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* Even though Future!Renegade has the opportunity to either let Diana kill All-American Boy or do it himself, he stops her so that he can try his initial plan of getting All-American Boy's parents having them talk him down.
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* Even though Future!Renegade has the opportunity to either let Diana kill All-American Boy or do it himself, he stops her so that he can try his initial plan of getting All-American Boy's parents having them so that they could talk him down.down instead.
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* Future Renegade is able to save a version of Subjekt-17 and give him a goal beyond simply killing humans.
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* Future Renegade Future!Renegade is able to save a version of Subjekt-17 and give him a goal beyond simply killing humans.humans.
* Even though Future!Renegade has the opportunity to either let Diana kill All-American Boy or do it himself, he stops her so that he can try his initial plan of getting All-American Boy's parents having them talk him down.
* Even though Future!Renegade has the opportunity to either let Diana kill All-American Boy or do it himself, he stops her so that he can try his initial plan of getting All-American Boy's parents having them talk him down.
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* Future Renegade is able to save a version Subjekt-17 and give him a goal beyond simply killing humans.
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* Future Renegade is able to save a version of Subjekt-17 and give him a goal beyond simply killing humans.
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* Future Renegade is able to save a version Subjekt-17 and give him a goal beyond simply killing humans.
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* It's revealed that in addition to Power Ring and Zorina being HappilyMarried with three children, several other members of the Syndicate have also settled down and started families.
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* During the reconstruction efforts after the Earth is cleansed of the Anti-Life, Paul takes some time to help out a random harpy and a gorgon with their personal problems.
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* The Renegade gives one of his sons emotional support when the boy visit's his mother's resting place and offers to help him find his deceased siblings so that they can be buried alongside their mother.
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* While waiting for more info so they know what to do, Paul takes the time to talk to Tuppence about how she's handling the Anti-Life.
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* While searching for Indigo Lanterns, Paul helps the Forever People recover from the trauma that they went through because of Apokolips.
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* While on enforced rest so that he can help combat the influence Anti-Life later, Bruce thinks about how much better his life is from when he started. First after he took Dick in, and again after he married Talia.
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* Tommy Beresford helps a civilian fight off the effects of the Anti-Life Equation as one of the many people helping the heroes against the forces of Apokolips.
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* Paul hugs Hinon after she tells him that she won't have anything left to live for after the Reach are destroyed.
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* The Renegade successfully gathers lanterns for each color of the Emotional Spectrum together to cleanse King Sombra of the evil that corrupts him so that Celestia can get the love of her life back.
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** After successfully drawing out the rage of one of the people driven mad, Paul and Orion proceed to do the same with everyone else who was affected, giving them the change to reunite with their families, who believed they were potentially gone forever.
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* Orion demonstrates his true nature when he asks Paul to transfer the rage that is driving a few innocent people mad into himself.
--> '''Orion:''' (''after being told of the possibility of taking others' rage into himself'') And you fear the result?\\
'''Paul:''' Yes.\\
'''Orion:''' Will it be stronger than the ring will be?\\
'''Paul:''' You'll have less control, but… No. At peak draw, the ring will be stronger.\\
'''Orion:''' Then do not think me too weak to withstand it, or too delinquent to avoid doing what I know is right. Take me to them. (''in Godspeech'') Because despite my father, I am a hero.
--> '''Orion:''' (''after being told of the possibility of taking others' rage into himself'') And you fear the result?\\
'''Paul:''' Yes.\\
'''Orion:''' Will it be stronger than the ring will be?\\
'''Paul:''' You'll have less control, but… No. At peak draw, the ring will be stronger.\\
'''Orion:''' Then do not think me too weak to withstand it, or too delinquent to avoid doing what I know is right. Take me to them. (''in Godspeech'') Because despite my father, I am a hero.
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* Despite initially feeling awkward over the age gap, Power Ring ends up being HappilyMarried to Zorina, and the two even lovingly raise their daughter Zita together.
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* While trapped in the fantasy world created by Mother of Mercy, we're shown a future OL in a polyamorous relationship with Kon, M'gann and Cheshire. While he himself acknowledges that said relationship is unlikely bordering on impossible after breaking free, it's still endearing to see his interaction with them as a lover instead of just friends, however brief it might be.
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* While trapped in the fantasy world created by Mother of Mercy, we're shown a future OL in a polyamorous relationship with Kon, M'gann and Cheshire.Jade. While he himself acknowledges that said relationship is unlikely bordering on impossible after breaking free, it's still endearing to see his interaction with them as a lover instead of just friends, however brief it might be.
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* While undercover with the Citizenry, Jade helps out one of the women who didn't want to join and is not coping with her new life very well.
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* While in the middle of an errand, X-Man!Paul is able to discover that Cyclops' long lost brother Alex Summers is still alive and gives Alex a card with Xavier's number so that the brothers can reunite.
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** Afterwards, he goes to the effort of finding the members of Rogue's family who would most likely want to attend the wedding.
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* X-Man!Paul is dating Rogue and, after some prodding from her on what he wants from their relationship, admits to her that he is already planning on proposing to her.
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* Slipstream reflects on the fact that she can't imagine life without Pull and that she wants to find new ways to get closer to him.
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* We get to see Red Lantern Paul and Blackfire have a moment to relax and enjoy simply being together in married bliss.
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* After John Quinn is defeated, Paul takes the time to wait for John Constantine to wake up after being reassembled from the different beings he was split into to welcome him back.
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* After the defeat of Johnny Reb, Paul and Alan have a pleasant conversation on what they want to do with their lives for now, since they'll both be able to live for a very long time.
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* After Diana returns from Tatarus, she, Hippolyta, Conner, and Mitchell have a family hug.
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* After Awakening Misa, the Renegade sings a song in a way to show that he's there for both her and his new daughter Lynne.
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* After Awakening Misa, the Renegade sings a song in as a way to show that he's there for both her and his new daughter Lynne.
