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** Ambrose Griffin is shown to have this when he learns that Rachel has been involve [[spoiler: The Raven]]--who for all he knows is an extremely dangerous being of enormous power.
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** Ambrose Griffin is shown to have this when he learns that Rachel has been involve [[spoiler: The involved with [[spoiler:The Raven]]--who for all he knows is an extremely dangerous being of enormous power.
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* AmnesiacDissonance: People losing their memories is a large part of the series as a whole. Rachel herself has to deal with a similar conition in book 4.
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* AmnesiacDissonance: People losing their memories is a large part of the series as a whole. Rachel herself has to deal with a similar conition condition in book 4.
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* VillainousVidowsPeak: Dr. Mordeau.
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* VillainousVidowsPeak: VillainousWidowsPeak: Dr. Mordeau.
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Not to be confused with Australian actress, Creator/RachelGriffiths.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Poppy seeds. [[spoiler: How to stop hoards of animated skeletons -- just sprinkle a few in their path. (Note: Poppy seeds stopping the undead is a trope from Eastern European folk tales.)]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Poppy seeds. [[spoiler: How [[spoiler:How to stop hoards of animated skeletons -- just sprinkle a few in their path. (Note: Poppy path[[note]]Poppy seeds stopping the undead is a trope from Eastern European folk tales.)]] tales[[/note]].]]
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** TheKirk: Nastasia
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** TheKirk: Nastasia
Nastasia initially appears to be this, being TheLeader and the most reasonable person. However, as the series goes on, she is shown to be more mentally rigid and bound by logic, necessities, and rules, than Rachel is.
** TheSpock:RachelRachel's intellect makes her seem to be TheSpock, as she is analytical and calm. On the other hand, she is more flexible and results-oriented than Nastasia, making her more of TheKirk.
** TheSpock:
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Rachel's actions result in [[spoiler: her father losing his memory and his position in the Shadow Agency.]]
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* RulesLawyer: Used and subverted. At one point, Rachel is able to avoid technically [[IGaveMyWord promising]] something; but trying it again on a forewarned adult who requires her to promise in order to share information falls flat.
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** Ambrose Griffin is shown to have this when he learns that Rachel has been involve [[spoiler: The Raven]]--who for all he knows is an extremely dangerous being of enormous power.
* AmnesiacDissonance: People losing their memories is a large part of the series as a whole. Rachel herself has to deal with a similar conition in book 4.
** Vlad drops one in the fourth book: "You are weak. Do not make me remember that I am not."
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* BigGood: Vladimir von Dread appears to be.
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* BigGood: Vladimir von Dread appears to be.be, within the campus sphere. [[spoiler: Jariel]] is one for the world as a whole.
* BigBad: Rachel learns of the existence of one in book four.
* BigBad: Rachel learns of the existence of one in book four.
** Book 4 has an instance of Von Dread's entire student posse showing up to prevent Rachel from potentially being kidnapped. No fight occurs, but the adults who see it are extremely unnerved.
* {{Determinator}}: Nastasia shows a streak of this while practice-fighting with other students. She continues fighting even though hit by multiple spells, until actually paralyzed.
** Zoe Foster's father is shown to have become more distant to her as she grew up.
* ''The Awful Truth About Forgetting'': Who is The Master of the World and what secret has he caused the entire world to forget?
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* FamedInStory: Sigfried Smith is an in-universe celebrity for having killed a dragon and taken its hoard. He also saved Roanoke campus from a flying, flaming skunk.
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* FamedInStory: Sigfried Smith is an in-universe celebrity for having killed a dragon and taken its hoard. He also saved Roanoke campus from a flying, flaming skunk. And, in book 4, [[spoiler: an ogre.]]
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* TheLadysFavorTheLadysFavor: Valerie gives Sigfried a knife as a token.
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* {{Lunacy}}: Moonlight is necessary for degossamerization-- making certain spells permanent.
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* {{Lunacy}}: Moonlight is necessary for degossamerization-- making certain spells permanent. It takes thirteen months for semi-permanence and a full eight years for actual, real permanence.
** Book 4 mentions that some people have therefore become suspicious as to how Ouroboros Industries manages to produce industrial quantities of permanent, conjured items.
** Book 4 mentions that some people have therefore become suspicious as to how Ouroboros Industries manages to produce industrial quantities of permanent, conjured items.
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** In book 4, Rachel confronts her father about this issue.
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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: Gaius. She had, after all, just met him and was rather younger at an age where a few years is significant.
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* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: HeIsNotMyBoyfriend:
** Gaius.She Rachel had, after all, just met him and was rather younger at an age where a few years is significant.significant.
** More lightly, she tells Lucky that she won't be part of Siggy's harem, since Lucky doesn't grasp that things are different among humans.
