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** Also this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out about Nils' betrayal]]):
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** Also this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out about Nils' betrayal]]):
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* Toby and Leo: A curious combination of HoYay, FoeYay and Bro Yay.
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* Toby and Leo: A curious combination of HoYay, FoeYay and Bro Yay.Leo.
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*** Strangely, in the English version, it is simply "Nils shook Toby's hand".
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*** Strangely, in the English version, [[LostInTranslation it is simply simply]] "Nils shook Toby's hand".hand".
* Vou Tann and Albert Rolden also arguably have this, though are more like HeterosexualLifePartners.
* Vou Tann and Albert Rolden also arguably have this, though are more like HeterosexualLifePartners.
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** The TearJerker moment when Toby is about to [[spoiler: kill]] Leo, they remember the good old days when they [[WeUsedToBeFriends used to be friends]] in their [[GrowingUpSucks childhood]]:
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** The TearJerker moment when Toby thinks that he is about to [[spoiler: kill]] Leo, when they remember the good old days when they [[WeUsedToBeFriends used to be the bestest of friends]] in their [[GrowingUpSucks childhood]]:childhood]]:
--> Flashing before Toby's eyes were all the times in his past that would be wiped out with this one gesture. He saw Leo as a small boy again, as someone he'd shared so much with. He remembered a friendship in which they had even combined their names. They were known as Tobyleo. They were inseparable.
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--> Leo had no strength to move.
--> "Once," said Leo, "I saved your life..."
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--> "Once," Leo went on, "a very long time ago, I was [...] I saved your life. Do you remember? I... I'm not asking anything of you... Just that you remember that..."
--> Flashing before Toby's eyes were all the times in his past that would be wiped out with this one gesture. He saw Leo as a small boy again, as someone he'd shared so much with. He remembered a friendship in which they had even combined their names. They were known as Tobyleo. They were inseparable.
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--> Leo had no strength to move.
--> "Once," said Leo, "I saved your life..."
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--> "Once," Leo went on, "a very long time ago, I was [...] I saved your life. Do you remember? I... I'm not asking anything of you... Just that you remember that..."
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** And then Toby goes on to fall in love with Elisha, later revealed as [[spoiler: Leo's half-sister]], and [[spoiler: marries]] her in the end.
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** And then Toby goes on to fall in love with Elisha, later revealed as [[spoiler: [[LongLostRelative Leo's half-sister]], half-sister]]]], and [[spoiler: marries]] her in the end.end.
** The TearJerker moment when Toby is about to [[spoiler: kill]] Leo, they remember the good old days when they [[WeUsedToBeFriends used to be friends]] in their [[GrowingUpSucks childhood]]:
** The TearJerker moment when Toby is about to [[spoiler: kill]] Leo, they remember the good old days when they [[WeUsedToBeFriends used to be friends]] in their [[GrowingUpSucks childhood]]:
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** The fact that Leo becomes more violent after discovering [[spoiler: Nils's betrayal]], just as he becomes more violent after Elisha, the girl who he is canonically in love with, [[spoiler: escapes the Nest]].
** Also this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out about Nils betrayal]]):
** Also this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out about Nils betrayal]]):
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** The fact that Leo becomes more violent after discovering [[spoiler: Nils's Nils' betrayal]], just as he becomes more violent after Elisha, the girl who he is canonically in love with, [[spoiler: escapes the Nest]].
** Also this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out aboutNils Nils' betrayal]]):
** Also this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out about
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--> Nils hesitated for a moment when he saw Toby's outfit, then burst into tears and fell into his friend's arms. They hugged, looking at each other every once in a while before immediately giving each other another hug. They couldn't stop laughing and shedding silent tears. So many months had gone by, so many years... Each of them knew what he owed to the other.
