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* {{Motifs}}
** ''The moon.'' Mal is reminded of a new-moon prayer when he first sees the white-clad Alima from a distance; the titular moonflowers are growing in Marian's garden; Wolfdog-Ned is described as moon-white and named "Moony."
** ''Home.'' SacredHospitality, the safety of the town walls, and Alima's vulnerability due to losing her old home.
** ''The moon.'' Mal is reminded of a new-moon prayer when he first sees the white-clad Alima from a distance; the titular moonflowers are growing in Marian's garden; Wolfdog-Ned is described as moon-white and named "Moony."
** ''Home.'' SacredHospitality, the safety of the town walls, and Alima's vulnerability due to losing her old home.
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** Oscar doesn't like that his oldest son is smart and handsome, since it makes him a prime target for the Fair Folk. Historically, people were very careful not to brag about themselves or loved ones for precisely this reason.
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** Oscar doesn't like that his oldest son Owen is smart and handsome, since it makes him a prime target for the Fair Folk. Historically, people were very careful not to brag about themselves or loved ones for precisely this reason.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of Moher, but is also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And they tried to kill one of their own people out of homophobia.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of Moher, but going too far out of town alone is hazardous due to the Folk. They also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And they tried to kill one of their own people out of homophobia.
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->'''''Moonflowers''' is about an Irish guy, his little brother, an American girl who ends up living with them, and the dog they rescue. Who is secretly the girl's presumed-dead father. ...Yeah, it's that kind of story.'' - '''The first part of the album summary.'''
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-->''And by story, I mean "FairyTale."''
-->''And by fairy-tale, I mean "[[{{Grimmification}} the unsettling kind.]]"'' - '''The first part of the album summary.'''
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* {{Grimmification}}: As stated in the summary, ''Moonflowers'' is "the unsettling kind" of fairy tale.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Ned and Lucy were brought to the Otherworld by the Hunter, and Ned thinks he and his wife were only missing for a week. Ogma tells him that's it's actually been ''three months'' since they vanished, and Alima understandably thinks her parents are dead.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Ned and Lucy were brought to the Otherworld by the Hunter, and Ned thinks he and his wife were only missing for a week. Ogma tells him that's it's actually been ''three months'' since they vanished, and Alima understandably thinks her parents are dead.
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* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture, when Mal tries to defend Alima against the Wild Hunt; Christians are implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist with magic.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Ogma. Owen follows heavily in his grandfather's footsteps.
* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture, when Mal tries to defend Alima against the Wild Hunt; Christians are implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist with magic.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy); while the story takes place near the scenic Cliffs of Moher and Cloncarrig's population is under a thousand, it's still modern. Poked fun at early on, when Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture, when Mal tries to defend Alima against the Wild Hunt; Christians are implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist with magic.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy); while the story takes place near the scenic Cliffs of Moher and Cloncarrig's population is under a thousand, it's still modern. Poked fun at early on, when Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Ogma. Owen follows heavily in his grandfather's footsteps.
* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture,NeverSplitTheParty: It's implied that getting separated when Mal tries to defend Alima against chased by the Wild Hunt; Christians are implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhonesHunt is a ''very'' bad thing. Mal is adamant that he and laptops coexist with magic.
Alima stay together while running from them; when Ned tells Ogma that he lost track of his wife Lucy, Ogma muses that it will be hard to find her ''alive''.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy); while the story takes place near the scenic Cliffs of Moher and Cloncarrig's population is under a thousand, it's still modern. Poked fun at early on, when Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricityso far outside of Dublin.
* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture,
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy); while the story takes place near the scenic Cliffs of Moher and Cloncarrig's population is under a thousand, it's still modern. Poked fun at early on, when Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity
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** Ogma is a beekeeper. The heaviness of a large beehive is accurate, as are the different types of honey (aside from the magical Moher honey, which has no real-life equivalent).
* TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of Moher, but is also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And they also tried to kill one of their own people out of homophobia.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of Moher, but is also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And they also tried to kill one of their own people out of homophobia.
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** Ogma is a beekeeper. The heaviness of a large beehive is weights are accurate, as are the different types of honey (aside from the magical Moher honey, which has no real-life equivalent).
* TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of Moher, but is also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And theyalso tried to kill one of their own people out of homophobia.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of Moher, but is also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And they
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Ned and Lucy were brought somewhere by the Hunter, and Ned thinks he and his wife were only missing for a week. Ogma tells him that's it's actually been ''three months'' since they vanished, and Alima understandably thinks her parents are dead.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Ned and Lucy were brought somewhere to the Otherworld by the Hunter, and Ned thinks he and his wife were only missing for a week. Ogma tells him that's it's actually been ''three months'' since they vanished, and Alima understandably thinks her parents are dead.
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** Oscar muses that "The Folk like to prey on lost children."
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** Oscar muses that "The Folk like to prey on lost children."" Lost meaning "emotionally vulnerable," as Alima is.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: The chapters are named after nursery rhymes and children's games.
