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* AdultFear: Your child [[spoiler: hiding a SelfHarm habit and a possible eating disorder]].
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* AFriendInNeed: This carries over from the first book. Eliza helping Mike to [[spoiler: find out what Mara's hiding]] is a prime example, even though [[NiceJobBreakingItHero it ended up causing some disasters]].
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Mason for Mara and Eliza, due to being a CasanovaWannabe.
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* AdultsAreUseless: Having them get more focus made this trope downplayed here.
here, and even the school staff averts this. Jack is the only one who plays this straight.
* AlliterativeName: '''H'''enry'''H'''enderson.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: The sequel ramps up the hints to a ridiculous amount between everyone, including the NewTransferStudent Eliza.
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* BigBad: BigBadEnsemble: So far, there are three main antagonists for the group: [[ArchnemesisDad Jack]] [[AbusiveParents Nakamura]], Mara's father, [[CasanovaWannabe Mason]] [[ManipulativeBastard West]] [[spoiler: The who's revealed to be one of Jordan's exes]] and finally, [[spoiler: the surprisingly less malevolent mysterious entity is an interesting example because it is an AntiVillain, a NonActionBigBad and an UnseenEvil all at that inhabits the same time. It seems to have a conscience and it's more benevolent to the main characters if anything. It's really only put in this role because it is their main concern and they don't fully understand nor trust it]].
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* VillainRevealsTheSecret: [[spoiler: This is what Mason does, or at least causes for Jordan and Eliza. His manipulations of Mara led to Eliza informing Jordan of what happened. The latter decided to show up to school, revealing herself and Eliza's secret lab]].
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** Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this.
** Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this.
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-->'''Eliza:''' I didn't realize how sassy [Matt and Mike] were.
-->'''Matt:''' Yeah, it was my thing before it got to Mike. I think everyone of us, [[spoiler: including Jordan]], has been sassy at one point.
-->'''Eliza:''' Interesting...
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* AreYouPonderingWhatImPondering: Matt asks this when talking to Asher at one point to cheer him up in reference to Mike and Mara's ability to lighten the mood just by being with them, and sure enough, the duo show up just then.
* OfficialCouple: Here we see [[spoiler: Matt and Evelyn]] as a proper couple at last.
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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: It might've just gotten stronger here.
* SpeakOfTheDevil: Invoked by Matt with Mike and Mara as mentioned in the AreYouPonderingWhatImPondering entry above.
* SnarkToSnarkCombat: It might've just gotten stronger here.
* SpeakOfTheDevil: Invoked by Matt with Mike and Mara as mentioned in the AreYouPonderingWhatImPondering entry above.
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** "From Beyond The Grave", where [[spoiler: Eliza uses her gadgeteering skills to build a ray gun that solidifies ghosts and then uses on Jordan, making her touchable and able to talk to the living directly]].
** "Eventful Evening", where Matt and Asher find out [[spoiler: their fathers have been in a LoveTriangle in HighSchool over Matt's mother Tiffani, and it caused animosity betweenthem]].
them]].
** "Why Do You Do That To Yourself?" uncovers Mara's DarkSecret: [[spoiler: SelfHarm and an eating disorder]].
** "Trapped", where [[spoiler: Mason manipulates Mara and lures Jordan out to reveal herself to the whole school and by extension, reveal that there's more to Eliza than meets the eye]].
* WhamLine:
** "From Beyond The Grave":
-->'''[[spoiler: Jordan]]''': C-can you see me?
** "From Beyond The Grave", where [[spoiler: Eliza uses her gadgeteering skills to build a ray gun that solidifies ghosts and then uses on Jordan, making her touchable and able to talk to the living directly]].
** "Eventful Evening", where Matt and Asher find out [[spoiler: their fathers have been in a LoveTriangle in HighSchool over Matt's mother Tiffani, and it caused animosity between
** "Why Do You Do That To Yourself?" uncovers Mara's DarkSecret: [[spoiler: SelfHarm and an eating disorder]].
** "Trapped", where [[spoiler: Mason manipulates Mara and lures Jordan out to reveal herself to the whole school and by extension, reveal that there's more to Eliza than meets the eye]].