** Gaius.
** More lightly, she tells Lucky that she won't be part of Siggy's harem, since Lucky doesn't grasp that things are different among humans.
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* GhostPirate: Rachel, needing treasures, is told about a pirate wreck; the ghost telling her is aware of this trope and assures her that the pirates did not fear death and so are not haunting it.
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Most seemed to bound by UnfinishedBusiness, but a wide variety of it, and they also range from could pass for human were it not for the glow and the translucency, to "a collection of mist and dried leaves blowing in the shape of a woman". It appears that the more aware you are that you are dead, and the more heroic your motive to be a ghost, the more human
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Most The reason given in story is that ghosts fear death too much, but others seemed to bound by UnfinishedBusiness, but UnfinishedBusiness -- a wide variety of it, and they it. They also range from could pass for human were it not for the glow and the translucency, to "a collection of mist and dried leaves blowing in the shape of a woman". It appears that the more aware you are that you are dead, and the more heroic your motive to be a ghost, the more human human.
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* PirateBooty: Rachel is told where to find some when she needs treasure. It stems from a pirate wreck, not burial.
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* UnfinishedBusiness: Ghosts seemly mostly bound by this.
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* UndeadChild: animated skeletons. [[spoiler: And not merely children. Babies, those sacrificed to Moloch.]]
* UnfinishedBusiness: Ghosts seemly mostly bound bythis.this, though fear of death is also cited as a way they are trapped.
* UnfinishedBusiness: Ghosts seemly mostly bound by
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* DuetoTheDead: Halloween is filled with death-honoring rituals. Also, Gaius tells a ghost, [[spoiler:one of the musicians of the Titanic,]] about the momument raised in their honor, and he is pleased and honored by it.
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** ''Rachel and the Many-Splendored Dreamland'': What is the nature of the being the villains are trying to summon? And other details of what they are doing.
* DuetoTheDead: Halloween is filled with death-honoring rituals. Also, Gaius tells a ghost, [[spoiler:one of the musicians of the Titanic,]] about themomument monument raised in their honor, and he is pleased and honored by it.
* DuetoTheDead: Halloween is filled with death-honoring rituals. Also, Gaius tells a ghost, [[spoiler:one of the musicians of the Titanic,]] about the
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* ChekovsGun: Rachel’s new wand, inherited from her grandmother, contains three charges of the Eternal Flame. One of them gets used in the finale.
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: Rachel’s new wand, inherited from her grandmother, contains three charges of the Eternal Flame. One of them gets used in the finale.
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** Vladimir Von Dread is based on Victor Von Doom
** Gaius Valiant was based on Gaius Baltar.
** Zoe Forrest was based on Ramona Flowers.
** Valerie Hunt(a.k.a Valerie Foxx in the older versions) was Veronica Mars.
** Salome Iscariot was Lilly Kane.
** William Locke was William Bell from Fringe.
** The P.E. teacher Roland Chanson was Clark Kent.
** The Romanovs were the distant descendants of Corwin of Amber.
** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if Harry had had the personality of James Potter, Harry's father.
** Scarlett Mallory MacDannan was originally Hermione. (Her husband, Finn MacDannan, was a character from another story made up by the same authoress. There is no equivalent to Ron in the story.)
** The List goes on and on.
** Gaius Valiant was based on Gaius Baltar.
** Zoe Forrest was based on Ramona Flowers.
** Valerie Hunt(a.k.a Valerie Foxx in the older versions) was Veronica Mars.
** Salome Iscariot was Lilly Kane.
** William Locke was William Bell from Fringe.
** The P.E. teacher Roland Chanson was Clark Kent.
** The Romanovs were the distant descendants of Corwin of Amber.
** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if Harry had had the personality of James Potter, Harry's father.
** Scarlett Mallory MacDannan was originally Hermione. (Her husband, Finn MacDannan, was a character from another story made up by the same authoress. There is no equivalent to Ron in the story.)
** The List goes on and on.
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** Vladimir Von Dread is very obviously based on Victor Von Doom
** Gaius Valiant was based on Gaius Baltar.
** Zoe Forrest was based on Ramona Flowers.
** Valerie Hunt(a.k.a Valerie Foxx in the older versions) was Veronica Mars.
** Salome Iscariot was Lilly Kane.
** William Locke was William Bell from Fringe.
** The P.E. teacher Roland Chanson was Clark Kent.
** The Romanovs were the distant descendants of Corwin of Amber.
** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if Harry had had the personality of James Potter, Harry's father.
** Scarlett Mallory MacDannan was originally Hermione. (Her husband, Finn MacDannan, was a character from another story made up by the same authoress. There is no equivalent to Ron in the story.)
Doom.
