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--> '''Toreth''': (''protesting'') No! But.. surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
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--> '''Toreth''': (''protesting'') No! But..But... surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
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--> '''Krion''': [[ReplacementGoldfish We don't want a replacment]] for [[spoiler:Toreth]], we want [[SubvertedTrope ''Kaleth'']], our friend, who needs someone to share his grief with, just as we do. Come and be yourself, with us, who are your friend.
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--> '''Krion''': [[ReplacementGoldfish We don't want a replacment]] replacement]] for [[spoiler:Toreth]], we want [[SubvertedTrope ''Kaleth'']], our friend, who needs someone to share his grief with, just as we do. Come and be yourself, with us, who are your friend.
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* [[spoiler: Kiron (with some help from his wingmates) saving Ari from falling to his death at the end of book two]].
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--> '''Krion''': [[ReplacementGoldfish We don't want a replacment]] for [[spoiler:Toreth]], we want [[SubvertedTrope ''Kaleth'']], our friend, who needs someone to share his grief with, just as we do. Come and be yourself, with us, who are your friend.friend.
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* Just about all of the hatchings are "Crowning Moments of Heartwarming".
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* Just about all of the hatchings are "Crowning Moments of Heartwarming".hatchings.
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** Ari [[spoiler:helping Vetch and Avatar escape the compound]].
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** Ari [[spoiler:helping Vetch and Avatar Avatre escape the compound]].
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* When Prince Toreth stumbled into his pen (and straight into an anxious Kiron and Re-eth-katen) after [[spoiler:what he thinks]] is a close call with the Magi.
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* When Prince Toreth stumbled into his pen (and straight into an anxious Kiron and Re-eth-katen) after [[spoiler:what he thinks]] is thinks is]] a close call with the Magi.
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* After [[spoiler:Toreth's]] funeral Kaleth turns to leave, but Kiron stops him. Telling him come and live with the rest of the wing.
--> '''Krion''': [[ReplacementGoldfish We don't want a replacment]] for [[spoiler:Toreth]], we want [[SubvertedTrope ''Kaleth'']], our friend, who needs someone to share his grief with, just as we do. Come and be yourself, with us, who are your friend.
--> '''Krion''': [[ReplacementGoldfish We don't want a replacment]] for [[spoiler:Toreth]], we want [[SubvertedTrope ''Kaleth'']], our friend, who needs someone to share his grief with, just as we do. Come and be yourself, with us, who are your friend.
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--> '''Toreth''': But.. surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
--> '''Toreth''': But.. surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
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--> '''Toreth''': (''protesting'') No!
--> '''Toreth''':No! But.. surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
--> '''Toreth''':
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* Kiron trying to be kind and comfort Aket-ten during her exile in the Temple of All God's.
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* Kiron trying to be kind and comfort Aket-ten during her exile in the Temple of All God's.Gods.
* When Prince Toreth stumbled into his pen (and straight into an anxious Kiron and Re-eth-katen) after [[spoiler:what he thinks]] is a close call with the Magi.
--> '''Toreth''': We are defeated, and I am disgraced and friendless...
--> '''Gan''': Ah, so I am no friend then?
--> '''Toreth''': (''protesting'') No!
--> '''Toreth''': But.. surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
--> '''Gan''': (''pleasantly'') [[TrueCompanions My parents can take themselves on a scenic tour of hell before they tell me who my friends will be. And I suspect every lad in the wing will say the same.]]
* When Prince Toreth stumbled into his pen (and straight into an anxious Kiron and Re-eth-katen) after [[spoiler:what he thinks]] is a close call with the Magi.
--> '''Toreth''': We are defeated, and I am disgraced and friendless...
--> '''Gan''': Ah, so I am no friend then?
--> '''Toreth''': (''protesting'') No!
--> '''Toreth''': But.. surely your parents will not wish you to associate yourself woth a known traitor...
--> '''Gan''': (''pleasantly'') [[TrueCompanions My parents can take themselves on a scenic tour of hell before they tell me who my friends will be. And I suspect every lad in the wing will say the same.]]
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* Just about all the Vetch and Ari moments from the first book are heartwarming ones.
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* Just about all the Vetch and Ari moments from the first book are heartwarming ones. Their father son like bond [[spoiler: in the rest of the series is pretty heartwarming too]].
** Ari's getting a funerary shrine for Vetch.
** Ari [[spoiler:helping Vetch and Avatar escape the compound]].
** [[spoiler: Kiron (with some help from his wingmates) saving Ari from falling to his death at the end of book two]].
* Kiron trying to be kind and comfort Aket-ten during her exile in the Temple of All God's.
** Ari's getting a funerary shrine for Vetch.
** Ari [[spoiler:helping Vetch and Avatar escape the compound]].
** [[spoiler: Kiron (with some help from his wingmates) saving Ari from falling to his death at the end of book two]].
* Kiron trying to be kind and comfort Aket-ten during her exile in the Temple of All God's.
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* Just about all of the hatchings are "Crowning Moments of Heartwarming".
* Just about all the Vetch and Ari moments from the first book are heartwarming ones.
* Just about all the Vetch and Ari moments from the first book are heartwarming ones.
