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* ApocalypticLog: Valerie's and Karen Evans' journals.
* ApocalypticLog: Valerie's and Karen Evans' journals.
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AlliterativeTitle: '''F'''ather '''F'''igure
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* BornOfMagic: [[spoiler:Athis.]]
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* BloodMagic: The ritual performed by [[spoiler:Friedrich and Leonard to bring Athis into the world.]]
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* DarkWorld: [[spoiler:Mill River, especially after the red moon appears.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Friedrich Kauffmann.
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* TheDisembodied: Lurks.
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler: Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]
* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler: Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]
* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]]
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%% * EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler: Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]
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* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.]] ]]
%% * EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:Athis]] and the elemental gods.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler: Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.
* EnemyMine: [[spoiler:Joachin and Leonard eventually join forces against Friedrich's minions.
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* DaylightHorror: Mill River is bright and sunny, and seems completely untouched except for the missing populace.
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* AdultFear: The prologue, full stop: a father hangs himself and his son in some sort of ritualistic suicide.
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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Richard, after taking possession of Athis.]]
* AlcoholicParent: Joachin’s mother.
* AlcoholicParent: Joachin’s mother.
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* FighterMageThief: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief [[spoiler:but ultimately becomes more of a Mage. Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.]]
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* PowerTrio: Joachin, Richard and Valerie. Valerie and Richard fit the Fighter and Mage archetypes, respectively, while Joachin sort of defaults to the Thief [[spoiler:but ultimately becomes more of a Mage. Leonard ends up filling Richard’s spot during the final chapters.]]
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* OnlyChildSyndrome: Joachin.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[Friedrich [[spoiler: Friedrich has foreseen this, and the prophesied apocalypse does indeed begin at the very end of the novel.]]
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* GrewASpine: [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's gone from being relentlessly bullied to single-handedly taking on an EldrichAbomination.]]
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* GrewASpine: [[spoiler:Joachin, and how. By the end of the story, he's gone from being relentlessly bullied to single-handedly taking on an EldrichAbomination.EldritchAbomination.]]
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* KnightTemplarBigSister: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.
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* KnightTemplarBigSister: KnightTemplarBigBrother: Do NOT mess with or disrespect Richard if you don’t want Valerie to beat you to a bloody pulp.