** The List goes on and on. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters Seriously, it does.]]
** Gaius Valiant was based on Gaius Baltar.
** Zoe Forrest was based on Ramona Flowers.
** Valerie Hunt(a.k.a Valerie Foxx in the older versions) was Veronica Mars.
** Salome Iscariot was Lilly Kane.
** William Locke was William Bell from Fringe.
** The P.E. teacher Roland Chanson was Clark Kent.
** The Romanovs were the distant descendants of Corwin of Amber.
** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if Harry had had the personality of James Potter, Harry's father.
** Scarlett Mallory MacDannan was originally Hermione. (Her husband, Finn MacDannan, was a character from another story made up by the same authoress. There is no equivalent to Ron in the story.)
** The List goes on and on. [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters Seriously, it does.]]
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** Despite knowing that she will die if another person finds out her identity, [[spoiler: Ilondria]] meets with and helps Zoe, which contributes to her death several chapters later.
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** Despite knowing that she will die if another person finds out her identity, [[spoiler: Ilondria]] Illondria]] meets with and helps Zoe, which contributes to her death several chapters later.
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* {{Lunacy}}: Moonlight is necessary for degossamerization-- making certain spells permanent .
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* {{Lunacy}}: Moonlight is necessary for degossamerization-- making certain spells permanent .permanent.
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** Siegfried Smith, the famous orphan who is brand-new to the magical world, was originally based on the author's husband (John C. Wright)'s roleplaying character in the game--not on Harry Potter, as previously suggested here. Siggy is an orphan because the player min/maxed the character.
** Rachel herself is a native of her world. She was created for the original game because the authoress wanted to play a character who could get into Ravenclaw, however, the moderator put her in Griffindor anyway.
** Rachel herself is a native of her world. She was created for the original game because the authoress wanted to play a character who could get into Ravenclaw, however, the moderator put her in Griffindor anyway.
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** Siegfried Smith, the famous orphan who is brand-new to the magical world, was originally based on the author's husband (John C. Wright)'s roleplaying character in the game--not on Harry Potter, as previously suggested here. Siggy is an orphan because the player min/maxed the character. \n The other influence for the character was Sigfried, from the Ring Cycle...a wild-man of the woods orphan who ended up with a dragon's treasure.
** Rachel herself is a native of her world. She was created for the original game because the authoress wanted to play a character who could get into Ravenclaw, however, the moderator put her in Griffindor anyway.
** Rachel herself is a native of her world. She was created for the original game because the authoress wanted to play a character who could get into Ravenclaw, however, the moderator put her in Griffindor anyway.
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* {{Expy}}: According to [[WordOfGod the author]], the series is based on a MassiveMultiplayerCrossover role-playing game created and played by her family, and the finished story contains non-public domain characters with the "serial-numbers filed off." Hints are given by the princess's visions. Exploration of those hints and other clues currently available (as of book 2) can be found in WMG/RachelGriffin.
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* {{Expy}}: According to [[WordOfGod the author]], the series is based on a MassiveMultiplayerCrossover role-playing game created and played by her family, family and run by a family friend, who is given credit on the title page, and the finished story contains non-public domain characters with the "serial-numbers filed off." Hints are given by the princess's visions. Exploration of those hints and other clues currently available (as of book 2) can be found in WMG/RachelGriffin.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Poppy seeds. [[spoiler: How to stop hoards of animated skeletons -- just sprinkle a few in their path.]] (Note: Poppy seeds stopping the undead is a trope from Eastern European folk tales.)
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Poppy seeds. [[spoiler: How to stop hoards of animated skeletons -- just sprinkle a few in their path.]] (Note: Poppy seeds stopping the undead is a trope from Eastern European folk tales.))]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Poppy seeds. [[spoiler: How to stop hoards of animated skeletons -- just sprinkle a few in their path.]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Poppy seeds. [[spoiler: How to stop hoards of animated skeletons -- just sprinkle a few in their path.]]]] (Note: Poppy seeds stopping the undead is a trope from Eastern European folk tales.)
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* [[PoweredByAForsakenChild Powered By A Beloved Child]]: one spell needs human sacrifice -- and not only that, those offering the human must love this person enough for the spell to work. It ''has'' been successfully cast.
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* [[PoweredByAForsakenChild Powered By A Beloved Child]]: one spell needs human sacrifice -- and not only that, those offering the human must love this person enough for the spell to work. It ''has'' been successfully cast.cast--thousands of times.
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* ParentalFavoritism: The Griffins. Rachel was her grandfather's favorite, older sister Sandra her father's.
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* ParentalFavoritism: The Griffins. Rachel was her grandfather's favorite, older sister Sandra her father's. Brother Peter is her mother's favorite.
