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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann]] has brought their scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do the dirty work.

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Joachin is elated to finally have found friends, and completely smitten with Valerie. He barely hesitates to take Richard up on his offer of leaving his aimless life behind and running away with the siblings to find “paradise”. However, there is one condition to this offer: Joachin must kill Valerie and Richard’s abusive father.

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Joachin is elated to finally have found friends, and completely smitten with Valerie. He barely hesitates to take Richard up on his offer of leaving his aimless life behind and running away with the siblings to find “paradise”."paradise". However, there is one condition to this offer: Joachin must kill Valerie and Richard’s abusive father.





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TheEighties: The story takes place in 1988.

AbandonedHospital: [[spoiler:Athis (and, subsequently, Richard)]] hangs out in one.

AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kauffmann wasn’t exactly the best father. Deidre’s father even less so.

AdultFear: The prologue, full stop: a father hangs himself and his son in some sort of ritualistic suicide.

AFormYouAreComfortableWith: [[spoiler:Leonard takes Valerie's form to chat with Joachin.]]

AfterlifeExpress: [[spoiler:A manifestation of Joachin's Conductor powers, boarded by the protagonists early on.]]

AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Richard, after taking possession of Athis.]]

AlcoholicParent: Joachin’s mother.

ApocalypticLog: Valerie’s and Karen Evans’ journals.

ArchnemesisDad: Joachin has… issues with his father, to say the least.

BadassLongcoat: Richard, who wears an 80’s leather version.

BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Valerie,]] though it comes at the price of never being able to return home.

TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann's plan to open the Gate and leave for another world]] has already succeeded by the time the protagonists arrive.

BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: The final confrontation between [[spoiler:Joachin and Richard]], which takes place in [[spoiler:Richard's]] “inner world”.

BigSisterInstinct: Valerie, toward Richard. One of her main reasons for going along with his search for “paradise” is to keep watching over him.

BornOfMagic: [[spoiler:Athis.]]

BlackMagic: The ritual performed to “open the Gate” to the Void, which requires twenty-three human sacrifices to perform. Overlaps with Blood Magic for the ritual used to bring [[spoiler:Athis]] to life.

BloodMagic: The ritual performed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

BodyAndHost: Lurks can “latch” onto the living like parasites, though they can only assume full control if the host willingly accept their presence.

BodySurf: [[spoiler:Richard does this after his “death”. In order: he latches on to Valerie, takes over a Bat Legionnaire, possesses Athis, and finally ends up back inside a broken, toy-sized Bat Legionnaire.]]

TheBully: Joachin’s new school is full of these. His father also qualifies to some extent, as does [[spoiler:Richard]].

CampUnsafeIsntSafeAnymore: Mill River seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. [[spoiler:Then the protagonists find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.]]

CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler:Joachin eventually does this to his father.]]

CandlelitRitual: The underground place of worship where [[spoiler:the Order of Atheithius]] conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.

CantMoveWhileBeingWatched: Objects in Mill River will only “reset” to their original state when not actively being observed.

CarryABigStick: Valerie favours a telescopic baton whenever she needs to beat something/someone up.

CastFullOfCrazy: There’s very few people in Mill River who can be said to be completely in their right mind.

CharmPerson: Even before becoming a Lurk, [[spoiler:Richard]] had a preternatural ability to “push” people into certain courses of action.

DarkWorld: [[spoiler:Mill River, especially after the red moon appears.]]

DaylightHorror: Mill River is bright and sunny, and seems completely untouched except for the missing populace.

DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:Richard. Though he appears to die early in the story, it is later revealed that he was a Lurk (albeit one manifested in physical form) from the very beginning.]]

DeadPersonConversation: [[spoiler:Joachin, with Leonard and Richard.]]

DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Leonard's]] attempt to get Joachin to “accept” him definitely comes across as this.

DisappearedDad: Friedrich Kauffmann.

DissonantLaughter: Richard tends to chuckle at inappropriate moments, [[spoiler:especially when trolling Joachin.]]

DreamLand: [[spoiler:Mill River can be seen as this for Athis. Furthermore, it exists in the midst of the “Void”, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious.]]

TheDisembodied: Lurks.

EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.

TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]

EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]

EnergyAbsorption: Part of what a Conductor's powers can do.

EvilPhone: [[spoiler:Joachin finds one upon his return to the police station.]]

ExistentialHorror: Friedrich invokes this, stating that everything in existence is ultimately bound by fate, making free will meaningless.

FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Richard is convinced that Valerie is the reincarnation of Deidre, his sister from a past life. Valerie turns out to instead be the reincarnation of a First World War soldier.]]

FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: [[spoiler:Six-year-old Athis is, in order: hanged by his father, possessed by Richard, and shot by Joachin. Granted he’s technically an EldritchAbomination, but still…]]

TheFatalist: Friedrich Kauffmann, to the extent that [[spoiler:he'll let his own son be murdered in front of him, if such is what "fate has decreed".]]

{{Fireballs}}: [[spoiler:Eileen and some of the other Order members can conjure them, to no great effect.]]

FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. [[spoiler:Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to keep watching over her little brother.]]

GateOfTruth: The power of Atheiyhius.

GeniusBruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s ass, but demonstrates a very thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.

GenreShift: The novel’s first half is mostly straight-up horror, whereas the second half is more action/fantasy, with a touch of cosmic horror.

GeometricMagic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. [[spoiler:Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.]]

GhostTown: Mill River.

GlamourFailure: [[spoiler:While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance – a hanged cadaver – occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.]]

GrewASpine: [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's gone from being relentlessly bullied to single-handedly taking on an EldrichAbomination.]]

HauntedHeroine: Joachin and Valerie.

HellbentForLeather: Joachin, Valerie and Richard all wear leather jackets.

HellIsThatNoise: [[spoiler:Hearing a creaking sound in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.]]

HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Joachin]] abandons hope and becomes intent on committing suicide immediately after [[spoiler:Valerie's apparent demise.]]

HeroicSafeMode: [[spoiler:Joachin]], who seems to have become almost entirely fearless during the second half of the novel. [[spoiler:As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.]]

HouseOfBrokenMirrors: [[spoiler:Karen Evans' house.]] The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

IfICanOnlyMove: [[spoiler:Joachin]] manages to get [[spoiler:Richard/Athis]] at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that [[spoiler:Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control/stop his movements...]]

ImColdSoCold: [[spoiler:Joachin,]] while dying from internal bleeding.

ImplausibleFencingPowers: Joachin[[spoiler:thanks to obtaining Leonard's fencing abilities]] is able to proficiently use a sword. However, said sword is described as "a mix between a knightly sword and a grossly oversized, double-edged kitchen knife"; [[spoiler:which is a far cry from the thin, light foil or epee normally used in fencing.]]

ImprobableAimingSkills: [[spoiler:Joachin]] manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that [[spoiler:his senses were amplified by magic at the time.]]

JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: [[spoiler:Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.]]

KnightTemplarBigSister: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.

LaughingMad: Joachin falls into this a couple times.

LetMeAtHim: [[spoiler:Valerie tries to kill Richard once he's revealed his true colours, but is held back by Joachin.]]

LoveMakesYouCrazy: Joachin's infatuation with Valerie is... unhealthy, to say the least.

MagicEnhancement: The Prayer to the Elements, which serves to “fortify the body and mind”, and is potent enough to not only [[spoiler:bring Joachin back from the brink of death, but also allow him to fight Richard’s superpowered demon body on an equal footing.]]

MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann]] has brought their scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do the dirty work.

MajorInjuryUnderreaction: [[spoiler:Richard]] laughs off being stabbed in the chest. Justified on account of [[spoiler:him already being dead]].

ManipulativeBastard: Both [[spoiler:Richard and Friedrich]] are very good at getting into people’s heads.

MindRape: [[spoiler:Richard]] does this to [[spoiler:Valerie after bringing her BackFromTheDead.]]

MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:Richard]] pulls this off on [[spoiler:Joachin]] in the opening chapters.

TheMusketeer: Joachin knows his guns and [[spoiler:due to Leonard's influence]] eventually becomes quite adept with a sword.

MustBeInvited: Played with; while a Lurk must indeed be willingly accepted by its host to assume full control, they need no such invitation to simply “latch” on to someone.

TheManInTheMirrorTalksBack: And shoots himself in the head.

MentalWorld: Everyone has an “inner world”. [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard]] eventually enter [[spoiler:Richard's.]]

MenUseViolenceWomenUseCommunication: Subverted big time with Valerie and Richard. Valerie tends to resort to violence for most every problem, whereas Richard relies on his wits, and [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl.]]

MurderousMannequin: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann has turned his followers (and part of himself) into these.]]

MysteriousParent: Kauffmann, who apparently abandoned his family to [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse.]]

NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Richard’s nickname, "Slayer".

NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: [[spoiler:Joachin]] tends to discover a new ability whenever one is needed to escape the current predicament.

NiceDayDeadlyNight: [[spoiler:Not that daytime in Mill River was all that reassuring, but things take a seriously dark turn once “night” falls.]]

NightmareFace: [[spoiler:Karen Evans. Leonard Evans’ “real” face is… not pretty either.]]

NoodleIncident: [[spoiler:When Richard (in Athis’ body) tries to prove to Valerie that he really is her brother, he refers to… something he and Valerie did when they were younger. Exactly what happened is never revealed, but said incident is apparently very embarrassing, and Richard even quips that he may have to kill Joachin after he’s heard that.]]

OnlyAFleshWound: [[spoiler:Joachin]] accumulates a number of injuries in Mill River, but keeps on going. Averted toward the end, when [[spoiler:he is revealed to actually be dying from internal bleeding and needs to be saved with magic.]]

OnlyChildSyndrome: Joachin.

OurGhostsAreDifferent: Lurks, possessing spirits which come into being as a result of a ritual suicide.

OurMagesAreDifferent: It seems like anyone can do magic with the required circle and incantations, however there are also a select few “Conductors”, who can channel spirits and don’t require any external support for their magic.

PastLifeMemories: [[spoiler:Richard seeks revenge for what their father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.]]

