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* During one of the training simulations, Peter shares a story from just a week after his Uncle Ben's death. Despite everything, he still had to go to school, and one day after class let out, Peter just found himself sitting there, unable to move. One of his classmates stopped and turned around to see what was wrong and offer support. That person was Harry Osborn, and that was how the two became friends.
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* A retroactive example but a post-game conversation has Peter say he's moving into a house. After spending the last game homeless and broke, it's nice to see how put-together his life has become.
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* A retroactive example but a post-game conversation has Peter say he's moving into a house. After spending the last game homeless and broke, it's nice to see how put-together his life has become.become since training Miles.
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* Rio invites Miles' best friends over for Christmas Dinner with Ganke and Phin Mason.
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* Rio invites Miles' best friends Ganke and Phin over for Christmas Dinner with Ganke and Phin Mason.Dinner.
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* Miles showing his stripes as a KindheartedCatLover with the cat, ''[[NamesTheSame also called Spider-Man]]''. Just listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJJu8ob9T0U the cat getting petted.]]
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* Miles showing his stripes as a KindheartedCatLover with the cat, ''[[NamesTheSame also ''also called Spider-Man]]''.Spider-Man''. Just listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJJu8ob9T0U the cat getting petted.]]
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* During the FNSM App side mission where you search for Howard's pigeons, Miles is initially [[ThisIsGonnaSuck groaning]] when he hears that Peter installed the Howard Protocol's "Pigeon Facts" in his suit. As the facts go on, however, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Miles begins to enjoy the trivia]], which culminates in the last "fact"; a thinly-veiled statement that's less to do with pigeons and more to do with Peter's friendship with Howard.
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* During the FNSM App side mission where you search for Howard's pigeons, Miles is initially [[ThisIsGonnaSuck groaning]] when he hears that Peter installed the Howard Protocol's "Pigeon Facts" in his suit. As the facts go on, however, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Miles begins to enjoy the trivia]], trivia, which culminates in the last "fact"; a thinly-veiled statement that's less to do with pigeons and more to do with Peter's friendship with Howard.
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* One event you can randomly stumble across is a couple making snow angels in a park.
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* One event Sometimes you can randomly stumble across is people just enjoying the winter weather, such as a group of friends having a snowball fight or a couple making snow angels in a park.
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* Miles showing his stripes as a KindHeartedCatLover KindheartedCatLover with the cat, ''[[NamesTheSame also called Spider-Man]]''. Just listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJJu8ob9T0U the cat getting petted.]]
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* One event you can randomly stumble across is a couple making snow angels in a park.
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* Uncle Aaron and Miles' awkward heart to heart with music sampling. [[spoiler: It ends with him giving Miles a new Spider-suit based on his Prowler colors.]]
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* Uncle Aaron and Miles' awkward heart to heart with music sampling. [[spoiler: It ends with him giving Miles a new Spider-suit based on his Prowler colors.]]colors.
** Aaron's final message to Miles after completing the story.
** Aaron's final message to Miles after completing the story.
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* One side mission done post game involves Miles going on a postcard scavenger hunt that was made by his dad as a birthday present. As a bonus, they also include recorded messages.
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* One side mission done post game involves Miles going on a postcard scavenger hunt that was made by his dad as a birthday present. As a bonus, they also include recorded messages.messages, so hearing his dad's voice again means the world to Miles.
** This last line from Jefferson in the final message:
-->'''Jefferson:''' You are my reason for being brave.
** This last line from Jefferson in the final message:
-->'''Jefferson:''' You are my reason for being brave.
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** Extra heartwarming when you look at the social media feed after this mission. Although most people are understandably divided over whether or not Miles is to blame for the bridge incident, almost ''everyone'' agrees that the Roxxon agents were out of line.
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** Miles' follower count grows over the course of the story. At the start he only has one follower. By the post-game, it's ''thirteen million''.
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** Miles' follower count grows over the course of the story. At the start he only has one follower.follower (almost certainly Peter). By the post-game, it's ''thirteen million''.
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* There is a photo of Jefferson in his police uniform prominently displayed over the fireplace of the Moraleses' new apartment. The family is never far from his gaze.
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* There is a photo of Jefferson in his police uniform prominently displayed over the fireplace of the Moraleses' Morales' new apartment. The family is never far from his gaze.
