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--> "Yes, we're co-habiting, and it's… We're not on the same schedule and it's a bit awkward, but I-" I nod. "-[[pink:prefer it]]. [[pink:Prefer her being there and… Being there myself]]."\\
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--> "Yes, we're co-habiting, and it's… We're not on the same schedule and it's a bit awkward, but I-" I nod. "-[[pink:prefer it]]. [[pink:Prefer her being there and… Being and]]… [[pink:Being there myself]]."\\
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* Paul talks to Hera about his relationship with Jade.
--> "Yes, we're co-habiting, and it's… We're not on the same schedule and it's a bit awkward, but I-" I nod. "-[[pink:prefer it]]. [[pink:Prefer her being there and… Being there myself]]."\\
"And how does she feel about it?"\\
"A bit like she's intruding in her own house sometimes. And other times [[pink:she just sort of relaxes]]-. I guess it's like a cat, where you know it's decided that it likes you when it jumps on your lap and goes to sleep. Jade's the sleep-with-one-eye-open type, and sometimes she'll do this whole… Alert-and-check-for-threats thing, but she instinctively [[pink:doesn't include me]], which is-. I know how big a deal that is for her."
--> "Yes, we're co-habiting, and it's… We're not on the same schedule and it's a bit awkward, but I-" I nod. "-[[pink:prefer it]]. [[pink:Prefer her being there and… Being there myself]]."\\
"And how does she feel about it?"\\
"A bit like she's intruding in her own house sometimes. And other times [[pink:she just sort of relaxes]]-. I guess it's like a cat, where you know it's decided that it likes you when it jumps on your lap and goes to sleep. Jade's the sleep-with-one-eye-open type, and sometimes she'll do this whole… Alert-and-check-for-threats thing, but she instinctively [[pink:doesn't include me]], which is-. I know how big a deal that is for her."
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** When we see her later on in ''Coup Data'', it's revealed that Paul did eventually get something that could help her manage her condition.
---> Akhlys walks towards me, looking pretty miserable but not as miserable as she used to. Her arms and legs clatter from the bracelets, armlets and other rune-inscribed charms I've had made for her; spells for promoting health and wellbeing and others that are designed to absorb sickness. The result is no better than a draw, but it's where we are now and Sephtian said that making them taught him a ''lot''.
---> Akhlys walks towards me, looking pretty miserable but not as miserable as she used to. Her arms and legs clatter from the bracelets, armlets and other rune-inscribed charms I've had made for her; spells for promoting health and wellbeing and others that are designed to absorb sickness. The result is no better than a draw, but it's where we are now and Sephtian said that making them taught him a ''lot''.
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* Future Orange Lantern successfully gets Tai Lung to repent for his actions and reconcile with Shifu.
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* Saul shows that he isn't like most of the other "heroes" of Vought by healing numerous terminally sick children.
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* Saul Talbot shows that he isn't like most of the other "heroes" of Vought by healing numerous terminally sick children.
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* Saul shows that he isn't like most of the other "heroes" of Vought by healing numerous terminally sick children.
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* Paul helps Alan try to process Crimson Avenger committing suicide right in front of him.
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* Paul helps Alan try to process Crimson Avenger II committing suicide right in front of him.him.
--> '''Paul:''' If you want to talk about anything, I'm just a ring call away, right?\\
'''Alan:''' Yeah. ''[pats Paul on the shoulder]'' I know
--> '''Paul:''' If you want to talk about anything, I'm just a ring call away, right?\\
'''Alan:''' Yeah. ''[pats Paul on the shoulder]'' I know
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* Paul helps Alan try to process Crimson Avenger committing suicide right in front of him.
** When Paul calls himself psycho for not finding that kind of thing disturbing, Alan says that he's not a psycho, just resilient.
** When Paul calls himself psycho for not finding that kind of thing disturbing, Alan says that he's not a psycho, just resilient.
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* Wonder Woman's early Christmas present for Paul is paperwork that officially makes him a Themysciran citizen.
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* After Awakening Misa, the Renegade sings a song in a way to show that he's there for both her and his new daughter Lynne.
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* The Renegade notes that going to Guy Gardner's anger management classes is even more important now that he has Lynne.
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* Paul finds out that his work on reforming criminals has paid off, with the Terror Twins, Abra Kadabra, and Captain Cold all being released from Belle Reve.
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* Calliope helps Paul out against the Queen of Fables by briefly waking him up in the middle of the play.
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* Jade goes on leave for a month and asks Paul if he can do the same so that they can spend some time together without having to worry about the war with the Reach.
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* Despite his animosity towards Superman, OL takes the time to point out survivors of his people who inhabited a colony before the planet exploded (the Daxamites). They're not likely to be friendly, being xenophobes, but the thought is still nice. As well as unintentionally pointing out that there was another survivor on the planet aside from him, Karsta Wor-Ul. Hope colors Superman's words upon hearing it.
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* Despite his past animosity towards Superman, OL takes the time to point out survivors of his people who inhabited a colony before the planet exploded (the Daxamites). They're not likely to be friendly, being xenophobes, but the thought is still nice. As well as unintentionally pointing out that there was another survivor on the planet aside from him, Karsta Wor-Ul. Hope colors Superman's words upon hearing it.