PersonalHorror: Some of the horror in Mill River stems mostly from the characters' personal issues, as opposed to anything supernatural.

PowerTrio: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief [[spoiler:but ultimately becomes more of a Mage. Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.]]

PowersViaPossession: Lurks “imprint” onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. [[spoiler:This is how Joachin becomes adept with the sword, how Valerie starts remembering her past life, and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.]]

PsychologicalHorror: In spades, especially in the book’s first half: upon arriving in Mill River, Joachin and Valerie both fear they are going insane (and are paranoid about each other going insane, which doesn’t help things one bit).

PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. It taps into [[spoiler:Joachin and Valerie’s guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station]] may also qualify.

PsychopathicManchild: [[spoiler:Richard]] has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.

PyrrhicVictory: Joachin has confronted [[spoiler:his father and Richard]] and taken ownership of his destiny, but he's lost [[spoiler:Valerie, and now has to face the apocalypse prophesied by his father. Not to mention, both his father and Richard are still presumably out there somewhere.]]

{{Reincarnation}}

RitualMagic: Magic requires circles and incantations.

SanitySlippage: All of the protagonists suffer from this to some extent. [[spoiler:Joachin exhibits signs from the moment he agrees to assassinate Richard and Valerie’s father, and Valerie gets it pretty bad after Richard’s (apparent) death. Richard seems the most levelheaded of the group, but it is eventually revealed that he’d gone down the deep end before the story had even begun.]]

ShieldBash: Valerie does this with a riot shield.

SlasherSmile: Richard tends to sport those whenever [[spoiler:he’s trolling Joachin.]]

SmugSnake: [[spoiler:Richard,]] all the way.

SpookyPhotographs: Joachin finds one in the police station lounge.

SummoningRitual: Employed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

SurprisinglySuddenDeath: [[spoiler:Richard]] is unceremoniously crushed to death. [[spoiler:Or so it seems...]]

SurrealHorror: [[spoiler:Joachin’s return trip to the police station, where he converses with (what is assumed to be) a demented Lurk on the phone, gets a key faxed to him, and sees his reflection kill itself in a mirror. Though that last event is later hinted to be Joachin having split off part of his soul, exactly what the hell was going on in that station is never fully explained.]]

SymbioticPossession: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard’s]] relationship eventually becomes this.

TalkativeLoon: [[spoiler:The Police station Lurk.]]

TarotMotifs: Magic rituals prominently feature tarot cards. Furthermore, each character is associated with a specific card: Joachin is the Fool, Valerie is the Knight of Rods, Richard is the Devil, Leonard is the Hanged Man, and Friedrich is the Magician.

TheTeetotaler: Richard, who, in his own words, "prefers to retain full control of his faculties". [[spoiler:Being a Lurk might have something to do with it, too.]]

{{Telepathy}}: [[spoiler:Richard gains this via the power of Atheiyhius:]] tapping into the power of the Collective Human Unconscious allows for telepathic communication, as well as the forceful control of people’s movements.

ThoughtControlledPower: Conductor powers function mostly through focus; as opposed to other mages, Conductors don’t require incantations or circles to use magic.

{{Tomboy}}: Valerie.

TownWithADarkSecret: The real town of Mill River, which [[spoiler:hosts the Order of Atheiyhius.]]

{{Troll}}: [[spoiler:Richard]] and, to an even greater extent, the “illusion” version of him in the Mill River Museum.

UnholyGround: The “ancient place of worship” [[spoiler:near Friedrich’s cabin.]]

UnstoppableRage: Valerie, when she [[spoiler:destroys Metal Man]].

WorldOfNoGrandparents: Except for Joachin’s paternal grandfather being briefly mentioned and Karen Evans being grandmother to Athis, grandparents are completely absent.

YouCantFightFate: Joachin is unable to [[spoiler:bring Valerie back, and his father's vision of the apocalypse turns out to be accurate after all.]]


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\n* TheEighties: The story takes place in 1988.

1988.
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AbandonedHospital: [[spoiler:Athis (and, subsequently, Richard)]] hangs out in one.

one.
*
AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kauffmann wasn’t exactly the best father. Deidre’s father even less so.

so.
*
AdultFear: The prologue, full stop: a father hangs himself and his son in some sort of ritualistic suicide.

suicide.
*
AFormYouAreComfortableWith: [[spoiler:Leonard takes Valerie's form to chat with Joachin.]]

]]
*
AfterlifeExpress: [[spoiler:A manifestation of Joachin's Conductor powers, boarded by the protagonists early on.]]

]]
*
AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Richard, after taking possession of Athis.]]

]]
*
AlcoholicParent: Joachin’s mother.

mother.
*
ApocalypticLog: Valerie’s and Karen Evans’ journals.

journals.
*
ArchnemesisDad: Joachin has… issues with his father, to say the least.

least.
*
BadassLongcoat: Richard, who wears an 80’s leather version.

version.
*
BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Valerie,]] though it comes at the price of never being able to return home.

home.
*
TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann's plan to open the Gate and leave for another world]] has already succeeded by the time the protagonists arrive.

arrive.
*
BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: The final confrontation between [[spoiler:Joachin and Richard]], which takes place in [[spoiler:Richard's]] “inner world”.

world”.
*
BigSisterInstinct: Valerie, toward Richard. One of her main reasons for going along with his search for “paradise” is to keep watching over him.

him.
*
BornOfMagic: [[spoiler:Athis.]]

]]
*
BlackMagic: The ritual performed to “open "open the Gate” Gate" to the Void, which requires twenty-three human sacrifices to perform. Overlaps with Blood Magic for the ritual used to bring [[spoiler:Athis]] to life.

life.
*
BloodMagic: The ritual performed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

]]
*
BodyAndHost: Lurks can “latch” "latch" onto the living like parasites, though they can only assume full control if the host willingly accept their presence.

presence.
*
BodySurf: [[spoiler:Richard does this after his “death”. In order: he latches on to Valerie, takes over a Bat Legionnaire, possesses Athis, and finally ends up back inside a broken, toy-sized Bat Legionnaire.]]

]]
*
TheBully: Joachin’s new school is full of these. His father also qualifies to some extent, as does [[spoiler:Richard]].

[[spoiler:Richard]].
*
CampUnsafeIsntSafeAnymore: Mill River seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. [[spoiler:Then the protagonists find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.]]

]]
*
CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler:Joachin eventually does this to his father.]]

]]
*
CandlelitRitual: The underground place of worship where [[spoiler:the Order of Atheithius]] conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.

torches.
*
CantMoveWhileBeingWatched: Objects in Mill River will only “reset” "reset" to their original state when not actively being observed.

observed.
*
CarryABigStick: Valerie favours a telescopic baton whenever she needs to beat something/someone up.

up.
*
CastFullOfCrazy: There’s There's very few people in Mill River who can be said to be completely in their right mind.

mind.
*
CharmPerson: Even before becoming a Lurk, [[spoiler:Richard]] had a preternatural ability to “push” "push" people into certain courses of action.

action.
*
DarkWorld: [[spoiler:Mill River, especially after the red moon appears.]]

]]
*
DaylightHorror: Mill River is bright and sunny, and seems completely untouched except for the missing populace.

populace.
*
DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:Richard. Though he appears to die early in the story, it is later revealed that he was a Lurk (albeit one manifested in physical form) from the very beginning.]]

]]
*
DeadPersonConversation: [[spoiler:Joachin, with Leonard and Richard.]]

]]
*
DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Leonard's]] attempt to get Joachin to “accept” "accept" him definitely comes across as this.

this.
*
DisappearedDad: Friedrich Kauffmann.

Kauffmann.
*
DissonantLaughter: Richard tends to chuckle at inappropriate moments, [[spoiler:especially when trolling Joachin.]]

]]
*
DreamLand: [[spoiler:Mill River can be seen as this for Athis. Furthermore, it exists in the midst of the “Void”, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious.]]

]]
*
TheDisembodied: Lurks.

Lurks.
*
EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.

gods.
*
TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]

]]
*
EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]

]]
*
EnergyAbsorption: Part of what a Conductor's powers can do.

do.
*
EvilPhone: [[spoiler:Joachin finds one upon his return to the police station.]]

]]
*
ExistentialHorror: Friedrich invokes this, stating that everything in existence is ultimately bound by fate, making free will meaningless.

meaningless.
*
FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Richard is convinced that Valerie is the reincarnation of Deidre, his sister from a past life. Valerie turns out to instead be the reincarnation of a First World War soldier.]]

]]
*
FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: [[spoiler:Six-year-old Athis is, in order: hanged by his father, possessed by Richard, and shot by Joachin. Granted he’s he's technically an EldritchAbomination, but still…]]

still...]]
*
TheFatalist: Friedrich Kauffmann, to the extent that [[spoiler:he'll let his own son be murdered in front of him, if such is what "fate has decreed".]]

]]
*
{{Fireballs}}: [[spoiler:Eileen and some of the other Order members can conjure them, to no great effect.]]

]]
*
FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. [[spoiler:Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to keep watching over her little brother.]]

]]
*
GateOfTruth: The power of Atheiyhius.

Atheiyhius.
*
GeniusBruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s anyone's ass, but demonstrates a very thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.

entries.
*
GenreShift: The novel’s first half is mostly straight-up horror, whereas the second half is more action/fantasy, with a touch of cosmic horror.

horror.
*
GeometricMagic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. [[spoiler:Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.]]

]]
*
GhostTown: Mill River.

River.
*
GlamourFailure: [[spoiler:While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ Evans' house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance -- a hanged cadaver -- occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.]]

GrewASpine:
]]
*GrewASpine:
[[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's gone from being relentlessly bullied to single-handedly taking on an EldrichAbomination.]]

]]
*
HauntedHeroine: Joachin and Valerie.

Valerie.
*
HellbentForLeather: Joachin, Valerie and Richard all wear leather jackets.

jackets.
*
HellIsThatNoise: [[spoiler:Hearing a creaking sound in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.]]

]]
*
HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler:Joachin]] abandons hope and becomes intent on committing suicide immediately after [[spoiler:Valerie's apparent demise.]]