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* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain is his grandson. Danielle "Danny" DeTour is Alima's friend back in the United States.
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* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain is his grandson. Danielle "Danny" DeTour [=DeTour=] is Alima's friend back in the United States.
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets cursed to turn into an animal before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief. And she's now on the hit-list of the man who abducted you both in the first place.
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets cursed to turn into an animal before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief. And she's now on the hit-list of the man who abducted you both in the first place.you.
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** Owen has a vision of Alima's mother [[spoiler: hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her. Since Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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** Owen has a vision of Alima's mother [[spoiler: hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her. Since Owen's vision had sent him start into hysterical screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not''' effective against the Folk."'' Also, Christians are less powerful against the Fair Folk than the pagan "old-walkers."
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* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not''' effective against the Folk."'' Also, Christians are less powerful against have no influence on the Fair Folk than aside from their own abilities and knowledge, but the pagan "old-walkers.""old-walkers" do.
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* TricksterArchetype: Owen has shades of this.
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* TricksterArchetype: Owen has shades TownWithADarkSecret: Not a ''secret'', but Cloncarrig fits. It's described very poetically and located by the Cliffs of this.Moher, but is also beset with the Fair Folk. ...And they also tried to kill one of their own people out of homophobia.
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** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her. Since Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother [[spoiler: hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her. Since Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.view.
** Oscar muses that "The Folk like to prey on lost children."
** Oscar muses that "The Folk like to prey on lost children."
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's wolfdog is actually her father, but the curse forces him to stay quiet.
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's wolfdog new dog is actually her father, but the curse forces him to stay quiet.
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* ChangelingTale: Owen was "suspected" to be a changeling several years ago because people wanted an excuse to get rid of the gay guy. Also a dark StealthPun, as calling Owen a changeling is one step away from calling him a ''fairy,'' which is a common homophobic slur.
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* ChangelingTale: Referred to; Owen was "suspected" to be a changeling several years ago because people wanted an excuse to get rid of the gay guy. Also a dark StealthPun, as calling Owen a changeling is one step away from calling him a ''fairy,'' which is a common homophobic slur.
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* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture, when Mal tries to defend Alima against the Wild Hunt; Christianity is implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
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* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture, when Mal tries to defend Alima against the Wild Hunt; Christianity is Christians are implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
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* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not''' effective against the Folk."'' Also, Christians are implied to be less powerful against the Fair Folk than the pagan "old-walkers."
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* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not''' effective against the Folk."'' Also, Christians are implied to be less powerful against the Fair Folk than the pagan "old-walkers."
* SacredHospitality: Referred to several times; taking in a guest bestows magical protection on them. However, it has its limits. This is a problem when Mal tries to protect Alima from the Hunter, only to be told that she's not ''his'' guest.
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** Ogma O'Luain has a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
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** Ogma O'Luain has a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets turned into an animal before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief. And she's now on the hit-list of the man who abducted you both in the first place.
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets turned cursed to turn into an animal before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief. And she's now on the hit-list of the man who abducted you both in the first place.
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* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain is his grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift things like a beehive full of honey (large hives weigh up to ninety pounds) or his unconscious adult grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift things like a beehive full of honey (large hives weigh up to ninety pounds) or his unconscious adult grandson.
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* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain is his grandson.
grandson. Danielle "Danny" DeTour is Alima's friend back in the United States.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift things like a beehive full of honey (large hives can weigh up toninety pounds) ''ninety pounds'') or his unconscious adult grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift things like a beehive full of honey (large hives can weigh up to
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's wolfdog is her father, but the curse forces him to stay quiet.
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's wolfdog is actually her father, but the curse forces him to stay quiet.
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* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet nurse (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his strength).
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* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet nurse (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a an aged WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his strength).
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* {{Seer}}: Owen has the wyrth eyes, and thus has prophetic dreams called "oak dreams." He also has prophetic visions.
** FaintingSeer: Not ''fainting'', but seers lose awareness of their surroundings when they experience a vision, and Owen's little sister mentions that he's gotten himself hurt before due to it. Ogma has to knock Owen out during a ''very'' unpleasant vision, since he's in hysterics and flailing around.
* RapunzelHair: Alima has hip-length, wavy black hair that she's very protective of. Her hair is so tied to her identity that the first thing Ogma thinks on seeing the vision of a hanged woman with short black curls is that "She looks like Alima with [[TraumaticHaircut her hair hacked off]]." [[spoiler: Owen states later that the woman is Alima's mother.]]
** FaintingSeer: Not ''fainting'', but seers lose awareness of their surroundings when they experience a vision, and Owen's little sister mentions that he's gotten himself hurt before due to it. Ogma has to knock Owen out during a ''very'' unpleasant vision, since he's in hysterics and flailing around.