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** "From Beyond The Grave":
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* WorldOfSnark: With Evelyn finally joining the snark train by becoming more of a {{Jerkass}}, this trait becomes common between the protagonists, save for [[NiceGirl Eliza]]. Lampshaded in this conversation.
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over, but this is no longer the case.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler: Jack Nakamura, Mara's own father]], is the one responsible for her [[spoiler: SelfHarm tendencies through DomesticAbuse and ParentalNeglect]]
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler: Jack Nakamura, Mara's own father]], is the one responsible for her [[spoiler: SelfHarm tendencies through DomesticAbuse and ParentalNeglect]]
ParentalNeglect]].
** Downplayed with [[spoiler: Mason. He was partially the reason (being ''one'' of Jordan's ex-boyfriends) she DoesNotLikeMen and started crushing on Evelyn, and we all know [[Literature/{{Intertwined}} how that ended]]...]]
** Downplayed with [[spoiler: Mason. He was partially the reason (being ''one'' of Jordan's ex-boyfriends) she DoesNotLikeMen and started crushing on Evelyn, and we all know [[Literature/{{Intertwined}} how that ended]]...]]
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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: The group makes it clear to [[spoiler: Jordan that despite forgiving her, they will still bring up her actions from the first book should they deem it necessary]].
* ForgottenFallenFriend: Justified with [[spoiler: Rose. It's a very touchy for anyone to talk about her. Especially Asher]].
* ForgottenFallenFriend: Justified with [[spoiler: Rose. It's a very touchy for anyone to talk about her. Especially Asher]].
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* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler: Rose for Asher]].
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* HighSchool: In here, it's specifically mentioned that the characters are in eleventh grade, making them 10 graders in the first book.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Eliza thinks Mason is a nice guy. She's a bit far off on that one.
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Eliza thinks Mason is a nice guy. She's a bit far off on that one.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Eliza thinks Mason is a nice guy. She's a bit far off on that one.
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* AlliterativeTitle: Only one chapter has this and it is "[[WhamEpisode Eventful Evening]]".
* ArcWords: "Family is family" is uttered a few times by some characters.
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* ChasteHeroine: Eliza.
* CheerfulChild: Henry.
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* CheerfulChild: Henry.
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* CallBack: This sequel recalls a lot of events from the first book, namely [[spoiler: Jordan's murder spree]], how the six met and [[spoiler: Rose and her relationship with Asher as well as her death]].
* CasanovaWannabe:Mason.
Mason shamelessly tries to hit on both Mara and Eliza at the same time. Needless to say, our heroes are disgusted by his actions.
* ChasteHeroine:Eliza.
Eliza is completely oblivious to the fact that both Asher and Matt might have a crush on her. Her conversation with Jordan seems to help her through this a bit.
* CheerfulChild:Henry.
Henry establishes himself as this the first time he appears.
* CasanovaWannabe:
* ChasteHeroine:
* CheerfulChild:
** Xavier is revealed to be [[spoiler: Mara's BigBrotherBully]].
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* FriendlessBackground: Eliza seems to have this.
Elizan tells the group the first time she hung out with them that they are her first friends.
* FriendlyGhost: [[spoiler: What Jordan turns into after she comes back]].
* FriendlyGhost: [[spoiler: What Jordan turns into after she comes back]].
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better when she starts crying and getting emotional.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Jordan comes back to the good side of things when she comes back]].
* HypocriteHasAPoint: [[TookALevelInJerkass Evelyn]] was the first to [[spoiler: assure Jordan she is forgiven, yet when she and Mara are with her in her house later, she starts being mean to her and berating her]], but she's right to do so, considering [[spoiler: Jordan ruined the friendship all six formed for the sake of her unrequited crush on Evelyn with murder and deception]].
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* TheSmartGirl: Eliza again.
* SternTeacher: Mr Winston.
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* ScienceHeroine: Eliza.
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* TheSmartGirl: Elizaagain.
again. She's the most intelligent teen in the series by far.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Mason for Mara and Eliza, due to being a CasanovaWannabe.
