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A teenage Japanese delinquent awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]] and travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a cavalier Frenchman, and a dog to save his mom, fight [[VillainOfTheWeek a lot of people]] and put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A teenage Japanese delinquent awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]] and travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a cavalier Frenchman, and a dog to save his mom, fight [[VillainOfTheWeek a lot of people]] people,]] and put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen who recently awakened his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]] travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]], fighting [[VillainOfTheWeek many enemies on the way.]]
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A teenage Japanese delinquent teen who recently awakened awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]] and travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a cavalier Frenchman, and others a dog to save his mom, fight [[VillainOfTheWeek a lot of people]] and put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]], fighting [[VillainOfTheWeek many enemies on the way.]]vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens who recently awakened his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then ghost]] travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]], fighting [[VillainOfTheWeek many enemies on the way.]]
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and eventually a Frenchman to [[RoaringRampageOfRescue battle many enemies]] and put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and eventually a Frenchman others to [[RoaringRampageOfRescue battle many enemies]] and put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].vampire]], fighting many enemies on the way.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the to Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurebattleTendency [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others eventually a Frenchman to [[RoaringRampageOfRescue battle many enemies]] and put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurebattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, and an Egyptian fortune teller (later joined by a HotBlooded Frenchman and an uncaring street dog) to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world Egypt with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurebattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, and an Egyptian fortune teller (later joined by a HotBlooded Frenchman teller, and an uncaring street dog) others to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurebattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, and an Egyptian fortune teller to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world with his [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurebattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, and an Egyptian fortune teller (later joined by a HotBlooded Frenchman and an uncaring street dog) to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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Laconic is a bit verbose and too meme-like
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world with his cyborg grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a funny-haired Frenchman and [[SixthRanger eventually]] an [[UglyCute adorably ugly]] [[TeamPet dog]] to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world with his cyborg grandfather, [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurebattleTendency grandfather]], a fellow student, and an Egyptian fortune teller, a funny-haired Frenchman and [[SixthRanger eventually]] an [[UglyCute adorably ugly]] [[TeamPet dog]] teller to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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Capitalization was fixed from Laconic.Jojos Bizarre Adventure Stardust Crusaders to Laconic.Jo Jos Bizarre Adventure Stardust Crusaders. Null edit to update page.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]], then travels the world with his cyborg grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a funny-haired Frenchman and [[SixthRanger eventually]] an [[UglyCute adorably ugly dog ugly]] [[TeamPet dog]] to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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-->[-Good grief, the unabridged version can be found [[Manga/JojosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders here.]]-]
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]] ghost]], then travels the world with his cyborg grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a funny-haired Frenchman and [[SixthRanger eventually]] an adorably ugly dog to put a stop to the antics of a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punching ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a funny-haired Frenchman and [[SixthRanger eventually]] an adorably ugly dog to fuck up an stop a [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th-century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch punching ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a funny-haired Frenchman and others [[SixthRanger eventually]] an adorably ugly dog to fuck up an [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 19th Century 19th-century vampire]].
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1800s are the 19th century.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to fuck up an [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 18th Century's old 19th Century vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to fuck up an ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 18th Century's old vampire]]).
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to fuck up an ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood [[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood 18th Century's old vampire]]).vampire]].
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to fuck up a resurrected vampire ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood from the first part]]).
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to fuck up a resurrected vampire an ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood from the first part]]).18th Century's old vampire]]).
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill fuck up a resurrected vampire ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood from the first part]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.part]]).
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill a vampire ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood from the first Part]]) part]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill a vampire ([[Manga/PhantomBlood from the first Part]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill a vampire ([[Manga/PhantomBlood ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood from the first Part]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill a vampire ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood ([[Manga/PhantomBlood from the first arc]]) Part]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill a vampire ([[Manga/PhantomBlood ([[Laconic/JojosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood from the first arc]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to kill a vampire ([[Manga/PhantomBlood from a previous part]]) the first arc]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen awakens his [[FightingSpirit punch ghost]] then travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow student, an Egyptian fortune teller, and others to defeat kill a vampire ([[Manga/PhantomBlood from a previous part]]) and save his mother from a strange illness.
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Shortened laconic. Too meme like. Too long.
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A Japanese delinquent teen travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow Japanese student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a French swordsman, and a Boston terrier, in order to defeat a 120-year old vampire's head grafted onto his great-great-grandfather's body, and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A Japanese delinquent teen travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow Japanese student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a French swordsman, and a Boston terrier, in order others to defeat a 120-year old vampire's head grafted onto his great-great-grandfather's body, vampire and save his mother from a strange illness.
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A delinquent and his companions travel to Egypt to defeat the ArchEnemy of his great-great grandfather before his mother dies.
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A Japanese delinquent teen travels the world with his grandfather, a fellow Japanese student, an Egyptian fortune teller, a French swordsman, and his companions travel to Egypt a Boston terrier, in order to defeat the ArchEnemy of a 120-year old vampire's head grafted onto his great-great grandfather before great-great-grandfather's body, and save his mother dies.from a strange illness.
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