* RapunzelHair: Alima has hip-length, wavy black hair that she's very protective of. Her hair is so tied to her identity that the first thing Ogma thinks on seeing the vision of a hanged woman with short black curls is that "She looks like Alima with [[TraumaticHaircut her hair hacked off]]." [[spoiler: Owen states later that the woman is Alima's mother.]]
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** Oscar doesn't like that his oldest son is smart and handsome, since it makes him a prime target for the Fair Folk. Historically, people were very careful not to brag about themselves or their family for precisely this reason.
** Ogma is a beekeeper. The heaviness of a full beehive is accurate, as are the different types of honey (aside from the magical Moher honey, which has no real-life equivalent).
** Ogma is a beekeeper. The heaviness of a full beehive is accurate, as are the different types of honey (aside from the magical Moher honey, which has no real-life equivalent).
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** Oscar doesn't like that his oldest son is smart and handsome, since it makes him a prime target for the Fair Folk. Historically, people were very careful not to brag about themselves or their family loved ones for precisely this reason.
** Ogma is a beekeeper. The heaviness of afull large beehive is accurate, as are the different types of honey (aside from the magical Moher honey, which has no real-life equivalent).
** Ogma is a beekeeper. The heaviness of a
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Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy Bray and his little brother Logan. Over the weeks that she settles into her new life in Ireland and gets to know Mal and his friends, she gets stalked and pursued by the Hunter, a man wearing an elk skull who leads TheWildHunt.
She then stays at the house of the town's innkeeper and cunning-man, Ogma. Soon afterward, Alima finds an injured white wolfdog, takes him in, and names him "Moony," unaware that the dog is actually her living but cursed father, Ned Song.
She then stays at the house of the town's innkeeper and cunning-man, Ogma. Soon afterward, Alima finds an injured white wolfdog, takes him in, and names him "Moony," unaware that the dog is actually her living but cursed father, Ned Song.
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Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy Bray and his little brother Logan. Over the weeks that she settles into her new life in Ireland and gets to know Mal and his friends, she gets stalked and pursued by the Hunter, a man wearing an elk skull who leads TheWildHunt.
She then stays at the house of the town's innkeeper and cunning-man, Ogma. Soon afterward, Alima finds an injured white wolfdog, takes him in, and names him "Moony," unaware that the dog is actually herliving but cursed father, Ned Song.
now-cursed father Ned.
She then stays at the house of the town's innkeeper and cunning-man, Ogma. Soon afterward, Alima finds an injured white wolfdog, takes him in, and names him "Moony," unaware that the dog is actually her
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** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her mother. Since Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her mother.her. Since Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's new wolfdog is her father, but the curse forces him not to say it.
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's new wolfdog is her father, but the curse forces him not to say it.stay quiet.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Giant white wolfdog? Call him "Moony."
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* MagicalQueer: Not in the "fixes everything" sense, but Owen is literally a gay man with magical powers. In a darker turn, Owen was nearly killed ''because'' people claimed that he was a magical changeling instead of human.
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* PapaWolf: Both literal and figurative, as Alima's father Ned is cursed to become a wolf(dog). He's very upset when he finds out that they've been gone for ''months'' in the mortal world, and not only is his daughter effectively in mourning, she's ''in another country''.
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* HijackedByJesus: Averted in the Hunter's HannibalLecture, when Mal tries to defend Alima against the Wild Hunt; Christianity is implied to be ''less'' powerful against the Fair Folk (or at least against the Hunter himself), in spite of syncretized pagan practices.
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* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not''' effective against the Folk."''
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* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not''' effective against the Folk."''"'' Also, Christians are implied to be less powerful against the Fair Folk than the pagan "old-walkers."
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** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her mother. Given that Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he says that Alima found her mother. Given that Since Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it from Alima's point of view.
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* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift things like a beehive full of honey or his unconscious adult grandson.
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* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift things like a beehive full of honey (large hives weigh up to ninety pounds) or his unconscious adult grandson.
* CanNotSpitItOut: Ogma knows that Alima's new wolfdog is her father, but the curse forces him not to say it.
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** There are many, many references to TheFairFolk. People use iron weapons, salt, and inside-out clothing to ward them off, and it is heavily advised to stay close to the town walls.
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** There are many, many references to The main plot revolves around TheFairFolk. People use iron weapons, salt, and inside-out clothing to ward them off, and it is heavily advised to stay close to the town walls.
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Malachy is blond and very nice. Brighid has baby-blond hair and is a vet.
** EveryoneLovesBlondes: Alima and Mal are obviously stated to live together in the summary, but Alima also has a "track record" for dating blondes.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
** EveryoneLovesBlondes: Alima and Mal are obviously stated to live together in the summary, but Alima also has a "track record" for dating blondes.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Malachy is blond and very nice. Brighid has baby-blond hair and is a vet.
** EveryoneLovesBlondes: Alima and Mal are obviously stated to live togetherworks in the summary, but Alima also has a "track record" for dating blondes.
vet clinic.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet nurse (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and hisdeceptive strength).
