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* [[AlphaBitch Beatrix]] of all people gets one after Agatha's RousingSpeech, when she leads the charge of uglified Evergirls. Doubles as an Awesome Moment.
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* [[AlphaBitch Beatrix]] of all people gets one after Agatha's RousingSpeech, when she leads the charge of uglified Evergirls. Turns out the AlphaBitch of the Evers was put in Good for a reason. Doubles as an Awesome Moment.
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--> '''Beatrix:''' "Another thing about Good. We need each other."
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--> She crawled into empty graves to eat enough worms for the two of you, just so you wouldn't fail. Said you're her best friend.
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--> '''Tedros:''' She crawled into empty graves to eat enough worms for the two of you, just so you wouldn't fail. Said you're her best friend.
* [[AlphaBitch Beatrix]] of all people gets one after Agatha's RousingSpeech, when she leads the charge of uglified Evergirls. Doubles as an Awesome Moment.
--> '''Beatrix:''' "Another thing about Good. We need each other."
* [[AlphaBitch Beatrix]] of all people gets one after Agatha's RousingSpeech, when she leads the charge of uglified Evergirls. Doubles as an Awesome Moment.
--> '''Beatrix:''' "Another thing about Good. We need each other."
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* During the kidnapping, Sophie has a split-second of panic when she sees Agatha about to run through the flames after her.
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* During the kidnapping, The moments when Sophie has a shows she really does have some good in her heart.
** Her trampling Tedros to help Agatha during the fight in chapter 13. Followed by her trying to take the blame when the fairies drag Agatha off.
** Her split-second of panic during her kidnapping when she sees Agatha about to run through the flames after her.
** Her first response after wounding Hester's demon in chapter 9 is to go to help her, despite Hester deliberately setting it on her.
** Her trampling Tedros to help Agatha during the fight in chapter 13. Followed by her trying to take the blame when the fairies drag Agatha off.
** Her split-second of panic during her kidnapping when she sees Agatha about to run through the flames after her.
** Her first response after wounding Hester's demon in chapter 9 is to go to help her, despite Hester deliberately setting it on her.
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* Teadros mentioning how Dot covered for Sophie skipping class. He has his faults but he's clearly not pleased to hear Sophie call her a liar.
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* Teadros mentioning how Dot covered for Sophie skipping class. He has his faults but he's clearly not pleased to hear Sophie call slander her a liar.behind her back.
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* Teadros mentioning how Dot covered for Sophie skipping class. He has his faults but he's clearly not pleased to hear Sophie call her a liar.
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She touched Sophie's cheek. ""'Both in good hands.'"
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She touched Sophie's cheek. ""'Both "'Both in good hands.'"
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* Sophie reconciling with Stefan, the two embracing in tears. Agatha is invited to join the hug as well, Stefan saying Sophie has always made Agatha feel like another daughter to him, and the three stand together in peace.
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* Sophie reconciling with Stefan, the two embracing in tears. Sophie invites Agatha is invited to join the hug hug, as well, Stefan saying Sophie has always made Agatha feel like another daughter to him, and the three stand together in peace.well.
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"Though you've always made Agatha feel like one of mine too," he said, smiling tenderly at her.\\
Sophie wiped her cheek. "Come on, Aggie."\\
Agatha hugged Stefan too, nestling against him, as her tears stained his shirt. She wanted to tell him. She wanted to tell him everything. But as she caught Sophie's eyes, her friend clearly having the same thoughts, neither of them said a word. For in a single moment, they'd found everything they needed. They didn't need any more. There, in the space between worlds, two girls held their father, their bodies still and serene, as if three pieces had been made whole at last.
Sophie wiped her cheek. "Come on, Aggie."\\
Agatha hugged Stefan too, nestling against him, as her tears stained his shirt. She wanted to tell him. She wanted to tell him everything. But as she caught Sophie's eyes, her friend clearly having the same thoughts, neither of them said a word. For in a single moment, they'd found everything they needed. They didn't need any more. There, in the space between worlds, two girls held their father, their bodies still and serene, as if three pieces had been made whole at last.
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"Though you've always made Agatha feel like one of mine too," he said, smiling tenderly at her.\\
Sophie wiped her cheek. "Come on, Aggie."\\
Agatha hugged Stefan too, nestling against him, as her tears stained his shirt. She wanted to tell him. She wanted to tell him everything. But as she caught Sophie's eyes, her friend clearly having the same thoughts, neither of them said a word. For in a single moment, they'd found everything they needed. They didn't need any more. There, in the space between worlds, two girls held their father, their bodies still and serene, as if three pieces had been made whole at last.