]]
*
HeroicSafeMode: [[spoiler:Joachin]], who seems to have become almost entirely fearless during the second half of the novel. [[spoiler:As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.]]

]]
*
HouseOfBrokenMirrors: [[spoiler:Karen Evans' house.]] The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

trope.
*
IfICanOnlyMove: [[spoiler:Joachin]] manages to get [[spoiler:Richard/Athis]] at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that [[spoiler:Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control/stop his movements...]]

]]
*
ImColdSoCold: [[spoiler:Joachin,]] while dying from internal bleeding.

bleeding.
*
ImplausibleFencingPowers: Joachin[[spoiler:thanks to obtaining Leonard's fencing abilities]] is able to proficiently use a sword. However, said sword is described as "a mix between a knightly sword and a grossly oversized, double-edged kitchen knife"; [[spoiler:which is a far cry from the thin, light foil or epee normally used in fencing.]]

]]
*
ImprobableAimingSkills: [[spoiler:Joachin]] manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that [[spoiler:his senses were amplified by magic at the time.]]

]]
*
JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: [[spoiler:Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.]]

]]
*
KnightTemplarBigSister: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.

pulp.
*
LaughingMad: Joachin falls into this a couple times.

times.
*
LetMeAtHim: [[spoiler:Valerie tries to kill Richard once he's revealed his true colours, but is held back by Joachin.]]

]]
*
LoveMakesYouCrazy: Joachin's infatuation with Valerie is... unhealthy, to say the least.

least.
*
MagicEnhancement: The Prayer to the Elements, which serves to “fortify the body and mind”, and is potent enough to not only [[spoiler:bring Joachin back from the brink of death, but also allow him to fight Richard’s superpowered demon body on an equal footing.]]

]]
*
MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann]] has brought their scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do the dirty work.

work.
*
MajorInjuryUnderreaction: [[spoiler:Richard]] laughs off being stabbed in the chest. Justified on account of [[spoiler:him already being dead]].

dead]].
*
ManipulativeBastard: Both [[spoiler:Richard and Friedrich]] are very good at getting into people’s heads.

heads.
*
MindRape: [[spoiler:Richard]] does this to [[spoiler:Valerie after bringing her BackFromTheDead.]]

]]
*
MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:Richard]] pulls this off on [[spoiler:Joachin]] in the opening chapters.

chapters.
*
TheMusketeer: Joachin knows his guns and [[spoiler:due to Leonard's influence]] eventually becomes quite adept with a sword.

sword.
*
MustBeInvited: Played with; while a Lurk must indeed be willingly accepted by its host to assume full control, they need no such invitation to simply “latch” "latch" on to someone.

someone.
*
TheManInTheMirrorTalksBack: And shoots himself in the head.

head.
*
MentalWorld: Everyone has an “inner world”. [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard]] eventually enter [[spoiler:Richard's.]]

]]
*
MenUseViolenceWomenUseCommunication: Subverted big time with Valerie and Richard. Valerie tends to resort to violence for most every problem, whereas Richard relies on his wits, and [[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl.]]

]]
*
MurderousMannequin: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann has turned his followers (and part of himself) into these.]]

]]
*
MysteriousParent: Kauffmann, who apparently abandoned his family to [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse.]]

]]
*
NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Richard’s Richard's nickname, "Slayer".

"Slayer".
*
NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: [[spoiler:Joachin]] tends to discover a new ability whenever one is needed to escape the current predicament.

predicament.
*
NiceDayDeadlyNight: [[spoiler:Not that daytime in Mill River was all that reassuring, but things take a seriously dark turn once “night” falls.]]

]]
*
NightmareFace: [[spoiler:Karen Evans. Leonard Evans’ “real” Evans' "real" face is… is... not pretty either.]]

]]
*
NoodleIncident: [[spoiler:When Richard (in Athis’ body) tries to prove to Valerie that he really is her brother, he refers to… something he and Valerie did when they were younger. Exactly what happened is never revealed, but said incident is apparently very embarrassing, and Richard even quips that he may have to kill Joachin after he’s heard that.]]

]]
*
OnlyAFleshWound: [[spoiler:Joachin]] accumulates a number of injuries in Mill River, but keeps on going. Averted toward the end, when [[spoiler:he is revealed to actually be dying from internal bleeding and needs to be saved with magic.]]

]]
*
OnlyChildSyndrome: Joachin.

Joachin.
*
OurGhostsAreDifferent: Lurks, possessing spirits which come into being as a result of a ritual suicide.

suicide.
*
OurMagesAreDifferent: It seems like anyone can do magic with the required circle and incantations, however there are also a select few “Conductors”, who can channel spirits and don’t require any external support for their magic.

magic.
*
PastLifeMemories: [[spoiler:Richard seeks revenge for what their father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.]]

]]
*
PersonalHorror: Some of the horror in Mill River stems mostly from the characters' personal issues, as opposed to anything supernatural.

supernatural.
*
PowerTrio: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief [[spoiler:but ultimately becomes more of a Mage. Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.]]

]]
*
PowersViaPossession: Lurks “imprint” "imprint" onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. [[spoiler:This is how Joachin becomes adept with the sword, how Valerie starts remembering her past life, and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.]]

]]
*
PsychologicalHorror: In spades, especially in the book’s first half: upon arriving in Mill River, Joachin and Valerie both fear they are going insane (and are paranoid about each other going insane, which doesn’t help things one bit).

bit).
*
PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. It taps into [[spoiler:Joachin and Valerie’s Valerie's guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station]] may also qualify.

qualify.
*
PsychopathicManchild: [[spoiler:Richard]] has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.

teenager.
*
PyrrhicVictory: Joachin has confronted [[spoiler:his father and Richard]] and taken ownership of his destiny, but he's lost [[spoiler:Valerie, and now has to face the apocalypse prophesied by his father. Not to mention, both his father and Richard are still presumably out there somewhere.]]

{{Reincarnation}}

]]
* {{Reincarnation}}
*
RitualMagic: Magic requires circles and incantations.

incantations.
*
SanitySlippage: All of the protagonists suffer from this to some extent. [[spoiler:Joachin exhibits signs from the moment he agrees to assassinate Richard and Valerie’s Valerie's father, and Valerie gets it pretty bad after Richard’s (apparent) death. Richard seems the most levelheaded of the group, but it is eventually revealed that he’d gone down the deep end before the story had even begun.]]

]]
*
ShieldBash: Valerie does this with a riot shield.

shield.
*
SlasherSmile: Richard tends to sport those whenever [[spoiler:he’s trolling Joachin.]]

]]
*
SmugSnake: [[spoiler:Richard,]] all the way.

way.
*
SpookyPhotographs: Joachin finds one in the police station lounge.

lounge.
*
SummoningRitual: Employed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

]]
*
SurprisinglySuddenDeath: [[spoiler:Richard]] is unceremoniously crushed to death. [[spoiler:Or so it seems...]]

]]
*
SurrealHorror: [[spoiler:Joachin’s [[spoiler:Joachin's return trip to the police station, where he converses with (what is assumed to be) a demented Lurk on the phone, gets a key faxed to him, and sees his reflection kill itself in a mirror. Though that last event is later hinted to be Joachin having split off part of his soul, exactly what the hell was going on in that station is never fully explained.]]

]]
*
SymbioticPossession: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard’s]] Leonard's]] relationship eventually becomes this.

this.
*
TalkativeLoon: [[spoiler:The Police station Lurk.]]

]]
*
TarotMotifs: Magic rituals prominently feature tarot cards. Furthermore, each character is associated with a specific card: Joachin is the Fool, Valerie is the Knight of Rods, Richard is the Devil, Leonard is the Hanged Man, and Friedrich is the Magician.

Magician.
*
TheTeetotaler: Richard, who, in his own words, "prefers to retain full control of his faculties". [[spoiler:Being a Lurk might have something to do with it, too.]]

]]
*
{{Telepathy}}: [[spoiler:Richard gains this via the power of Atheiyhius:]] tapping into the power of the Collective Human Unconscious allows for telepathic communication, as well as the forceful control of people’s movements.

movements.
*
ThoughtControlledPower: Conductor powers function mostly through focus; as opposed to other mages, Conductors don’t require incantations or circles to use magic.

magic.
*
{{Tomboy}}: Valerie.

Valerie.
*
TownWithADarkSecret: The real town of Mill River, which [[spoiler:hosts the Order of Atheiyhius.]]

]]
*
{{Troll}}: [[spoiler:Richard]] and, to an even greater extent, the “illusion” "illusion" version of him in the Mill River Museum.

Museum.
*
UnholyGround: The “ancient "ancient place of worship” worship" [[spoiler:near Friedrich’s Friedrich's cabin.]]

]]
*
UnstoppableRage: Valerie, when she [[spoiler:destroys Metal Man]].

Man]].
*
WorldOfNoGrandparents: Except for Joachin’s Joachin's paternal grandfather being briefly mentioned and Karen Evans being grandmother to Athis, grandparents are completely absent.

absent.
*
YouCantFightFate: Joachin is unable to [[spoiler:bring Valerie back, and his father's vision of the apocalypse turns out to be accurate after all.]]

]]




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GrewASpine: [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's gone from relentlessly bullied loser to single-handedly taking on an EldrichAbomination.]]

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GrewASpine: [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's gone from relentlessly bullied loser to single-handedly taking on EldrichAbominations.an EldrichAbomination.]]
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GrewASpine: [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's taking on EldrichAbominations.]]

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TheMusketeer: Joachin knows his guns and [[spoiler:due to Leonard's influence]] eventually becomes quite adept with a sword.


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ShieldBash: Valerie does this with a riot shield.

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AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father. Deidre’s father even less so.

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AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann Kauffmann wasn’t exactly the best father. Deidre’s father even less so.



DisappearedDad: Friedrich Kaufmann.

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DisappearedDad: Friedrich Kaufmann.
Kauffmann.



TheFatalist: Friedrich Kauffmann, to the extent that [[spoiler:he'll let his own son be murdered in front of him, if such is what "fate has decreed".]]



MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kaufmann]] has brought their scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do the dirty work.

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MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Friedrich Kaufmann]] Kauffmann]] has brought their scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do the dirty work.