** EveryoneLovesBlondes: Alima and Mal are obviously stated to live together
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet nurse (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy published on the [=HitRECord=] website by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It was started in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
''Moonflowers'' draws very heavily on CelticMythology, and while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song, the American girl whose father is presumed dead (but is currently a dog).
Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy "Mal" Bray and his little brother Logan. Over the weeks that she settles into her new life in Ireland and gets to know Mal and his friends, she gets stalked and pursued by the Hunter, a man wearing an elk skull who leads TheWildHunt.
''Moonflowers'' draws very heavily on CelticMythology, and while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song, the American girl whose father is presumed dead (but is currently a dog).
Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy "Mal" Bray and his little brother Logan. Over the weeks that she settles into her new life in Ireland and gets to know Mal and his friends, she gets stalked and pursued by the Hunter, a man wearing an elk skull who leads TheWildHunt.
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy published on the [=HitRECord=] website by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It was started in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
" (Although "Home" didn't make it into the final cut for Season 2 themes.)
''Moonflowers'' draws very heavily on CelticMythology, and while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song,the American an Asian-American girl whose father is presumed dead (but is currently a dog).
Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy"Mal" Bray and his little brother Logan. Over the weeks that she settles into her new life in Ireland and gets to know Mal and his friends, she gets stalked and pursued by the Hunter, a man wearing an elk skull who leads TheWildHunt.
''Moonflowers'' draws very heavily on CelticMythology, and while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song,
Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets cursed into an animal's form before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief.
** Owen doesn't talk about the time he almost got killed on his birthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him, because he doesn't want to "fuck it up or scare people."
** Owen doesn't talk about the time he almost got killed on his birthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him, because he doesn't want to "fuck it up or scare people."
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets cursed turned into an animal's form animal before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief.
** Owen doesn't talk aboutgrief. And she's now on the time he almost got hit-list of the man who abducted you both in the first place.
** Your handsome, talented oldest son nearly gets killed on hisbirthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him, twentieth birthday just because he's gay.
** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, hedoesn't want to "fuck says that Alima found her mother. Given that Owen's vision had him start screaming hysterically for his mother, he was most likely experiencing it up or scare people."from Alima's point of view.
** Owen doesn't talk about
** Your handsome, talented oldest son nearly gets killed on his
** Owen has a vision of [[spoiler: Alima's mother hanging naked from a tree.]] Later on, he
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** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull to hunt ''people.'' Ogma states that when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter.
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter.
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** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull to hunt ''people.'' Ogma states that says when the Hunter is wearing the a massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven [[OhCrap he means business.]]
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Nedis was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter.
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned
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* PapaWolf: Both literal and figurative, as Alima's father Ned is cursed to become a wolf(dog). He's very upset when he finds out that they've been gone for ''months'' in the mortal world, and not only is his daughter effectively in mourning, she's ''moved to another country''.
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* PapaWolf: Both literal and figurative, as Alima's father Ned is cursed to become a wolf(dog). He's very upset when he finds out that they've been gone for ''months'' in the mortal world, and not only is his daughter effectively in mourning, she's ''moved to ''in another country''.
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* RapunzelHair: Alima has hip-length wavy hair that she's very protective of, and it's frequently referenced in the story. The first thing Ogma thinks on seeing a vision of a hanged woman with short black curls is that "She looks like Alima with [[TraumaticHaircut her hair hacked off]]." [[spoiler: Owen states later that the woman is Alima's mother.]]
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* RapunzelHair: Alima has hip-length hip-length, wavy black hair that she's very protective of, and it's frequently referenced in of. Her hair is so tied to her identity that the story. The first thing Ogma thinks on seeing a the vision of a hanged woman with short black curls is that "She looks like Alima with [[TraumaticHaircut her hair hacked off]]." [[spoiler: Owen states later that the woman is Alima's mother.]]
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}} published on the [=HitRECord=] website, under the name "Logophile." It was started in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}} published on the [=HitRECord=] website, website by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It was started in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
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** On a social scale, Ogma O'Luain has a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
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** On a social scale, Ogma O'Luain has a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
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** Owen doesn't talk about the time he almost got killed on his birthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him.
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** Owen doesn't talk about the time he almost got killed on his birthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him.him, because he doesn't want to "fuck it up or scare people."
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** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
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** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts to hunt ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, states that when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* TheFairFolk: Generally unpleasant and feared, although that ''is'' the main plot of the story. The goddess Aine is stated as the queen of the fairies, and is viewed neutrally so far.
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* TheFairFolk: Generally unpleasant and feared, although that ''is'' the main plot of the story. The goddess Aine is stated as the queen of the fairies, and is viewed neutrally so far.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
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* TheFairFolk: Generally unpleasant HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Malachy is blond and feared, although that ''is'' the main plot of the story. The goddess Aine very nice. Brighid has baby-blond hair and is a vet.
