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** In the same chapter, Lily's kindness to Bertha cheering her up enough to try and move on.
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** In the same chapter, Lily's kindness to Bertha cheering her up enough to try and move on.on.
* Evangeline's affection for Kitty encouraging her-Evangeline- to be a nicer person.
* Evangeline's affection for Kitty encouraging her-Evangeline- to be a nicer person.
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* Sirius' apology to Remus, and the boys' pillow fight afterwards.
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* Sirius' apology to Remus, and the boys' pillow fight afterwards.afterwards.
* The Knightbus driver's concern for Bertha in "Betrayal", despite being a complete stranger.
** In the same chapter, Lily's kindness to Bertha cheering her up enough to try and move on.
* The Knightbus driver's concern for Bertha in "Betrayal", despite being a complete stranger.
** In the same chapter, Lily's kindness to Bertha cheering her up enough to try and move on.
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* Regulus' relationship with Kreacher, and the fact that a memory of Kreacher is what encourages him to catch the Snitch in Chapter 12.
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* Regulus' relationship with Kreacher, and the fact that a memory of Kreacher is what encourages him to catch the Snitch in Chapter 12.12.
* Sirius and Regulus making up in Chapter 13, as well as how worried Sirius was for him before then.
* Sirius' apology to Remus, and the boys' pillow fight afterwards.
* Sirius and Regulus making up in Chapter 13, as well as how worried Sirius was for him before then.
* Sirius' apology to Remus, and the boys' pillow fight afterwards.
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* Lily and Severus just hanging out under the beech tree in Chapter 15, enjoying each other's company.
* Marlene's article defending werewolves. It's even more heartwarming when you realize she most likely realizes Remus is one, and that probably encouraged her to write it. (See the FridgeBrilliance page.)
* Marlene's article defending werewolves. It's even more heartwarming when you realize she most likely realizes Remus is one, and that probably encouraged her to write it. (See the FridgeBrilliance page.)
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* Marlene's article defending werewolves. It's even more heartwarming when you realize she most likely realizes Remus is one, and that probably encouraged her to write it. (See the FridgeBrilliance page.
** Also the fact that she doesn't regret it for an instant, despite the flak she gets for it.
* Mary bonding with Lily and her friends.
* Lily's friends preparing for Lily's birthday.
* Sirius walking Mary back to the Common Room when he sees she's scared to walk there herself after the incident with Mulciber.
* Sirius' genuine affection for Mary in general is this.
* Regulus' relationship with Kreacher, and the fact that a memory of Kreacher is what encourages him to catch the Snitch in Chapter 12.
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* Several already in the first chapter alone.
** Lily, Remus, Sirius and James all standing up for Mary.
** Lily and Mary's budding friendship at the end.
** Mary trying to defend Lily from Mulciber.
** The amount of love Mary has for her family.
* Lily and Severus' friendship.
** In particular, any scene in which Severus is internally discussing how much he loves Lily.
** How she takes care of him in Chapter Two, and how she tries to help him with his home life in general.
** Literally all of their interactions in Chapter Four.
** How scared Lily is in Chapter Six when she learns that he went down to the Whomping Willow.
** The fact that every morally questionable deed Severus does is to protect Lily.
** His present to her in Chapter Ten.
** Severus getting angry at Mulciber for speaking of Lily in a degrading manner in Chapter 12.
* Lily and Severus just hanging out under the beech tree in Chapter 15, enjoying each other's company.
* Marlene's article defending werewolves. It's even more heartwarming when you realize she most likely realizes Remus is one, and that probably encouraged her to write it. (See the FridgeBrilliance page.)
** Lily, Remus, Sirius and James all standing up for Mary.
** Lily and Mary's budding friendship at the end.
** Mary trying to defend Lily from Mulciber.
** The amount of love Mary has for her family.
* Lily and Severus' friendship.
** In particular, any scene in which Severus is internally discussing how much he loves Lily.
** How she takes care of him in Chapter Two, and how she tries to help him with his home life in general.
** Literally all of their interactions in Chapter Four.
** How scared Lily is in Chapter Six when she learns that he went down to the Whomping Willow.
** The fact that every morally questionable deed Severus does is to protect Lily.
** His present to her in Chapter Ten.
** Severus getting angry at Mulciber for speaking of Lily in a degrading manner in Chapter 12.
* Lily and Severus just hanging out under the beech tree in Chapter 15, enjoying each other's company.
* Marlene's article defending werewolves. It's even more heartwarming when you realize she most likely realizes Remus is one, and that probably encouraged her to write it. (See the FridgeBrilliance page.)