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* ContinuityNod: Mike shares a story with Mara, the same one Matt tells to Evelyn in the first book about the NoodleIncident where Mike and Matt got dirt stuck in their shoes for a week.
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* TakeThat:
** Daniel teases Lizzie about her being HopelessWithTech, specifically with map apps, before conceding that most of them are not pleasant to deal with anyways.
** When he goes to shopping with his dad, Matt has a train of thought criticizing people who buy too many things and hinder others. Then it's followed by a subtle jab at incompetent store clerks.
** Daniel teases Lizzie about her being HopelessWithTech, specifically with map apps, before conceding that most of them are not pleasant to deal with anyways.
** When he goes to shopping with his dad, Matt has a train of thought criticizing people who buy too many things and hinder others. Then it's followed by a subtle jab at incompetent store clerks.
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* ChekhovsGunman:
** Xavier, first introduced as a teenage party animal who had a run-in with Asher and his dad and bothered them, is revealed to be [[spoiler: Mara's older brother]].
** Mason, first introduced as a potential new friend for the group. Later, [[{{Jerkass}} his true personality]] is revealed [[spoiler: as well as his past relationship with Jordan]].
** Xavier, first introduced as a teenage party animal who had a run-in with Asher and his dad and bothered them, is revealed to be [[spoiler: Mara's older brother]].
** Mason, first introduced as a potential new friend for the group. Later, [[{{Jerkass}} his true personality]] is revealed [[spoiler: as well as his past relationship with Jordan]].
** Mason turns out to be [[spoiler: one of Jordan's previous horrible boyfriends]].
** [[spoiler: Tiffani used to be one when she was in HighSchool, attracting the attention of Hunter (Asher's father) and Samuel, who would go on to become her husband]].
* GadgeteerGenius: This is Eliza's specialty.
* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler: Jack Nakamura, Mara's own father]], is the one responsible for her [[spoiler: SelfHarm tendencies through DomesticAbuse and ParentalNeglect]]
* GrumpyBear: Winston is described as such by the core group.
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** Mason reveals himself to be one too soon after he'sintroduced.
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** Tiffani, Matt's mom could count aswell. well.
** Winston is alsothis, as this.
** As well as Austin andZach.
Zach.
* KnightOfCerebus: Jack Nakamura, Mara's father, does not have a single comedic moment and is a purely sadistic character played completely seriously.
* LackOfEmpathy: Jack's response to Mara telling him that she was visiting Jordan's grave? Chastising her for being a crybaby and not getting over it.
** Tiffani, Matt's mom could count as
** Winston is also
** As well as Austin and
* KnightOfCerebus: Jack Nakamura, Mara's father, does not have a single comedic moment and is a purely sadistic character played completely seriously.
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* BearerOfBadNews: [[spoiler: Daniel and Lizzie report to Dianna about Mara's discovered DarkSecret: She subjects herself to SelfHarm and possibly has an eating disorder]].
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* ClothingConcealedInjury: Mara doesn't take her gloves off, ever. [[spoiler: She has to hide all the wounds she gave to herself]].
* TheDiseaseThatShallNotBeNamed: [[spoiler: When they discover her hidden secrets, Eliza does classify Mara as having an eating disorder, but it is not specifically named]].
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* AscendedExtra: This sequel gives all the mentioned and cameo characters from the previous book a chance to have a bigger role in the story.
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Going with the above entry, the [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first thing]] that Henry does is jump in a conversation his older brothers are having and asks them what a girlfriend is.
* ConnectedAllAlong: It's revealed that [[spoiler: Tiffani, Samuel and Hunter knew each other from HighSchool but grew apart due to a LoveTriangle forming between them]].
* ConnectedAllAlong: It's revealed that [[spoiler: Tiffani, Samuel and Hunter knew each other from HighSchool but grew apart due to a LoveTriangle forming between them]].
* DisappointingOlderSibling: Xavier is this for Mara.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted here. It's revealed that Evelyn's mom is called Rose, which is also the name of one of the bullies in the first book.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Evelyn is noticeably more clingy, possessive and inclined to make mean-spirited comments.
* TookALevelInKindness: [[spoiler: Jordan]] is clearly sweeter than she used to be.
