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* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: Metris is captured and tortured until he is assimilated ("Enfranchised").]]
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* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: [[spoiler: Metris is captured and tortured until he is assimilated ("Enfranchised").]]
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* FauxSymbolism: The work contains an inordinate amount of references to [= SMWCentral's =] hierarchy and staff, but this piece doesn't actually add up to anything.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: The inhabitants of [= SMWCentral =] are oft called Centralites.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: {{Pun}}: The inhabitants of [= SMWCentral =] are oft called Centralites.
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A work of fiction by someone named Kadyastar from the VideoGame/SuperMarioWorld editing site [[http://www.smwcentral.net SMWCentral]]. It is set ExtyYearsFromNow into TheFuture, where the character wakes up with no memories whatsoever. Apparently his healing process was botched and it accidentally erased his memory. He learns of how safe it is inside the walls of the seven cities, and how the rest is controlled by the vicious and hateful Outlanders. He makes friends with Max, the son of an Administrator, Sanein. Slowly, flashbacks reveal his past to him in dark patches. He learns yet more from Sanein, who has proven to be kinder than one would think. Then he is unexpectedly set back to square one, going through a memory-wiping process... and yet he still remembers. Sanein whisks him and Max away to the Outlands, where the nameless child learns of his heritage and reputation... it all kinda spirals downhill from there.
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A work of fiction by someone named Kadyastar from the VideoGame/SuperMarioWorld editing site [[http://www.smwcentral.net SMWCentral]]. It is set ExtyYearsFromNow into in TheFuture, where the character wakes up with no memories whatsoever. Apparently his healing process was botched and it accidentally erased his memory. He learns of how safe it is inside the walls of the seven cities, and how the rest is controlled by the vicious and hateful Outlanders. He makes friends with Max, the son of an Administrator, Sanein. Slowly, flashbacks reveal his past to him in dark patches. He learns yet more from Sanein, who has proven to be kinder than one would think. Then he is unexpectedly set back to square one, going through a memory-wiping process... and yet he still remembers. Sanein whisks him and Max away to the Outlands, where the nameless child learns of his heritage and reputation... it all kinda spirals downhill from there.
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* HiddenBadass: Metris, as he forgot that he [[IKnowKungFu knew Kung Fu]] due to EasyAmnesia.
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* HiddenBadass: Metris, as he forgot that he [[IKnowKungFu [[IKnowKarate knew Kung Fu]] due to EasyAmnesia.
