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* The end of the story is bittersweet, but still counts as a moment regardless: when Mary Jane tries to comfort Peter, he tells her off, stating she'd be better off [[GetOut leaving]] than letting him "spoil [her] fun". Mary Jane, driven to tears by Peter's verbal abuse, moves towards Peter's door... [[YouAreNotAlone and shuts it.]]
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* The end of the story is bittersweet, but still counts as a moment regardless: when Mary Jane tries to comfort Peter, he tells her off, stating she'd be better off [[GetOut leaving]] than letting him "spoil [her] fun". Mary Jane, driven to tears by Peter's verbal abuse, moves towards Peter's door... [[YouAreNotAlone and shuts it.]]]]
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Removing a misused pothole to Kick The Dog (Peter telling Mary Gwen off wasn't intended to show that he's the villain).
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* The end of the story is bittersweet, but still counts as a moment regardless: when Mary Jane tries to comfort Peter, he [[KickTheDog tells her off]], stating she'd be better off [[GetOut leaving]] than letting him "spoil [her] fun". Mary Jane, driven to tears by Peter's verbal abuse, moves towards Peter's door... [[YouAreNotAlone and shuts it.]]
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* The end of the story is bittersweet, but still counts as a moment regardless: when Mary Jane tries to comfort Peter, he [[KickTheDog tells her off]], off, stating she'd be better off [[GetOut leaving]] than letting him "spoil [her] fun". Mary Jane, driven to tears by Peter's verbal abuse, moves towards Peter's door... [[YouAreNotAlone and shuts it.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:And Marvel's greatest romance [[OneTruePairing is solidified forever]].]]
[[caption-width-right:350:And Marvel's greatest romance [[OneTruePairing is solidified forever]].]]
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* The end of the story is bittersweet, but still counts as a moment regardless: when Mary Jane tries to comfort Peter, he [[KickTheDog tells her off]], stating she'd be better off [[GetOut leaving]] than letting him "spoil [her] fun". Mary Jane, driven to tears by Peter's verbal abuse, moves towards Peter's door... [[YouAreNotAlone and shuts it.]]