* VitriolicBestBuds: It's still there, even after ayear.year.
* WhatDoesHeSeeInHer: Asher questions why Samuel would marry Tiffani in the chapter [[spoiler: that reveals they knew Hunter from high school and both of them had crushes on Tiffani]]. Matt feels the same.
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Matt]]:''' I ask myself that as often as I ask about the other way around.
* {{Workaholic}}: The first chapter mentions that Daniel became this as a defense mechanism for [[spoiler: his daughter Jordan's death]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Jack abuses both his daughter and wife physically.
* WouldHitAGirl: Jack, as stated above.
* TookALevelInKindness: [[spoiler: Jordan]] is clearly sweeter than she used to be.
* VitriolicBestBuds: It's still there, even after a
* WhatDoesHeSeeInHer: Asher questions why Samuel would marry Tiffani in the chapter [[spoiler: that reveals they knew Hunter from high school and both of them had crushes on Tiffani]]. Matt feels the same.
-->'''[[DeadpanSnarker Matt]]:''' I ask myself that as often as I ask about the other way around.
* {{Workaholic}}: The first chapter mentions that Daniel became this as a defense mechanism for [[spoiler: his daughter Jordan's death]].
* WouldHurtAChild: Jack abuses both his daughter and wife physically.
* WouldHitAGirl: Jack, as stated above.
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* AlliterativeName: ''H''enry ''H''enderson.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Mike thinks this way of Zach and Austin.
* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Henry is the youngest in Mike's family.
** Mara is still considered this by her friends too.
* BigBrotherWorship: It's more obvious with Henry and more begrudging with Austin and Zach for Mike. At the end of the day, they really are fond of him.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Mike thinks this way of Zach and Austin.
* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Henry is the youngest in Mike's family.
** Mara is still considered this by her friends too.
* BigBrotherWorship: It's more obvious with Henry and more begrudging with Austin and Zach for Mike. At the end of the day, they really are fond of him.
* CasanovaWannabe: Mason.
* ChasteHeroine: Eliza.
* CheerfulChild: Henry.
* CoolTeacher: Kelsey Santos.
* ChasteHeroine: Eliza.
* CheerfulChild: Henry.
* CoolTeacher: Kelsey Santos.
* DisappearedDad: Eliza doesn't talk about her missing father much, and it seems to be a bothersome topic for her.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Mason is this to Eliza and Mara.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Mason is this to Eliza and Mara.
* DudeMagnet: Eliza, apparently. Both Asher and Matt developed crushes on her. It doesn't help that she's totally oblivious.
* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: It's not played straight with Mike and his brothers. Mike makes himself out to be the responsible one, which is true to some degree, while his brothers are not actually foolish but they are certainly mischievous and more wacky.
* GroupHug: The gang initiates one to make Eliza feel better.
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* JerkAss: Mara's dad Jack.
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* JerkAss: Mara's dad Jack.
Jack. Mason reveals himself to be one too soon after he's introduced.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this. Tiffani, Matt's mom could count as well.
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Eliza thinks Mason is a nice guy. She's a bit far off on that one.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this. Tiffani, Matt's mom could count aswell.
well. Winston is also this, as well as Austin and Zach.
* LiteralMinded:
-->'''Jordan:''' Wait, do you know what a crush and a boyfriend means?
-->'''Eliza:''' Of course, it's obvious. A crush is a body injury where bones are fractured and a boyfriend is a male friend. ''(smiles innocently)''.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this. Tiffani, Matt's mom could count as
* LiteralMinded:
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* NiceGuy / NiceGirl: Mike and Evelyn, of course. Mara and Eliza as well. Most of the parents are this as well. Ms Santos too.
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* NewTransferStudent: Eliza's introduction.
* NiceGuy / NiceGirl: Mike and Evelyn, of course. Mara and Eliza as well. Most of the parents are this as well. Ms Santostoo.
too, and Mike's youngest brother Henry.
* NiceMeanAndInBetween: The school staff consists of Kelsey Santos, the nice teacher and Gordon Winston is the mean one. They are balanced out by the sensible principal, Max Franklin.