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* Mr. Miracle and Big Barda of Earth 50 track down the Renegade and attack him as soon as they get him away from civilians. Why? Not for blowing up the president, but because he left Ace in another dimension after effectively making her his daughter. After realizing how significant his actions were, he immediately adopts her. She spends her first night in Challenger Mountain sleeping on top of him, and the morning after they go to fly a kite.
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* Mr. Mister Miracle and Big Barda of Earth 50 track down the Renegade and attack him as soon as they get him away from civilians. Why? Not for blowing up the president, but because he left Ace in another dimension with them after effectively making her his daughter. daughter by sharing his soul with her. After realizing how significant his actions were, this bond is, he immediately adopts her. She spends her first night in Challenger Mountain sleeping on top of him, and the morning after they go to fly a kite.
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* Fire looks out for her best friend Ice and attempts to get in Guy's face when she mistakenly believes that Guy is creep. Thankfully, Paul is there to defuse the situation before anything happens.
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* Though she's a bit too aggressive about it, Fire looks out for her best friend Ice and attempts to get in Guy's face when she mistakenly believes that Guy is creep. Thankfully, Paul is there to defuse the situation before anything happens.
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* The Crocks and Nguyen's have a great family reunion. Lawrence Sr. and Missus Nguyen in particular get along quite well by reminiscing over fighting in Vietnam, even though the two were on opposite sides at the time.
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* The Crocks and Nguyen's Nguyens have a great family reunion. Lawrence Sr. and Missus Nguyen in particular get along quite well by reminiscing over fighting in Vietnam, even though the two were on opposite sides at the time.
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* The Crocks and Nguyen's have a great family reunion. Lawrence Sr. and Missus Nguyen in particular get along quite well by reminiscing over fighting in Vietnam, even though the two were on opposite sides at the time
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* The Crocks and Nguyen's have a great family reunion. Lawrence Sr. and Missus Nguyen in particular get along quite well by reminiscing over fighting in Vietnam, even though the two were on opposite sides at the time time.
* Paul shows that he's still working on supervillain rehabilitation by reaching out to Captain Cold.
* Paul shows that he's still working on supervillain rehabilitation by reaching out to Captain Cold.
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*** On the way, Jade realizes that Paul's been helping out her fellow inmates by fixing whatever's wrong in their lives in whatever way he can (curing one's son of ADHD, getting the police to investigate another's husband's loan shark, etc.).
----> '''Jade:''' Did you fix ''everyone's'' personal problems?\\
'''Paul:''' No, not everyone. Just anything I could fix through legal mechanisms or by my own labours. Didn't realise there was that much lead paint left in Rhode Island.
----> '''Jade:''' Did you fix ''everyone's'' personal problems?\\
'''Paul:''' No, not everyone. Just anything I could fix through legal mechanisms or by my own labours. Didn't realise there was that much lead paint left in Rhode Island.
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* Paul is waiting outside the prison as Jade is being released. She feels hopeful upon learning from Paul that her mother and sister have a party to celebrate her being released, which is why they aren't there with him.
** After which he brings her to Vietnam to heal the many living victims of Agent Orange.
** After which he brings her to Vietnam to heal the many living victims of Agent Orange.
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* Paul is waiting outside the prison as Jade is being released. She feels hopeful upon learning from Paul that her mother and sister have set up a party to celebrate her being released, which is why they aren't there with him.
** After which he brings her to Vietnam to heal the many living victims of AgentOrange.Orange in order to "white mail" her.
** After which he brings her to Vietnam to heal the many living victims of Agent
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** After which he brings her to Vietnam to heal the many living victims of Agent Orange.
** Then she gets to the party, along with her maternal grandmother, whom Paul picked up on the way. She has a pleasant time interacting with her father's side of the family.
** After which he brings her to Vietnam to heal the many living victims of Agent Orange.
** Then she gets to the party, along with her maternal grandmother, whom Paul picked up on the way. She has a pleasant time interacting with her father's side of the family.
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* Holly seems to genuinely fall for Paul basically because he's one of the few men in her life that hasn't tried to abuse her or take advantage of her. Tellingly, her words are colored by Love when greeting him at one point, the same as for her girlfriend Karen.
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* Holly seems to genuinely fall for Paul basically because he's one of the few men in her life that hasn't tried to abuse her or take advantage of her. Tellingly, her words are colored by Love when greeting him at one point, the same as for her girlfriend Karen.Karon.
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* Overgirl is finally able to reunite with her father figure Overman.
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* Paul moves in with Jade because he misses her.
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* After the affects of the black kryptonite have worn off on Kara, Paul reaches out to her lets her know that what happened wasn't her fault.
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* For Adom's wedding, Paul brought back friends of Adom's first life thousands of years ago: Lord Rama Khan, Prince Khufu, and Chay-ara, all of whom Paul took the time to find and, in the latter two cases, remind of their former lives.
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* For Adom's wedding, Paul brought back friends of from Adom's first life thousands of years ago: Lord Rama Khan, Prince Khufu, and Chay-ara, all of whom Paul took the time to find and, in the latter two cases, remind of their former lives.
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* Holly seems to genuinely fall for Paul basically because he's one of the few men in her life that hasn't tried to abuse her or take advantage of her. Tellingly, her words are colored by Love when greeting him at one point, the same as for her girlfriend Karen.
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* Holly seems to genuinely fall for Paul basically because he's one of the few men in her life that hasn't tried to abuse her or take advantage of her. Tellingly, her words are colored by Love when greeting him at one point, the same as for her girlfriend Karen.
