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Laconic joke created. ^^
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The protagonist doesn't affect the plot very much, despite their constant presence.
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The protagonist doesn't affect the plot very much, despite their constant presence.being constantly present.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[PinballProtagonist HERE]].-]
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The protagonist doesn't affect the plot very much, despite his/her constant presence.
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The protagonist doesn't affect the plot very much, despite his/her their constant presence.
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-->Visit the unabridged version [[PinballProtagonist HERE]].
-->Visit the unabridged version [[PinballProtagonist HERE]].
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More rewording to make it less clunky.
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The protagonist doesn't make any effects in the plot, despite being there.
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The protagonist doesn't make any effects in affect the plot, plot very much, despite being there.his/her constant presence.
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I think the previous laconic entry was oversimplifying and misleading.
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The protagonist doesn't have any effect.
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The protagonist doesn't have make any effect.effects in the plot, despite being there.