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** After Nils meets his OldFriend after years:
--> Nils hesitated for a moment when he saw Toby's outfit, then burst into tears and fell into his friend's arms. They hugged, looking at each other every once in a while before immediately giving each other another hug. They couldn't stop laughing and shedding silent tears. So many months had gone by, [[NewOldFlame so manyyears...years]]... Each of them knew what he owed to the other.
--> Nils hesitated for a moment when he saw Toby's outfit, then burst into tears and fell into his friend's arms. They hugged, looking at each other every once in a while before immediately giving each other another hug. They couldn't stop laughing and shedding silent tears. So many months had gone by, [[NewOldFlame so many
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---> Nils hesitated for a moment when he saw Toby's outfit, then burst into tears and fell into his friend's arms. They hugged, looking at each other every once in a while before immediately giving each other another hug. They couldn't stop laughing and shedding silent tears. So many months had gone by, so many years... Each of them knew what he owed to the other.
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*** This:
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*** This:This, right from the beginning of the first book:
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** And then Toby goes on to fall in love with Elisha, later revealed as [[spoiler: Leo's half-sister]], and [[spoiler: marries]] her in the end,
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** And then Toby goes on to fall in love with Elisha, later revealed as [[spoiler: Leo's half-sister]], and [[spoiler: marries]] her in the end,end.
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** The fact that Leo becomes more violent after discovering [[spoiler: Nils's betrayal]], just as he becomes more violent after Elisha, the girl who he is canonically in love with, [[spoiler: escaped the Nest]].
** Also this:
** Also this:
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** The fact that Leo becomes more violent after discovering [[spoiler: Nils's betrayal]], just as he becomes more violent after Elisha, the girl who he is canonically in love with, [[spoiler: escaped escapes the Nest]].
** Alsothis:this, with strange FoeYay subtext (as at this point Leo has already [[spoiler: found out about Nils betrayal]]):
** Also
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* And Toby and Nils, too.
---> Nils hesitated for a moment when he saw Toby's outfit, then burst into tears and fell into his friend's arms. They hugged, looking at each other every once in a while before immediately giving each other another hug. They couldn't stop laughing and shedding silent tears. So many months had gone by, so many years... Each of them knew what he owed to the other.
---> Nils hesitated for a moment when he saw Toby's outfit, then burst into tears and fell into his friend's arms. They hugged, looking at each other every once in a while before immediately giving each other another hug. They couldn't stop laughing and shedding silent tears. So many months had gone by, so many years... Each of them knew what he owed to the other.
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---> He hugged him.
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---> He hugged him.him.
* Though it's unclear which translation is more accurate, in the simplified Chinese version there are two scenes of hand-holding between males, unlike the hand-shaking in the English version.
** The first one is between Leo and Nils, who are seen holding hands at the entrance of the Nest by Nils' father Norz.
** The second one is between Nils and Toby, when Nils asks Toby why he trusts him with all his secrets, to which Toby replies "because I don't have any choice." It is also described that Nils holds Toby's hand tightly.
*** Strangely, in the English version, it is simply "Nils shook Toby's hand".
* Though it's unclear which translation is more accurate, in the simplified Chinese version there are two scenes of hand-holding between males, unlike the hand-shaking in the English version.
** The first one is between Leo and Nils, who are seen holding hands at the entrance of the Nest by Nils' father Norz.
** The second one is between Nils and Toby, when Nils asks Toby why he trusts him with all his secrets, to which Toby replies "because I don't have any choice." It is also described that Nils holds Toby's hand tightly.
*** Strangely, in the English version, it is simply "Nils shook Toby's hand".
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---> ''One day, when Toby and his parents were due to move house, down to the low branches, Tobyleo hid in [[ItMakesSenseInContext a dry bud]] because they didn't want to be split up. It was two days and three nights before they were found.''
* Leo and Nils have this too, even though Nils is a [[spoiler: DoubleAgent]].
* Leo and Nils have this too, even though Nils is a [[spoiler: DoubleAgent]].
