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* After a distressing school day Shinji comes back to his home and finds in his room a chocolate box from Asuka.
* After ruining their firstkiss and their first date Shinji chases Asuka. When he finds her she wants to be lefft alone. Shinji does not approach but he sits down in front of her. Later she gets cold and he puts his jacket on her -despite of her protestations and yells-, and then he tells [[spoiler:he cares about her right like he cares about Rei.]] Asuka does not want to believe him but he says her looking at his eyes and lets her go. Asuka spins around, apparently about to bolt... but then she turns around and looks at his eyes... and then she cries. Shinji holds her and after a little chat they kiss.
* After ruining their firstkiss and their first date Shinji chases Asuka. When he finds her she wants to be lefft alone. Shinji does not approach but he sits down in front of her. Later she gets cold and he puts his jacket on her -despite of her protestations and yells-, and then he tells [[spoiler:he cares about her right like he cares about Rei.]] Asuka does not want to believe him but he says her looking at his eyes and lets her go. Asuka spins around, apparently about to bolt... but then she turns around and looks at his eyes... and then she cries. Shinji holds her and after a little chat they kiss.
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* After a distressing school day day, Shinji comes back to his home and finds in his room a chocolate box from Asuka.
* After ruining theirfirstkiss first kiss and their first date date, Shinji chases Asuka. When he finds her she wants to be lefft left alone. Shinji does not approach but he sits down in front of her. Later she gets cold and he puts his jacket on her -despite of her protestations and yells-, and then he tells [[spoiler:he cares about her right just like he cares does about Rei.]] Asuka does not want to believe him him, but he says her this looking at his her eyes and lets her go. Asuka spins around, apparently about to bolt... but then she turns around and looks at his eyes... and then she cries. Shinji holds her and after a little chat they kiss.
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* [[spoiler:Shinji returned from his stay inside Unit 01]] to find his absence had pushed Asuka and Rei closer and they were now Friends.
* After [[spoiler:their MindRape]] was collapsing, but Shinji did not let him: he told once and again she was not worthless, she was not alone, and he loved her.
* After [[spoiler:their MindRape]] was collapsing, but Shinji did not let him: he told once and again she was not worthless, she was not alone, and he loved her.
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* [[spoiler:Shinji returned from his stay inside Unit 01]] to find his absence had pushed Asuka and Rei closer and they were now Friends.
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* After[[spoiler:their [[spoiler:her MindRape]] Asuka was collapsing, a total wreck, but Shinji did not let him: her down: he told her once and again that she was not worthless, she was not alone, and he loved her.
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* After a distressing school day Shinji comes back to his home and finds in his room a chocolate box from Asuka.
* After ruining their firstkiss and their first date Shinji chases Asuka. When he finds her she wants to be lefft alone. Shinji does not approach but he sits down in front of her. Later she gets cold and he puts his jacket on her -despite of her protestations and yells-, and then he tells [[spoiler:he cares about her right like he cares about Rei.]] Asuka does not want to believe him but he says her looking at his eyes and lets her go. Asuka spins around, apparently about to bolt... but then she turns around and looks at his eyes... and then she cries. Shinji holds her and after a little chat they kiss.
* Rei looking after Shinji when he felt broken.
* [[spoiler:Shinji returned from his stay inside Unit 01]] to find his absence had pushed Asuka and Rei closer and they were now Friends.
* After [[spoiler:their MindRape]] was collapsing, but Shinji did not let him: he told once and again she was not worthless, she was not alone, and he loved her.
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* After a distressing school day Shinji comes back to his home and finds in his room a chocolate box from Asuka.
* After ruining their firstkiss and their first date Shinji chases Asuka. When he finds her she wants to be lefft alone. Shinji does not approach but he sits down in front of her. Later she gets cold and he puts his jacket on her -despite of her protestations and yells-, and then he tells [[spoiler:he cares about her right like he cares about Rei.]] Asuka does not want to believe him but he says her looking at his eyes and lets her go. Asuka spins around, apparently about to bolt... but then she turns around and looks at his eyes... and then she cries. Shinji holds her and after a little chat they kiss.
* Rei looking after Shinji when he felt broken.
* [[spoiler:Shinji returned from his stay inside Unit 01]] to find his absence had pushed Asuka and Rei closer and they were now Friends.
* After [[spoiler:their MindRape]] was collapsing, but Shinji did not let him: he told once and again she was not worthless, she was not alone, and he loved her.
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