MysteriousParent: Kaufmann, who apparently abandoned his family to [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse.]]

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MysteriousParent: Kaufmann, Kauffmann, who apparently abandoned his family to [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse.]]




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YouCantFightFate: Joachin is unable to [[spoiler:bring Valerie back, and his father's vision of the apocalypse turns out to be accurate after all.]]

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->''"…truly, the world had gone mad. Perhaps it was fitting that I did too…"''



WorldOfNoGrandparents: Except for Joachin’s paternal grandfather being briefly mentioned and Karen Evans being grandmother to Athis, grandparents are completely absent.

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WorldOfNoGrandparents: Except for Joachin’s paternal grandfather being briefly mentioned and Karen Evans being grandmother to Athis, grandparents are completely absent.absent.


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17-year old Joachin Basner has just started his final year in a new high-school in an unsavoury neighborhood, and is relentlessly bullied. That is, until bully hunter Valerie Rogue and her brother Richard step in and decisively puts an end to that.

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17-year old Joachin Basner has just started his final year in a new high-school in an unsavoury neighborhood, and is relentlessly bullied. That is, until bully hunter Valerie Rogue and her brother Richard step in and decisively puts put an end to that.



Plagued by doubt but galvanized by his personal issues with his father (the man having abandoned the family years ago) and his feelings for Valerie, Joachin ultimately decides to go ahead with the assassination. The subsequent encounter leaves the man’s fate unclear and Joachin doubting his choice more than ever before. Nevertheless, Joachin tells Richard the deed is done.

The three skip town as planned, clandestinely hopping aboard a mysteriously empty passenger train, which carries them to the equally empty yet pristine town of Mill River. It soon becomes clear that they are trapped in Mill River, and that something is very wrong with the place. Richard states that this must be the paradise they had been seeking all along, but Joachin eventually finds a man, Leonard Evans, who may hold a very different explanation as to what exactly is going on in the town…


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Plagued by doubt but galvanized by his personal issues with his father (the man having abandoned the family years ago) and his feelings for Valerie, Joachin ultimately decides to go ahead with the assassination. The subsequent encounter leaves the man’s fate unclear and Joachin doubting his choice more than ever before. Nevertheless, Joachin tells Richard the deed is done.

The three skip town as planned, clandestinely hopping aboard a mysteriously empty passenger train, which carries them to the equally empty yet pristine town of Mill River. It soon becomes clear that they are trapped in Mill River, and that something is very wrong with the place. Though Richard states believes that this must be the paradise they had been seeking all along, but Joachin eventually finds a man, Leonard Evans, who may hold a very different explanation as to what exactly is going on in the town…

three soon find themselves fighting for their lives and, more importantly, their sanity…

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CantMoveWhileBeingWatched: A variation, in that objects in Mill River “reset” to their original state when not actively being observed.

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CantMoveWhileBeingWatched: A variation, in that objects Objects in Mill River will only “reset” to their original state when not actively being observed.
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AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. Deidre’s father qualifies even more.

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AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. father. Deidre’s father qualifies even more.
less so.



SpookyPhotographs: Joachin finds some in the police station lounge.

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SpookyPhotographs: Joachin finds some one in the police station lounge.

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SurrealHorror: Joachin’s return trip to the police station, where he converses with (what is assumed to be) a demented Lurk on the phone, gets a key faxed to him, and sees his reflection kill itself in a mirror. Though that last event is later hinted to be Joachin having split off part of his soul, exactly what the hell was going on in that station is never explained.

SymbioticPossession: Joachin and Leonard’s relationship eventually becomes this.

TalkativeLoon: The Police station Lurk.

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SurrealHorror: Joachin’s [[spoiler:Joachin’s return trip to the police station, where he converses with (what is assumed to be) a demented Lurk on the phone, gets a key faxed to him, and sees his reflection kill itself in a mirror. Though that last event is later hinted to be Joachin having split off part of his soul, exactly what the hell was going on in that station is never explained.

fully explained.]]

SymbioticPossession: Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard’s Leonard’s]] relationship eventually becomes this.

TalkativeLoon: The [[spoiler:The Police station Lurk.
Lurk.]]



TheTeetotaler: Richard, who prefers to “retain full control of his faculties”. Being a Lurk might have something to do with it, too.

{{Telepathy}}: Richard gains this via the power of Atheiyhius: tapping into the power of the Collective Human Unconscious, he is able to communicate telepathically, as well as forcefully control people’s movements.

TisOnlyABulletToTheBrain: “Metal Man” takes two .308 bullets to the face with minimal ill-effects. Justified in that Metal Man is a giant, animated toy that doesn’t need a head in the first place.

ThoughtControlledPower: Joachin’s Conductor power seem to function mostly through focus; as opposed to other mages, Conductors don’t require incantations or circles to use magic.

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TheTeetotaler: Richard, who prefers who, in his own words, "prefers to “retain retain full control of his faculties”. Being faculties". [[spoiler:Being a Lurk might have something to do with it, too.

too.]]

{{Telepathy}}: Richard [[spoiler:Richard gains this via the power of Atheiyhius: Atheiyhius:]] tapping into the power of the Collective Human Unconscious, he is able to communicate telepathically, Unconscious allows for telepathic communication, as well as forcefully the forceful control of people’s movements.

TisOnlyABulletToTheBrain: “Metal Man” takes two .308 bullets to the face with minimal ill-effects. Justified in that Metal Man is a giant, animated toy that doesn’t need a head in the first place.

ThoughtControlledPower: Joachin’s Conductor power seem to powers function mostly through focus; as opposed to other mages, Conductors don’t require incantations or circles to use magic.



TownWithADarkSecret: The real town of Mill River, which hosts the Order of Atheiyhius.

{{Troll}}: Richard and, to an even greater extent, the “illusion” version of him in the Mill River Museum.

UnholyGround: The “ancient place of worship” near Kaufmann’s cabin.

UnstoppableRage: Valerie, when she utterly destroys Metal Man.

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TownWithADarkSecret: The real town of Mill River, which hosts [[spoiler:hosts the Order of Atheiyhius.

Atheiyhius.]]

{{Troll}}: Richard [[spoiler:Richard]] and, to an even greater extent, the “illusion” version of him in the Mill River Museum.

UnholyGround: The “ancient place of worship” near Kaufmann’s cabin.

[[spoiler:near Friedrich’s cabin.]]

UnstoppableRage: Valerie, when she utterly destroys [[spoiler:destroys Metal Man.
Man]].

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PowersViaPossession: Lurks “imprint” onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. This is how Joachin becomes adept with the sword, how Valerie starts remembering her past life, and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.

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PowersViaPossession: Lurks “imprint” onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. This [[spoiler:This is how Joachin becomes adept with the sword, how Valerie starts remembering her past life, and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.
possession.]]



PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. I taps into [[spoiler:Joachin and Valerie’s guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station]] may also qualify.

PsychopathicManchild: [[spoiler:Richard]] has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.

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PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. I It taps into [[spoiler:Joachin and Valerie’s guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station]] may also qualify.

PsychopathicManchild: [[spoiler:Richard]] has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.teenager.

{{Reincarnation}}

RitualMagic: Magic requires circles and incantations.

SanitySlippage: All of the protagonists suffer from this to some extent. [[spoiler:Joachin exhibits signs from the moment he agrees to assassinate Richard and Valerie’s father, and Valerie gets it pretty bad after Richard’s (apparent) death. Richard seems the most levelheaded of the group, but it is eventually revealed that he’d gone down the deep end before the story had even begun.]]

SlasherSmile: Richard tends to sport those whenever [[spoiler:he’s trolling Joachin.]]

SmugSnake: [[spoiler:Richard,]] all the way.

SpookyPhotographs: Joachin finds some in the police station lounge.

SummoningRitual: Employed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

SurprisinglySuddenDeath: [[spoiler:Richard]] is unceremoniously crushed to death. [[spoiler:Or so it seems...]]

SurrealHorror: Joachin’s return trip to the police station, where he converses with (what is assumed to be) a demented Lurk on the phone, gets a key faxed to him, and sees his reflection kill itself in a mirror. Though that last event is later hinted to be Joachin having split off part of his soul, exactly what the hell was going on in that station is never explained.

SymbioticPossession: Joachin and Leonard’s relationship eventually becomes this.

TalkativeLoon: The Police station Lurk.

TarotMotifs: Magic rituals prominently feature tarot cards. Furthermore, each character is associated with a specific card: Joachin is the Fool, Valerie is the Knight of Rods, Richard is the Devil, Leonard is the Hanged Man, and Friedrich is the Magician.

TheTeetotaler: Richard, who prefers to “retain full control of his faculties”. Being a Lurk might have something to do with it, too.

{{Telepathy}}: Richard gains this via the power of Atheiyhius: tapping into the power of the Collective Human Unconscious, he is able to communicate telepathically, as well as forcefully control people’s movements.

TisOnlyABulletToTheBrain: “Metal Man” takes two .308 bullets to the face with minimal ill-effects. Justified in that Metal Man is a giant, animated toy that doesn’t need a head in the first place.

ThoughtControlledPower: Joachin’s Conductor power seem to function mostly through focus; as opposed to other mages, Conductors don’t require incantations or circles to use magic.

{{Tomboy}}: Valerie.

TownWithADarkSecret: The real town of Mill River, which hosts the Order of Atheiyhius.

{{Troll}}: Richard and, to an even greater extent, the “illusion” version of him in the Mill River Museum.

UnholyGround: The “ancient place of worship” near Kaufmann’s cabin.

UnstoppableRage: Valerie, when she utterly destroys Metal Man.

WorldOfNoGrandparents: Except for Joachin’s paternal grandfather being briefly mentioned and Karen Evans being grandmother to Athis, grandparents are completely absent.
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MysteriousParents: Kaufmann, who apparently abandoned his family to [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse.]]

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MysteriousParents: MysteriousParent: Kaufmann, who apparently abandoned his family to [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse.]]



Past-LifeMemories: [[spoiler:Richard seeks revenge for what their father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.]]

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Past-LifeMemories: PastLifeMemories: [[spoiler:Richard seeks revenge for what their father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.]]