** EveryoneLovesBlondes: Alima and Mal are obviously statedas to live together in the queen of the fairies, and is viewed neutrally so far.
summary, but Alima also has a "track record" for dating blondes.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid.According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
** EveryoneLovesBlondes: Alima and Mal are obviously stated
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid.
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** IronicNickname: Malachy is a normal Irish name, but his nickname is "Mal," which means "bad/evil" in most Romance languages. Mal is a nice guy who was PromotedToParent after his and Logan's parents died.
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** IronicNickname: Malachy is a normal Irish name, but his nickname is "Mal," which means "bad/evil" in most Romance languages. Mal is a nice guy who was PromotedToParent after for his and Logan's parents died.little brother.
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}} on the [=HitRECord=] website, under the name "Logophile." It was started in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}} published on the [=HitRECord=] website, under the name "Logophile." It was started in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
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Past that, it is a very character-driven piece that is almost slice-of-life, until the Fair Folk come in and wreak havoc on things. It isn't so important about what the audience knows, but what the ''characters'' know or don't know hence the main plot's lack of spoilers.
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Past that, it is a very character-driven piece that is almost slice-of-life, until the Fair Folk come in and wreak havoc on things. It isn't so important about what the audience knows, but what the ''characters'' know or don't know know, hence the main plot's lack of spoilers.
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* ChangelingTale: Owen was "suspected" to be a changeling several years ago because people wanted an excuse to get rid of the gay guy who wouldn't conform to expectations. Also a dark StealthPun, as calling Owen a changeling is one step away from calling him a ''fairy.''
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* ChangelingTale: Owen was "suspected" to be a changeling several years ago because people wanted an excuse to get rid of the gay guy who wouldn't conform to expectations. guy. Also a dark StealthPun, as calling Owen a changeling is one step away from calling him a ''fairy.''''fairy,'' which is a common homophobic slur.
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Past that, it is a very character-driven piece that is almost slice-of-life, until the Fair Folk come in and wreak havoc on things. It isn't so important about what the audience knows (hence the main plot's lack of spoilers), but what the characters know or don't know.
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Past that, it is a very character-driven piece that is almost slice-of-life, until the Fair Folk come in and wreak havoc on things. It isn't so important about what the audience knows (hence knows, but what the ''characters'' know or don't know hence the main plot's lack of spoilers), but what the characters know or don't know.
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* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain his grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is rarely surprised, is a DeadpanSnarker, and can lift ridiculously heavy things, like a full beehive full of honey or his unconscious adult grandson.
** The god Ogma, whom Ogma O'Luain is named after, also makes an appearance.
* {{Bambification}}: The older and ''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter, and is called Moony.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is rarely surprised, is a DeadpanSnarker, and can lift ridiculously heavy things, like a full beehive full of honey or his unconscious adult grandson.
** The god Ogma, whom Ogma O'Luain is named after, also makes an appearance.
* {{Bambification}}: The older and ''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter, and is called Moony.
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* AdultFear: You and your spouse are just doing stuff at home, until you get kidnapped by a man wearing a deer-skull. Then while escaping, one of you gets cursed into an animal's form before you lose each other. ''Then'' you get back to the mortal realm to find that it's actually been ''months'' since you vanished. Not only does your daughter understandably think that you're dead, she's ''moved to another country'' out of grief.
** Owen doesn't talk about the time he almost got killed on his birthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him.
* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain is his grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He israrely surprised, is a an unflappable DeadpanSnarker, and can lift ridiculously heavy things, things like a full beehive full of honey or his unconscious adult grandson.
** The god Ogma, whomOgma O'Luain is he's named after, also makes an appearance.
* {{Bambification}}: The older and''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
Ned.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers aresaid to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by theHunter, and is called Moony.Hunter.
** Owen doesn't talk about the time he almost got killed on his birthday. He needs Aine to tell people for him.
* AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain is his grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is
** The god Ogma, whom
* {{Bambification}}: The older and
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the
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* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns (as the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
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* ChangelingTale: Owen was "suspected" to be a changeling several years ago because people wanted an excuse to get rid of the gay guy who wouldn't conform to expectations. Also a dark StealthPun, as calling Owen a changeling is one step away from calling him a ''fairy.''
* EvilIsDeathlyCold: Encounters with the Hunter leave one shivering with cold.
* GreenEyedMonster: Oscar muses that ''"The Folk are envious creatures. [[IfICantHaveYou If they can't have someone,]] then nobody will."''
* TheFairFolk: Generally unpleasant and feared, although that ''is'' the main plot of the story. The goddess Aine is stated as the queen of the fairies, and is viewed neutrally so far.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns(as the (the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
* EvilIsDeathlyCold: Encounters with the Hunter leave one shivering with cold.
* GreenEyedMonster: Oscar muses that ''"The Folk are envious creatures. [[IfICantHaveYou If they can't have someone,]] then nobody will."''
