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* In general, expect Ironhide and Annabelle's interactions to be this.
* Creator/BookwormGal choosing to keep Mikaela in the series in comparison to the character's treatment in ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon''. This decision was appreciated by the readers.
* Creator/BookwormGal choosing to keep Mikaela in the series in comparison to the character's treatment in ''Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon''. This decision was appreciated by the readers.
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* Annabelle's class is being asked what they want to be when they grow up and Annabelle musing about her father and Ironhide's work. When it came for her turn, she told her teacher that [[spoiler:she wanted to be a hero. Just like her father and Ironhide]].
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* Annabelle's class is being asked what they want to be when they grow up and Annabelle musing about her father and Ironhide's work. When it came for her turn, she told her teacher that [[spoiler:she she wanted to be a hero. Just like her father and Ironhide]].Ironhide.
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* In Chapter 10, [[spoiler:after treating Ironhide's injuries, Ratchet assures him that Annabelle is unharmed and wants to speak with him. He then allows the two to speak privately.]]
* In Chapter 11, while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears [[spoiler: when the Autobots are seemingly killed in the Xanthium explosion]], it is still touching for Simmons to comfort her especially given how the two first reacted to each other in ''Summer Vacation''.
* In Chapter 11, while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears [[spoiler: when the Autobots are seemingly killed in the Xanthium explosion]], it is still touching for Simmons to comfort her especially given how the two first reacted to each other in ''Summer Vacation''.
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* In Chapter 10, [[spoiler:after after treating Ironhide's injuries, Ratchet assures him that Annabelle is unharmed and wants to speak with him. He then allows the two to speak privately.]]
* In Chapter 11, while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears[[spoiler: when the Autobots are seemingly killed in the Xanthium explosion]], explosion, it is still touching for Simmons to comfort her especially given how the two first reacted to each other in ''Summer Vacation''.
* In Chapter 11, while it is a TearJerker that Annabelle is reduced to tears
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* In Chapter 21, [[spoiler:Sam's proposal to Mikaela and the Autobots are there to witness it]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Mikaela:''' [[CallBack I love this car]]. And I definitely love the driver.]]
* In Chapter 22, [[spoiler:as soon as the fight with Sentinel and Megatron is over, Optimus quickly searches for the human who tried to take on Sentinel, Annabelle Lennox, and gently picks her up to get her medical treatment.]]
** [[spoiler:Ratchet also reassuring the Autobot leader that Annabelle is not in any life-threatening situation.]]
* In Chapter 23, [[spoiler:the Autobots being informed that Annabelle has woken up.]]
* The final scene of the story is [[spoiler: Annabelle reuniting with Ironhide]].
-->[[spoiler:'''Mikaela:''' [[CallBack I love this car]]. And I definitely love the driver.]]
* In Chapter 22, [[spoiler:as soon as the fight with Sentinel and Megatron is over, Optimus quickly searches for the human who tried to take on Sentinel, Annabelle Lennox, and gently picks her up to get her medical treatment.]]
** [[spoiler:Ratchet also reassuring the Autobot leader that Annabelle is not in any life-threatening situation.]]
* In Chapter 23, [[spoiler:the Autobots being informed that Annabelle has woken up.]]
* The final scene of the story is [[spoiler: Annabelle reuniting with Ironhide]].
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* In Chapter 21, [[spoiler:Sam's Sam's proposal to Mikaela and the Autobots are there to witness it]].
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-->'''Mikaela:''' [[CallBack I love this car]]. And I definitely love the driver.]]
* In Chapter 22,[[spoiler:as as soon as the fight with Sentinel and Megatron is over, Optimus quickly searches for the human who tried to take on Sentinel, Annabelle Lennox, and gently picks her up to get her medical treatment.]]
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**[[spoiler:Ratchet Ratchet also reassuring the Autobot leader that Annabelle is not in any life-threatening situation.]]
situation.
