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* ChallengingTheChief: In order to become monarch of Zumorda, a person must defeat three successive champions and then the current monarch herself.
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* ChallengingTheChief: In order to become monarch of Zumorda, a person must defeat three two successive champions and then the current monarch herself.
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* FountainOfYouth: Queen Invasya has lived for centuries, while only looking in her forties at most due to magic.
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* ImmortalRuler: Queen Invasya has ruled over Zumorda for centuries while keeping herself alive using her magic and appearing much younger.
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Her book ''Inkmistress'' is set in the same universe, but unconnected with the plot of these novels.
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Her book ''Inkmistress'' ''Literature/{{Inkmistress}}'' is set in the same universe, but unconnected only loosely connected with the plot of these novels.
novels, as it's set many centuries earlier. It was released between them in 2018.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Dennaleia, one of the protagonists, soon falls for FieryRedhead Mare, her co-protagonist, with them becoming a heroic couple.
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** Cas is killed with a white arrow which unerringly struck him from a very long distance and is difficult spot due to an enchantment on it.
** Zumordan weapons also have enchantments that a person with [[ElementalPowers an Affinity]] can sense simply by touching them, and show others by a specific MagicalGesture.
** Zumordan weapons also have enchantments that a person with [[ElementalPowers an Affinity]] can sense simply by touching them, and show others by a specific MagicalGesture.
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** Cas is killed with a white arrow which unerringly struck him from a very long distance and is difficult to spot due to because it has an enchantment on it.
** Zumordan weapons also have enchantments that a person with [[ElementalPowers an Affinity]] can sense simply by touching them, and show to othersby with a specific MagicalGesture.
** Zumordan weapons also have enchantments that a person with [[ElementalPowers an Affinity]] can sense simply by touching them, and show to others
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Dennaleia, one of the protagonists, soon falls for Mare, her co-protagonist, with them becoming a heroic couple.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Dennaleia, one of the protagonists, soon falls for FieryRedhead Mare, her co-protagonist, with them becoming a heroic couple.
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Dennaleia cheats on her fiancé Thandilimon by having sex with her sister. However, she's sympathetic as a result of their engagement [[ArrangedMarriage being arranged]] when both were just children, so this really wasn't a commitment she chose, plus Dennaleia [[IncompatibleOrientation is a lesbian]] so she'd never truly be happy with him regardless.
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Dennaleia cheats on her fiancé Thandilimon by having sex with her his sister. However, she's sympathetic as a result of their engagement [[ArrangedMarriage being arranged]] when both were just children, so this really wasn't a commitment she chose, plus Dennaleia [[IncompatibleOrientation is a lesbian]] so she'd never truly be happy with him regardless.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Dennaleia, one of the protagonists, soon falls for Mare, her co-protagonist, with them becoming a heroic couple.
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* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Lord Kriantz framed the Zumordans for attacks against the Mynorian government, so that they'd go to war with him against Zumorda, winning land he wants.]]
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* FalseFlagOperation: [[spoiler:Lord Kriantz framed the Zumordans for attacks against the Mynorian Mynarian government, so that they'd go to war with him against Zumorda, winning land he wants.]]
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* FieryRedhead: Mare is a stubborn, hot-tempered and rebellious redhead.
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* UptightLovesWild: Dennaleia is a reserved, duty-bound ProperLady at first. She's soon attracted to Mare, a rebellious tomboy who inspires her to defy what's expected from her while becoming a couple.
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* BanOnMagic: Mynarians mostly believe {{magic is evil}}, considered treason, so it's outlawed there. The Recusants, who think otherwise and are mostly magic users, have been rebelling against this law increasingly which has caused violent outbreaks.
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* BanOnMagic: Mynarians mostly believe {{magic is evil}}, MagicIsEvil, considered treason, so it's outlawed there. The Recusants, who think otherwise and are mostly magic users, have been rebelling against this law increasingly which has caused violent outbreaks.
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* DisposableFiance: Thandililom, Dennaleia's fiancé, is nice enough but also unappealing to her. It soon becomes clear this is because [[IncompatibleOrientation she's a lesbian]], falling instead for his sister. She leaves him and runs away with Mare after their relationship is discovered.
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Dennaleia cheats on her fiancé Thandilimon by having sex with her sister. However, she's sympathetic as a result of their engagement [[ArrangedMarriage being arranged]] when both were just children, so this really wasn't a commitment she chose, plus Dennaleia [[IncompatibleOrientation is a lesbian]] so she'd never truly be happy with him regardless.
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** Some of the minor female characters are guards and soldiers too.
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* SecondActBreakup: In the sequel Dennaleia and Mare break up over a misunderstandings that results from Dennaleia's uncontrollable magic.
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* SecondActBreakup: In the sequel Dennaleia and Mare break up over a misunderstandings misunderstanding that results from Dennaleia's uncontrollable magic.magic. [[spoiler:They get back together later.]]
