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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: The novels of the duology are named after phrases to do with pyramids: PyramidScheme and PyramidPower.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: The novels of the duology are named after phrases to do with pyramids: PyramidScheme [[{{Ponzi}} pyramid scheme]] and PyramidPower.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Jerry toughens up considerably in body and mind over the course of his adventures.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Jerry toughens up considerably in body and mind over the course of his adventures.adventures.
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This is a SpeculativeFiction series by Eric Flint, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power'', intended to eventually become a trilogy. A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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This is a SpeculativeFiction series by Eric Flint, Creator/EricFlint and Creator/DaveFreer, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power'', intended to eventually become a trilogy. A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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* FrenchJerk: Henri is this at first but gradually morph into a LovableCoward.
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* FrenchJerk: Henri is this at first but gradually morph morphs into a LovableCoward.
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* NoodleIncident: One minor character in the second book managed to get arrested for pizza. Nobody's quite sure how.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Referred to as being buried alive at Thule Air Force Base.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Referred to as being buried alive at Thule Air Force Base.Base (which is in Greenland, not Antarctica, but is still likely to be an unpleasant posting).
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* DreadfulMusician: Every member of the party in the first book is one. At one point they wonder if that was part of the pyramid's selection criteria, but Cruz doubts it, saying that the world has more failed musicians than anything else.
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* BuxomIsBetter: Invoked several times towards Liz.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Jerry tells Salinas that a certain phrase in Ancient Greek means "I am your friend". Salinas tells it to Circe and [[BalefulPolymorph she turns him into a pig]]. The exact phrase and its meaning are not provided, but are implied to be an extremely obscene insult.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Jerry tells Salinas that a certain phrase in Ancient Greek means "I am your friend". Salinas tells it to Circe and [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation she turns him into a pig]]. The exact phrase and its meaning are not provided, but are implied to be an extremely obscene insult.
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* CIAEvilFBIGood: Subverted, both agencies have good and bad members (and most of the bad ones are pawned off onto the Pyramid Security Agency when they haughtily demand manpower).
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* AdultFear: Liz, Lamont, Cruz and [=McKenna=]'s families are mentioned or shown as having this once they get sucked into the pyramids.
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When a Chicago cop is snatched, he accidentally takes along mythograper Jerry Lukacs, mechanic and handyman Lamont Cranston, marine biologist Liz De Beer, and a squad of U.S. soldiers including Sergeant Anibal Cruz and Corporal Mckenna. They find themselves trapped in The Odyssey, aboard the black galley of Odysseus between Scylla and Charybdis.
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When a Chicago cop is snatched, he accidentally takes along mythograper mythographer Jerry Lukacs, mechanic and handyman Lamont Cranston, marine biologist Liz De Beer, and a squad of U.S. soldiers including Sergeant Anibal Cruz and Corporal Mckenna.[=McKenna=]. They find themselves trapped in The Odyssey, aboard the black galley of Odysseus between Scylla and Charybdis.
* CIAEvilFBIGood: Subverted, both agencies have good and bad members (and most of the bad ones are pawned off onto the Pyramid Security Agency when they haughtily demand manpower).
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* FBIGoodCIAEvil: Subverted, both agencies have good and bad members (and most of the bad ones are pawned off onto the Pyramid Security Agency when they haughtily demand manpower).
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* InterserviceRivalry: The PSA manages to piss off just about every other government service and agency in existence through their heavy-handed application of a charter that grants them supremacy over every government organization in existence... except the Department of Fish and Wildlife. When they end up committing a crime against an endangered species, the Fish and Wildlife wardens start requesting support from everyone else to go after the PSA, which is gleefully provided.
* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Jerry tells Salinas that a certain phrase in Ancient Greek means "I am your friend". Salinas tells it to Circe and [[BalefulPolymorph she turns him into a pig]]. The exact phrase and its meaning are not provided, but are implied to be an extremely obscene insult.
* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Jerry tells Salinas that a certain phrase in Ancient Greek means "I am your friend". Salinas tells it to Circe and [[BalefulPolymorph she turns him into a pig]]. The exact phrase and its meaning are not provided, but are implied to be an extremely obscene insult.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Referred to as being buried alive at Thule Air Force Base.
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* AdultFear: Liz, Lamont, Cruz and McKenna's families are mentioned or shown as having this once they get sucked into the pyramids.
