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Tastes Like Diabetes is no longer a trope. Moving examples to other tropes when applicable.
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* In Chapter 55, [[spoiler:Kei bonding with her sisters.]] Over [[TastesLikeDiabetes Angel slaying]], of course.
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* In Chapter 55, [[spoiler:Kei bonding with her sisters.]] Over [[TastesLikeDiabetes Angel slaying]], slaying, of course.
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* Shinji and Gendo interface with Ichi, and finally assure her that it doesn't matter that she's not really the unborn Rei, and they still consider her family. A {{Crowning Moment Of Awesome}} follows.
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* Shinji and Gendo interface with Ichi, and finally assure her that it doesn't matter that she's not really the unborn Rei, and they still consider her family. A {{Crowning Moment Of Awesome}} SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome follows.
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* Crossed with a [[CrowningMoment/NobodyDies Crowning Moment of Awesome]], the end of Chapter 46 is one [[spoiler:for canon!Gendo. "God damn you," Gendo Ikari roars, "''get away from my son!''"]]
** Also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Gregg Landsman himself, as [[spoiler:the changes to the Eva canon from ND are what cause his other FanFic, ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'']].
** Also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Gregg Landsman himself, as [[spoiler:the changes to the Eva canon from ND are what cause his other FanFic, ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'']].
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* Crossed with a [[CrowningMoment/NobodyDies [[Awesome/NobodyDies Crowning Moment of Awesome]], the end of Chapter 46 is one [[spoiler:for canon!Gendo. "God damn you," Gendo Ikari roars, "''get away from my son!''"]]
** Also aCrowningMomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome for Gregg Landsman himself, as [[spoiler:the changes to the Eva canon from ND are what cause his other FanFic, ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'']].
** Also a
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* In chapter 69, where [[spoiler:Uri finally opens himself to Unit-02]]. What follows is a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* In chapter 69, where [[spoiler:Uri finally opens himself to Unit-02]]. What follows is a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* Pieter laying into Claire for her treatment of Mari, also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome: "Claire, it's one thing to suspect, but you went ''too damn far.'' It doesn't matter what the ''Hell'' Mari is! Because she's still ''my daughter!''...I was ''there!'' I was there when I thought she ''died.'' She could have come back as a big floating...thing...and it wouldn't have mattered because ''I got my little girl back''."
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* Pieter laying into Claire for her treatment of Mari, also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome: SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: "Claire, it's one thing to suspect, but you went ''too damn far.'' It doesn't matter what the ''Hell'' Mari is! Because she's still ''my daughter!''...I was ''there!'' I was there when I thought she ''died.'' She could have come back as a big floating...thing...and it wouldn't have mattered because ''I got my little girl back''."
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** [[spoiler:The thing that gets through to Shinji from NERV while he's in the void? Asuka making an AnguishedDeclarationOfLove.]]
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** And later, [[spoiler: the first person Shinji sees when he wakes up is, of course, Asuka. They even fall asleep in each other's arms, the stress of the last several days having taken its toll. And the best part? No one else enters the room. Or rather, Rei lets no one enter, and gives Touji a nice shock from a cattle prod when he tries.]]
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-->'''Shinji''': I'm here. Don't be. He won't harm you while I'm alive, got it? If he wants to get to you, he gets through me!
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-->'''Shinji''': I'm here. Don't be. He won't harm you while I'm alive, got it? If he wants to get to you, he gets through me!
me!
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* Chapter 40. ND!Gendo is struggling with the idea that [[spoiler:Yui might be dead]] and is contemplating suicide, but tells himself that everybody else is counting on him, and if [[spoiler:Yui really is lost beyond recovery, then Canon!Shinji, who has been transported to the ND!Universe, will need a father.]]
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* Chapter 40. ND!Gendo is struggling with In chapter 39 [[spoiler:Leliel dumps Shinji, Yui, Asuka, Kyoko, Rei, Ichi, Zwei, and Go-Kun into the idea world of Canon!Evangelion while Canon!Shinji ends up in ND!NERV.]] Canon Asuka meeting [[spoiler:Kyoko]] is one of the most TearJerker/CMOH ever in the whole of fanfic history. [[spoiler: "Yes?" Kyoko asks, "Can I help you?" Grin splitting her features, eyes alight, her voice becomes a squeak that [[spoiler:Yui might be dead]] and catches the woman completely off guard as Asuka embraces her in a bear hug. "Mama!"]] Awww!!!
** In chapter 40 there iscontemplating suicide, but tells himself also ND-Gendo [[spoiler:stopping his thoughts of suicide because even if he is unable to recover ND-Shinji/Yui/Rei, Canon-Shinji will still need someone to care for him]]. There is also [[spoiler:Kyoko continuing her way out of the scrappy heap by giving Canon-Asuka the one thing she wanted more than anything else]] while [[spoiler:Terrifying! Rei corrupts Canon-Rei into being more assertive while possibly activating all the clones as well]]. As if that everybody else is counting on him, and if [[spoiler:Yui really is lost beyond recovery, then Canon!Shinji, who has been transported to the ND!Universe, will need a father.weren't enough, [[spoiler:she also rescues End of Evangelion Shinji/Asuka from their dead world.]]
** In chapter 40 there is
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** Just their first kiss, after Asuka was slipped a roofie and Gendo and Shinji stepped in to save her. Shinji insists to her that he doesn't "put up" with her and she's worth it all, proceeding to list all the reasons why until Asuka...shuts him up.
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** Just before their first kiss, after Asuka was slipped a roofie and Gendo and Shinji stepped had to step in to save her. Asuka, [[ShrinkingViolet naturally,]] [[ExtremeDoormat begins apologizing for it]], until Shinji insists to her that he doesn't "put up" with her and she's worth it all, proceeding to list all the reasons why until Asuka...Asuka... [[ShutUpKiss shuts him up.]]
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** In particular, Chapter 21. The chapter itself is nothing but ItGotWorse for Asuka. Then the ending rolls by, and as the author put it (After [[@/EarthScorpion someone]] described an alternate, intensely depressing way to end the chapter):
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** In particular, Chapter 21. The chapter itself is nothing but ItGotWorse FromBadToWorse for Asuka. Then the ending rolls by, and as the author put it (After [[@/EarthScorpion someone]] described an alternate, intensely depressing way to end the chapter):
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* Shinji and Ichi's talk about her missing years.
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* Shinji and Ichi's talk about her missing years.years.
* This exchange between Shinji and Unit 01 in Chapter 17.
-->'''Unit 01''': i am scared.
-->'''Shinji''': I'm here. Don't be. He won't harm you while I'm alive, got it? If he wants to get to you, he gets through me!
* This exchange between Shinji and Unit 01 in Chapter 17.
-->'''Unit 01''': i am scared.
-->'''Shinji''': I'm here. Don't be. He won't harm you while I'm alive, got it? If he wants to get to you, he gets through me!