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MajorInjuryUnderreaction: [[spoiler:Richard]] laughs off being stabbed in the chest. Justified on account of [[spoiler:him already being dead]].



OnlyAFleshWound: Joachin accumulates a prodigious number of injuries during his time in Mill River, but keeps on going. Averted toward the end, when he is revealed to be dying from internal bleeding and needs to be saved with magic.

OnlyChildSyndrome: Joachin

OurGhostsAreDifferent: Lurks, possessing spirits which come into being as a result of a ritual sacrifice.

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OnlyAFleshWound: Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin]] accumulates a prodigious number of injuries during his time in Mill River, but keeps on going. Averted toward the end, when he [[spoiler:he is revealed to actually be dying from internal bleeding and needs to be saved with magic.

magic.]]

OnlyChildSyndrome: Joachin

Joachin.

OurGhostsAreDifferent: Lurks, possessing spirits which come into being as a result of a ritual sacrifice.
suicide.



Past-LifeMemories: Richard seeks revenge for what his father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.

PersonalHorror: Some of the most horrific parts of the novel stem mostly from Joachin’s personal issues.

PowerTrio: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard clearly fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief (but ultimately becomes more of a Mage). Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.

PowersViaPossession: Joachin gains Leonard’s knowledge and abilities when the two mutually decide to join forces. This also applies to all cases of possession in the story, as Lurks “imprint” onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. This is how Valerie starts remembering her past life (originally something that only Richard could do), and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.

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Past-LifeMemories: Richard [[spoiler:Richard seeks revenge for what his their father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.

War.]]

PersonalHorror: Some of the most horrific parts of the novel stem horror in Mill River stems mostly from Joachin’s the characters' personal issues.

issues, as opposed to anything supernatural.

PowerTrio: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard clearly fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief (but [[spoiler:but ultimately becomes more of a Mage). Mage. Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.

chapters.]]

PowersViaPossession: Joachin gains Leonard’s knowledge and abilities when the two mutually decide to join forces. This also applies to all cases of possession in the story, as Lurks “imprint” onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. This is how Joachin becomes adept with the sword, how Valerie starts remembering her past life (originally something that only Richard could do), life, and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.



PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. Hinted to be a trap set by Joachin’s father, it taps into Joachin and Valerie’s guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station may also qualify.

PsychopathicManchild: Richard has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.

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PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. Hinted to be a trap set by Joachin’s father, it I taps into Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin and Valerie’s guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station station]] may also qualify.

PsychopathicManchild: Richard [[spoiler:Richard]] has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.

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BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Valerie,]] though it comes at the price of never being able to return home.



MagicEnhancement: The Prayer to the Elements, which serves to “fortify the body and mind”, and is potent enough to not only bring Joachin back from the brink of death, but also allow him to fight Richard’s demon body on an equal footing.

MagnificentBastard: Kaufmann: he has brought his scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do his dirty work for him.

ManipulativeBastard: Both Richard and Friedrich are very good at getting into people’s heads.

MindRape: Richard implies he will do this to Joachin, but thankfully he never does get the chance.

MoreThanMindControl: Richard pulls this off on Joachin in the opening chapters.

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MagicEnhancement: The Prayer to the Elements, which serves to “fortify the body and mind”, and is potent enough to not only bring [[spoiler:bring Joachin back from the brink of death, but also allow him to fight Richard’s superpowered demon body on an equal footing.

footing.]]

MagnificentBastard: Kaufmann: he [[spoiler:Friedrich Kaufmann]] has brought his their scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do his the dirty work for him.

work.

ManipulativeBastard: Both Richard [[spoiler:Richard and Friedrich Friedrich]] are very good at getting into people’s heads.

MindRape: Richard implies he will do [[spoiler:Richard]] does this to Joachin, but thankfully he never does get the chance.

[[spoiler:Valerie after bringing her BackFromTheDead.]]

MoreThanMindControl: Richard [[spoiler:Richard]] pulls this off on Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin]] in the opening chapters.



MentalWorld: According to Leonard, everyone has an “inner world”. Joachin enters Richard’s toward the end of the novel.

MenUseViolenceWomenUseCommunication: Subverted big time with Valerie and Richard. Valerie tends to resort to violence for most every problem, whereas Richard relies on his wits, and MoreThanMindControl.

MurderousMannequin: Friedrich Kauffmann has turned his followers (and himself) into these.

MysteriousParents: Kaufmann, who apparently abandoned his family to start a magic cult and save humanity from the impending apocalypse… or something.

NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Richard’s nickname, Slayer, doesn’t exactly scream “good guy”…

NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Joachin tends to discover a new ability whenever one is needed to save him from his current predicament.

NiceDayDeadlyNight: Not that daytime in Mill River was all that reassuring, but things take a seriously dark turn once “night” falls.

NightmareFace: (Undead) Karen Evans. Leonard Evans’ “real” face is… not pretty either.

NoodleIncident: When Richard (in Athis’ body) is trying to prove to Valerie that he really is her brother, he refers to… something he and Valerie did when they were younger. Exactly what happened is never revealed, but said incident is apparently very embarrassing, and Richard even quips that he may have to kill Joachin after he’s heard that.

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MentalWorld: According to Leonard, everyone Everyone has an “inner world”. Joachin enters Richard’s toward the end of the novel.

[[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard]] eventually enter [[spoiler:Richard's.]]

MenUseViolenceWomenUseCommunication: Subverted big time with Valerie and Richard. Valerie tends to resort to violence for most every problem, whereas Richard relies on his wits, and MoreThanMindControl.

[[spoiler:MoreThanMindControl.]]

MurderousMannequin: Friedrich [[spoiler:Friedrich Kauffmann has turned his followers (and part of himself) into these.

these.]]

MysteriousParents: Kaufmann, who apparently abandoned his family to start [[spoiler:start a magic cult and attempt to save humanity from the impending apocalypse… or something.

apocalypse.]]

NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Richard’s nickname, Slayer, doesn’t exactly scream “good guy”…

"Slayer".

NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin]] tends to discover a new ability whenever one is needed to save him from his escape the current predicament.

NiceDayDeadlyNight: Not [[spoiler:Not that daytime in Mill River was all that reassuring, but things take a seriously dark turn once “night” falls.

falls.]]

NightmareFace: (Undead) Karen [[spoiler:Karen Evans. Leonard Evans’ “real” face is… not pretty either. \n\n]]

NoodleIncident: When [[spoiler:When Richard (in Athis’ body) is trying tries to prove to Valerie that he really is her brother, he refers to… something he and Valerie did when they were younger. Exactly what happened is never revealed, but said incident is apparently very embarrassing, and Richard even quips that he may have to kill Joachin after he’s heard that.
that.]]

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InformedAbility: Magic in general (Gert and Eileen)

JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.

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InformedAbility: Magic in general (Gert and Eileen)

JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: Valerie [[spoiler:Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.
confess.]]



LetMeAtHim: Valerie tries to kill Richard at the end, but is held back by Joachin.

LoveMakesYouCrazy: This is a major part of how Richard was able to convince Joachin to assassinate Richard’s father.

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LetMeAtHim: Valerie [[spoiler:Valerie tries to kill Richard at the end, once he's revealed his true colours, but is held back by Joachin.

Joachin.]]

LoveMakesYouCrazy: This Joachin's infatuation with Valerie is... unhealthy, to say the least.

MagicEnhancement: The Prayer to the Elements, which serves to “fortify the body and mind”, and
is a major part of how Richard was able potent enough to convince not only bring Joachin back from the brink of death, but also allow him to assassinate fight Richard’s father.demon body on an equal footing.

MagnificentBastard: Kaufmann: he has brought his scheme to fruition before even appearing in the story proper, to the point of using the protagonists to do his dirty work for him.

ManipulativeBastard: Both Richard and Friedrich are very good at getting into people’s heads.

MindRape: Richard implies he will do this to Joachin, but thankfully he never does get the chance.

MoreThanMindControl: Richard pulls this off on Joachin in the opening chapters.

MustBeInvited: Played with; while a Lurk must indeed be willingly accepted by its host to assume full control, they need no such invitation to simply “latch” on to someone.

TheManInTheMirrorTalksBack: And shoots himself in the head.

MentalWorld: According to Leonard, everyone has an “inner world”. Joachin enters Richard’s toward the end of the novel.

MenUseViolenceWomenUseCommunication: Subverted big time with Valerie and Richard. Valerie tends to resort to violence for most every problem, whereas Richard relies on his wits, and MoreThanMindControl.

MurderousMannequin: Friedrich Kauffmann has turned his followers (and himself) into these.

MysteriousParents: Kaufmann, who apparently abandoned his family to start a magic cult and save humanity from the impending apocalypse… or something.

NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Richard’s nickname, Slayer, doesn’t exactly scream “good guy”…

NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Joachin tends to discover a new ability whenever one is needed to save him from his current predicament.

NiceDayDeadlyNight: Not that daytime in Mill River was all that reassuring, but things take a seriously dark turn once “night” falls.

NightmareFace: (Undead) Karen Evans. Leonard Evans’ “real” face is… not pretty either.

NoodleIncident: When Richard (in Athis’ body) is trying to prove to Valerie that he really is her brother, he refers to… something he and Valerie did when they were younger. Exactly what happened is never revealed, but said incident is apparently very embarrassing, and Richard even quips that he may have to kill Joachin after he’s heard that.

OnlyAFleshWound: Joachin accumulates a prodigious number of injuries during his time in Mill River, but keeps on going. Averted toward the end, when he is revealed to be dying from internal bleeding and needs to be saved with magic.

OnlyChildSyndrome: Joachin

OurGhostsAreDifferent: Lurks, possessing spirits which come into being as a result of a ritual sacrifice.

OurMagesAreDifferent: It seems like anyone can do magic with the required circle and incantations, however there are also a select few “Conductors”, who can channel spirits and don’t require any external support for their magic.

Past-LifeMemories: Richard seeks revenge for what his father did to his sister in a past life. Through his influence, Valerie also starts to remember her past life as a soldier during the First World War.

PersonalHorror: Some of the most horrific parts of the novel stem mostly from Joachin’s personal issues.