* TheFairFolk: Generally unpleasant and feared, although that ''is'' the main plot of the story. The goddess Aine is stated as the queen of the fairies, and is viewed neutrally so far.
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns
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* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist quite peacefully with magic.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy) and poked fun at early on; Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter's reminder, ''"steel and titanium are '''not effective''' against the Folk."''
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy) and poked fun at early on; Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter's reminder, ''"steel and titanium are '''not effective''' against the Folk."''
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Giant white wolfdog? Call him "Moony."
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexistquite peacefully with magic.
* MagicalQueer: Not in the "fixes everything" sense, but Owen is literally a gay man with magical powers. In a darker turn, Owen was nearly killed ''because'' people claimed that he was a magical changeling instead of human.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an''urban''-fantasy) ''urban''-fantasy); while the story takes place near the scenic Cliffs of Moher and poked Cloncarrig's population is under a thousand, it's still modern. Poked fun at early on; on, when Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a newsreporter's reminder, reporter, ''"steel and titanium are '''not effective''' '''not''' effective against the Folk."''"''
* PapaWolf: Both literal and figurative, as Alima's father Ned is cursed to become a wolf(dog). He's very upset when he finds out that they've been gone for ''months'' in the mortal world, and not only is his daughter effectively in mourning, she's ''moved to another country''.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist
* MagicalQueer: Not in the "fixes everything" sense, but Owen is literally a gay man with magical powers. In a darker turn, Owen was nearly killed ''because'' people claimed that he was a magical changeling instead of human.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an
* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news
* PapaWolf: Both literal and figurative, as Alima's father Ned is cursed to become a wolf(dog). He's very upset when he finds out that they've been gone for ''months'' in the mortal world, and not only is his daughter effectively in mourning, she's ''moved to another country''.
* {{Seer}}: Owen has the wyrth eyes, and thus has prophetic dreams called "oak dreams." He also has prophetic visions.
** FaintingSeer: Not ''fainting'', but seers lose awareness of their surroundings when they experience a vision, and Owen's little sister mentions that he's gotten himself hurt before due to it. Ogma has to knock Owen out during a ''very'' unpleasant vision, since he's in hysterics and flailing around.
* RapunzelHair: Alima has hip-length wavy hair that she's very protective of, and it's frequently referenced in the story. The first thing Ogma thinks on seeing a vision of a hanged woman with short black curls is that "She looks like Alima with [[TraumaticHaircut her hair hacked off]]." [[spoiler: Owen states later that the woman is Alima's mother.]]
* ShoutOut: Wolfdog-Ned is given the name "Moony" after getting adopted by Alima. It's partly because Ogma was forced to suggest it due to the Hunter's curse, and partly because of his white fur. Meta-wise, it's the nickname of [[HarryPotter Remus Lupin the werewolf.]]
** FaintingSeer: Not ''fainting'', but seers lose awareness of their surroundings when they experience a vision, and Owen's little sister mentions that he's gotten himself hurt before due to it. Ogma has to knock Owen out during a ''very'' unpleasant vision, since he's in hysterics and flailing around.
* RapunzelHair: Alima has hip-length wavy hair that she's very protective of, and it's frequently referenced in the story. The first thing Ogma thinks on seeing a vision of a hanged woman with short black curls is that "She looks like Alima with [[TraumaticHaircut her hair hacked off]]." [[spoiler: Owen states later that the woman is Alima's mother.]]
* ShoutOut: Wolfdog-Ned is given the name "Moony" after getting adopted by Alima. It's partly because Ogma was forced to suggest it due to the Hunter's curse, and partly because of his white fur. Meta-wise, it's the nickname of [[HarryPotter Remus Lupin the werewolf.]]
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** On a social scale, Ogma O'Luain is stated to have a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
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** On a social scale, Ogma O'Luain is stated to have has a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
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** The Irish Elk's antlers were in fact gargantuan--some skulls' racks are ''12 feet wide,'' which is pretty damn close to the length of a car.
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** The Irish Elk's antlers were in fact gargantuan--some skulls' racks are ''12 feet wide,'' which is pretty damn close to the length of a car.car.
** Oscar doesn't like that his oldest son is smart and handsome, since it makes him a prime target for the Fair Folk. Historically, people were very careful not to brag about themselves or their family for precisely this reason.
* TricksterArchetype: Owen has shades of this.
* UrbanFantasy
* WhenSheSmiles: Owen, Mal, and Alima don't smile very often.
* YearOutsideHourInside: Ned and Lucy were brought somewhere by the Hunter, and Ned thinks he and his wife were only missing for a week. Ogma tells him that's it's actually been ''three months'' since they vanished, and Alima understandably thinks her parents are dead.
** Oscar doesn't like that his oldest son is smart and handsome, since it makes him a prime target for the Fair Folk. Historically, people were very careful not to brag about themselves or their family for precisely this reason.
* TricksterArchetype: Owen has shades of this.