* ObliviousToLove: Although she seems to grasp what being together in a relationship means, Eliza doesn't know what is a crush or a boyfriend until Jordan explains it to her.
* NiceGuy / NiceGirl: Mike and Evelyn, of course. Mara and Eliza as well. Most of the parents are this as well. Ms Santos
* NiceMeanAndInBetween: The school staff consists of Kelsey Santos, the nice teacher and Gordon Winston is the mean one. They are balanced out by the sensible principal, Max Franklin.
* ObliviousToLove: Although she seems to grasp what being together in a relationship means, Eliza doesn't know what is a crush or a boyfriend until Jordan explains it to her.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The principal of the school, Mr Franklin.
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** On the other hand, Eliza's mom Catherine thinks Asher would be a good match for her daughter.
* ShipTease: Some moments with Eliza during her interactions with Matt and Asher.
* ShipTease: Some moments with Eliza during her interactions with Matt and Asher.
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* SiblingRivalry: Mike and his two brothers Austin and Zach seem to have this going on.
* ScienceHeroine: Eliza.
* TheSmartGirl: Eliza again.
* SternTeacher: Mr Winston.
* TeenGenius: Eliza is only in grade 11, yet she has her own lab and is capable of inventing useful devices.
* TenderTears: Eliza sheds them during the group hug with her new friends.
* ScienceHeroine: Eliza.
* TheSmartGirl: Eliza again.
* SternTeacher: Mr Winston.
* TeenGenius: Eliza is only in grade 11, yet she has her own lab and is capable of inventing useful devices.
* TenderTears: Eliza sheds them during the group hug with her new friends.
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''Intertwined II: The Lost Spirits'' is the {{sequel}} to {{Literature/Intertwined}} ''{{Literature/Intertwined}}'' written once again by [[Tropers/IAmHoussem17 iamhoussem17]] and Watermelon Caticorn. It follows the group a year after the events of the first book. Things from the past start popping up and new problems show up.
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For the discontinued book based off this series, see Literature/IntertwinedTheSeries.
''Literature/IntertwinedTheSeries''.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Of the parents, Daniel and Lizzie, Mark and Sophie have this dynamic.
* DomesticAbuse: It's revealed that Dianna and Mara are on the receiving end of this from Jack.
* GoodParents: Most of them anyways.
* HairTriggerTemper: Jack flies off the handle easily.
* HateSink: Jack Nakamura, without a doubt.
* IntergenerationalFriendship: You can say this about the kids and all the adults, except for Mara's dad.
* HairTriggerTemper: Jack flies off the handle easily.
* HateSink: Jack Nakamura, without a doubt.
* IntergenerationalFriendship: You can say this about the kids and all the adults, except for Mara's dad.
* PapaWolf: Both Hunter and Norman.
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** Mattlyn gets the same love as well.
well, from their friends to their parents.
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''Intertwined II: The Lost Spirits'' is the {{sequel}} to {{Literature/Intertwined}} written once again by iamhoussem17 [[Tropers/IAmHoussem17 iamhoussem17]] and Watermelon Caticorn. It follows the group a year after the events of the first book. Things from the past start popping up and new problems show up.
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For the discontinued book based off this series, see Literature/IntertwinedTheSeries.Literature/IntertwinedTheSeries.
!Tropes found in the book:
*AbusiveParents: Mara's father Jack is easily [[HateSink the most detestable]] of the adults.
*AdultsAreUseless: Having them get more focus made this trope downplayed here.
*DeadpanSnarker: Matt, as usual. He's joined by his [[LikeParentLikeChild mother]] while Mike's brother Zach seems to have picked up some of his big brother's dry humor.
*EndearinglyDorky: Mike, Mara are joined by Eliza in this department. Evelyn tones it down a bit here...
*FriendlessBackground: Eliza seems to have this, like most of the protagonists.
*JerkAss: Mara's dad Jack.
*HighSchool: In here, it's specifically mentioned that the characters are in eleventh grade, making them 10 graders in the first book.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this. Tiffani, Matt's mom could count as well.
*LoveTriangle: You wouldn't think it'd happen again with the same people but it did. It seems both Matt and Asher took a liking to Eliza.