* In Chapter 23,[[spoiler:the the Autobots being informed that Annabelle has woken up.]]
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* The final scene of the story is[[spoiler: Annabelle reuniting with Ironhide]].
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-->'''Mikaela:''' [[CallBack I love this car]]. And I definitely love the driver.
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* In Chapter 23,
* The final scene of the story is
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* Izabella and Wheelie's discussion with Wheelie suggesting that the child stay with him, Mikaela and Sam.
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* Izabella and Wheelie's discussion with Wheelie suggesting that the child stay with him, Mikaela and Sam.
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* Annabelle, Sam, and Mikaela do their drawings outside on the porch of the Lennox home to ensure Ironhide and Bumblebee don't feel left out; as small of a gesture as this may be, it shows readers that the human characters treat their Autobot allies no differently then they would any other person, regardless of the numerous (physical) differences they have.
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* In Chapter 8, Ironhide reassuring the kids that they are not in trouble for the teenagers' actions.
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* In Chapter 8, Ironhide reassuring the kids that they are not ''not'' in trouble for the teenagers' actions.
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** Arcee, Mirage, and Sideswipe appearing with Annabelle happily greeting them.
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--> "Why should younglings be punished for the actions of their elders and caretakers? They should have known better."
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Plus, it showed all those mean teenagers that they were wrong. It proved that Autobots were good. It proved that they were nice. And it proved that Autobots and humans could be friends. Watching the other kids getting along with the Cybertronians so easily, the teenagers would have to see the truth.
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Plus, it showed all those mean teenagers that they were wrong. It proved that Autobots were good. It proved that they were nice. And it proved that Autobots and humans could be friends. Watching the other kids getting along with the Cybertronians so easily, the teenagers would have to see the truth.truth.
* This discussion concerning the Autobots accompanying the children back to the daycare.
-->'''Annabelle:''' Mommy, can we come back with Ironhide and the others? We'll be good.\\
'''Sarah:''' Only if they aren't too busy with cleanup.\\
'''Chromia:''' Too busy for Annabelle? Never.
** And later, Gwen and Izabella requesting to ride along with Arcee and Chromia.
* Izabella and Wheelie's discussion with Wheelie suggesting that the child stay with him, Mikaela and Sam.
* This discussion concerning the Autobots accompanying the children back to the daycare.
-->'''Annabelle:''' Mommy, can we come back with Ironhide and the others? We'll be good.\\
'''Sarah:''' Only if they aren't too busy with cleanup.\\
'''Chromia:''' Too busy for Annabelle? Never.
** And later, Gwen and Izabella requesting to ride along with Arcee and Chromia.
* Izabella and Wheelie's discussion with Wheelie suggesting that the child stay with him, Mikaela and Sam.
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** Annabelle thinking about how the Autobots treat her like she was their own child.
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** Annabelle thinking about how the Autobots treat her like she was their own child.child.
-->[She] grinned. No one ever said it out loud, but she could tell Autobots liked children. She knew Cybertronians lived a long time and she'd never seen a kid robot, even if she mistaken Wheelie for one initially. But whenever one of them called her a "youngling," she could tell they treated her like one of their own kids. So letting Cybertronians meet all these children made the Autobots happy and made her new friends happy. And that made her happy.\\
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Plus, it showed all those mean teenagers that they were wrong. It proved that Autobots were good. It proved that they were nice. And it proved that Autobots and humans could be friends. Watching the other kids getting along with the Cybertronians so easily, the teenagers would have to see the truth.
-->[She] grinned. No one ever said it out loud, but she could tell Autobots liked children. She knew Cybertronians lived a long time and she'd never seen a kid robot, even if she mistaken Wheelie for one initially. But whenever one of them called her a "youngling," she could tell they treated her like one of their own kids. So letting Cybertronians meet all these children made the Autobots happy and made her new friends happy. And that made her happy.\\
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Plus, it showed all those mean teenagers that they were wrong. It proved that Autobots were good. It proved that they were nice. And it proved that Autobots and humans could be friends. Watching the other kids getting along with the Cybertronians so easily, the teenagers would have to see the truth.