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* AdultFear: Liz, Lamont, Cruz and McKenna's [=McKenna=]'s families are mentioned or shown as having this once they get sucked into the pyramids.
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* IgnoredExpert: The PSA uses borderline illegal methods to get the assistance of Cruz and [=McKenna=] for a mission in the pyramid in order to get a hold of their expertise as pyramid escapees, and then proceed to ignore every piece of advice they are given.
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The plan is to eventually write a third book, per Freer at madgeniusclub.com
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This is a SpeculativeFiction Duology series by Eric Flint, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power''.Power'', intended to eventually become a trilogy. A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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* AlliterativeTitle: The second book, ''Pyramid Power''.
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* AdultFear: Liz, Lamont, Cruz and McKenna's families are mentioned or shown as having this once they get sucked into the pyramids.
* AlliterativeTitle: The second book, ''Pyramid Power''.
* BuxomIsBetter: Invoked several times towards Liz.
* TheComplainerIsAlwaysWrong: Often used, especially with the Pyramid Security Agency and their partisans in the second book. A notable subversion is Melvin Steinmetz, a minor character in ''Pyramid Power'' who initially opposes the main characters allies due to arguing the stalemate they've worked for resembles MAD in a nuclear situation, but that they don't know enough about the capabilities of the Krim to be making that kind of judgment. Eventually he does form a tennis alliance with them as they agree to consider each others work.
* AlliterativeTitle: The second book, ''Pyramid Power''.
* BuxomIsBetter: Invoked several times towards Liz.
* TheComplainerIsAlwaysWrong: Often used, especially with the Pyramid Security Agency and their partisans in the second book. A notable subversion is Melvin Steinmetz, a minor character in ''Pyramid Power'' who initially opposes the main characters allies due to arguing the stalemate they've worked for resembles MAD in a nuclear situation, but that they don't know enough about the capabilities of the Krim to be making that kind of judgment. Eventually he does form a tennis alliance with them as they agree to consider each others work.
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* FBIGoodCIAEvil: Subverted, both agencies have good and bad members (and most of the bad ones are pawned off onto the Pyramid Security Agency when they haughtily demand manpower).
* FrenchJerk: Henri is this at first but gradually morph into a LovableCoward.
* FrenchJerk: Henri is this at first but gradually morph into a LovableCoward.
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* StripPoker: Cruz gets Medea into a game of this but loses very badly.
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When a Chicago cop is snatched, he accidentally takes along mythograper Jerry Lukacs, mechanic and handyman Lamont Cranston, marine biologist Liz De Beer, and a squad of U.S. soldiers including Sergeant Anibal Cruz and Corporal Mckenna. They find themselves trapped in The Odyessy, Odyssey, aboard the black galley of Odysseus between Scylla and Charybdis.
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* SkewedPriorities: When Odysseus confirms from (an extremely stoned) Jerry that Penelope is being harassed by suitors while he's away.
-->'''Odysseus:''' I've got to get home! Those wastrels are eating MY food. Feasting at MY expense! They're impoverishing MY kingdom!\\
'''Jerry:''' So the fact they're pulling a train with your wife isn't important to you?\\
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'''Odysseus:''' Without ''paying!?''
-->'''Odysseus:''' I've got to get home! Those wastrels are eating MY food. Feasting at MY expense! They're impoverishing MY kingdom!\\
'''Jerry:''' So the fact they're pulling a train with your wife isn't important to you?\\
''[beat]''\\
'''Odysseus:''' Without ''paying!?''
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* AlliterativeTitle: The second book, ''Pyramid Power''.
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* DepravedBisexual: When the group first appears on the black galley, Odysseus and his crew decide that they're slaves and plan to rape both Liz DeBeer and Corporal McKenna.
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* DepravedBisexual: When the group first appears on the black galley, Odysseus and his crew decide that they're slaves and plan to rape both Liz DeBeer [=DeBeer=] and Corporal McKenna.[=McKenna=].
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This is a SpeculativeFiction Duology by Eric Flint, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power''.
A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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This is a SpeculativeFiction Duology by Eric Flint, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power''. \n A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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This is a SpeculativeFiction Duology by Eric Flint, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power''.