*NiceGuy / NiceGirl: Mike and Evelyn, of course. Mara and Eliza as well. Most of the parents are this as well. Ms Santos too.
*OutlivingOnesOffspring: Poor [[spoiler: Daniel and Lizzie...]]
*ParentsAsPeople: This book tells us more about the parents that are majorly absent in the first book.
*ThePollyanna: Mike. Evelyn less so this time around.
*ShipperOnDeck: Everyone in the group still ships the hell out of Mikara. Eliza thinks it's pretty cute as well, and Mara's mother Dianna even voices her approval!
**Mattlyn gets the same love as well.
*ShrinkingViolet: Mara.
*VitriolicBestBuds: It's still there, even after a year.
!Tropes found in the book:
*AbusiveParents: Mara's father Jack is easily [[HateSink the most detestable]] of the adults.
*AdultsAreUseless: Having them get more focus made this trope downplayed here.
*DeadpanSnarker: Matt, as usual. He's joined by his [[LikeParentLikeChild mother]] while Mike's brother Zach seems to have picked up some of his big brother's dry humor.
*EndearinglyDorky: Mike, Mara are joined by Eliza in this department. Evelyn tones it down a bit here...
*FriendlessBackground: Eliza seems to have this, like most of the protagonists.
*JerkAss: Mara's dad Jack.
*HighSchool: In here, it's specifically mentioned that the characters are in eleventh grade, making them 10 graders in the first book.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Matt and Asher, despite becoming closer to their friends, still have hints of this. Tiffani, Matt's mom could count as well.
*LoveTriangle: You wouldn't think it'd happen again with the same people but it did. It seems both Matt and Asher took a liking to Eliza.
*NiceGuy / NiceGirl: Mike and Evelyn, of course. Mara and Eliza as well. Most of the parents are this as well. Ms Santos too.
*OutlivingOnesOffspring: Poor [[spoiler: Daniel and Lizzie...]]
*ParentsAsPeople: This book tells us more about the parents that are majorly absent in the first book.
*ThePollyanna: Mike. Evelyn less so this time around.
*ShipperOnDeck: Everyone in the group still ships the hell out of Mikara. Eliza thinks it's pretty cute as well, and Mara's mother Dianna even voices her approval!
**Mattlyn gets the same love as well.
*ShrinkingViolet: Mara.
*VitriolicBestBuds: It's still there, even after a year.
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[[caption-width-right:296: There was no space to put "Written By", unfortunately. [[note]] From left to right: [[ShrinkingViolet Mara]], [[NiceGuy Mike]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]], [[NiceGuy Mike]], [[DeadpanSnarker Matt]], [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold Evelyn]], but what could that thing on the far left be...?[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:296: There was no space to put "Written By", unfortunately. [[note]] From left to right: [[ShrinkingViolet Mara]], [[NiceGuy Mike]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]], [[DeadpanSnarker Matt]], [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold Evelyn]], but what could that thing on the far left be...?[[/note]]]]
''Intertwined II: The Lost Spirits'' is the {{sequel}} to {{Literature/Intertwined}} written once again by iamhoussem17 and Watermelon Caticorn. It follows the group a year after the events of the first book. Things from the past start popping up and new problems show up.
The first chapter was released on March 8, 2021.
You can read it [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/261448374-intertwined-ii-the-lost-spirits here]].
For the discontinued book based off this series, see Literature/IntertwinedTheSeries.
[[caption-width-right:296: There was no space to put "Written By", unfortunately. [[note]] From left to right: [[ShrinkingViolet Mara]], [[NiceGuy Mike]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Asher]], [[DeadpanSnarker Matt]], [[HairOfGoldHeartOfGold Evelyn]], but what could that thing on the far left be...?[[/note]]]]
''Intertwined II: The Lost Spirits'' is the {{sequel}} to {{Literature/Intertwined}} written once again by iamhoussem17 and Watermelon Caticorn. It follows the group a year after the events of the first book. Things from the past start popping up and new problems show up.
The first chapter was released on March 8, 2021.
You can read it [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/261448374-intertwined-ii-the-lost-spirits here]].
For the discontinued book based off this series, see Literature/IntertwinedTheSeries.