* UrbanFantasy
* WhenSheSmiles: Owen, Mal, and Alima don't smile very often.
* YearOutsideHourInside: Ned and Lucy were brought somewhere by the Hunter, and Ned thinks he and his wife were only missing for a week. Ogma tells him that's it's actually been ''three months'' since they vanished, and Alima understandably thinks her parents are dead.
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** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
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** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull instead (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
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** Owen was nearly killed for being gay. With Ireland being a heavily Catholic nation, it's not a good place to be LGBT even in modern times.
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** Owen was nearly killed for being gay. With Ireland being a heavily Catholic nation, it's not a good place to be LGBT even in modern times.times.
** The Irish Elk's antlers were in fact gargantuan--some skulls' racks are ''12 feet wide,'' which is pretty damn close to the length of a car.
** The Irish Elk's antlers were in fact gargantuan--some skulls' racks are ''12 feet wide,'' which is pretty damn close to the length of a car.
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* AlliterativeNameAppeal: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain his grandson.
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* AlliterativeNameAppeal: AlliterativeName: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain his grandson.
* {{Bambification}}: The older and ''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
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* {{Bambification}}: The older and ''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
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** IronicNickname: Malachy is a normal Irish name, but his nickname is "Mal," which means "bad/evil" in most Romance languages. Mal is very polite and courteous and was PromotedToParent after his and Logan's parents died.
* ShownTheirWork: The author is an Irish pagan, so she'd be well-versed in CelticMythology.
* ShownTheirWork: The author is an Irish pagan, so she'd be well-versed in CelticMythology.
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** IronicNickname: Malachy is a normal Irish name, but his nickname is "Mal," which means "bad/evil" in most Romance languages. Mal is very polite and courteous and a nice guy who was PromotedToParent after his and Logan's parents died.
* DeadpanSnarker: Ogma. Owen follows heavily in his grandfather's footsteps.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist quite peacefully with magic.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy) and poked fun at early on; Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter's reminder, ''"steel and titanium are '''not effective''' against the Folk."''
* PhysicalGod: The god Ogma makes an appearance to save Alima and Mal from the Wild Hunt.
* ShownTheirWork: The author is an Irish pagan, so she'd be well-versed inCelticMythology.CelticMythology.
** On a social scale, Ogma O'Luain is stated to have a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
** Owen was nearly killed for being gay. With Ireland being a heavily Catholic nation, it's not a good place to be LGBT even in modern times.
* DeadpanSnarker: Ogma. Owen follows heavily in his grandfather's footsteps.
* {{Magitech}}: Modern technology like iPhones and laptops coexist quite peacefully with magic.
* {{Oireland}}: Averted in general (being an ''urban''-fantasy) and poked fun at early on; Alima jokes that she was surprised to find electricity so far outside of Dublin.
* OlderIsBetter: Briefly alluded to; according to a news reporter's reminder, ''"steel and titanium are '''not effective''' against the Folk."''
* PhysicalGod: The god Ogma makes an appearance to save Alima and Mal from the Wild Hunt.
* ShownTheirWork: The author is an Irish pagan, so she'd be well-versed in
** On a social scale, Ogma O'Luain is stated to have a British accent instead of Irish, since he went to school in London; since his grandson is in his twenties, it's very likely that Ogma was either forced to use a British accent by the school itself, or did it on his own to avoid bullying.
** Owen was nearly killed for being gay. With Ireland being a heavily Catholic nation, it's not a good place to be LGBT even in modern times.
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* AlliterativeAppeal: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain his grandson.
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* AlliterativeAppeal: AlliterativeNameAppeal: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain his grandson.
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* CelticMythology: Hoo boy.
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* AlliterativeAppeal: Brighid Brennan, one of the nurses at the Standing Stone Vet Clinic. Ogma O'Luain is the cunning-man and innkeeper, while Oscar O'Luain is his son and Owen O'Luain his grandson.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is rarely surprised, is a DeadpanSnarker, and can lift ridiculously heavy things, like a full beehive full of honey or his unconscious adult grandson.
** The god Ogma, whom Ogma O'Luain is named after, also makes an appearance.
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter, and is called Moony.
* CelticMythology: Hooboy.boy, where to start?
** There are many, many references to TheFairFolk. People use iron weapons, salt, and inside-out clothing to ward them off, and it is heavily advised to stay close to the town walls.
** TheWildHunt, and especially the Hunter, is the main group of antagonists.
* {{Bambification}}: The older and ''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns (as the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
** IronicNickname: Malachy is a normal Irish name, but his nickname is "Mal," which means "bad/evil" in most Romance languages. Mal is very polite and courteous and was PromotedToParent after his and Logan's parents died.
* ShownTheirWork: The author is an Irish pagan, so she'd be well-versed in CelticMythology.
* BadassGrandpa / CoolOldGuy: Ogma. He is rarely surprised, is a DeadpanSnarker, and can lift ridiculously heavy things, like a full beehive full of honey or his unconscious adult grandson.