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-->'''Holo-Pete:''' Sometimes you don't understand how special something is until you see it through the eyes of a friend.''
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-->'''Holo-Pete:''' Sometimes you don't understand how special something is until you see it through the eyes of a friend.''
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* Miles showing his stripes as a KindHeartedCatLover with the cat, ''[[NamesTheSame also called Spider-Man]]''. Just listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJJu8ob9T0U the cat getting pets]]:
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* Miles showing his stripes as a KindHeartedCatLover with the cat, ''[[NamesTheSame also called Spider-Man]]''. Just listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJJu8ob9T0U the cat getting pets]]:
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--->''"He's ''our'' Spider-Man."''
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*Miles showing his stripes as a KindHeartedCatLover with the cat, ''[[NamesTheSame also called Spider-Man]]''. Just listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJJu8ob9T0U the cat getting pets]]:
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** In-game, there’s a street called “Boseman Way.”
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--->''Dedicated with love to the man who nourished the hearts, minds, and souls of True Believers everywhere. Excelsior!''
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* Rio discovering Miles' identity. After patching him up, she's upset at the fact that he never told her, but she makes it quite clear she's proud of who he is.
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* During the FNSM App side mission where you search for Howard's pigeons, Miles is initially [[ThisIsGonnaSuck groaning]] when he hears that Peter installed the Howard Protocol's "Pigeon Facts" in his suit. As the facts go on, however, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Miles begins to enjoy the trivia]], which culminates in the last "fact"; a thinly-veiled statement that's less to do with pigeons and more to do with Peter's friendship with Howard.
-->''Sometimes you don't understand how special something is until you see it through the eyes of a friend.''
* During the VR training side missions, Peter, in contrast to the Taskmaster challenges of his own game, is a very encouraging mentor even through mishaps and low ranks. When replaying these missions, Peter often brings up anecdotes from his time as Spider-Man, such as the historical value of all the places he's swung and ran along, his first real battles against certain foes, or even just funny stories from this side of his life (like complaining about not getting a cool slice of cake after stopping a hostage situation - or as he so eloquently put it, "Fisk shoe cake").
* Rio discovering Miles' identity. After patching him up, she's upset at the fact that he never told her, but she makes it quite clear [[SoProudOfYou she's proud of who heis.is]].
-->''Sometimes you don't understand how special something is until you see it through the eyes of a friend.''
* During the VR training side missions, Peter, in contrast to the Taskmaster challenges of his own game, is a very encouraging mentor even through mishaps and low ranks. When replaying these missions, Peter often brings up anecdotes from his time as Spider-Man, such as the historical value of all the places he's swung and ran along, his first real battles against certain foes, or even just funny stories from this side of his life (like complaining about not getting a cool slice of cake after stopping a hostage situation - or as he so eloquently put it, "Fisk shoe cake").
* Rio discovering Miles' identity. After patching him up, she's upset at the fact that he never told her, but she makes it quite clear [[SoProudOfYou she's proud of who he
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*** Hailey immediately runs to grab Miles mask to give to Ganke, and protect Miles identity.
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*** Hailey immediately runs to grab Miles Miles' mask to give to Ganke, and protect Miles Miles' identity.
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* In a weirdly twisted way, Rhino has a moment; he respects both Peter and Miles enough, because they can give him a ''fabulous'' fight, to give them "good death" as he says. He could just crush them, but he decides to fight them to the end because he ''enjoys'' the fight itself - the thrill is in the ''chase'', never in the capture.
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* In a weirdly twisted way, Rhino has a moment; he [[WorthyOpponent respects both Peter and Miles enough, enough]], because they can give him a ''fabulous'' fight, to give them "good death" as he says. He could just crush them, but he decides to fight them to the end because he ''enjoys'' the fight itself - the thrill is in the ''chase'', never in the capture.
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** After the bridge incident, there are plenty of people wishing those affected well and calling out Roxxon for trying to shoot Spider-Man.
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** After the bridge incident, there are plenty of people wishing those affected well and calling out Roxxon for trying to shoot Spider-Man.Spider-Man.
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** Specifically, he's moved into Ben & May's old house in Queens, where he's finding contentment renovating. It's heartwarming to know Pete's living and thriving in his childhood home.
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** Specifically, he's moved into Ben & May's old house in Queens, where he's finding contentment renovating.renovating the place. It's heartwarming to know Pete's living and thriving in his childhood home.