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* NotNowKiddo: Sterling example: Rachel [[spoiler: knows the keyword to bind Azrael, the demon possessing Mortimer Egg.]] When she tries to tell her sister Laurel this, Laurel turns around and jinxes her voice so Rachel can't distract her from the fight.
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* NotNowKiddo: Sterling example: Rachel [[spoiler: knows the keyword to bind Azrael, the demon possessing Mortimer Egg.]] When she tries to tell her sister Laurel Sandra this, Laurel Sandra turns around and jinxes her voice so Rachel can't distract her from the fight.
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* MagicVersusScience: they conflict. Unusally, research is going on to overcome the limitation.
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* MagicVersusScience: they conflict. Too much magic stops tech. Too much tech stops magic. Unusally, research is going on to overcome the limitation.
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* MagicMusic: Nastasia uses a violin, Sigfried a trumpet. Another character uses bagpipes.
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* MagicMusic: Nastasia uses a violin, Sigfried a trumpet. Another character uses bagpipes. One performs magic with a tuba.
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** The P.E. teacher Roland Chanson was Clark Kent.
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* IntrepidReporter: Valerie Foxx, Fearless Girl Reporter!
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* IntrepidReporter: Valerie Foxx, Hunt (formerly Foxx), Fearless Girl Reporter!
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*** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if Harry had had the personality of James Potter, Harry's father.
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*** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if James Potter, Harry's father, had been the Chosen One.
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*** Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if Harry had had the personality of James Potter, Harry's father, had been father.
** Scarlett Mallory MacDannan was originally Hermione. (Her husband, Finn MacDannan, was a character from another story made up by theChosen One.same authoress. There is no equivalent to Ron in the story.)
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** [[TheCassandra Xandra]] Harris, also known as "Flops Over Dead Chick" is acerbically happy to see this happening to someone else, for once.
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** [[TheCassandra Xandra]] Harris, Black, also known as "Flops Over Dead Chick" is acerbically happy to see this happening to someone else, for once.
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** Siegfried Smith, the famous orphan who is brand-new to the magical world, was originally based on Harry Potter.
** Rachel herself, while a native of her world, was created for the original game because the authoress wanted a player character based on Hermione, according to WordOfGod.
** Rachel herself, while a native of her world, was created for the original game because the authoress wanted a player character based on Hermione, according to WordOfGod.
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** Siegfried Smith, the famous orphan who is brand-new to the magical world, was originally based on the author's husband (John C. Wright)'s roleplaying character in the game--not on Harry Potter.
Potter, as previously suggested here. Siggy is an orphan because the player min/maxed the character.
** Rachelherself, while herself is a native of her world, world. She was created for the original game because the authoress wanted to play a player character who could get into Ravenclaw, however, the moderator put her in Griffindor anyway.
** Vladimir Von Dread is based onHermione, according to WordOfGod.Victor Von Doom
** Gaius Valiant was based on Gaius Baltar.
** Zoe Forrest was based on Ramona Flowers.
** Valerie Hunt(a.k.a Valerie Foxx in the older versions) was Veronica Mars.
** Salome Iscariot was Lilly Kane.
**William Locke was William Bell from Fringe.
** The Romanovs were the distant descendants of Corwin of Amber.
****Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if James Potter, Harry's father, had been the Chosen One.
**The List goes on and on.
** Rachel
** Vladimir Von Dread is based on
** Gaius Valiant was based on Gaius Baltar.
** Zoe Forrest was based on Ramona Flowers.
** Valerie Hunt(a.k.a Valerie Foxx in the older versions) was Veronica Mars.
** Salome Iscariot was Lilly Kane.
**William Locke was William Bell from Fringe.
** The Romanovs were the distant descendants of Corwin of Amber.
****Agent James Darling is based on grown up Harry Potter...if James Potter, Harry's father, had been the Chosen One.
**The List goes on and on.
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* {{Animorphism}}: Zoe's uncle was turned into a sea turtle once; Gaius gets turned into a shee--a ram, and [[spoiler: Kenneth Hunt was turned into a goose.]]
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* {{Animorphism}}: Zoe's uncle was turned into a sea turtle once; Gaius gets turned into a shee--a ram, shee--[[InsistentTerminology a ram]], and [[spoiler: Kenneth Hunt was turned into a goose.]]
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* BadDreams: Frejya has nightmares after [[spoiler:her brothers' execution]].
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* BadDreams: Frejya Freka Starkadder has nightmares after [[spoiler:her brothers' execution]].
** Book 3 reveals that it's actually the opposite: they're wolves who turned into humans.
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* BadassBoast: "So swears Dread!" Unfortunately, this is immediately skewered by Rachel and Sigfried, who were eavesdropping: "So swears Griffin!" "So swears Smith!"
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