** The god Ogma, whom Ogma O'Luain is named after, also makes an appearance.
* {{Big Badass Wolf}}dog: Alima's father Ned is was turned into a white wolf-dog by the Hunter, and is called Moony.
* CelticMythology: Hoo
** There are many, many references to TheFairFolk. People use iron weapons, salt, and inside-out clothing to ward them off, and it is heavily advised to stay close to the town walls.
** TheWildHunt, and especially the Hunter, is the main group of antagonists.
* {{Bambification}}: The older and ''very'' non-sugary version, tying in with the prominence of deer in CelticMythology. The Hunter wears a deer-skull with burning red sockets, and is referred to as "the deer-man" by Ned Song until Ogma tells him about TheWildHunt.
** TheMarvelousDeer: Inverted, as the Hunter wears a deer skull and hunts ''people.'' According to Ogma O'Luain, when the Hunter is wearing the massive Irish Elk skull (the antlers are said to be as wide as Alima's ''car''), [[UpToEleven he means business.]]
* MeaningfulName: Several people are named after Irish deities--Aine, Ogma, and Brighid. According to Aine, it "gives you their luck." Aine never drowns (as the goddess Aine was a sea-god's wife), Brighid is a vet (the goddess Brighid is a healer), and Ogma is the snarky BadassGrandpa (the god Ogma is a WarriorPoet known for his poetry and his deceptive strength).
** IronicNickname: Malachy is a normal Irish name, but his nickname is "Mal," which means "bad/evil" in most Romance languages. Mal is very polite and courteous and was PromotedToParent after his and Logan's parents died.
* ShownTheirWork: The author is an Irish pagan, so she'd be well-versed in CelticMythology.
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}} on the [=HitRECord=] website, under the name "Logophile." It was started only a few weeks ago, and hence is still in-progress. It draws very heavily on CelticMythology, while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song, the American girl whose father is presumed dead (but is currently a dog).
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''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}} on the [=HitRECord=] website, under the name "Logophile." It was started only a few weeks ago, in April of 2014, and hence is still in-progress. It is currently in three Season 2 theme collaborations: "Home," "Secrets," and "The Dark."
''Moonflowers'' draws very heavily on CelticMythology, and while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song, the American girl whose father is presumed dead (but is currently a dog).
''Moonflowers'' draws very heavily on CelticMythology, and while the plot focuses on an ensemble cast, there are two main leads among them: Malachy Bray, the mentioned Irish guy, and Alima Song, the American girl whose father is presumed dead (but is currently a dog).
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-->'''''Moonflowers''' is about an Irish guy, his little brother, an American girl who ends up living with them, and the dog they rescue. Who is secretly the girl's presumed-dead father.''
-->''...Yeah, it's that kind of story.''
-->''And by story, I mean fairy-tale.''
-->''And by fairy-tale, I mean "the unsettling kind."''
''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It draws very heavily on CelticMythology.
-->''...Yeah, it's that kind of story.''
-->''And by story, I mean fairy-tale.''
-->''And by fairy-tale, I mean "the unsettling kind."''
''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It draws very heavily on CelticMythology.
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-->''...
-->''And by story, I mean fairy-tale.''
-->''And by fairy-tale, I mean "the unsettling kind."''
''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by
Alima Song moves to the fictional town of Cloncarrig in Ireland, about two months after her parents vanish. When her hike on the Cliffs of Moher ends in an unexpected storm, she waits it out in Moher Tower with Malachy "Mal" Bray and his little brother Logan. Over the weeks that she settles into her new life in Ireland and gets to know Mal and his friends, she gets stalked and pursued by the Hunter, a man wearing an elk skull who leads TheWildHunt.
She then stays at the house of the town's innkeeper and cunning-man, Ogma. Soon afterward, Alima finds an injured white wolfdog, takes him in, and names him "Moony," unaware that the dog is actually her living but cursed father, Ned Song.
Past that, it is a very character-driven piece that is almost slice-of-life, until the Fair Folk come in and wreak havoc on things. It isn't so important about what the audience knows (hence the main plot's lack of spoilers), but what the characters know or don't know.
!!!Tropes in the work:
* CelticMythology: Hoo boy.
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-->'''''Moonflowers''' is about an Irish guy, his little brother, an American girl who ends up living with them, and the dog they rescue. Who is secretly the girl's presumed-dead father.''
-->''...Yeah, it's that kind of story.''
-->''And by story, I mean fairy-tale.''
-->''And by fairy-tale, I mean "the unsettling kind."''
''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It draws very heavily on CelticMythology.
-->''...Yeah, it's that kind of story.''
-->''And by story, I mean fairy-tale.''
-->''And by fairy-tale, I mean "the unsettling kind."''
''[[http://www.hitrecord.org/albums/350644 Moonflowers]]'' is an UrbanFantasy written by {{Tropers/Sharysa}}, under the name "Logophile." It draws very heavily on CelticMythology.