Sophie wiped her cheek. "Come on, Aggie."\\
Agatha hugged Stefan too, nestling against him, as her tears stained his shirt. She wanted to tell him. She wanted to tell him everything. But as she caught Sophie's eyes, her friend clearly having the same thoughts, neither of them said a word. For in a single moment, they'd found everything they needed. They didn't need any more. There, in the space between worlds, two girls held their father, their bodies still and serene, as if three pieces had been made whole at last.
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-->Sophie choked.\\
"No....How--how can--"\\
She spun to Professor Dovey, but the Good Dean was smiling at the box through tears.\\
"No....How--how can--"\\
She spun to Professor Dovey, but the Good Dean was smiling at the box through tears.\\
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"No....How--how can--"\\
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Even Tedros looked misty-eyes now. "It's only a day's ride to Camelot, Sophie. Surely you'll come visit?"\\
"As much as you two will have me," Sophie said.\\
"As much as you two will have me," Sophie said.\\
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-->"Hmm…Maybe ''your'' Prince Charming is just around the corner," said a voice.\\
Sophie looked up at Hort next to her.\\
She took in his playful face, well-built body, and adoring grin…\\
"I'm afraid I've already found my Ever After, Hort," said Sophie.\\
Sophie looked up at Hort next to her.\\
She took in his playful face, well-built body, and adoring grin…\\
"I'm afraid I've already found my Ever After, Hort," said Sophie.\\
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Sophie looked up at Hort next to her.\\
She took in his playful face, well-built body, and adoring grin…\\
"I'm
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-->"I love you more than anything in the world," Stefan whispered. "You're my child, Sophie."\\
Stefan saw Agatha crying now, watching him with Sophie.\\
"Though you've always made Agatha feel like one of mine too," he said, smiling tenderly at her.\\
Sophie wiped her cheek. "Come on, Aggie."\\
Agatha hugged Stefan too, nestling against him, as her tears stained his shirt. She wanted to tell him. She wanted to tell him everything. But as she caught Sophie's eyes, her friend clearly having the same thoughts, neither of them said a word. For in a single moment, they'd found everything they needed. They didn't need any more. There, in the space between worlds, two girls held their father, their bodies still and serene, as if three pieces had been made whole at last.
-->"I love you more than anything in the world," Stefan whispered. "You're my child, Sophie."\\
Stefan saw Agatha crying now, watching him with Sophie.\\
"Though you've always made Agatha feel like one of mine too," he said, smiling tenderly at her.\\
Sophie wiped her cheek. "Come on, Aggie."\\
Agatha hugged Stefan too, nestling against him, as her tears stained his shirt. She wanted to tell him. She wanted to tell him everything. But as she caught Sophie's eyes, her friend clearly having the same thoughts, neither of them said a word. For in a single moment, they'd found everything they needed. They didn't need any more. There, in the space between worlds, two girls held their father, their bodies still and serene, as if three pieces had been made whole at last.
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* Lady Lesso leaves Sophie her gown, letting her take over as the new Dean of Evil.
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"No....How--how can--"\\
She spun to Professor Dovey, but the Good Dean was smiling at the box through tears.\\
"She told us, didn't she?" Clarissa whispered hopefully. "The 'Old and the New together…'"\\
She touched Sophie's cheek. ""'Both in good hands.'"
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-->Sophie had no makeup on, sleepless bags under her eyes, and her hair was a bit of a mess, but even so, as they faced each other in silence, Agatha had never seen her friend look so calm, so assured, so…beautiful.
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-->Agatha shook her head, tears rising. "Oh, Sophie. You'll be a wonderful Dean," she gasped, throwing arms around her. "I'll…I'll just miss you."\\
"You'll be an even better queen, Aggie," Sophie promised. "You'll change their lives. Like you changed mine."\\
Even Tedros looked misty-eyes now. "It's only a day's ride to Camelot, Sophie. Surely you'll come visit?"\\
"As much as you two will have me," Sophie said.\\
Agatha hugged her tighter, her tear-stained cheek against her friend's. "I love you, Sophie. I love you more than you can know."\\
"I do know, Aggie," Sophie whispered. "Because I love you just the same."
-->Sophie choked.\\
"No....How--how can--"\\
She spun to Professor Dovey, but the Good Dean was smiling at the box through tears.\\
"She told us, didn't she?" Clarissa whispered hopefully. "The 'Old and the New together…'"\\
She touched Sophie's cheek. ""'Both in good hands.'"
* When Agatha sees Sophie wearing the gown and how at peace she looks.
-->Sophie had no makeup on, sleepless bags under her eyes, and her hair was a bit of a mess, but even so, as they faced each other in silence, Agatha had never seen her friend look so calm, so assured, so…beautiful.
* Agatha and Sophie's goodbye.