PowerTrio: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard clearly fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief (but ultimately becomes more of a Mage). Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.

PowersViaPossession: Joachin gains Leonard’s knowledge and abilities when the two mutually decide to join forces. This also applies to all cases of possession in the story, as Lurks “imprint” onto their host (and vice-versa), transferring some of their powers in the process. This is how Valerie starts remembering her past life (originally something that only Richard could do), and how Richard still has the power of Atheiyhius even after Athis is freed from his possession.

PsychologicalHorror: In spades, especially in the book’s first half: upon arriving in Mill River, Joachin and Valerie both fear they are going insane (and are paranoid about each other going insane, which doesn’t help things one bit).

PsychologicalTormentZone: Exhibit Hall B of the Mill River Historical Museum. Hinted to be a trap set by Joachin’s father, it taps into Joachin and Valerie’s guilt in order to manifest apparitions that torment and ultimately try to kill the two of them. The evidence room at the police station may also qualify.

PsychopathicManchild: Richard has existed for nearly a century and effectively become a god, yet still mostly thinks and acts like a teenager.
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HauntedHero: Joachin.

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HauntedHero: Joachin.
HauntedHeroine: Joachin and Valerie.



HellIsThatNoise: Hearing a creaking sound anywhere in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.

HeroicBSOD: Joachin has one immediately after Valerie dies; he gives up and is intent on committing suicide. Leonard Evans manages to snap him out of it.

HeroicSafeMode: Joachin during the second half of the novel. As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.

HouseOfBrokenMirrors: The Evans house. The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

IfICanOnlyMove: Joachin has Richard/Athis at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control his movements, making him unable to perform this one crucial action.

ImColdSoCold: Joachin, when he’s dying from internal bleeding.

ImprobableAimingSkills: Joachin manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that his senses were amplified by magic at the time.

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HellIsThatNoise: Hearing [[spoiler:Hearing a creaking sound anywhere in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.

screeching.]]

HeroicBSOD: Joachin has one immediately after Valerie dies; he gives up [[spoiler:Joachin]] abandons hope and is becomes intent on committing suicide. Leonard Evans manages to snap him out of it.

suicide immediately after [[spoiler:Valerie's apparent demise.]]

HeroicSafeMode: Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin]], who seems to have become almost entirely fearless during the second half of the novel. As [[spoiler:As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.

River.]]

HouseOfBrokenMirrors: The Evans house. [[spoiler:Karen Evans' house.]] The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

IfICanOnlyMove: Joachin has Richard/Athis [[spoiler:Joachin]] manages to get [[spoiler:Richard/Athis]] at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that Richard [[spoiler:Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control control/stop his movements, making him unable to perform this one crucial action.

movements...]]

ImColdSoCold: Joachin, when he’s [[spoiler:Joachin,]] while dying from internal bleeding.

ImprobableAimingSkills: Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin]] manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that his [[spoiler:his senses were amplified by magic at the time.
time.]]
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GrewASpine: Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, bullies won’t even approach him, and he’s getting ready to confront an eldritch abomination.

HauntedHeroine: Both Joachin and Valerie qualify.

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GrewASpine: Joachin, [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, bullies won’t even approach him, and he’s getting ready to confront an eldritch abomination.

HauntedHeroine: Both Joachin and Valerie qualify.
he's taking on EldrichAbominations.]]

HauntedHero: Joachin.

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{{Fireballs}}: Eileen, though she can’t seem to hit anything with them.

FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to keep watching over Richard.

FridgeHorror: There have been two waves of ritual sacrifices/suicides (twenty-three each time) in order to further Kaufmann’s plan, and it’s implied that most of the major players in Mill River were in on it.

GateOfTruth: The power of Atheiyhius (a.k.a. the Void, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious). Richard obtains this power midway through the story, but is thankfully defeated before mastering its full potential.

GeniusBruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s ass, but demonstrates a more thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.

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{{Fireballs}}: Eileen, though she can’t seem [[spoiler:Eileen and some of the other Order members can conjure them, to hit anything with them.

no great effect.]]

FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially [[spoiler:Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to keep watching over Richard.

FridgeHorror: There have been two waves of ritual sacrifices/suicides (twenty-three each time) in order to further Kaufmann’s plan, and it’s implied that most of the major players in Mill River were in on it.

her little brother.]]

GateOfTruth: The power of Atheiyhius (a.k.a. the Void, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious). Richard obtains this power midway through the story, but is thankfully defeated before mastering its full potential.

Atheiyhius.

GeniusBruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s ass, but demonstrates a more very thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.



GeometricMagic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.

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GeometricMagic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. Joachin [[spoiler:Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.
powers.]]



GlamourFailure: While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance – a hanged cadaver – occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.

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GlamourFailure: While [[spoiler:While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance – a hanged cadaver – occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.
entirely.]]

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CampUnsafeIsntSafeAnymore: Mill River seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. [[spoiler:Then the protagonist find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.]]

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CampUnsafeIsntSafeAnymore: Mill River seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. [[spoiler:Then the protagonist protagonists find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.]]



CandlelitRitual: The underground place of worship where [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard]] conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.

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CandlelitRitual: The underground place of worship where [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard]] [[spoiler:the Order of Atheithius]] conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.



FightingFromTheInside: Inverted when Leonard fights Joachin’s ownership of him, and manages to actually speak out when Joachin starts succumbing to his injuries.

Fireballs: Eileen, though she can’t seem to hit anything with them.

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FightingFromTheInside: Inverted when Leonard fights Joachin’s ownership of him, and manages to actually speak out when Joachin starts succumbing to his injuries.

Fireballs:
{{Fireballs}}: Eileen, though she can’t seem to hit anything with them.

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AFormYouAreComfortableWith: [[spoiler:Leonard takes Valerie's form to chat with Joachin.]]



BodyOfBodies: After possessing [[spoiler:Athis, Richard]] creates a demonic armour/body for himself, seemingly cobbled with action figures.



FoolishSibling, Responsible Sibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to fulfill her duty as a big sister and watch over Richard.

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FoolishSibling, Responsible Sibling: FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to fulfill her duty as a big sister and watch keep watching over Richard.



JackBauerInterrogation Technique: Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.

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JackBauerInterrogation Technique: JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.
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Enemy Mine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]

Energy Absorption: Part of what a Conductor's powers can do.

Evil Phone: [[spoiler:Joachin finds one upon his return to the police station.]]

Existential Horror: Friedrich invokes this, stating that everything in existence is ultimately bound by fate, making free will meaningless.

Family Relationship Switcheroo: [[spoiler:Richard is convinced that Valerie is the reincarnation of Deidre, his sister from a past life. Valerie turns out to instead be the reincarnation of a First World War soldier.]]

Family Unfriendly Violence: [[spoiler:Six-year-old Athis is, in order: hanged by his father, possessed by Richard, and shot by Joachin. Granted he’s technically an EldritchAbomination, but still…]]

Fighting from the Inside: Inverted when Leonard fights Joachin’s ownership of him, and manages to actually speak out when Joachin starts succumbing to his injuries.

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Enemy Mine: EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]

Energy Absorption: EnergyAbsorption: Part of what a Conductor's powers can do.

Evil Phone: EvilPhone: [[spoiler:Joachin finds one upon his return to the police station.]]

Existential Horror: ExistentialHorror: Friedrich invokes this, stating that everything in existence is ultimately bound by fate, making free will meaningless.

Family Relationship Switcheroo: FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Richard is convinced that Valerie is the reincarnation of Deidre, his sister from a past life. Valerie turns out to instead be the reincarnation of a First World War soldier.]]

Family Unfriendly Violence: FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: [[spoiler:Six-year-old Athis is, in order: hanged by his father, possessed by Richard, and shot by Joachin. Granted he’s technically an EldritchAbomination, but still…]]

Fighting from the Inside: FightingFromTheInside: Inverted when Leonard fights Joachin’s ownership of him, and manages to actually speak out when Joachin starts succumbing to his injuries.



Foolish Sibling, Responsible Sibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to fulfill her duty as a big sister and watch over Richard.

Fridge Horror: There have been two waves of ritual sacrifices/suicides (twenty-three each time) in order to further Kaufmann’s plan, and it’s implied that most of the major players in Mill River were in on it.

Gate of Truth: The power of Atheiyhius (a.k.a. the Void, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious). Richard obtains this power midway through the story, but is thankfully defeated before mastering its full potential.

Genius Bruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s ass, but demonstrates a more thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.

Genre Shift: The novel’s first half is mostly straight-up horror, whereas the second half is more action/fantasy, with a touch of cosmic horror.

Geometric Magic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.

Ghost Town: Mill River.

Glamour Failure: While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance – a hanged cadaver – occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.

Grew a Spine: Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, bullies won’t even approach him, and he’s getting ready to confront an eldritch abomination.

Haunted Heroine: Both Joachin and Valerie qualify.

Hell-Bent for Leather: Joachin, Valerie and Richard all wear leather jackets.

Hell is that noise: Hearing a creaking sound anywhere in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.

Heroic BSOD: Joachin has one immediately after Valerie dies; he gives up and is intent on committing suicide. Leonard Evans manages to snap him out of it.

Heroic Safe Mode: Joachin during the second half of the novel. As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.

House of Broken Mirrors: The Evans house. The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

If I Can Only Move: Joachin has Richard/Athis at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control his movements, making him unable to perform this one crucial action.

I’m Cold… So Cold…: Joachin, when he’s dying from internal bleeding.

Improbable Aiming Skills: Joachin manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that his senses were amplified by magic at the time.

Informed Ability: Magic in general (Gert and Eileen)

Jack Bauer Interrogation Technique: Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.

Knight Templar Big Sister: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.

Laughing Mad: Joachin falls into this a couple times.

Let Me At Him!: Valerie tries to kill Richard at the end, but is held back by Joachin.

Love Makes you Crazy: This is a major part of how Richard was able to convince Joachin to assassinate Richard’s father.

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Foolish Sibling, FoolishSibling, Responsible Sibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to fulfill her duty as a big sister and watch over Richard.

