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-->“I felt so damn happy all of a sudden, the way all Phoebe kept going around and around. I was damn near bawling, I felt so damn happy, if you want to know the truth. I don't know why. It was just that she looked so damn nice, the way she kept going around and around, in her blue coat and all. God, I wish you could've been there.”
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-->“I felt so damn happy all of a sudden, the way all old Phoebe kept going around and around. I was damn near bawling, I felt so damn happy, if you want to know the truth. I don't know why. It was just that she looked so damn nice, the way she kept going around and around, in her blue coat and all. God, I wish you could've been there.”
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-->“I felt so damn happy all of a sudden, the way all Phoebe kept going around and around. I was damn near bawling, I felt so damn happy, if you want to know the truth. I don't know why. It was just that she looked so damn nice, the way she kept going around and around, in her blue coat and all. God, I wish you could've been there.”
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* The end, when [[spoiler: Holden realizes that he can't hold onto the freedom of childhood forever, and that he has to let Phoebe grow up, regardless of the inevitable onset of 'Phoniness']]. Doubles as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* The end, when[[spoiler: Holden realizes that he can't hold onto the freedom of childhood forever, and that he has to let Phoebe grow up, regardless of the inevitable onset of 'Phoniness']].'Phoniness'. Doubles as a SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* The end, when [[spoiler: Holden realizes that he can't hold onto the freedom of childhood forever, and that he has to let Phoebe grow up, regardless of the inevitable onset of 'Phoniness']]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* When Holden goes back to his apartment and dances with Phoebe while their parents aren't home.
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* When Holden goes back to his apartment and dances with Phoebe while their parents aren't home.home.
* Holden may be of questionable morality, but he truly loved some people.
** His deceased brother's death got to him so much that he punched every single window in the garage. The narration describing their interactions helps.
** Look above. Phoebe, his smart-for-her-age kid sister.
** Jane, his childhood friend. Their interactions in the past are adorable, especially when Holden comforts her about her alcoholic father. Shame they don't get together, but she's still in town...
* Holden may be of questionable morality, but he truly loved some people.
** His deceased brother's death got to him so much that he punched every single window in the garage. The narration describing their interactions helps.
** Look above. Phoebe, his smart-for-her-age kid sister.
** Jane, his childhood friend. Their interactions in the past are adorable, especially when Holden comforts her about her alcoholic father. Shame they don't get together, but she's still in town...
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* The end, when [[spoiler: Holden realizes that he can't hold onto the freedom of childhood forever, and that he has to let Phoebe grow up, regardless of the inevitable onset of 'Phoniness']]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* The end, when [[spoiler: Holden realizes that he can't hold onto the freedom of childhood forever, and that he has to let Phoebe grow up, regardless of the inevitable onset of 'Phoniness']]. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
* When Holden goes back to his apartment and dances with Phoebe while their parents aren't home.
* When Holden goes back to his apartment and dances with Phoebe while their parents aren't home.