-->Agatha shook her head, tears rising. "Oh, Sophie. You'll be a wonderful Dean," she gasped, throwing arms around her. "I'll…I'll just miss you."\\
"You'll be an even better queen, Aggie," Sophie promised. "You'll change their lives. Like you changed mine."\\
Even Tedros looked misty-eyes now. "It's only a day's ride to Camelot, Sophie. Surely you'll come visit?"\\
"As much as you two will have me," Sophie said.\\
Agatha hugged her tighter, her tear-stained cheek against her friend's. "I love you, Sophie. I love you more than you can know."\\
"I do know, Aggie," Sophie whispered. "Because I love you just the same."
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-->"Hmm…Maybe ''your'' Prince Charming is just around the corner," said a voice.\\
Sophie looked up at Hort next to her.\\
She took in his playful face, well-built body, and adoring grin…\\
"I'm afraid I've already found my Ever After, Hort," said Sophie.\\
"What? With ''who''?" Hort asked, aghast--\\
"On my own," she said, her voice sure and clear. "I'm happy on my own."\\
And for the first time, she knew it was true.\\
…\\
"You aren't jealous that Agatha gets a boy and a crown and a kingdom and everything else?" Hort pressed in disbelief. "You aren't jealous that Agatha's a ''queen''?"\\
He saw her stop at the gates, faced away as students streamed past.\\
"A tiny bit, of course," she said softly. "But then I remember…"\\
Sophie looked back, smiling bright as a diamond.\\
"I'm ''me''."
Sophie looked up at Hort next to her.\\
She took in his playful face, well-built body, and adoring grin…\\
"I'm afraid I've already found my Ever After, Hort," said Sophie.\\
"What? With ''who''?" Hort asked, aghast--\\
"On my own," she said, her voice sure and clear. "I'm happy on my own."\\
And for the first time, she knew it was true.\\
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"You aren't jealous that Agatha gets a boy and a crown and a kingdom and everything else?" Hort pressed in disbelief. "You aren't jealous that Agatha's a ''queen''?"\\
He saw her stop at the gates, faced away as students streamed past.\\
"A tiny bit, of course," she said softly. "But then I remember…"\\
Sophie looked back, smiling bright as a diamond.\\
"I'm ''me''."
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** After all the lying, cheating, beauty rituals, and chasing after cute boys, Sophie has finally managed to truly love someone: [[spoiler:herself, flaws and all.]]
** After all the lying, cheating, beauty rituals, and chasing after cute boys, Sophie has finally managed to truly love someone: [[spoiler:herself, flaws and all.]]
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* The ending to ''The Last Ever After'': [[spoiler: The schoolmaster is finally dead, the Schools has been restored to order, along with the balance between Good and Evil. Sophie is now the new Dean of Evil. Agatha departs to Camelot with Tedros, but she and Sophie agree to visit one another a lot since they're a day's journey away from one another. Tedros also lifts the death warrant on his mother and Lancelot, allowing them to return to the kingdom in order to live happily together.]]
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** After all the lying, cheating, beauty rituals, and chasing after cute boys, Sophie has finally managed to truly love someone:[[spoiler:herself, herself, flaws and all.]]
** After all the lying, cheating, beauty rituals, and chasing after cute boys, Sophie has finally managed to truly love someone:
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!!''The Last Ever After''
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* The first chapter shows why Sophie and Agatha are friends:
-->Sophie didn’t say anything for a long time.\\
“Maybe I became your friend to impress the School Master,” she confessed finally. “But there’s more to it now.”\\
“Because I found you out,” Agatha grumbled.\\
“Because I like you.”\\
Agatha turned to her.\\
“No one understands me here,” Sophie said, looking at her hands. “But you do. You see who I am. That’s why I kept coming back. You’re not my good deed anymore, Agatha.”\\
Sophie gazed up at her. “You’re my friend.”\\
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Agatha said nothing for a while. Then she touched Sophie’s hand. “Why is it you want to leave here so badly? That you’d believe in stories you know aren’t true?”\\
Sophie met Agatha’s big, sincere eyes. For the first time, she let in the tides of doubt.\\
“Because I can’t live here,” Sophie said, voice catching. “I can’t live an ordinary life.”\\
“Funny,” said Agatha. “That’s why I like you.”\\
Sophie smiled. “Because you can’t either?”\\
“Because you make me feel ordinary,” Agatha said. “And that’s the only thing I’ve ever wanted.”
