage to hide a region of space containing their NegativeSpaceWedgie by surrounding it with buoys that carry cloaking devices, whose cloaking fields overlap.
* StraightGay: Ranul Keru and his partner Sean Hawk.
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