A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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This is a SpeculativeFiction Duology by Eric Flint, consisting of ''Pyramid Scheme'' and ''Pyramid Power''. \n
A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
A mysterious alien device lands at the University of Chicago, and begins causing people to disappear. The device grows whenever it does this, and also whenever any effort is made to damage it. The snatched victims, chosen for anger and credulity, are being dragged into the worlds of myth, made flesh by the alien device. They, and anyone touching them, vanish in a flash of purple fire, and only come back dead or dying of strange injuries.
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* DepravedBisexual: When the group first appears on the black galley, Odysseus and his crew decide that they're slaves and plan to rape both Liz DeBeer and Corporal McKenna.
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* RiddleOfTheSphinx: the Sphinx can only eat someone who fails to answer her riddle. The heroes, of course, know the answer (although there's a certain amount of tension because while Lamont knows the answer, he doesn't know Ancient Greek....) After hearing the Sphinx complain about how hungry she is they offer to teach her a new riddle in exchange for her help. After they escape the myth world, the Sphinx gets a job as a greeter / tourist attraction at the Luxor hotel in Las Vegas. She asks guests riddles in exchange for all the food she can eat.
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* FantasyKitchenSink: The title piece of technology creates a pocket dimension which combines the Greek and Egyptian mythos.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: At one point, Zeus, king of the Olympians, is about to start blasting people with thunderbolts. Henri Lenoir, visiting French botanist, proceeds to deliver a blistering salvo of insults in true Gallic fashion, [[WeNeedADistraction distracting Zeus]] until the others can escape. Also a HeroicSacrifice, because he gets killed. Also a Crowning Moment of Awesome, because he did it while horribly sick [[spoiler:And survived a god level lightning bolt long enough to flirt with a nurse back in the real world and enjoy a glass of fine wine.]]
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: At one point, Zeus, king of the Olympians, is about to start blasting people with thunderbolts. Henri Lenoir, visiting French botanist, proceeds to deliver a blistering salvo of insults in true Gallic fashion, [[WeNeedADistraction distracting Zeus]] until the others can escape. Also a HeroicSacrifice, because he gets killed. Also a Crowning Moment of Awesome, because he did it while horribly sick [[spoiler:And survived a god level lightning bolt long enough to flirt with a nurse back in the real world and enjoy a glass of fine wine.]]
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Jerry embodies this trope, having his nose in a book so constantly he can barely dress himself, let alone keep groceries stocked.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Jerry embodies this trope, having his nose in a book so constantly he can barely dress himself, let alone keep groceries stocked. He also fails to notice that his workplace has been evacuated by the police and is crawling with soldiers due to alien invasion.
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: At one point, Zeus, king of the Olympians, is about to start blasting people with thunderbolts. Henri Lenoir, visiting French botanist, proceeds to deliver a blistering salvo of insults in true Gallic fashion, [[WeNeedADistraction distracting Zeus]] until the others can escape. Also a HeroicSacrifice, because he gets killed. Also a Crowning Moment of Awesome, because he did it while horribly sick [[spoiler:And survived a god level lightning bolt long enough to flirt with a nurse back in the real world and enjoy a glass of fine wine.]]
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: At one point, Zeus, king of the Olympians, is about to start blasting people with thunderbolts. Henri Lenoir, visiting French botanist, proceeds to deliver a blistering salvo of insults in true Gallic fashion, [[WeNeedADistraction distracting Zeus]] until the others can escape. Also a HeroicSacrifice, because he gets killed. Also a Crowning Moment of Awesome, because he did it while horribly sick [[spoiler:And survived a god level lightning bolt long enough to flirt with a nurse back in the real world and enjoy a glass of fine wine.]]
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When a Chicago cop is snatched, he accidentally takes along mythograper Jerry Lukacs, mechanic and handyman Lamont Cranston, marine biologist Liz De Beer, and a squad of U.S. soldiers including Sergeant Anibal Cruz and Corporal Mckenna. They find themselves trapped in TheOdyessy, The Odyessy, aboard the black galley of Odysseus between Scylla and Charybdis.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Jerry embodies this trope, having his nose in a book so constantly he can barely dress himself, let alone keep groceries stocked.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Jerry toughens up considerably in body and mind over the course of his adventures.
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The survivors must talk and fight their way between feuding gods, ancient sorceresses, and the fact that the myths were sometimes wrong on important points.
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