Fridge Horror: FridgeHorror: There have been two waves of ritual sacrifices/suicides (twenty-three each time) in order to further Kaufmann’s plan, and it’s implied that most of the major players in Mill River were in on it.

Gate of Truth: GateOfTruth: The power of Atheiyhius (a.k.a. the Void, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious). Richard obtains this power midway through the story, but is thankfully defeated before mastering its full potential.

Genius Bruiser: GeniusBruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s ass, but demonstrates a more thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.

Genre Shift: GenreShift: The novel’s first half is mostly straight-up horror, whereas the second half is more action/fantasy, with a touch of cosmic horror.

Geometric Magic: GeometricMagic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.

Ghost Town: GhostTown: Mill River.

Glamour Failure: GlamourFailure: While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance – a hanged cadaver – occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.

Grew a Spine: GrewASpine: Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, bullies won’t even approach him, and he’s getting ready to confront an eldritch abomination.

Haunted Heroine: HauntedHeroine: Both Joachin and Valerie qualify.

Hell-Bent for Leather: HellbentForLeather: Joachin, Valerie and Richard all wear leather jackets.

Hell is that noise: HellIsThatNoise: Hearing a creaking sound anywhere in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.

Heroic BSOD: HeroicBSOD: Joachin has one immediately after Valerie dies; he gives up and is intent on committing suicide. Leonard Evans manages to snap him out of it.

Heroic Safe Mode: HeroicSafeMode: Joachin during the second half of the novel. As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.

House of Broken Mirrors: HouseOfBrokenMirrors: The Evans house. The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

If I Can Only Move: IfICanOnlyMove: Joachin has Richard/Athis at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control his movements, making him unable to perform this one crucial action.

I’m Cold… So Cold…: ImColdSoCold: Joachin, when he’s dying from internal bleeding.

Improbable Aiming Skills: ImprobableAimingSkills: Joachin manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that his senses were amplified by magic at the time.

Informed Ability: InformedAbility: Magic in general (Gert and Eileen)

Jack Bauer Interrogation JackBauerInterrogation Technique: Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.

Knight Templar Big Sister: KnightTemplarBigSister: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.

Laughing Mad: LaughingMad: Joachin falls into this a couple times.

Let Me At Him!: LetMeAtHim: Valerie tries to kill Richard at the end, but is held back by Joachin.

Love Makes you Crazy: LoveMakesYouCrazy: This is a major part of how Richard was able to convince Joachin to assassinate Richard’s father.

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AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. Deidre’s father – if Kaufmann’s article is to be trusted – qualifies even more.

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AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. Deidre’s father – if Kaufmann’s article is to be trusted – qualifies even more.



TheDisembodied: Lurks.

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TheDisembodied: Lurks.Lurks.

EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.

TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]

Enemy Mine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]

Energy Absorption: Part of what a Conductor's powers can do.

Evil Phone: [[spoiler:Joachin finds one upon his return to the police station.]]

Existential Horror: Friedrich invokes this, stating that everything in existence is ultimately bound by fate, making free will meaningless.

Family Relationship Switcheroo: [[spoiler:Richard is convinced that Valerie is the reincarnation of Deidre, his sister from a past life. Valerie turns out to instead be the reincarnation of a First World War soldier.]]

Family Unfriendly Violence: [[spoiler:Six-year-old Athis is, in order: hanged by his father, possessed by Richard, and shot by Joachin. Granted he’s technically an EldritchAbomination, but still…]]

Fighting from the Inside: Inverted when Leonard fights Joachin’s ownership of him, and manages to actually speak out when Joachin starts succumbing to his injuries.

Fireballs: Eileen, though she can’t seem to hit anything with them.

Foolish Sibling, Responsible Sibling: Played with in Valerie and Richard’s case. Initially it seems like Richard is the responsible, level-headed one, with Valerie constantly getting in trouble at school, and having to be bailed out by her brother. Inverted when Richard’s real, homicidal motives are revealed, while Valerie mainly tagged along to fulfill her duty as a big sister and watch over Richard.

Fridge Horror: There have been two waves of ritual sacrifices/suicides (twenty-three each time) in order to further Kaufmann’s plan, and it’s implied that most of the major players in Mill River were in on it.

Gate of Truth: The power of Atheiyhius (a.k.a. the Void, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious). Richard obtains this power midway through the story, but is thankfully defeated before mastering its full potential.

Genius Bruiser: Valerie can and will kick anyone’s ass, but demonstrates a more thoughtful and eloquent side in her journal entries.

Genre Shift: The novel’s first half is mostly straight-up horror, whereas the second half is more action/fantasy, with a touch of cosmic horror.

Geometric Magic: Most magic requires a drawn circle. Joachin and his father avert this, on account of their Conductor powers.

Ghost Town: Mill River.

Glamour Failure: While Joachin is in Leonard Evans’ house, Leonard initially appears to him as Valerie to deliver some exposition. However, his true appearance – a hanged cadaver – occasionally flickers through when Leonard gets emotional. When Leonard realizes Joachin intends to kill Athis, the glamour falls away entirely.

Grew a Spine: Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, bullies won’t even approach him, and he’s getting ready to confront an eldritch abomination.

Haunted Heroine: Both Joachin and Valerie qualify.

Hell-Bent for Leather: Joachin, Valerie and Richard all wear leather jackets.

Hell is that noise: Hearing a creaking sound anywhere in Mill River usually indicates that something bad is about to go down (or at least that the place houses something nasty). Also, both Karen Evans and the Bat Legionnaires announce their presence through ear-piercing, inhuman screeching.

Heroic BSOD: Joachin has one immediately after Valerie dies; he gives up and is intent on committing suicide. Leonard Evans manages to snap him out of it.

Heroic Safe Mode: Joachin during the second half of the novel. As a Conductor, he can split off parts of his soul, and it’s implied he literally left his fear in Mill River.

House of Broken Mirrors: The Evans house. The chapter featuring it is even named after this trope.

If I Can Only Move: Joachin has Richard/Athis at gunpoint, and is one trigger pull away from ending the nightmare… unfortunately, it turns out that Richard can now invade Joachin’s mind and control his movements, making him unable to perform this one crucial action.

I’m Cold… So Cold…: Joachin, when he’s dying from internal bleeding.

Improbable Aiming Skills: Joachin manages to shoot a rapidly-moving, action-figure-sized target. In a darkened passage. With a small handgun. Partly justified in that his senses were amplified by magic at the time.

Informed Ability: Magic in general (Gert and Eileen)

Jack Bauer Interrogation Technique: Valerie does this on Joachin when she suspects he killed Richard, and wants him to confess.

Knight Templar Big Sister: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.

Laughing Mad: Joachin falls into this a couple times.

Let Me At Him!: Valerie tries to kill Richard at the end, but is held back by Joachin.

Love Makes you Crazy: This is a major part of how Richard was able to convince Joachin to assassinate Richard’s father.
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The ‘80s: The story takes place in 1988.

Abandoned Hospital: [[spoiler:Athis (and, subsequently, Richard)]] hangs out in one.

Abusive Parents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. Deidre’s father – if Kaufmann’s article is to be trusted – qualifies even more.

Adult Fear: The prologue, full stop: a father hangs himself and his son in some sort of ritualistic suicide.

Afterlife Express: [[spoiler:A manifestation of Joachin's Conductor powers, boarded by the protagonists early on.]]

A God Am I: [[spoiler:Richard, after taking possession of Athis.]]

Alcoholic Parent: Joachin’s mother.

Apocalyptic Log: Valerie’s and Karen Evans’ journals.

Archnemesis Dad: Joachin has… issues with his father, to say the least.

Badass Longcoat: Richard, who wears an 80’s leather version.

Battle at the Center of the Mind: The final confrontation between [[spoiler:Joachin and Richard]], which takes place in [[spoiler:Richard's]] “inner world”.

Big Sister Instinct: Valerie, toward Richard. One of her main reasons for going along with his search for “paradise” is to keep watching over him.

Born of Magic: [[spoiler:Athis.]]

Black Magic: The ritual performed to “open the Gate” to the Void, which requires twenty-three human sacrifices to perform. Overlaps with Blood Magic for the ritual used to bring [[spoiler:Athis]] to life.

Blood Magic: The ritual performed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

Body and Host: Lurks can “latch” onto the living like parasites, though they can only assume full control if the host willingly accept their presence.

Body of Bodies: After possessing [[spoiler:Athis, Richard]] creates a demonic armour/body for himself, seemingly cobbled with action figures.

Body Surf: [[spoiler:Richard]] does this after his “death”. In order: he latches on to Valerie, takes over a Bat Legionnaire, possesses Athis, and finally ends up back inside a broken, toy-sized Bat Legionnaire.

The Bully: Joachin’s new school is full of these. Richard and Kaufmann also qualify.

Camp Unsafe isn’t Safe Anymore: Mill River initially seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. Then the protagonist find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.

Calling the Old Man Out: Joachin manages to pull an epic one on his father near the end.

Candlelit Ritual: The underground place of worship where Friedrich and Leonard conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.

Can’t Move While Being Watched: A variation, in that objects in Mill River “reset” to their original state when not actively being observed.

Carry a Big Stick: Valerie favours a telescopic baton whenever she needs to beat something/someone up.

Cast Full of Crazy: There’s very few people in Mill River who can be said to be completely in their right mind.

Charm Person: Even before becoming a Lurk, Richard had a preternatural ability to “push” people into certain courses of action. Best demonstrated when he coaxes Joachin into an act of murder.

Dark World: Mill River is this, especially after the red moon appears.

Daylight Horror: Mill River is initially bright and sunny, and seems completely untouched except for the missing populace.

Dead All Along: Richard. Though he appears to die early in the story, it is later revealed that he was a Lurk (albeit one manifested in physical form) from the very beginning.

Dead People Conversation: Joachin often has those with Leonard and Richard.

Demonic Possession: Leonard’s attempt to get Joachin to “accept” him definitely comes across as this.

Disappeared Dad: Friedrich Kaufmann.

Dissonant Laughter: Richard tends to chuckle at inappropriate moments, especially when trolling Joachin.

Dream Land: Mill River can be seen as this for Athis. Furthermore, it exists in the midst of the “Void”, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious.