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* Izabella recognizing the Autobots' heroics and asking Wheelie to introduce her to Chromia and Ironhide.
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* Izabella recognizing the Autobots' heroics and asking Wheelie to introduce her to Chromia and Ironhide.Ironhide.
* In Chapter 7, Mikaela showing her concern for Wheelie after hearing that he was kidnapped.
-->'''Sam:''' (after Mikaela slaps Emily) ''Yeowch.'' A bit harsh, don't you think?\\
'''Mikaela:''' [[TrueCompanions Like you wouldn't do the same if someone messed with Bee. Wheelie is my responsibility and she's not allowed to get away with something like that.]]
* Wheelie introducing Izabella to Mikaela and Izabella immediately looking up to the young woman.
-->'''Izabella:''' [[HeroWorshipper Well, I'm going to be like her when I grow up.]]\\
'''Mikaela:''' Thanks.
* [[FriendToAllChildren The Autobots showing their soft sides for children.]] The best part about all of this is that it proves the teenagers dead wrong about all Cybertronians being heartless monsters.
** Bumblebee takes extra care to not harm the children with his giant size and even helping Gwen over a pile of rubble, something that Sam notices and is impressed by.
** Annabelle and Ironhide talking about the teenagers' stupidity and how Annabelle went with the other children to protect them. Annabelle is also joyful at Ironhide being happy.
** Arcee, Mirage, and Sideswipe appearing with Annabelle happily greeting them.
-->'''Mirage:''' (to Arcee) Your sister was right. There's a whole pack of younglings over here.\\
'''Arcee:''' (teasing) And she and Ironhide were going to keep them all for themselves. Too bad. You're going to have to share.\\
'''Gwen:''' (approaching Arcee, Peter in tow; awed) Robots can have sisters?\\
'''Chromia:''' Yes, we can. I'd like you to meet Arcee.\\
'''Gwen:''' You're really pretty. Both of you.\\
'''Arcee:''' And you're very nice.
** Annabelle thinking about how the Autobots treat her like she was their own child.
* In Chapter 7, Mikaela showing her concern for Wheelie after hearing that he was kidnapped.
-->'''Sam:''' (after Mikaela slaps Emily) ''Yeowch.'' A bit harsh, don't you think?\\
'''Mikaela:''' [[TrueCompanions Like you wouldn't do the same if someone messed with Bee. Wheelie is my responsibility and she's not allowed to get away with something like that.]]
* Wheelie introducing Izabella to Mikaela and Izabella immediately looking up to the young woman.
-->'''Izabella:''' [[HeroWorshipper Well, I'm going to be like her when I grow up.]]\\
'''Mikaela:''' Thanks.
* [[FriendToAllChildren The Autobots showing their soft sides for children.]] The best part about all of this is that it proves the teenagers dead wrong about all Cybertronians being heartless monsters.
** Bumblebee takes extra care to not harm the children with his giant size and even helping Gwen over a pile of rubble, something that Sam notices and is impressed by.
** Annabelle and Ironhide talking about the teenagers' stupidity and how Annabelle went with the other children to protect them. Annabelle is also joyful at Ironhide being happy.
** Arcee, Mirage, and Sideswipe appearing with Annabelle happily greeting them.
-->'''Mirage:''' (to Arcee) Your sister was right. There's a whole pack of younglings over here.\\
'''Arcee:''' (teasing) And she and Ironhide were going to keep them all for themselves. Too bad. You're going to have to share.\\
'''Gwen:''' (approaching Arcee, Peter in tow; awed) Robots can have sisters?\\
'''Chromia:''' Yes, we can. I'd like you to meet Arcee.\\
'''Gwen:''' You're really pretty. Both of you.\\
'''Arcee:''' And you're very nice.
** Annabelle thinking about how the Autobots treat her like she was their own child.