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---> ''One One day, when Toby and his parents were due to move house, down to the low branches, Tobyleo hid in [[ItMakesSenseInContext a dry bud]] because they didn't want to be split up. It was two days and three nights before they were found.''
found.
** And then Toby goes on to fall in love with Elisha, later revealed as [[spoiler: Leo's half-sister]], and [[spoiler: marries]] her in the end,
* Leo and Nils have this too, even though Nils is technically a [[spoiler:DoubleAgent]].spy]].
** And then Toby goes on to fall in love with Elisha, later revealed as [[spoiler: Leo's half-sister]], and [[spoiler: marries]] her in the end,
* Leo and Nils have this too, even though Nils is technically a [[spoiler:
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---> ''"I was reflecting on the fact that you're the first person I've trusted for a long time." "Thank you, Leo. I'm your friend." Leo Blue couldn't suppress a silent chuckle. Nils tried smiling as well. Eventually, Leo went right up to Nils, stared hard at him and opened his arms. "My friend." He hugged him.''
---> ''"I was reflecting on the fact that you're the first person I've trusted for a long time." "Thank you, Leo. I'm your friend." Leo Blue couldn't suppress a silent chuckle. Nils tried smiling as well. Eventually, Leo went right up to Nils, stared hard at him and opened his arms. "My friend." He hugged him.''
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** This:
Also this:
--->''"I "I was reflecting on the fact that you're the first person I've trusted for a long time." "
---> "Thank you, Leo. I'm your friend." "
---> Leo Blue couldn't suppress a silent chuckle. Nils tried smiling as well.
---> Eventually, Leo went right up to Nils, stared hard at him and opened hisarms. arms.
---> "My friend." "
---> He hugged him.''
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---> "Thank you, Leo. I'm your friend.
---> Leo Blue couldn't suppress a silent chuckle. Nils tried smiling as well.
---> Eventually, Leo went right up to Nils, stared hard at him and opened his
---> "My friend.
---> He hugged him.
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* Toby and Leo: A curious combination of HoYay, FoeYay and Bro Yay.
** They are described as so inseparable in their childhood that people used to call them Tobyleo, which is the closest you could get for a canon ship name.
*** This:
---> ''One day, when Toby and his parents were due to move house, down to the low branches, Tobyleo hid in [[ItMakesSenseInContext a dry bud]] because they didn't want to be split up. It was two days and three nights before they were found.''
* Leo and Nils have this too, even though Nils is a [[spoiler: DoubleAgent]].
** The fact that Leo becomes more violent after discovering [[spoiler: Nils's betrayal]], just as he becomes more violent after Elisha, the girl who he is canonically in love with, [[spoiler: escaped the Nest]].
** This:
---> ''"I was reflecting on the fact that you're the first person I've trusted for a long time." "Thank you, Leo. I'm your friend." Leo Blue couldn't suppress a silent chuckle. Nils tried smiling as well. Eventually, Leo went right up to Nils, stared hard at him and opened his arms. "My friend." He hugged him.''
** They are described as so inseparable in their childhood that people used to call them Tobyleo, which is the closest you could get for a canon ship name.
*** This:
---> ''One day, when Toby and his parents were due to move house, down to the low branches, Tobyleo hid in [[ItMakesSenseInContext a dry bud]] because they didn't want to be split up. It was two days and three nights before they were found.''
* Leo and Nils have this too, even though Nils is a [[spoiler: DoubleAgent]].
** The fact that Leo becomes more violent after discovering [[spoiler: Nils's betrayal]], just as he becomes more violent after Elisha, the girl who he is canonically in love with, [[spoiler: escaped the Nest]].
** This:
---> ''"I was reflecting on the fact that you're the first person I've trusted for a long time." "Thank you, Leo. I'm your friend." Leo Blue couldn't suppress a silent chuckle. Nils tried smiling as well. Eventually, Leo went right up to Nils, stared hard at him and opened his arms. "My friend." He hugged him.''