The Disembodied: Lurks are technically this, especially Richard after his “death” (and prior to possessing Athis)

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The ‘80s: TheEighties: The story takes place in 1988.

Abandoned Hospital: AbandonedHospital: [[spoiler:Athis (and, subsequently, Richard)]] hangs out in one.

Abusive Parents: AbusiveParents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. Deidre’s father – if Kaufmann’s article is to be trusted – qualifies even more.

Adult Fear: AdultFear: The prologue, full stop: a father hangs himself and his son in some sort of ritualistic suicide.

Afterlife Express: AfterlifeExpress: [[spoiler:A manifestation of Joachin's Conductor powers, boarded by the protagonists early on.]]

A God Am I: AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Richard, after taking possession of Athis.]]

Alcoholic Parent: AlcoholicParent: Joachin’s mother.

Apocalyptic Log: ApocalypticLog: Valerie’s and Karen Evans’ journals.

Archnemesis Dad: ArchnemesisDad: Joachin has… issues with his father, to say the least.

Badass Longcoat: BadassLongcoat: Richard, who wears an 80’s leather version.

Battle at the Center of the Mind: BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: The final confrontation between [[spoiler:Joachin and Richard]], which takes place in [[spoiler:Richard's]] “inner world”.

Big Sister Instinct: BigSisterInstinct: Valerie, toward Richard. One of her main reasons for going along with his search for “paradise” is to keep watching over him.

Born of Magic: BornOfMagic: [[spoiler:Athis.]]

Black Magic: BlackMagic: The ritual performed to “open the Gate” to the Void, which requires twenty-three human sacrifices to perform. Overlaps with Blood Magic for the ritual used to bring [[spoiler:Athis]] to life.

Blood Magic: BloodMagic: The ritual performed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

Body and Host: BodyAndHost: Lurks can “latch” onto the living like parasites, though they can only assume full control if the host willingly accept their presence.

Body of Bodies: BodyOfBodies: After possessing [[spoiler:Athis, Richard]] creates a demonic armour/body for himself, seemingly cobbled with action figures.

Body Surf: [[spoiler:Richard]] BodySurf: [[spoiler:Richard does this after his “death”. In order: he latches on to Valerie, takes over a Bat Legionnaire, possesses Athis, and finally ends up back inside a broken, toy-sized Bat Legionnaire.

The Bully:
Legionnaire.]]

TheBully:
Joachin’s new school is full of these. Richard and Kaufmann His father also qualify.

Camp Unsafe isn’t Safe Anymore:
qualifies to some extent, as does [[spoiler:Richard]].

CampUnsafeIsntSafeAnymore:
Mill River initially seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. Then [[spoiler:Then the protagonist find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.

Calling the Old Man Out: Joachin manages
hell.]]

CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler:Joachin eventually does this
to pull an epic one on his father near the end.

Candlelit Ritual:
father.]]

CandlelitRitual:
The underground place of worship where Friedrich [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard Leonard]] conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.

Can’t Move While Being Watched: CantMoveWhileBeingWatched: A variation, in that objects in Mill River “reset” to their original state when not actively being observed.

Carry a Big Stick: CarryABigStick: Valerie favours a telescopic baton whenever she needs to beat something/someone up.

Cast Full of Crazy: CastFullOfCrazy: There’s very few people in Mill River who can be said to be completely in their right mind.

Charm Person: CharmPerson: Even before becoming a Lurk, Richard [[spoiler:Richard]] had a preternatural ability to “push” people into certain courses of action. Best demonstrated when he coaxes Joachin into an act of murder.

Dark World: Mill River is this,
action.

DarkWorld: [[spoiler:Mill River,
especially after the red moon appears.

Daylight Horror:
appears.]]

DaylightHorror:
Mill River is initially bright and sunny, and seems completely untouched except for the missing populace.

Dead All Along: Richard. DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:Richard. Though he appears to die early in the story, it is later revealed that he was a Lurk (albeit one manifested in physical form) from the very beginning.

Dead People Conversation: Joachin often has those
beginning.]]

DeadPersonConversation: [[spoiler:Joachin,
with Leonard and Richard.

Demonic Possession: Leonard’s
Richard.]]

DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Leonard's]]
attempt to get Joachin to “accept” him definitely comes across as this.

Disappeared Dad: DisappearedDad: Friedrich Kaufmann.

Dissonant Laughter: DissonantLaughter: Richard tends to chuckle at inappropriate moments, especially [[spoiler:especially when trolling Joachin.

Dream Land: Mill
Joachin.]]

DreamLand: [[spoiler:Mill
River can be seen as this for Athis. Furthermore, it exists in the midst of the “Void”, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious.

The Disembodied: Lurks are technically this, especially Richard after his “death” (and prior to possessing Athis)
Unconscious.]]

TheDisembodied: Lurks.
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The three skip town as planned, clandestinely hopping aboard a mysteriously empty passenger train, which carries them to the equally empty yet pristine town of Mill River. It soon becomes clear that they are trapped in Mill River, and that something is very wrong with the place. Richard states that this must be the paradise they had been seeking all along, but Joachin eventually finds a man, Leonard Evans, who may hold a very different explanation as to what exactly is going on in the town…town…


!! This work contains examples of:

The ‘80s: The story takes place in 1988.

Abandoned Hospital: [[spoiler:Athis (and, subsequently, Richard)]] hangs out in one.

Abusive Parents: Friedrich Kaufmann wasn’t exactly the best father to Joachin. Deidre’s father – if Kaufmann’s article is to be trusted – qualifies even more.

Adult Fear: The prologue, full stop: a father hangs himself and his son in some sort of ritualistic suicide.

Afterlife Express: [[spoiler:A manifestation of Joachin's Conductor powers, boarded by the protagonists early on.]]

A God Am I: [[spoiler:Richard, after taking possession of Athis.]]

Alcoholic Parent: Joachin’s mother.

Apocalyptic Log: Valerie’s and Karen Evans’ journals.

Archnemesis Dad: Joachin has… issues with his father, to say the least.

Badass Longcoat: Richard, who wears an 80’s leather version.

Battle at the Center of the Mind: The final confrontation between [[spoiler:Joachin and Richard]], which takes place in [[spoiler:Richard's]] “inner world”.

Big Sister Instinct: Valerie, toward Richard. One of her main reasons for going along with his search for “paradise” is to keep watching over him.

Born of Magic: [[spoiler:Athis.]]

Black Magic: The ritual performed to “open the Gate” to the Void, which requires twenty-three human sacrifices to perform. Overlaps with Blood Magic for the ritual used to bring [[spoiler:Athis]] to life.

Blood Magic: The ritual performed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]

Body and Host: Lurks can “latch” onto the living like parasites, though they can only assume full control if the host willingly accept their presence.

Body of Bodies: After possessing [[spoiler:Athis, Richard]] creates a demonic armour/body for himself, seemingly cobbled with action figures.

Body Surf: [[spoiler:Richard]] does this after his “death”. In order: he latches on to Valerie, takes over a Bat Legionnaire, possesses Athis, and finally ends up back inside a broken, toy-sized Bat Legionnaire.

The Bully: Joachin’s new school is full of these. Richard and Kaufmann also qualify.

Camp Unsafe isn’t Safe Anymore: Mill River initially seems safe enough, if creepy on account of being too pristine. Then the protagonist find a corpse in one of the houses, and everything goes to hell.

Calling the Old Man Out: Joachin manages to pull an epic one on his father near the end.

Candlelit Ritual: The underground place of worship where Friedrich and Leonard conducted their rituals is lit with candles and torches.

Can’t Move While Being Watched: A variation, in that objects in Mill River “reset” to their original state when not actively being observed.

Carry a Big Stick: Valerie favours a telescopic baton whenever she needs to beat something/someone up.

Cast Full of Crazy: There’s very few people in Mill River who can be said to be completely in their right mind.

Charm Person: Even before becoming a Lurk, Richard had a preternatural ability to “push” people into certain courses of action. Best demonstrated when he coaxes Joachin into an act of murder.

Dark World: Mill River is this, especially after the red moon appears.

Daylight Horror: Mill River is initially bright and sunny, and seems completely untouched except for the missing populace.

Dead All Along: Richard. Though he appears to die early in the story, it is later revealed that he was a Lurk (albeit one manifested in physical form) from the very beginning.

Dead People Conversation: Joachin often has those with Leonard and Richard.

Demonic Possession: Leonard’s attempt to get Joachin to “accept” him definitely comes across as this.

Disappeared Dad: Friedrich Kaufmann.

Dissonant Laughter: Richard tends to chuckle at inappropriate moments, especially when trolling Joachin.

Dream Land: Mill River can be seen as this for Athis. Furthermore, it exists in the midst of the “Void”, a.k.a. the Collective Human Unconscious.

The Disembodied: Lurks are technically this, especially Richard after his “death” (and prior to possessing Athis)
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Father Figure is a 2018 urban fantasy/horror novel by Andrew William Clark.

17-year old Joachin Basner has just started his final year in a new high-school in an unsavoury neighborhood, and is relentlessly bullied. That is, until bully hunter Valerie Rogue and her brother Richard step in and decisively puts an end to that.

Joachin is elated to finally have found friends, and completely smitten with Valerie. He barely hesitates to take Richard up on his offer of leaving his aimless life behind and running away with the siblings to find “paradise”. However, there is one condition to this offer: Joachin must kill Valerie and Richard’s abusive father.

Plagued by doubt but galvanized by his personal issues with his father (the man having abandoned the family years ago) and his feelings for Valerie, Joachin ultimately decides to go ahead with the assassination. The subsequent encounter leaves the man’s fate unclear and Joachin doubting his choice more than ever before. Nevertheless, Joachin tells Richard the deed is done.

The three skip town as planned, clandestinely hopping aboard a mysteriously empty passenger train, which carries them to the equally empty yet pristine town of Mill River. It soon becomes clear that they are trapped in Mill River, and that something is very wrong with the place. Richard states that this must be the paradise they had been seeking all along, but Joachin eventually finds a man, Leonard Evans, who may hold a very different explanation as to what exactly is going on in the town…

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