-->Sophie didn’t say anything for a long time.\\
“Maybe I became your friend to impress the School Master,” she confessed finally. “But there’s more to it now.”\\
“Because I found you out,” Agatha grumbled.\\
“Because I like you.”\\
Agatha turned to her.\\
“No one understands me here,” Sophie said, looking at her hands. “But you do. You see who I am. That’s why I kept coming back. You’re not my good deed anymore, Agatha.”\\
Sophie gazed up at her. “You’re my friend.”\\
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Agatha said nothing for a while. Then she touched Sophie’s hand. “Why is it you want to leave here so badly? That you’d believe in stories you know aren’t true?”\\
Sophie met Agatha’s big, sincere eyes. For the first time, she let in the tides of doubt.\\
“Because I can’t live here,” Sophie said, voice catching. “I can’t live an ordinary life.”\\
“Funny,” said Agatha. “That’s why I like you.”\\
Sophie smiled. “Because you can’t either?”\\
“Because you make me feel ordinary,” Agatha said. “And that’s the only thing I’ve ever wanted.”
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* The ending to ''The Last Ever After'': [[spoiler: The schoolmaster is finally dead, the School Schools has been restored to order, along with the balance between Good and Evil. Sophie is now the new Dean of Evil and is together with Hort, who's grown into a handsome young man.Evil. Agatha departs to Camelot with Tedros, but she and Sophie agree to visit one another a lot since they're a day's journey away from one another. Tedros also lifts the death warrant on his mother and Lancelot, allowing them to return to the kingdom in order to live happily together.]]
** After all the lying, cheating, beauty rituals, and chasing after cute boys, Sophie has finally managed to truly love someone: [[spoiler:herself, flaws and all.]]
** After all the lying, cheating, beauty rituals, and chasing after cute boys, Sophie has finally managed to truly love someone: [[spoiler:herself, flaws and all.]]
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* After having a nasty fight with Sophie because of the Trial by Tale debacle, Agatha is left feeling completely alone. Professor Dovey asks Agatha what would make her happy, and she answers, "To be beautiful." So, the FairyGodmother drags the girl to the Groom Room for an extreme makeover, and Agatha, convinced that her wish has been fulfilled, feels like a new person. The girl gleefully skips around the School for Good, leaving a trail of turned heads and dropped jaws behind her. Then eventually, Agatha catches her reflection in a mirror, and sees that she looks exactly the same. [[BeautifulAllAlong She was always beautiful]]. All she needed was some confidence and [[WhenSheSmiles a smile]].smile]].
* The ending to ''The Last Ever After'': [[spoiler: The schoolmaster is finally dead, the School has been restored to order, along with the balance between Good and Evil. Sophie is now the new Dean of Evil and is together with Hort, who's grown into a handsome young man. Agatha departs to Camelot with Tedros, but she and Sophie agree to visit one another a lot since they're a day's journey away from one another. Tedros also lifts the death warrant on his mother and Lancelot, allowing them to return to the kingdom in order to live happily together.]]
* The ending to ''The Last Ever After'': [[spoiler: The schoolmaster is finally dead, the School has been restored to order, along with the balance between Good and Evil. Sophie is now the new Dean of Evil and is together with Hort, who's grown into a handsome young man. Agatha departs to Camelot with Tedros, but she and Sophie agree to visit one another a lot since they're a day's journey away from one another. Tedros also lifts the death warrant on his mother and Lancelot, allowing them to return to the kingdom in order to live happily together.]]
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* After having a nasty fight with Sophie because of the Trial by Tale debacle, Agatha is left feeling completely alone. Professor Dovey asks Agatha what would make her happy, and she answers, "To be beautiful." So, the FairyGodmother drags the girl to the Groom Room for an extreme makeover, and Agatha, convinced that her wish has been fulfilled, feels like a new person. The girl gleefully skips around the School for Good, leaving a trail of turned heads and dropped jaws behind her. Then eventually, Agatha catches her reflection in a mirror, and sees that she looks exactly the same. [[BeautifulAllAlong She was always beautiful]]. All she needed was some confidence and [[WhenSheSmiles a smile]].
* After having a nasty fight with Sophie because of the Trial by Tale debacle, Agatha is left feeling completely alone. Professor Dovey asks Agatha what would make her happy, and she answers, "To be beautiful." So, the FairyGodmother drags the girl to the Groom Room for an extreme makeover, and Agatha, convinced that her wish has been fulfilled, feels like a new person. The girl gleefully skips around the School for Good, leaving a trail of turned heads and dropped jaws behind her. Then eventually, Agatha catches her reflection in a mirror, and sees that she looks exactly the same. [[BeautifulAllAlong She was always beautiful]]. All she needed was some confidence and [[WhenSheSmiles a smile]].
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* Despite everything that happens, and all the anger that passes between them, Agatha never gives up on Sophie as a friend.
* Despite everything that happens, and all the anger that passes between them, Agatha never gives up on Sophie as a friend.
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